English Language Paper 1, Question 5: ‘Creative’ Writing: EVERYTHING In 1 Video

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⁠@@saddahhussin1818 I kind of do read a lot but not necessarily books, it can be anything. I feel like when I watch movies I pick up on words that they use that I like and I will search it up and then I’ll embed it into my daily language, being surrounded by intellectual people who regularly use complex language also really helps me and when I’m doing a creative writing piece in class I use a thesaurus to help me and somehow I’ve become a thesaurus 😂 However I do naturally have an interest in using enormous words! I suggest reading books that is suited to your personal interests hopefully we both do amazing on Monday

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@@suzysheep149 thanks! what was your prompt for question 5? it would be a miracle if i was given the same one

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@@suzysheep149 and also did you do your literature too? what were the texts? i've been told mine are jekyll & hyde, and merchant of venice. if yours were the same, do you like telling me what the questions were if you can remember? thanks so much, just trying to get as much information as possible incase i get the same one, and also for revision 😁

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If you zoom in and out and change the focus in the description question will you gain marks because structure techniques and obviously you need language techniques.

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The night was ablaze, engulfed in a relentless inferno that devoured everything in its path. Flames danced voraciously, leaping from one structure to another, casting a sinister glow upon the landscape. The air crackled with the sound of burning timber and the acrid scent of smoke that filled my lungs. It was a harrowing sight, a relentless assault on the senses, as the fire consumed nature's beauty and mankind's creations alike. As I stood at the edge of this seething maelstrom, the intensity of the heat was overwhelming. It felt as if the very air had transformed into a scorching furnace, threatening to melt my skin. The searing blaze painted a macabre spectacle, casting flickering, twisted shadows upon the charred earth. The deafening roar of the flames drowned out all other sounds, as if the fire itself possessed a malevolent voice, taunting me with its destructive power. Through the billowing smoke, I navigated a treacherous path, my senses dulled by the overwhelming assault of heat and smoke. Embers soared through the air like fiery meteors, descending upon me with a relentless fury. Every step was a gamble, as crumbling structures and collapsing debris threatened to trap me within their fiery grasp. Fear gnawed at my core, urging me to surrender to the merciless flames, but I clung to a desperate glimmer of hope, a will to survive against all odds. Time seemed to bend and warp within the chaos, stretching each moment into an eternity. The air grew thicker, as if the very atmosphere conspired to suffocate me. But I pressed on, driven by sheer determination and a primal instinct to escape the clutches of this infernal monster. I gasped for breath, my lungs straining against the suffocating smoke, while my heart pounded in my chest, a rhythmic reminder of the fragility of life in the face of such devastation. Finally, as the fiery tempest began to subside, its insatiable appetite appeased, I emerged from the charred landscape, a survivor amidst the ashes. The once-thriving world now lay in ruins, a haunting reminder of the fire's unyielding power. I stood amidst the wreckage, shaken but resolute, forever marked by the indelible scars of this terrifying event. And as I surveyed the smouldering remains, I couldn't help but feel a profound sense of awe and humility in the face of nature's relentless wrath. The fire had forever altered my perception of the world, leaving me with a deep respect for its destructive beauty and the fleeting nature of our existence within it. Which one is better?

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Love the ambitious vocabulary

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More punctuation needed

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should i memorise my pre-planned essays and slightly adapt it to suit the question?

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Can u explain how u would do that

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​@@shafinbepary2000can u explain how u would do that

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take the famous priest plot fir example, it can be applied to any question. say the question was "write about an unexpected series of events". in the priest story he is sure to enter heaven but once arrived the gates are shut. he then receives a message that he has been destined to hell but little did he know it was his final test of faith@@Zero1._

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[@esseven]

if you have your plot and the prompt is nothing to do with it, can you write a brief description of the picture in a flashback or something and carry on with your plot?

[@TurtlesAndTortoises302]

Yes you can but be careful you don't focus too much on plot so you don't lose marks for forgetting similes, metaphors, other language devices and structure

[@esseven]

@@TurtlesAndTortoises302 ok thankyou ! not good at creating a story so if i pre plan it and briefly adapt it to the picture i should be ok

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@@esseven Definitely, good luck! 😁🌟

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icl i always get 10 marks on this question even if i write a story or describe the picture

[@Hiba.07]

Watch mr everything English and if u try ur best and actually listen to him I’d say u can get 25+

[@blues3483]

@Hiba please help me how do i revise question 5 and where can i find top grade essays from?

[@Hiba.07]

@@blues3483 I just type in google grade 9 essays English language gcse there’s loads of examples. To revise I pick out good ideas from other pieces of work and I try to remember them and a range of ambitious vocab. Before the exam I look over them and when I open the paper I go to q5 and scribble them down. The extract given might even give u ideas/vocab you can steal. Just make sure you know how to use all punctuation correctly and make sure ur spellings r all correct if ur unsure in the exam of the spelling leave the word and use a synonym. It’s easy marks spellings. Overall listen to mr everything English lol and do same/similar plan it helped me as when I was writing I crossed off each part of the plan as I was doing it making sure I hit the mark scheme all the way thru my writing. That was when I got 30/40 in mocks I just need to work memorising more good ideas. Make sure u have attempted at least 3 different ‘themes’ as practice. Examples u can do are: gothic, summer, forest, journey, old building, drowning, night, excitement. They’re very broad but yeah hope that helps u.

[@blues3483]

@@Hiba.07 ty for helping me btw i need to know is it plagiarism if i copied mreverythingenglish story about netflix and chill? on one of his videos i liked the plot and think i can write alot about it

[@Hiba.07]

@@blues3483 ur welcome :) no it isn’t plagiarism cuz u would adjust the plot anyways to the question. Also it’s not like everyone who will use that plot will have word to word questions 5’s, imagine tho 😂 so it isn’t plagiarism. Btw I’m in y11 too and I’m on a grade 7 for language so far, so don’t just take my advice and assume I’m right. It works for me and I watch a lot of mr everything English and mr salles. Hope u do well in ur exam tho x

[@No_one172]

Thank you so much tomorrow is my English language mock exam thanks to you

[@qidoomq7380]

What did you write about?

[@ChinyereOkia]

This is so powerful Thank you so much sir!

[@lucaspotter1296]

Need this so bad 😂

[@OfficialRhyRab]

ong my brudda

[@hello-cm2vt]

ahhhhhh too stressed ! I feel like I go on a tangent of vocab but struggle with a story what should I do ??

[@batmanreece2967]

"we not re-writing lord of the rings" this is the most realist thing ever. and its so true

[@silasoliveira6184]

What a wonderful lesson thank you very much

[@Zai-w4o]

2:22 bro my mock is tomorrow n u got me pissing myself at 2am “it’s a con 👺, its a lie 😠, it’s an absolute mockery 😤 !” following u js for that 😭😭 33:27 HAHAHAHA

[@banana0648]

Thanks so much Mr Everything English. This was rly helpful❤

[@heathersisto1119]

Thank you! 😊

[@zarinakhalid3004]

Excellent, brilliant teacher.

[@Bilal-gx3tp]

y'all need to like his videos

[@dk_shorts1234]

Last year i was only 6 marks away from passing lauguage, insallah ta'ala i pass

[@rijahoque]

hopefully you do well and we all will get the grades we want inshallah

[@hadee219]

@@rijahoque inshallah akhi

[@rijahoque]

@@hadee219 ameen

[@heynicky1109]

AQA released a video advising that you prepare content for question 5 in advance

[@marykazemi3743]

Thank you so much for your kindness 💕

[@bluetrace100]

Hi, thanks very much for the insight, really useful Couple of questions though. 1. Was this all there was to the story; at just over 300 words it seems incredibly short, 2. with just speech tags, an ellipsis and brackets is that what is passing for, 'A range of punctuation', and 3 would you, as an examiner given this 39/40? Thanks, Trace

[@donyaabt2910]

You are amazing 😢

[@s0metimes_liv]

mr everythig english is the true legend

[@voodoocurry2762]

I hate this question the most and honestly this is the only video that can actually help me 😂

[@logan.lambert]

earned a like and a sub,thanks a lot

[@edwardgyan]

@Mr Everything English just wanted to say this is really helpful but was just wondering when would i use a hyphen and what does it do and mean?

[@ghosted9324]

You can use a hyphen to specify things, for example: The desk - which was made of wood - fell over

[@malllllllllllll221]

THANKS QUEEN

[@thegoldencalf.]

malika... it makes me cringe to hear this.

[@adsaasda9837]

@@thegoldencalf. hear*

[@malllllllllllll221]

@@thegoldencalf. ur comment making me cringe tho. So dramatic

[@AA-pk8zk]

Really helpful thank you so much 🤍

[@heynicky1109]

Here’s the video where AQA suggest preplanning content for question 5: kzbin.info/www/bejne/o2TSZo1vn5mcotU

[@tacendamori]

thank you :)

[@ivyrufus8273]

Could you use slang if your character is saying it? Like as dialogue

[@tacendamori]

yeah

[@musicxo5256]

yes for dialouge

[@Ojisgay]

Yeah that’s colloquialism

[@rijahoque]

put it in speech marks and after the figure of speech put a comma and specify who says it

[@Yxsufyt]

31:21 Bros on smoke

[@lesley_yeahhh]

😂😂

[@golden-corners9919]

45:12 i think you did the peace sign wrong lol

[@suburashiid6411]

So the plot doesnt have to make sense u just need the language,structure,setences and punctation?