[Month of Macabre] Initiation [MLP Fanfic Reading] (DARK/PSYCHOLOGICAL)

[@777Rowen]

The ending is so unsettling. Poor Apple Bloom. :( This is some psychological horror right there, and I think it was real and not a dream.

[@revaslatts8011]

First of all, that was not a nightmare. Luna wouldn't let it slide. Not even she is that bad at her job. Second, I feel bad for Applebloom. Third, THE TREES ARE SCREAMING! See if you could name that reference. Lastly, how could it be in her head? That looked too real to be a dream.

[@movedto4agonism467]

OHH I GOT THE REFERENCE!!

[@alphagiga4878]

I don't get the reference, also it could have been a dream, some stories take place in different canons, so in this Canon Luna might have known about the dreaming but figured the ponies needed to toughen up

[@MartinJakubsky]

WE DID IT!!!!

[@BlackMoonHowls]

@@MartinJakubsky Yes we did.

[@haramberoth117]

I can’t stop imagining applebloom walking around while that one daft punk song plays about being faster and stronger in her head as she gets older..

[@BlackMoonHowls]

Harambe Sephiroth, now I have seen it all.

[@QueenMeowTigeress]

was it a dream? A nightmare? who knows? maybe its all in her head...

[@probablywhisper3277]

Maybe it’s Maybelline

[@RnbwQtz]

@@probablywhisper3277 maybe its trivago

[@BlackMoonHowls]

@@probablywhisper3277 Not it's Marliene from the song, Kiss Me.

[@serenitymoon825]

I think it was real since Applejack told her when it was all over she'd wake up at home, and that's exactly where she wakes up.

[@AlannaArtroid]

Bad undertones! *BAD* UNDERTONES!

[@ellelexvold5792]

14:00 “spooky scary skeletons” starts playing

[@Thedragonlover95]

This is like Evil Dead,and you know what scene I mean

[@Sparrow9642]

I actually have never seen it, both the original and remake lol. There's no inspiration included from that film XD

[@Thedragonlover95]

@@Sparrow9642 Well trust me, there is a scene that involve trees doing something like this

[@RAC00NFANGIRL]

@@Thedragonlover95 ooh joy tree rape I remember

[@BlackMoonHowls]

@@RAC00NFANGIRL I remember it from Robot Chicken.

[@keiroty7187]

That’s rude saying she’s to weak to buck apples

[@pinkimena-nebulous6646]

later hen i wanted to be, but still a great listen.

[@quintonjones2699]

That was a spectacular read Sparrow well done

[@ChiBiMo]

29:15 that background music sounds like the score from the Saw movies

[@donnamitsuki281]

I think it is

[@keiroty7187]

😮 omg apple bloom you call that an iniation that’s a night mare man

[@heyitzbabygurl4025]

Dang, does this mean Apple Bloom is apart of the tree?

[@fossilrecd]

She became a new tree in the orchard and someone else has taken her place

[@charfox_draws20]

I missed the premiere 😭, but this is certainly a perfect spooky treat Sparrow 🖤🖤, Happy Halloween to you! 🎃

[@youngmasterzhi]

I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going

[@Sparrow9642]

I knew I'd get a comment like this sooner than later XD Nope, it's not going there lol

[@Sparrow9642]

@@jackster8976 I'm fully aware what Hentai is, and personally, it's not my cup of tea.

[@Ar_cadez]

That’s a CHILD

[@felsiccanis]

Sir that is a child

[@BlackMoonHowls]

Like what are peoples problems it is fake always just like ALL porn in especially magazines, all the photos getting passed through filters and programs making the look oh so perfect. We just have AI to do that for us, ever heard of deep fakes some of them are very good others are terribly done. Celeb jihad makes a mint.

[@Herobrine-vh8lv]

So wait was that really real or was it just a nightmare also why didn't applebloom tell them about the nightmare maybe they can give some hint of what happened

[@Sparrow9642]

That's why it's classified as a psychological horror story. The answer is for you to determine, rather than having it be explained. That's true horror when you are left questioning what's real and what's not. Hence the tagline "believe the unbelievable."

[@BlackMoonHowls]

@@Sparrow9642 Kinda like the one about where she makes up that apple friend and it kills DT for her.

[@BlackMoonHowls]

Or the Sleep Apple Experiment.

[@archeishere1]

i was expecting applebloom would of broken the tree and got in BIG BIG Trouble

[@GushyStars]

i learned something new wow i also had a tv show simuler to this story called spongebob squidward club that he had to face a stinging fish type in a trap they had to face their fears in order to join the club base it was a secret place that no other fish has descovered for senturies and spongebob and patrick fallowed squidward and got in and watched the initiation but they where to loud and got squidward banned but he didnt know he was being fallowed so his dreams was crushed

[@rae-rae8005]

Jesus Christ- the fucking sounds with the branches snd stuff… also, I immediately went dirty with that honestly… what is wrong with my mind

[@Sparrow9642]

You're not the only one who thought dirty lol

[@rae-rae8005]

@@Sparrow9642 oh jeez- lol thank goodness

[@dawg065]

Ahhhh Pod pony.

[@sourfrog4263]

"Stubborn as a wild mule" so is that like racist or something? Lol

[@wouldntyouliketoknowweathe9811]

Mmm i think its more of a stereotype

[@revaslatts8011]

Who plays AJ and Applebloom? I want answers, and I want them NOW! Refuse, and I'll turn you into a cupcake.

[@johnynoway9127]

2nd! Yay i love this month!

[@deborahhutchens4575]

For some reason, I honestly think it was a nightmare, I don’t know why.🤔

[@geronimocharles1584]

Sparrow 96 love 💕 love 💕 love 💗 love ❤️

[@archeishere1]

is there a sequel mr sparrow?

[@angel-nv7jk]

Only 5 comments? I'm surprised

[@dariustucker1690]

hey man sorry for not wacthing of live I was doing stuff so I'm sorry but am wacthing your story and was amazing.

[@travisjones305]

Where is the link to the story? I couldn't find it.

[@Sparrow9642]

There isn't one. I originally wrote it on Google Docs and never got to posting it on Fimfiction lol

[@drswag0076]

was it all real?

[@TakeWalker]

You never put up a link to this story. Do you know who wrote it?

[@Sparrow9642]

You're talking to him. I never posted this story officially, which is why there's no link. I wrote it in Google Docs.

[@TakeWalker]

@@Sparrow9642 Oh, that makes it easier. :)

[@nyxnetherlight3774]

Was AJ Lost?

[@patricianunespinto341]

E ne Deus tá com a gente

[@lachandralige9087]

I am new to you

[@Sparrow9642]

Welcome to the family ^^

[@jroxpone]

Oof

[@maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337]

This wasn't even that horrifying to me, just creepily strange, you really need to step up your game

[@Sparrow9642]

Did you even look at the genre tags in the video title? It's not intended to be "horrifying." It was meant to be psychological and disturbing, leaving no answers.

[@maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337]

@@Sparrow9642 Fair point, it's just when I read a tag that says (Dark) it makes me think that it'll be horrifying

[@T_E_G]

@@maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337 No. Not really. DarkFics are suppose to emense suspense and mystery, you're probably thinking about GrimDarks, stories with graphic detail and gore, supposingly horrifying or scary.

[@lukecolumbus13]

@@Sparrow9642 you should somehow make this into an animatic!

[@MetallicStoneMountainRevoival]

Haha gross

[@revaslatts8011]

Hey, that macabre intro was already used by Muse Script. COPYCAT!

[@Sparrow9642]

It's made by Scribbler for anybody to use. Get your facts straight before you accuse me of stealing something from someone else. If that was the case, Muse would've stolen from Scribbler.

[@revaslatts8011]

@@Sparrow9642 *record scratch* D'ohhhhh, Reva you idiot!