@@コニちゃん-x8n 参考までに↓ 【Do you thinkパターンの質問例と答え方】 Today, many people buy things with credit cards instead of cash. Do you think this is a good idea? POINTS ・convenience ・safety ・economy 解答例 ・今回はイントロを削り最初から結論で書いた ・2つの理由とも2文目は具体例を使った(for exanple, for instance) I think it is a good idea to buy things with credit cards instead of cash. (16語 問題文をit to構文で言い換え) I have two reasons to support my opinion. (8語 定型句 I have two reasons for it.でも良い) To begin with, using credit cards is more convenient than buying things with cash. For example, people do not have to go to the bank before shopping to get cash. (30語 POINTSのconvenienceを利用) Next, using credit cards is safer than using cash. For instance, people do not have to worry about carrying a lot of cash and losing their wallets. (27語 POINTSのsafetyを利用) I think that people should buy things with credit cards instead of cash because of their convenience and safety. (19語 shouldを使って〜すべきだという形で意見としてまとめる。because of以下は動画で説明している通り) これでぴったり100語です!!
@@user-n3mb6xW48 introductionはこのテンプレを全くそのまま使いました。bodyの書き始めはFirst,〜 Second,〜で、conclusionのところはまた違う方の動画にあった、「For these reasons that I explained above,〜 」を使って書きました。 私自身1回目は390点ほどだったのでこちらの動画にとても救われました、笑 頑張ってください応援してます!
こんばんは!もうすぐ英検なので採点&添削をして頂けると助かります・・・💦🙏 質問はsome people say that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers. Do you agree with this opinion?です。 It is becoming a public concern that young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers.l am interested in it .In my opinion,l agree with the idea that they should do.I have two reasons for it. To begin with, people can get on high income careers. This is because I want to be happy in the future. Next,people can get several skills. For example,I can type quickly In conclusion, young people should spend more time thinking about their future careers because of their Income and Skills.です。出来れば何割くらい取れるかも教えていただけると助かります‼️無理言ってすみません・・・