[Blue Archive] Kiryuu Kikyou Relationship Story 1 (ENG Sub)

[@MoonLightOri]

The next episode is now out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/nGGkdKasr6eiidU 1:02 should be "we have to use any means necessary." instead of "we have to do whatever it takes." for consistency (This is my fault for not realizing this sooner).

[@Kindi001]

finally now i can know the context of the need possesion cat Kikkyou vs Kazusa Cat

[@Hanzs_74]

Thank you for the translation, looking forward to the rest.

[@dimasnaufaltangahu1457]

Majima-Sensei: Finally, i can go out with your daughter, Kiryuu-chan~. Kiryuu Kazuma: You better watch yourself! I'll beat you up if you do anything weird to my daughter, Majima-Sensei!

[@McCaroni_Sup]

Meanwhile Haruka and Haruka...

[@McCaroni_Sup]

Meanwhile Haruka and Haruka...

[@dr.doctor4878]

Sensei rizz is so strong that he charmed her in their first meeting. I could never😭

[@Arrinura-A]

I love the effort you put on the editing. I'm not the best at giving feedback but here's what I have in mind. 0:04 and 1:17 - Remember to capitalize "I". 3:17 - I feel like since she's speaking to Sensei directly, it's better to go with "You don't need to worry about it." instead of referring Sensei in third person. 6:28 - "Besides" instead of "beside", and no need for capitalizing after the ellipsis unless the sentence starts with an ellipsis. I also recommend adding a space after it. 7:08 - “loss for words” instead of “loss of words”. Apologies if these sound nitpicky but for how good this is, the minor improvements can help make this look a lot more professional. Anyways, thank you so much for the translation and please take your time!

[@MoonLightOri]

Thank for your comment. Of course, there are some flaw on my translation, most because i didn't have much time to check the errors before doing the editing. But i will make sure the next ep and after won't have these apparent flaws anymore. (That if, i have time)

[@soulbrax1732]

Good Job, Ori 👍

[@brightside2210]

From teacher to handyman😂

[@RaqueteQuizumba]

hey man what the hell is this we need the rest ASAP

[@MoonLightOri]

For the past few days I've been quite a bit busy with College, but I can finally continue to work on Story 2 on tomorrow. So hopefully the video will be delivered before Thursday. Update: Delayed up to Friday because I have to deal with Kaiten Great Raid in Global.

[@ShayYuichi]

Do you plan to do Renge and Yukari's as well?

[@MoonLightOri]

I can't do them atm since I don't have them in my JP account. Already thinking of taking a break after done Kikyou Story 4 so I guess no for me.

[@ShayYuichi]

@@MoonLightOri understandable