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cavern was made for the #gmtk game jam this year. check it out on itch here: dogmaquest.itc...
matt made the thumbnail: / matt_ulicny
socials and all of my games : dogma.quest/
watch the trailer on the main channel ‪@dogmaquest2281‬

[@dogma.questlog]

I'm currently working on making this game into a full Steam release! check it out here: store.steampowered.com/app/2650780/Cavern/?beta=0 and I've been putting up devlogs showcasing the process of development as well!

[@jakedev7363]

Nice video! I’m shocked with how much progress you have made in only 2 days. I’m excited to see what you make next.

[@dogma.questlog]

I appreciate it!!

[@jung-zen]

Love that look, feels a little like Fallout 1/2 or a DOS title (in the best way). You have a nice design eye

[@dogma.questlog]

yo thank you! I haven't played through Fallout, but I love the old school computer aesthetic they have with all their UI

[@bigedwerd]

That's a tough break on the self disqualification. Looked like a fun game that you put a ton of effort into.

[@dogma.questlog]

I appreciate the comment, definitely learned my lesson haha

[@WitherVideos]

Great thumbnail

[@dogma.questlog]

thanks! my friend matt made the drawing for it lol

[@neyrhu]

that looked interesting but beware of vocal frying. Some people (like me) cannot bear to hear it AT ALL. couldnt even watch the vid because of that. I know its somewhat popular in the US.. but I really dont think it makes anyone cooler to sound like a cheap-broken version of batman/morgan freeman. try ditching it somehow (idk, maybe) !

[@atmaweapon3958]

do you dislike vocal fry because it sounds like they are trying to sound cool (like batman)? or is the distaste for it more deeply held like it has a reverse-ASMR effect on you? genuinely curious

[@dogma.questlog]

I didn't put any effect on my voice that is just the way I talk literally, do you have any suggestions on what I could do lol?

[@dogma.questlog]

I appreciate the feedback nonetheless!

[@NarendraU23]

​@@dogma.questlog Try breathing more and relax your vocal cords when speaking. I think speaking a bit louder should help too. It's good to learn some voice/vocal technique in general, there's plenty of tutorial on KZbin.

[@dogma.questlog]

@@NarendraU23 thanks hopefully next video will be better

[@doubled9645]

bro are you ok ?

[@kz650f2]

Hope he is

[@dogma.questlog]

I am ok!

[@kz650f2]

@@dogma.questlog hmmmmmmm

[@kz650f2]

@@dogma.questlog I do not trust you! Where is the real dogma?

[@dogma.questlog]

@@kz650f2 aight I'm really not ok you got me

[@SomeGuy-sk4ep]

There are times, like at 4:10, when your voice is like intense ASMR. Almost put me to sleep, not because you're boring but just have a relaxing voice. Also ur cute

[@dogma.questlog]

lmao thank you, sometimes feel like i sound too asleep

[@mattulicny1632]

simps smh

[@citruscampbell]

Your games are really cool

[@dogma.questlog]

yo thank you!

[@misanthropistbig8597]

The Audio when you're recording on your webcam, is bad and has a big contrast with the rest of the video. But your theme was vary innovative and you starting thinking up ideas fast !

[@dogma.questlog]

yea got a bad mic

[@laczikmarton2745]

amazing idea!

[@BladeNgames]

Interesting video, but I’m in a loud cafeteria and even with my headphones on max volume, I cannot understand you

[@dogma.questlog]

dang aight ill make it louder next time

[@Owoshima_]

super cool!

[@ryanst2003]

Enjoyable video!

[@dogma.questlog]

Thank you!

[@revimfadli4666]

What is that thumbnail and why

[@dogma.questlog]

its me after I got disqualified

[@mattulicny1632]

AHHHHHHHHH

[@dogma.questlog]

:( I HATE MY LIFE

[@charles281]

Ur audio is super low.

[@dogma.questlog]

hey, I thought it seemed fine on my pc but I can bump it up next time thanks for the feedback

[@HexOverride]

I think it’s just fine

[@dogma.questlog]

​@@HexOverride I'm so back

[@charles281]

@@dogma.questlog I think it may be good with headphones and on PC but also try testing through phone speakers to get a better all around sound. Also try to project your voice more. The low raspy accent can be cool and all, but when presenting information you want people to pay attention to, you must project your voice. Aka "say it with yo chest".

[@MrAwesomeTheAwesome]

Agree, definitely low. Not super egregious. Only needs a little boost. Great format though, good video. Subscribed :D

[@karlcole5617]

you mispronounced euler

[@dogma.questlog]

"oiler" next time i will get it right karl

[@karlcole5617]

@@dogma.questlog thank you