7 Ways to Write a Top Grade Essay (Using Sheila in An Inspector Calls) Mr Salles

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[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Brilliant! You had to do the revision, so I can't take all the credit. You can definitely aim for grade 8 in the real thing!

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[@lunabrights4073]

I've had marks like 3, 4 and 5s in my last year, English was a bit more difficult for me since I joined in year 7 with 0 English knowledge (i'm Italian). And then when I finally got a 6, I kept getting 6s, and that's it. I just couldn't get higher than that, and sometimes I've wondered if it was just because my teacher was too strict with marks, or something else, like maybe I wasn't writing enough. So I started to write a lot more than usual, like pages and pages long essays, but the marks didn't improve much, just 6as. I watched some of your videos for more insights later on, and it really helped me with my mocks, since I actually got a 7, like first time since forever. And I used just a short plan, didn't even do much for it, when I usually have tons of time to plan out my essays for class and write them at home. So, I was really surprised and happy with myself. I've currently got a 30/30 for poetry comparison and poetry too, which improved a LOT because the last time, I only got a 3a. I've got to say, watching your videos really helped me improve and see where I was making mistakes, how to manage to structure my responses well and etc. For that, I'll be forever grateful. Thank youuu!!! Keep being awesome mr salles. Edit: I'd just like to say that I did get a greade 8 in my other mock and got a nine in my GCSEs so gotta be grateful for that too ^^ Thanks!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

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[@francescostimolo2413]

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[@lunabrights4073]

@@francescostimolo2413 Ah, ciao! Come va? Spero che ti stai trovando bene con la materia se stai per fare i tuoi GCSEs quest'anno! Good luck ^^

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[@lunabrights4073]

@@francescostimolo2413 anche per me! I'm so stressed 😭

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[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

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[@Oh-lk2qd]

Wow throughout the answer he spelt it Shelia

[@Bella-bc3dx]

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[@vendico]

Shouldn’t he have lost a mark for that due to SPAG

[@alexihonor908]

@@vendico spag isn’t actually spelling most of the time, it’s mostly about how you articulate abs structure your work (my teachers friend who moderates said this)

[@alexihonor908]

@@vendico i spelled shakespeare wrong throughout my whole essay and still got a 9

[@justaracoonchillinginatoilet69]

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[@user-or1tp5bo5q]

Still subscribed to you, you helped me so much during my gcses. Both my grade 8s in literature and language are due to your amazing videos. Thanks!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

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Thank you soo much I got full marks on my English test Work hard and never never give up.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Great news, well done

[@not...not...no.643]

scored 30/30 despite constant spag mistakes 😯 gives me hope wbk

[@okayokay2484]

I got a grade8 in my test. I went from a 4 to an 8 . Thank you sir

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Keep it up

[@luffism]

I went from a Grade 5 to a Grade 7 in my mocks which were a few months ago! Aiming for Grade 8-9 in the real thing which is in about a couple weeks time, thank you so much for the help, Mr Salles (:

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Lol😂I just did my assay on it today! Thank you so much for all of your revision videos😊

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Naomi Malakar same haha, that prelude question was hard tho

[@AverageCommentor]

I am a Year 9 student. I am quite average, getting grades 4-5 with an occasional 3. Recently I had my final exams for English year 9 on An Inspector Calls. I did almost no revision at home due to my poor time management, but the very night before my exam I spent a while revising, and watched a bunch of your videos to help me. I ended up getting a Grade 7 (22/30 + 4 spag, 76%), which is much higher than I anticipated. To say that your videos are effective is a massive understatement. Thank you very much.

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That’s very impressive - good luck

[@emily5893]

Well done Dec for getting full marks in your exam , reading your paragraph will hopefully help me in my English literature 2 exam tomorrow as I now know what a full mark exam looks like , and thank you Mr Salles for your videos . :)

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[@shizedits7931]

Omg that’s you so much for this because it’s 11:22 on a Sunday and tomorrow I have an essay on Sheila and I’m trying to cram in some revision but didn’t know even how to do the essay portion

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Trust all of this. If you work hard and use all these videos you can get a 9. I did!!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Thanks for the boost!

[@idkwhatthisis7319]

what if I’m doing a diff exam board? I do eduqas and I cant find a lot of resources

[@Ella-le4lk]

Thank you sooo much because of you I went from a 5 to an 8 in my mocks!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That's a great result - thank you for letting me know!

[@GeorgeBrown-lw9zk]

Omfg this is so helpful got an exam on Sheila tomorrow, mate ur a life saver

[@sophie-vd3qr]

Just did my inspector calls essay on shelia today! Can't wait until the results are out.

[@rohan_n23]

thanks so muchhh you're the best teacher, you mr bruff and mr everything english. I am a predicted a 4 and i am working at a 4/5ish grade but i'm close to a 6/7. this video has helped me so much to structure my essay as i have an exam tomorow!!!!!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That's great!

[@rohan_n23]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish sir a practise question im doing right now is a bout sheila the two parts of the question are how is sheila presented in the play? and how does sheila communicate with the inspector? for both parts can i talk about the change of her character?????

[@rohan_n23]

hi mr salles, thank you so much, your the best my predicted gradesfor GCSE are low but im getting higher for alot of subjects which im expected low grades, but most importantly sir last exams i got 4-'s and in my inspctor calls essay based on sheila i got a 5 plus which was so close to a 6,, but it was just my spag!! thank you very much, the 6's,7's, 8's and 9's are around the corner for me

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Good luck!

[@jamiemccollin438]

Me *Stumbles into this knowing he's doing AIC in the mock on Monday and thinks he's just found the holy grail*: *faints in enthusiasm* Me 2 days later after this wasn't the assessment: *recoils into his seat*

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Why are you so underrated?

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Because I don't brand my thumbnails and I don't upload on the same day every week, I think

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I’m currently at a grade of 3+ and this is helping so much I think I might reach a level 6 or 7

[@romeo2123]

All you have to do is follow the assessment objectives and you’ll get a minimum grade 5

[@oliveronbenq2275]

what was your final grade?

[@decemans5726]

Dec Emans not ‘Means’ but no worries haha ..

[@studywithme5192]

What this the 2019 aqa paper 2 for litreture.

[@decemans5726]

Yas , Yes...

[@ayuba3282]

@@decemans5726 what do you mean by the first and second death of eva Smith?? did she die twice??

[@decemans5726]

Ayub A , first death and Second death both symbolic of Eva smith and Daisy Renton , they are the same person however seen as 2 different people and that’s what I mean by her dying twice

[@nosir1479]

Dec Emans Wait. Why did you get a Grade 8 in a full mark test?

[@LegendShadowsZz]

Hopefully with this trove of knowledge I’ll be able to hit another Grade 9 for my English Lit and Lang

[@keo895]

congrates dec!

[@chow4253]

I have an assesment this week so hopefully I’ll do well in it. Thanks for the help!

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Hey! Mr Salles can you please help us all taking the Gcse paper next year. For AQAEnglish language Q5 P1but actually going through it or giving a example of a perfect piece of writing including article, descriptive or even narrative writing I hope u see this because your the only hope thank you for support all of us.

[@runax.]

Thesis - Pirestly uses Sheila as a proxy of inspector > shows capitalism can change and learn valuable lessons which is what priestly wanted - 1912 can symbolise a patriarchal society leads to wars and death

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Nice!

[@FarazAhmad-yl1cf]

How can a 30/30 Exam response need soo many improvements. : )

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That's what I mean; getting the top grade doesn't need perfection, and many students can aim to get grades 7 and above

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Next Thursday I have exam in an inspector calls thank you so much for English video

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How did it go

[@rudrachakraborty7896]

@@dahoose good I got 24/30

[@OrangeDude7]

12:14 isn't the explanation part of 'could' and 'would' about context?

[@zarayuna3469]

I feel like i found few spelling mistake as an example I think The name or Sheila id written as Shelia on the top line. amazing video going for my exam today thank you so much wish me luck

[@FarazAhmad-yl1cf]

6:51 not the smoothest transition

[@R6siegecontent]

This video would of been helpful before my test, comes to my recommended after test😢 I will inform y’all on what I got , test is out of 40

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Thank you

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Got a test tmrw epic

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7:14 capitalist rulers?

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19:27 thank you very much for subscribing😂 why do I feel that’s intentional

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Is this the 2019 mock for english literature paper 2 aqa.

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Yas , This was 2019 GCSE Literature Paper 2 ... I suppose this question will be used for mocks for new Year 11 students

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Khan Be careful though. My school decided to not use this years questions as these topics wouldn’t come up for us. Be prepared for another question as some of my friends weren’t.

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@@decemans5726 i hope so my mocks tmrw lol

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@EXOTIKZ WAS IT

[@fnthejejsjdj8421]

hello, this is over a year old, but i’m in year 10 and have a mock next week and I have no idea which character it will be based on… finding it hard to know what to revise and how to remember it all. what’s the best advice for my situation? great video btw

[@hyx6817]

thanks

[@moonkidfrancescoli5676]

i have my mock tomorrow fingers cross i get Sheila

[@ariamyebio182]

great video. I want to ask a question how can you have significant ideas in a sort amount.

[@cdmpd1162]

may i please reword this for my mock

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes

[@Hanzalah8]

you can even copy it. as long as you dpont bring any scripts with you to the exam nothing is cheating! so if you manage to memorize a grade9 essay that comes up on your actual exam, dont by shy to copy the whole thing

[@gamerbellaandella9886]

Can this still be helpful for achieving a higher grade as I do the ocr exam board and not aqa

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

yes

[@luca-bq9om]

What was the question?

[@Snorlax-j3u]

Well I found a good video

[@fitnesst.r3053]

Everyone saying they got goood mark everytime I watch these videos I still get like 11/30

[@P_J-o1w]

Does this help edexcel

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes

[@ha55an2]

Any use of high vocab please reply to me

[@beklemeyapmacaykoy3938]

I have an English test tomorrow :( please God grade 4 is enough

[@samuelspeakman2783]

do you have gr9 for birling?

[@Freyaamara]

because sheila came up on the 2019 paper she won’t come up on the 2020 paper will she?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

You could get a younger generation question

[@Freyaamara]

Mr Salles Teaches English okay thankyou Mr Salles, love your videos by the way!!

[@Ershy_]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Do you think you'd make a prediction video regarding what will come up in both literature papers? Revising right now for my mocks. Didn't think I'd see a recent reply from you, amazing work as always :)

[@Gottaluvsb]

how can you get 30/30 but get a grade 8 wth

[@Jkzz1.1]

More than 1 question in the exam

[@lanax235]

I have my exam in a couple hours 😭😭

[@akbarm6415]

Is this the wjec English literature paper for the character of Sheila?

[@zerotwogaming6924]

supa mario brothers 2 baby yeah

[@user-tg7ot8jm5h]

i went from grade 9s in year 7 and 8, 9 + 8s in year 9 (when we werent in lockdown) gradually getting lower and lower and ehre i am now about to do my second set of mocks my last grade being a 3😍😍 (first time ive ever failed and thing,, and it s my subject w the highest target grade). i didn do the whole test in fact i did like 3 questions because i gave up im a giver upperer these days i cant bring myself to do anything... actualyl thats not these days its been years ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa FUNNY anyways do i still have chance if i try to come in clutch now???? my parents just yelled at me sm (im wasting my potential its all my fault, im selfish, my "excuses" arent valid because i have full control over myself lol anywyas) for the first time since lockdown (they yelled at me everyday) it was scary and i cried for an hour so now i am here

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Your underlying problem is probably not how you feel, but what you believe. It has to do with thinking that you have got worse when you should have got better, like someone going on a diet and getting fatter (which actually happens all the time). The issue is that you are focusing on grades, rather than what you know. If you approach each subject as something that you just need to know more about, the grades will take care of themselves. Most students don’t start revision till April. So if you just focus on learning more from now, this won’t be ‘clutch’ revision. It will be an easy way to get better and better. If you keep testing yourself on what you have learned, you will have evidence that you are improving, and can change your beliefs.

[@user-tg7ot8jm5h]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish ayo not me commenting once and you replying with more useful and direct advice than ive ever gotten from any of my teachers or even my parents... you just explained stuff so simply wowowowoowow ummm ill try out self testing etc and i hope i see results that can change my beliefs like u said (i cant tell if im going to stick this or not because i tend to go from one extreme to the other for example i literally just had a period of extremely low mood and now im suddenly feeling very hopeful??? ill probably fluctuate again within the next 3-5mins and stay down in the dumps again for a while like usual and lose all hope but i sure hope not). also i feel bit embarrassed because i sort of vented in my comment thinking so one would see it, so thank you for youre constructive and non judgemental reply it made me feel v good :] THANK YOUUU

[@passingpoor]

The family didn't behave illegally, it was never a issue of criminality. Venezuela sends its regards Great vid thou Thanks

[@k3nz1e73]

Eric raped Eva/Daisy and stole money 💀

[@Fshx22237]

Isn’t this question out of 40?

[@lunabrights4073]

in my AQA exam board, its 30 marks+4 marks for spaG

[@Singh2Active1]

sir this is not you!

[@crazymemes2832]

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