Making FAMOUS Graphic Designs Better!? (Before & After Graphic Design Ep7)

[@ghost_of_a_dead_poet]

Some of these very pretty good! But I kinda liked the original Yeezy and "Impossible is nothing"

[@PilipiHoops]

yes, sometimes he overthink about the details. Sometimes you just let your feelings design

[@exikoz]

I feel this way to, sometimes breaking the rules is ok because it creates some new perspective looking at things. All the designs principles are not like the law of physics.

[@dobryj4elovek]

Yeah I thought the same. I actually liked shadows which gave it more of a 3dish feel on yeezy, and impossible is also more appealing to me before redesign, maybe mostly because typography is lighter, and the athlete's picture is just better. But orange adidas redesign is absolutely stunning

[@aesir4134]

I agree with you with the Yeezy, but I think the "Impossible is nothing" redesign of typo is better. It's just that the model is kinda boring, which makes the original better.

[@kitanimation00]

agree, the original Yeezy brings more emotions, that is important point.

[@krutis7307]

I really love the way you logically study the imagery structure and then organize your content accordingly. Loved all modified designs... especially the first one was a stark change...

[@vitormd1138]

Honestly the original YEEZY looked fine and the "Impossible is Nothing" all i would change would be to bring the "nothing" text closer to the "IS" word and it would be perfect. The remake design looks to "default" in a way and it doesn't give off the energy the original one does, as you mentioned. Either way, nice video!

[@hw7721]

I totally agree:)

[@safavid]

I like both ... on his however, it looks like he's repeating the word "YEEZY" in the horizontal behind the shoe, in which case it's misspelled... it's starts with "ZEY" which messes with my eyes.

[@tavannia7]

The main issue I see with the original "impossible is nothing" is the crazy amount of emphasis put on the 'is' which doesn't really say anything. Curious how much better the redesign would look with the original image though, as that image is much more dynamic and fills the space better.

[@murphyezimadu8303]

What font did you use for the impossible?

[@ChaossX77]

That's what he said in the video.

[@HarinderSingh-sv7hc]

Seriously your designs a fantastic but original designs had their own vibe.. 👍👍👍👍

[@SatoriGraphics]

appreciate the feedback

[@phoenixart6924]

You are a doctor of graphic design 😊😊

[@SatoriGraphics]

Wow, thanks lol

[@AseemSehmi]

I would say he is Surgeon 😊😊

[@xsomili5501]

2:24 oh daaam that tiny addition made it perfect really

[@SatoriGraphics]

glad you think so Somili

[@edgarr_com]

On the “Día de los Muertos” design, it would make more sense to make emphasis on “a los que se van antes” referring to the ones that have left this world before us, los “muertos”.

[@fabianalata4155]

yes, it kinda lost the message you want to say...

[@hazelandjorge]

He did a great job! En mi opinión si da énfasis a "a los que se van antes" es muy largo! Y perderia el toque minimalista, además "No le pierdas" puede tomarse como no perderse el estilo de zapatos que es el principal objetivo de la publicidad y como segundo sería hacer referencia a la temporada "día de los muertos"

[@icandygraphics]

Hey it’s not the designers fault. It’s the client asking for the revision. Example using basketball as bullet points

[@sayanbiswas7364]

If the designer is good, they will have the balls to call the client out on a blatantly bad design decision. You have to basically politely tell the client that - you are not a designer, and this looks horrible.

[@123arskas]

@@sayanbiswas7364 If a designer says that to a client then surly he's gonna get fired. Majority of clients love to destroy the design and want you to make something that only they personally like. They don't care if its a bad design or not. Their small spectrum of design in their mind tells them that its perfect for them and they go with it by rejecting top-notch designs.

[@kozgurarslan]

Those are not mistakes btw. Every designer has different opinions but we like Satori's perspective.

[@meedscreative]

I really agree with you!

[@hazelandjorge]

Every designer has their own style and normally people who pay look for the one they like the most and people who wants those balls as a bullet point waste your time, they don't know what they want and on top of that they will ask for a discount! Even if you need money you must have character to say "sorry but its not going to be possible since my work represents me and that doesn't meet the features for a professional design" you're a professional not a puppet

[@jswalk4]

Much appreciated. LOVE your new version. I’m saving everything you do. I could watch this content all day.

[@ninosore134]

One of the reasons I love to watch your videos is because as a drop-out and self taught designer, I often struggle putting these practices into words. For example, I've been using hierarchy for years but never even knew it was called hierarchy. I do things based off my own judgment of how it should look. Great content and defiantly expanding my knowledge. It is very encouraging to see that im doing some of the same things I see in your videos, even if I do not necessarily know the proper terms/explanations. Great work my friend, as always!

[@simplicitydevolved4805]

Honestly, for the 2nd one of the Yeezy's, I actually thought the before looked better. Here's why: You washed out the true colors of that model shoe by attempting to make an angelic/halo look to it. When you're selling to customers, it's really important to maintain the actual look of the product. It allows a potential customer to imagine how the product will look with their style or mentally combine it with other styles of clothing they have at home when you display the true-to-life colors of the product. Consider the general public perception, will EVERYONE understand there's a halo/effect there and that the shoe really is a deeper, richer, gray in life? And because the shadow was also removed beneath it, you lost a sense of dimension and depth to the ad. When you look at the before and after side by side, from far away, the after LOOKS like it has more negative space because of the loss of drop shadow and the white wash of the colors. The text in the background was too light to give an illusion of a more filled in space.

[@Vizible21]

Tye og Yeezy design is fine but I like his redesign. The only thing I don't like about it is the softening up of the item itself.

[@BrentMurrell]

Anyone defending the original Impossible Is Nothing ad needs to get their head checked lol. Great video, never get tired of this series.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks Brent and have a great end to the week

[@arunfrancis1273]

Great video Tom ! 🔥🔥🔥 Wish I could see new content everyday, but I know that's hard and nearly impossible. Love your videos so much man ! Keep it up 🙌🙌🙌

[@NavesNiche]

I love your videos man!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks Nave, that means a lot :)

[@kosaladissanayake8055]

This is superb for beginners. thank you

[@SatoriGraphics]

Glad you liked it

[@laserfloyd]

Good reworks. The first three needed it but YEEZY was pretty good. The last one didn't really work at all originally but improved as a redesign but still kinda felt lacking something. I love minimal design as well so I enjoyed the reworked ideas.

[@MahbubNur-m4d]

youtube: satori uploads a video. me: take notes, take notes.

[@SatoriGraphics]

😅🤓

[@imtiazauthority21]

Thanks man. Each of the first three improvements literally put a smile on my face. this vdo was really very insightful.

[@DarwinOfficiale]

This is great and am so addicted to this style of design. A big fan and follower down in Africa- Uganda

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks for your feedback Darwin 👍

[@DarwinOfficiale]

@@SatoriGraphics thanks for your lessons as well.

[@albena_abigail_karaivanova]

Tom, you are such an inspiration and I am so happy that I found your channel! Amazing redesigns!

[@aldrinpadua28]

I love this well done.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Cheers man

[@santhoshk.thampi1200]

Excellent re-design!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Glad you like it!

[@starlightbright]

I prefer the original Yeezy and Impossible designs. They may look “off” when judged by design principles etc but they evoke an emotion. The first and third images I love your redesigns

[@alexisfy]

"No le pierdas el paso a los que se van antes" Means "Don't lose track of those who leave us early" It's a poster for the "Day of the Death" of "Día de los muertos" in México. Putting it like that means something like "Don't lose track..." The thing with the "no le pierdas" poster is that... The message has it's own context in culture. An the context of that part alone sound like an economic offer, more in the realm of "Don't lose this offer" and you can see how the message loses it's deeper (yet loose and flimsy) relationship with the Day of the death. The poster highlights the orange because orange is a strong color for that specific festivity. And that festivity focuses on staying in touch with our, long gone, relatives. I don't say you didn't do an amazing you, cuz you did. I'm just saying that it's a bit more complex than that.

[@stefand100]

It was almost relieving that one of your redesigns was not so good, as you said , he fourth. The others were masterpiecies!! Big thanks for sharing!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Lol cheers

[@malu.maluqui]

Woooow love your classes/videos!!! Thank you!!!

[@SatoriGraphics]

:))

[@yusuflahmar5999]

Amazing work really brings out the difference

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks :)

[@elcuhh9169]

The yeezy one was fine originally. The background text you added is off, reading it from left to right reads as "zeyee" which throws it off.

[@everyonehasincommon1216]

In the Impossible ad I think they meant the words to look like an obstacle in the athlete's way

[@Anjali-yg2zu]

Excellent video

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks for the visit

[@vuk8985]

Your designs are so much more professional and dynamic.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Glad you like them :)

[@richardkalundi5438]

I like the minimalist approach

[@designhearts255]

Love this channel, its very good for my channel, thanks for sharing

[@sunilchavda5270]

really your re-design is good 👍

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks a lot 😊

[@GOGOAKUMAN]

great work.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Many thanks

[@adiobabatunde7645]

For yeezy... I prefer the original. The rest are fine for me great changes sir really effective

[@RN_Designer]

*Best content as usual.Thanks for Share*

[@liubovhryhorenko1155]

Wow! Very cool video!

[@imbombayboy]

Hi Mentor, Great design taste and vision. Btw you just missed the hamburger icon on the Yeezy's project. The icon is over the letter "Y". Considering its complementing section of the website.

[@RishirajDesigns]

Clean Redesigns 🌟

[@CRAZYCreations37]

Amazing videos. Keep them coming!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks! Will do!

[@Sky-ky4qw]

Oooo That swag, love how you thrash them down, you are really good man 🙌🏻

[@Naayan-jq6dv]

Mostly I like the original ones but your ones was also not bad and was also very creative ♥️

[@lalitsingh-lp3cb]

great design and the way you have explained the process is really helpful

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks for your feedback

[@muskan31-j7d]

Was shocked when saw that samsung AC design😂 btw amazing video!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks! 😁

[@games2k23]

last Design "Impossible" will work in better way if you just make the player image sharp or popup ... your image has no highlight

[@claudsfake2902]

omg that Yeezy one was gorgous

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks a lot :)

[@MortenDeurell]

I would have so used another background color on the peachy orange spanish poster. The color of the shoe just vanishes in the background as it is.... Nice stuff though...like what you are doing

[@gloriousclick]

Thanks for your supporting people with Tutorial on Graphic design.

[@UZUNO2382]

third one you killed it too

[@mamunsiju3595]

I think Addidas should hire you..absolutely amazing

[@SatoriGraphics]

That would be ace

[@alfaiyumi4503]

Love to seeing this redesign with your own perspective, i hope u can do it again at the other brands!

[@nasimahmedhpg5430]

Wow. You are just amazing. Thank you. However I just want to point your last poster. " Impossible is nothin". If you could use the text as the net before the player. What you think? Please dont take it otherwise. Just a suggestion. All the best.

[@surinfarmwest6645]

The last one. I have done posters similar to this but made the text as an outline only covering the subject otherwise you lose the word, as has happened here, you've lost three letters and the 0.5 of a second word recognition. The others work well.

[@dezinetech1000]

Damn, much Respect! So glad I found your channel. I agree with you 100% you are very good sir. I will be taking notes. Ty!

[@SatoriGraphics]

hey thanks a lot for the feedback :D

[@mehakchopra815]

nice work

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks :))

[@liloulilli7022]

your designs are more simple and so pretty clear for eyes... perfect 🎩

[@beastUrdu677]

AMAZING DESIGN

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks bro

[@beastUrdu677]

@@SatoriGraphics Welcome

[@sheverleyclacken3676]

Your designs are obviously better than the originals in every way.

[@victormuthura]

I love the way these designs are simplified in a way that anyone can read and interpret the posters.

[@ahsanjaved705]

you have done a great job with your minimal concept really helpful for us👏

[@tanaffus2701]

cool redesigning with perfect explanations , 👍

[@AsifShaikh-yr8rx]

Just wawooo all your design

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thank you! Cheers!

[@villeinonen]

The Yeezy one was a miss for me, but otherwise great work!

[@jenmooney16]

I am sad to say that I have just today discovered your channel, but I knew within seconds of the starting the first video that I would be subscribing -- and this is the fourth video I have watched in quick succession. Sad to say again, but too often brand requirements and the lack of true design skills on the part of clients make for less-than-effective designs. I love your ability to improve on the designs, and I will be adding a link to your videos to my class site, as well as a recommendation for novice designers to subscribe. That Adidas redesign? Just gorgeous. Thank you for sharing your work with us!

[@jenmooney16]

Sorry, but I'm continuing to watch the video. I often (jokingly? maybe not!) offer to pay my students not to use a gradient or to add a different-colored stroke around typography.

[@syedsalman8759]

You are an awesome graphic designer. If you make a video about how to organize design files in computer, it will be very much help full for amateur graphic designers.

[@SatoriGraphics]

I think I've touched upon this subject in a few videos in the past. Thanks for the comment Syed :)

[@syedsalman8759]

@@SatoriGraphics Thank You For Your reply. I will check out your videos on this topic🙂

[@amongdoomers9464]

Love the redesigns but It seems like you are mostly using your favorite typeface for the designs while the original typography suits well imo

[@Dobetterlivebetter]

You're wrong

[@bhuluroy8961]

Left side is looking good and perfect

[@thirstythr33]

Satori is the best

[@SatoriGraphics]

:) Much appreciated

[@jpelasio]

Nice man. I think 1 - You 2 - Original - Has better hierarchy 3 - You 4 - Original (just slightly)

[@uzairsultan6550]

Amazing man! I liked all of your designs. Maybe its because I too like the clean and minimal designs.

[@raol635]

The last design. For me the original was better. But the rest of other designs.. yes yours was better. My opinion 😊

[@SatoriGraphics]

Ok thanks!

[@rehantahir10]

Now be ready to receive a Job Offer from Addidas

[@SatoriGraphics]

lol.. that would be pretty funny. I'm almost too busy though

[@MrAmber03]

Super cool on how you arrange the text. I’m going to school for graphic design. I enjoy it!

[@cheungchoiwan6402]

Absolutelya, 'After' is better. Keep do it.

[@imeuart6578]

I really loved this video series

[@imatifktk]

Love your minimal style

[@rustamnizam4428]

Awesome. I can't have it enough. Keep it up

[@jessty5179]

There is a word missing in the Spanish redesign. I love your channel.

[@mateuscarneiro1864]

Great video! Thank you, from Brasil!

[@SatoriGraphics]

And thanks for the comment!

[@anshaggarwal5968]

Really like these kinds of videos from you ,

[@SolWake]

The Rise Above rework really brings out the theme much better. And the orange poster certainly breathes better, the three stripes at the bottom are so satisfying, like the heel tab of a shoe. However, I feel like the Impossible rework completely deflates the thematic cohesion of the original. In the original, the athlete isn't simply "breaking through", he's impossibly positioned, interweaving amongst the letter to make his shot. The composition is indeed a bit unpleasing, but this comes from the way the athlete metaphorically/visually is threading a needle amongst the letters, which evokes crampedness and discomfort, but this discomfort too is thematically cohesive because doing the seemingly impossible usually is uncomfortable. In this case the "unpleasantness" of the design serves to hold the viewer's attention and provoke thought much more than it does to detract from the ad. In the rework, especially with the low light of the athlete and logo, I'd probably scan over it without even stopping if I were to see it in the real world... it's just kind of plain and doesn't evoke what the words say.

[@MathSolution]

Dr. of Proximity, Balance and Typo

[@arradayoub3349]

You have exceptional content, I loved it and very useful. Thank you very much ❤

[@ateljeavesaltus]

Thank you for sharing your approach on design again and again, it really makes me a better designer. Excellent post :-), you made the first three dramatically better. Keep it up. Thanx again.

[@alexkiran4212]

Awesome satori Graphics 6:43

[@azukarakey1745]

Thank for asking the feedback. 1. In the first design adidas logo logo should be little bit left dn It will perfectly aline with above content. 2. In the last design the logo getting invisible.

[@alexpark472]

I'm very fussy with designs and you really cleaned them up so well and made them satisfying even for me. Impressive.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Glad you like them Alex

[@TarotRightNow]

Adidas should hire you! Great video's! Really helps me out a lot!

[@SatoriGraphics]

Lol thanks a bunch!

[@mattbray_studio]

I thought the 4th one was weakest, and the yeezy one wasnt an improvement for me. but the third one was absolute fire, and the first was an improvement also. interesting and informative to see what you did on all of them though, thanks for sharing

[@avinashsurve2898]

Nice video Thanks

[@LD71685]

Amazed the amount of designers that don't know the difference between negative and white space. NOT the same thing.

[@SatoriGraphics]

Yeah it's one of those instances where technically it's wrong but because so many people say it, it has become 'correct' or accepted. Much like how when people from the US are asked 'which country are you from' it's normal to reply with 'America' which isn't even a country

[@kabachokariuki7614]

I like you thought process in typography, I like the yeezy boost 350. You missed out on the shadow and still made the design stand out

[@dennisafrancis2541]

impossible didnt reach that much. but remaining are just wow.

[@BestProductsAround]

Great Videoz

[@rgcuestas]

I agree on Yeezy with many others as product shouldn't look blurry and with the tennis one looks cleaner and better but not sure if it sells the concept because the impossible seems very "easy and piece of cake" what he is hitting.

[@amoghhatkar446]

I guess the design at 4:54 would look cool with white background. But your choice of font was also great for that design

[@krisbudiyantoh6400]

You rock !

[@SatoriGraphics]

Thanks a bunch Kris!

[@resonantdave]

In yours, people are thinking about graphic elements instead of photos of the product. Very commercial brands like these don't want you to leave thinking about the brand, they want you to leave with a vivid picture of a product or activity in which to use the product. That's why the compromised on some formal design concepts to keep that focus.

[@resonantdave]

Also the concept frequency per syllable in Spanish is lower, as with several other mediterranean languages, so that might explain why it is tighter.

[@vegetathe4th376]

I prefer your re-designing please do more contents on redesigning thanks

[@randatatang9222]

In the first case I think the problem came from the fact that the designer was desperately trying to create flow using both hands, then the knee and foot at the expense of alignment and proximity. I kind of love how you corrected it and managed to maintain some flow between the top text and top hand. I recommend you do a video about how the different principles of design ought to interact with one another in a non competing manner