Moab, Utah, the Good the Bad the Ugly

[@ao1466]

Hello!!! Stewart Joseph’s daughter here, beautiful footage!!!

[@navitravee1091]

Ah, thank you, Ali. Your opinion means a lot!

[@SeansMusicHunt]

Hey! Happy birthday! Most of this video is really great! But it basically needs that first minute and forty seconds cut off. I would recommend starting your videos with an explanation of what someone should expect from your video. You need to peek their interest and let them know if this is the video for them within the first 39 seconds. If you had a massive following that knows what to expect from you, this intro would be fine. But most new viewers would be confused as to what the video actually is and will likely click away or fast forward until they find your explanation of what to expect. Cheers! Good to meet you!

[@navitravee1091]

Hi Sean, thank you for the Bday wishes, and more importantly you taking the time to review my work. Your suggestion is well received, and I will be putting it to good use in my next production. Please know I am welcome to any advice or additional ideas. Cheers!

[@SeansMusicHunt]

@@navitravee1091 I thought I had replied, but I don't see it. For whatever reason, KZbin comment replied can be weird, and it is possible that KZbin filtered my comment as spam. (or I was stoned and thought I hit reply but didn't. Haha) You should definitely try to reply to every comment though.