7 Ways to Write Top Grade Essays Mr Salles, Using Capitalism in An Inspector Calls

[@TheAwesomeTolga198]

Damn, he's good. I wish I got any comments from my examiners.

[@AvaSun-yo2wy]

Too many big words for a commoner like me

[@bangtanshook4271]

exactly, I lost my brain cells reading that.

[@Akira12364]

@@bangtanshook4271 lmao same

[@amaka.06]

‘Didactic’ ‘Quintessential’ Lord have mercy

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@@amaka.06 😂😂

[@thenoobyblock1208]

At times it was a bit ridiculous and pretentious, sounded like he just read a thesaurus. Having a good vocabulary does not mean using 'high-level' words every 5 seconds, that just makes your argument convoluted and verbose.

[@florian-ic4mc]

absolutely HELPFUL! my aic mock is tomorrow too! ty

[@FavourJ]

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[@jaymarts7944]

Mines in 1 hour 🤣

[@theinbetweeners7882]

I think that it would be very useful if we could see the question that he is answering but brilliant video!!

[@filmsbyscotti]

Judging by the introductory paragraph, the question seems to be "How does Priestley show selfishness in An Inspector Calls?"

[@Burrgundy]

in our school they call the introduction 'the big idea' haha

[@jennylucia693]

THANK YOU SIR!!!!!!!! :) What an incredible teacher you are!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That's very kind!

[@IsmailMehrban]

​@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish He only writes like three pages for all three of his essays will that get you top marks if it's in detail similar to sanjays

[@AliZFTW]

If you manage to achieve L6 in all 3 AOs once in your essays but overall have low level 5s/high level 4s, are you automatically eligible for getting the highest marks despite the over quality not being very consistent?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes, you won't get full marks, but very high marks.

[@AliZFTW]

Mr Salles Teaches English thank you sir! I managed to get my first ever grade 9 in English literature thanks to you :) My previous mock was July 2019 and I achieved a grade 6 but in my December/January mock, I managed to achieve a grade 9! I improved by 3 grades since my last exam thanks to your videos!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

@@AliZFTW And a tribute to your revision - well done, and thanks for letting me know!

[@444steph2]

@@AliZFTW wat video did u watch to make that possible

[@francisluces1393]

Mr salles i know this is very late but can u read my essay on how sheila is presented throughout the play and give an honest grade so i can improve In J.B. Priestleys play,An Inspectors Calls,Sheila Birling is presented as a dynamic and complex character who undergoes significant development as the play unfolds.Her mannerisms and language replicates that of a young child which is ironic seeming as Sheila is 'in her early twenties'. These characteristics are demonstrated through the use of the pronouns 'Mummy' and 'Daddy' as well as the adjective 'excited'.Her journey from naivety to social awareness is central to the plays themes of responsibility and morality. At the beginning of the play,Sheila is depicted as a young and typical woman of her social class being described as naive and somewhat self -centred as in act 1 she says ‘I've been so happy tonight’.She views Eva's suicide as an inconvenience to her and that she has ruined her happy evening.This shows that Sheila is so immature that she cannot show empathy towards anyone.She is also introduced as excited about her engagement to Gerald and is more concerned with superficial pleasure,like the engagement ring than any serious matter when she says ‘Oh its its wonderful!Look mummy, isn't it beautiful?She is also reliant on Gerald for her decisions.This emphasises that Sheila tends to act as a submissive girl who cannot form her own opinions which back then in the era that Priestley set it in,women were expected to support their husbands, but never necessarily by offering their own opinions or views. When the inspector arrives and begins questioning about Eva Smith's death,Sheilas initial reaction is shocked and begins to deviate from her father and fiances opinions.As she learns own role in eva's downfall by getting her fired from Milwards out of jealousy ,she begins to feel deep remorse.This marks the beginning of her moral awakening .Upon realising her part in eva's suffering,sheila admits ‘and if i could help her now i would ‘shows her immediate regret and a growing sense of responsibility.Sheila is demonstrating the ability to show sympathy towards Eva, something which she previously wouldn't do. This would provoke the audience to become slightly less weary of Sheila as she is now showing empathy As the inspector's questioning continues,sheila becomes more introspective.Unlike her parents,who are defensive and dismissive,sheila is willing to accept responsibility for her actions.She starts to see the broader implications(far reaching consequences)of their collective behaviour and becomes the moral conscience of the play.Sheila challenges her family's attitudes by portraying one of priestley's views saying ‘but these girls aren't cheap labour-they're people.’ This statement reflects her evolving understanding of social injustice and humanity of the working class by beginning to form socialist views and disagreeing with her father.this additionally brings conflict particularly to her parents,who still remain largely unrepentant and is annoyed by her family's refusal to change. By the end of the play,she is presented as a fundamentally changed character who has moved from a naive girl to a mature woman who understands the importance of social responsibility.She is determined not to forget the lessons she has learned.In the final act sheila says ‘I remember what he said,how he looked and how he made me feel.Fire and blood and anguish.’This syndetic listing shows that the inspectors message has left a lasting impact on her,unlike her parents who are eager to dismiss it.Priestley uses sheila to represent the possibility of change and growth,particularly in the younger generation and to critique complacency and moral blindness of the older generation.Through sheila ,Priestley emphasises the need of empathy,accountability and commitment to social justice.

[@jacobsikoli2006]

If I take the idea of king Arthur and use it for myself with the link to the dinning table would that be plagiarism?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Of course not

[@Palakkaur_]

Hello sir seriously you are best KZbinr for English subject. I have my mocks in march and I need help on literature I got a 3 on my last mocks which is bad , my target is to get a grade 7 any advise

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Make notes on my videos, or buy my guides, which all show you how to get grades 7-9!

[@Palakkaur_]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish alright thank you

[@erenyeager6668]

ok do you even need that much sophisticated vocab? would it actually get you really high marks

[@JaydonTaylor-t2o]

If the vocab is relevant to the content such as "proletariate" i believe the examiner will be more convinced by your response, therefore playing you in a higher level where you can achieve more marks. I'm not entirely sure tho so take my words with a pinch of salt.

[@noel.m7148]

It add more mark to your 4 marks SPAG I think and in AO2

[@reaper_cat]

This Sanjay must be a member of a bourgoiuse, trying to intimidate others with his superficial vocabulary. Anyway it was very helpfull.

[@katieleigh463]

please can someone point out where he put quotes in to link back to his first para?

[@HamzaZ09]

I feel like u could write this for any aic theme question if you change it a lil but

[@lewisknowles5882]

When you memorise a thesis how do you make sure that it links to every possible exam question, the same with quotes?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Because the author’s intentions stay the same, no matter what the question is.

[@varishpersaud5093]

14:54 isn't that deplorable?

[@lamiyakhokon890]

Hi, sir if i memorise some bits of these essay and write those exact lines in my exam would be considered plagiarism ? love your videos btw :)

[@samburn9946]

yes that's plagiarism but I don't think anyone would find out lol

[@nstar3489]

Thank Youuu

[@lukenewport3780]

Hello Mr Salles was wondering if you would be able to do an updated analysis of the poem poppies

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Luke Newport What’s wrong with the three I have?

[@lukenewport3780]

Mr Salles Teaches English I like the in depth analysis once to grasp the whole concept of the poem. The one from 3 years ago was difficult for me to analysis it properly.

[@sameehabegum7109]

Does this apply to Edexcel as well?

[@toby2826]

I think he said the skills all carry over

[@yoimoya]

what is up w his use of vocabulary i cant process anything

[@deeshapatel4809]

ily

[@securitybreach5182]

Eng Lit tmrw

[@Sarank1107]

@@securitybreach5182 fr good luck

[@ha5965l]

11:14

[@chick3nandchipz448]

grade 9 but cant write on the lines

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[@saturnsl28]

yo

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[@FireFitt]

This student needs to fix his handwriting

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