"Mr. Gozo's Game" Creepypasta

[@DoctorPlagueWorld]

Not gonna lie, while writing this, I was really hoping you’d read it. This was a story that just sounds awesome in your voice. Thanks dude

[@mylesdulin8358]

You're the author? I have a question! Was Mr. Gozo actually good, or was he evil the whole time? In the middle I really thought he was good and just wanted to help but towards the end it made me feel like he was always out to eat the main character.

[@NoArtisticLimitation]

Not gonna lie, I do wonder if he actually was going to eat her, or if he comes to lonely children to protect them from bad lives... But at the same point I don’t wanna know, it’s more interesting not knowing... I do have one proper question though... would it be okay if I used Mr Gozo in a campaign? (Think Dnd)

[@DoctorPlagueWorld]

@@mylesdulin8358 to tell truth, Gozo is a demon, and his intention was to trap the OP, but he kind of becomes a sympathetic character. I wanted The audience to know that Gozo was a villain but still feel sorry for him when OP sends him away.

[@evalinebetterfly1507]

Solid man. Honestly. One of the best for battered babies to relate to. Yeah you can tell he’s evil but the sympathy is beautiful. Well done. N innocence always prevails. Thank you for actually putting what you wrote out there.

[@DoctorPlagueWorld]

@@evalinebetterfly1507 no worries, I enjoyed writing this one. If you’d like to see more, I have lots of stories on my reddit account and a link to my KZbin channel (which I have too much respect for creeps to plaster here). It’s Erutious on reddit, and there’s a five year backlog of stories there

[@katiem5415]

“Just like the girl at the Party” made me more uncomfortable than anything else in this story

[@tylaquiljones]

Same, really creeped me out.

[@praiseboognish1979]

Same here.

[@mysticknight1494]

Yeah, that's when I realized what the look of "not quite love" was in the brother's eyes... It made my stomach churn

[@shadowstar7388]

Yeah...that whole scene.

[@ansemthetrueseekerofdarkne2730]

Josh Duggar

[@RedRobertify]

Kinda feel like Gozo isn't a monster or to be truly feared here. He's dangerous sure. But he's got a conscience. And really just kinda seems lonely more than anything.

[@pokeballer7627]

like an extremely over bearing friend. its all fun at the start but as time goes on they reveal who they are

[@judywalter9412]

At first i liked him but then his wolf fur started to show under the sheep’s clothing

[@itstino5218]

CGC

[@EkaridonGaming]

The brother was the real monster

[@src6339]

No problem. She can just tell him, or get her daughter to tell him, to go away 3 times like she did last time.

[@judywalter9412]

Exactly

[@jacobgreen3397]

If the found person is erased completely, then who knows if they only had a daughter. Who knows how many other worse hiders there could have been.

[@dionorellana1663]

GOOD GOD YOU'RE RIGHT

[@serenamicallef5358]

Well there’s only one blue eye on his forehead. I feel like that implies that he’s only done this to one person since the eye wasn’t there when she was a kid.

[@Randomyoutubecommenter]

Hmm

[@dionorellana1663]

@@serenamicallef5358 fair point

[@erubin100]

@@serenamicallef5358 who says gozo is the only one of his kind?...

[@benevolentbanshee]

this was such a cool story. I wonder if Mr. Gozo didn’t have any intention of hurting the little girl, and he only hurt her brother because of what he was gonna do to her. I wonder if he just wanted to whisk her away to a magical land or something. no one is that patient and caring with someone that they wish to harm.

[@encrion6011]

Mr. Gozo probably had 2 entirely different places in mind for each one of them.

[@ventedthesenuts]

I think no matter what he intended to kill the girl like if mr gozo cared for her why is he trying to take her daughter later on and gozo wearing her brothers eyes as his own it seems like he is harvesting parts from people he kills and remember gozo was already acting aggressive before the brother even came home gozo had every intention of killing her before the possible abuse he was probably just trying to take advantage of her fear at that moment

[@themanbehindyou.9626]

@@ventedthesenuts he was obviously upset and felt betrayed after saving her when she said she no longer wished to see him. Plus the whole time he was trying to get her away and protect her from her brother as he said, you can see this when he says things like we don’t have much time

[@scrubtug6507]

Sure they are. Most predators are patient... spiders literally sit in their webs for days, just waiting on something to land. He's obviously lulling her into a false sense of security. He might not have killed her, or done what her brother intended... and you may be right about taking her to a "magic land" or whatever, but I don't think it would be a happy place... to my knowledge, no one has ever written about a magic land they didn't want to escape from... Alice, Dorothy, Narnia, the labyrinth, Hansel and gretel, etc... the goal is almost always to get home.

[@Mizuna626]

That’s absolutely false, in nature predators are insanely patience. If you look at serial killers many display a ton of patience before harming a victim

[@elliusagi]

I had a feeling of Mr. Gozo being a manifestation of fear, uncertainty and abuse, or something like that.

[@BootlegGremlin]

i like to think Mr. Gozo is just a nice monster that consumes evil people. like he just wants a pal to play with in his magical world. he may look a lil spooky but he can't really do anything about it.

[@marieleswinehart6077]

To me the real horror wasn't Mr Gozo, it was her brother. I was just sitting listening and I went into a panic mode with that part holy sh!t

[@josijustice3591]

Me too.

[@Goldcrusty]

am I the only one find this story wholesome for some reason. I think Mr. Gozo is a great character I would've gone with him

[@judywalter9412]

He was a wolf in sheep’s clothing

[@erubin100]

We don't really know for sure. There's evidence that he could've been good or bad.

[@LolaFulana305]

Geez her brother was the real monster... 😨

[@chillycoldchomper9389]

This was a story that actually scared me, it's been so long. Mr. Gozo is such an interesting and creepy monster. His motivations being good or bad is not claer, and it allows for critical thinking for what he wanted to achieve with the protagonist. This was a well written story that I love. I don't scared by creepy stories often, so this was such a welcoming ssurprise.

[@kathryntolle7822]

This story is wholesome to me. I'd love to draw Mr. Gozo, this is probably gonna be one of my favorite stories

[@hxndlezz7455]

To be honest if the brother is what I think he is mr Gozo did the world a favor

[@musiczillagames1178]

His voice is so calming

[@thegunnitgamer5716]

Honestly, this is an interesting one as Mr Gozo is definitely not the villain by any measure. He clearly cared about the protagonist in a way that her parents didn't have time to, and that her brother never would. I feel as though he wouldn't have harmed her if she went with him, he may have even brought her back, however her brother is a different story because he hurt her regularly, and that in turn hurt Mr Gozo through the power of empathy.

[@noahswrld9086]

This is my first time listing to a creepypasta in so long I use to listen all the time during online school ima start listening a lot more agin =)

[@acetown2263]

the story got kinda ruined when mr gozo got turned into the bad guy at the end. It was cooler when he was the good guy

[@erubin100]

It's a little more ambiguous, I think. We don't really know for sure what his true intentions were. It could've been either or. That makes it all the more interesting imo.

[@chillycoldchomper9389]

@@erubin100 it's a great monster

[@HE13272326]

"He evaporated like a fine mist, and i never saw him again. I wonder if he still plays the game out there somewhere." Boom, better ending.

[@bigloserguy9180]

Honestly I like mr gozo he doesn't seem like a complete hostile entity he just wants a friend

[@liberalbias4462]

He was gonna kidnap her

[@yume5758]

@@liberalbias4462 I more-so believe he was going to take her to a better place. The protagonist of the story was obviously from a place of poor housing, especially with her abusive brother.

[@bigloserguy9180]

@@liberalbias4462 because he felt he could provide her a better happy life

[@hayleyjones6080]

@@yume5758 the author said he was a demon that wanted to jus trap her. He was a villain

[@TandJgaming]

It would be interesting to explore the idea that mr Gozo let her win hide and seek because he genuinely liked her and wanted to protect her innocence and then he saw her brother acting that way and lost it. However I’m not the author, if she says mr Gozo is a villain I guess he’s a villain.

[@Better-0ff]

This one's going to be good.

[@KrowleyPineapples777]

Ah... I see you're a man of culture as well.

[@BurstSenpaii]

@@KrowleyPineapples777 💯

[@Rooiku]

UH! I wish this had a continuation where the main character actually finished the last game! Also I don't think Mr Gozo wanted to hurt the girl.

[@Blackw1ng]

Tell the daughter to tell Mr. Gozo to "go away Gozo" three times. And offer her a large reward or that she's in danger or smth along those lines. Though obviously try to head to a public place first.

[@LordNelson6]

But he never really tried to find her... like if he wanted to he would have found her fast "hide under things to heavy for him to lift" but he had no issue flipping over a table and smashing a microwave.. he killed her brother bc he well.. I think we all know what he was going to try to do... He begged her not to let him take him. "If you come with me he can't hurt you"... he's not evil he was protecting her, an angel if you will.

[@raheenb]

Wow.... This was amazing. Kudos to the author, please write more! For the last few minutes I was thinking the brother might've been a spirit that was turning malevolent which would've been a great twist... But the story was just perfect as written.

[@Gobbles_]

I love your vids more than any channel. Your voice is very calming and you make the best scary stories. You're the best!

[@alwaysforgetful1089]

I don't think he is malevolent, per say, perhaps just a bit misguided. I believe Mr. Gozo is some sort of being who tries to free kids from neglectful or abusive situations, and who only hurts those who pose a threat to his kids, like the protagonist's brother. If he were truly evil, he wouldn't have been so patient losing all those games of hide and seek and would probably have moved on to another child after a while, and he didn't have a reason to tell the protagonist how to banish him of his intentions were truly bad. As for why he's returned, I think it's like a sort of "one who got away" kind of situation. A way of reconnecting with the one kid he wasn't able to say. I wouldn't bet on everything being solved by a simple chat, since this is a creepypasta after all, but I do believe that Mr. Gozo is more sympathetic than he lets on.

[@rightguy200000]

Mr.Gozo was too good for the mc.

[@justamoon6986]

Your channel and your videos have been so calming/therapeutic for me, thank you so much for keeping a steady flow of videos. Sometimes these stories are the highlight of my day.

[@JeffreySmith84]

As soon as I heard "smile like a Cheshire cat" I was frightened

[@Desert_juanito]

Just tell the daughter to say go away mr Gozo three times and it’s done

[@SheevTalks]

Mr. Gozo seems chill

[@kali18]

The kid has wonderful taste in cartoons lol 😂. I watched those still today as an adult.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

The name reminds me of The Muppets and Muppet Babies.

[@vincentjonesvr]

Honestly, the main character is the bad guy in this. Gozo revealed itself to be a protector. It *begged* the main character not to bring the brother into the game, and the main character makes it pretty clear with their response of "if you find him, he has to go with you" that she knew that her brother wouldn't make it out. She asked Gozo to remove her brother and then blamed him after. I don't think Gozo is *going after* the daughter, like some of these comments are claiming. I think Gozo still cares about the mother and is making himself a 'friend' to the daughter the same way. Mr. Gozo is clearly an otherworldly being with entirely different ideas of life, and these comments are comparing it to a child rapist. Hell, Gozo specifically *tells* the main character that if she tells him to go away a third time he will never appear to her again.

[@eochiiii]

I don't think the main character is the bad guy per se,, but I can understand why you see her that way. She was like 10 and probably didn't think much of Mr. Gozo taking her brother instead because he always seemed nice to her and she probably thought it would be the same for her brother and he would just bring him back,, which he didn't lmao. Mr. Gozo honestly did her a favor and I hate how some people compare him to a r/pist when in reality the brother was. Mr. Gozo's character was ambiguous in his actions but I lowkey feel like he cared for op, and her shunning him away at the end because she was scared and confused just made him angry because he probably thought she would be grateful for him getting rid of her brother who was bad person in her life. But then again she was a kid and wasn't processing it like that and took the trauma as Mr. Gozo being bad. Mr. Gozo didn't come off all the as way good, I mean he was still trying to take her away but I like to believe he noticed how bad her brother was and felt bad about her life situations and probably wanted to help her or have a friend around since we can clearly see he's an otherworldly being. In my opinion I really liked his character and felt he was genuine and probably didn't want to hurt op but she was still a kid and didn't mean to just give her brother up like that, even though the brother deserved it 🗿.

[@mango1570]

But imagine being that kid especially after realizing what would happen to someone after losing the game

[@lordlammi1562]

I agree with most of your points, but she was justified wanting to get rid of her brother because he's a horrible person

[@theimaginationstudio9880]

For a moment I thought it said "Mr Gonzo's game", and I was both confused and interested

[@zoezoey8]

wow. how absolutely chilling. this has got to be one of my favourites of yours yet. i imagine gozo to look much like the babadook

[@lilyetal]

Why does mr gozo make me think of Itward from Fran Bow? White face, big eyes, massive smile and a top hat and coat.

[@abigoreternal7537]

Where did Mr. Gozo touch you? "Actually, my brother was.." 😦 "No, no.. He didn't exist though" Mr.Gozo? "No, my brother" CHECK PLEASE..

[@PH03NIX_PUP]

dang this is scary and sad at the same time. your stories are amazing

[@charlieyes4946]

Alpha, What does that even mean anymore…

[@nmhummel]

This has been one of my favorites as of late. :)

[@FluttershyIsAGoddess]

I don't believe Mr.Gozo was evil. I truly think Gozo only wants to play. This however is now my second favorite Creepypasta. 8:12 Is it me, or does this sound gross?

[@asxxdm]

Whats the firdt

[@FluttershyIsAGoddess]

@@asxxdm Godzilla NES

[@asxxdm]

@@FluttershyIsAGoddess havent heard of it will check

[@theeassassinhoodgh0st780]

tbh i wouldve asked mr.gozo for a blunt

[@TheOfficialSynx]

This story is pretty much Mr. Widemouth. I'd go with the idea of them both being the same being and this person is another victim

[@inkarnation6512]

But Mr. Widemouth was a lot more vicious to the point of hurting the kid if i remember correctly.

[@belxweg]

Obsessed with this story listened to it a couple times!!!

[@SaltLazer]

Her brother was scarier than Mr Gozo tbh

[@Sienisota]

Excellent story and narration 👍

[@rakiahbaker5589]

It's cool that the main character watches Cartoon Network!⬛⬜

[@ozzle]

Looks like someone slighted a fae, not once, but twice.

[@jaredmetheny166]

I really love this background music the most

[@candiceperry5817]

This story is awesome&bizarre

[@luckiestunluckypersonever4278]

This is gonna be great!!!

[@luizfernandoguimaraesolive3205]

Title: "Mr. Gozo's Game" Me, a Brazilian: "Mister what now?"

[@keagansmith7702]

Enjoyment?

[@serhumano3692]

Tadinho do Gozo, ninguém leva ele a sério só porque o nome dele é meio gozado😞

[@serenity8839]

Owfff i thought he was "mean" but after hearing that party line... ye well got what was coming too him.

[@captainvex1838]

"I believe you are found." That line gave me chills-

[@mitchelltheawesome1]

The fact that the first line of this story that the male narrator reads aloud is "When I was a little girl" actually made me giggle. I'm not sure if this is genuinely funny, or if I'm being immature.

[@Schoonie_Kalash]

My question is, what about her brothers bedroom? The parents forgot him but won't they have evidence of his existence because of his bedroom and clothes?

[@nickgennady]

Perhaps the stuff disappeared like the tv shows and food mr Gozmo gave the girl for winning the games.

[@Schoonie_Kalash]

@@nickgennady good call!

[@alphonselover825]

At first I thought Mr. Gozo was like the sleep paralysis demon I had read about in another creepypasta story. But now after that ending I'm not so sure anymore.

[@stanleymorris4109]

DUDE was trying to take advantage of his own little sister sick ....thank God for mr. Gozo .. 😳❤🙏

[@vel5094]

This is kinda sad, Mr Gozo might be a monster but he’s not TOO bad.

[@Whonimations]

The moment i saw the title: Holy shit, this gonna be the good stuff Edit: it was the good stuff

[@Child_of_woe_1994]

The brother had some super creep vibes😬

[@lordlammi1562]

I think I speak for everyone when I say I hope her brother is in a worse place

[@ErdriedDeirdre]

Oh I Really liked this one! Good choice! And your reading is impeccable as always. 😀

[@zoraaouad3684]

did anybody thought that mr.gozo resembles jack the skellington from nightmare before christmas

[@ishandhawan3950]

Just realised midway that mrgozo didn't have ears so he could not listen to you while you hide as he plays fair

[@hybrdgamer3678]

honestly, my mental picture of mr. gozo looks like the babadook

[@ablosch2452]

Mine looks like Salad Fingers but with gray skin.

[@Eggscalibur]

That film was creepy fr

[@jackdurden466]

So, he’s Beetlejuices cousin? And the rules to his appearance are backwards. Hmm…sounds reasonable. Although I wouldn’t care to play with him. NO! You don’t have to try! Unless you want to get away. And if Gozo is taking parts of his “victims”, then he must also be related to the demon from Jeepers Creepers. Only that cousin is all kinds of mean.

[@WhiteWolf62697]

I wish that didn't end the way it did, It would of been so much cooler if we could of learned more about Mr.Gozo and what he REALLY wanted to do. It would be interesting if people wrote those kinds of endings sometimes, and not just the "oh I avoided something that COULD of been bad." Or "guess we'll never know". Good story until the disappointing ending

[@apothicd8770]

Gozo the gozarian? Might as well call the Ghostbusters.

[@mylobeatsnshit2036]

I could see Jordan Peele making a great movie out of this… great story

[@legend-xo5]

I feel like Gozo is like It we all just food too him lol

[@hannahlafave9916]

Wholeheartedly enjoyed this one.

[@tiffanymolina1285]

It’s funny how eight years difference between siblings was emphasized when my brothers are 10-18 years older than me

[@violettaeve]

So who was the good guy and bad guy?… I am confused

[@ShadyViserion]

19 seconds after the upload. Sheeeyit. Talk about perfect timing!

[@DylannJocelyn]

Uhh wait what why did the parents call the police when they came home then if they didn't remember the brother? Wasn't he being missing the reason they called them? Big obvious loop hole there.. am I missing something?

[@Andrzejewskiable]

bc the house was a mess

[@karenjarrett8904]

Whoa! Great story, with the perfect narration. I don’t believe Mr Gozo was benign, ulterior motives yes.

[@nicole-cx9pl]

this story was sooo good omg

[@__mastershifureads__]

Her brother gave me the creeps more than mr gozo himself-

[@iftikhar3131]

Wow! This was a good one!

[@samasiaskipperable]

Thank you for the video 🙏👍🙏

[@raspyraspberries]

I don't understand the reason to why the OP got mad at Mr. Gozo after he made the brother disappear or why he didn't like him playing with his daughter... Mr. Gozo doesn't seem malevolent if he first of, allows a child to win when he's capable of easily making them lose, pleads with the child to stop the game cause of the permanence of the disappearance and also eliminates a disgusting sexual abuser from this reality.

[@lilsusboi8986]

at the end, I noticed that all the main character has to do is to get her daughter to say "go away Mr. Gozo" three times

[@dmcraig91]

Perfect! I was just looking for something to listen too! 🖤

[@CAH2727]

Fantastic story

[@lampm0th452]

this story gives me very much pillowman vibes

[@danajones5896]

It was scary and awesome at the same time I would freak out a little if my daughter said that to me, Great storytelling Creeps, thanks!😊😊👍👍❤❤💯💯

[@SSSyndrome214]

Good one!

[@valoripace9038]

Brother: why don't you play with me Me: 😳😳😳😳

[@VeiledSeer]

Yo what

[@valoripace9038]

Yeah that was in the creepy pasta.

[@VeiledSeer]

@@valoripace9038I must have misread it because I interpreted it in a.. less than savory way

[@valoripace9038]

@Jess Hamilton the whole interaction when the brother comes home drunk and says "just like the girl at the party" like that whole part just makes my skin crawl

[@valoripace9038]

@@VeiledSeer 10:00 is when the brother says it

[@stillbuyvhs]

Gozo might've been some sort of strange entity, but he protected the girl from her brother. Good job Mr. Gozo.

[@P-Bean]

Uploaded on my birthday!

[@ceonasmith674]

I really hope her brother was not about to do what I think he was going to do Bc if so it brings so much more to the story

[@Lorketta]

This lowkey made me sad poor me gozo

[@Bluesthuman]

You know that MR guy seems a lot less of a monster now

[@vfordyslexia6440]

Brother comes out of hiding spot Mr Gozo: ez claps

[@nocturno7660]

Mister Gozo acting like a fairly odd parent to the girl, or like a devil to the brother

[@dumpster9048]

Low key feel bad for mr gozo

[@mirandabaggins501]

Mr. Gozo should’ve gotten a succubus involved to help take care of that disgusting older brother…! 😈 Poor Gozo doesn’t seem all bad. 🥺

[@riptideshark2249]

c'mon man just put it this way, have gozo babysit the child!! no money, no problems, just spending time with the kid, and no killing family, sounds like a fair trade for me man.

[@jessicajustinian2164]

I really enjoyed this

[@theepicshifter1251]

she only said "go away" twice...