How to Write a Grade 9 Inspector Calls Essay (Every Quote Included)

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to all studying inspector calls: you killed her - damn you- damn you (ao2 fragmented speech and repetition of damn you creating a sense of aggression and tension between eric and sybil) ao3 (yap abt younger generation vs older generation and how socialism links to this) she looked young and fresh ( gerald says this a02 semantic field of meat and animals aka zoomorphism showing objectifying of women) ao3(suggests how even gerald is a slave to capitalism as he cant marry whom he wants to but the wealthy) unsinkable absolutely unsinkable (ao2 repetition emphasising birlings views plus dramatic irony) ao3 ( 1945 viewers know the titanic has sunk so birlings yapping) if men do not learn that lesson they shall be taught it in fire and blood and anguish (ao2 polysyndeton means repetition of conjugations such as 'and' so the consequences are emphasised also creates a semantic field of hell.) ao3 (link it to how the inspector is always 'cutting in" so he cooks capitalism) clothes mean something quite different to a women (ao2 is a euphemism which means an expression substituted for one considered to be too harsh or blunt when referring to something unpleasant or embarrassing.) ao3 (this shows how women are forced to hide their opinions due to expectations. it also suggests that women are respected by their clothes which suggests how they are victims to capitalism.) it was a hellish thing to see- oh my god (ao2 juxtaposition between hellish and god suggests the extent to which the rape has cooked eric. The fragmented speech emphasises this. this is also a euphemism)

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[@ibzy1211]

i got 27/30 on my inspector calls mock essay from your videos! thank you

[@nxha137]

what videos did you watch?

[@ibzy1211]

@@nxha137 mainly the 'all of the themes' inspector calls videos, and watched a lot of essays in his videos and used some of the analysis in them. also used physics and maths tutor for more analysis

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with what videos?

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Could you explain about the way how to form the thesis statement with the t(red points and what would that look like. Thank you!

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Well done on your hard work!

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ive got a mini test on an inspector calls tomorrow and i havent even thought about it since year 10 so lets see if this video is magic

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How did it go

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howd it go

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@@kamijo0o0o dont remember the mark, but i remember this video giving me alot of resources to write a decent essay

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That link to Christian society was absolutely 🔥🔥🔥 I am definitely using that on my exam tomorrow. Thank you!

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exam tomorrow, gonna use this video and inshallah it

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How did it go

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relatable LMFAO inahllah my way thorugh the mocks

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this guys so cute, ur my english teacher now. i have my first mock tomorrow n i might not be cooked anymore

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What question was it

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Got a mock tomorrow morning,wish me luck

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what did u get?

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@@Multiverse... Grade 4 😭

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Thanks so much! I got 32/34 on the Inspector Calls question and a grade 9 overall

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Excellent!

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Revising 2h before my English lit exam I am cooked 🔥🔥🙏🙏

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This bumped me up from a grade2 to and grade6

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Hi sir, I was wondering if you could do a similar video for Great Expectations? Thankyou

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gonna use this to help with my homework due tmr thanks

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Hi Mr Salles, I’m sure you get this question all the time but for a grade nine question, roughly how many quotes should we use for aic in aqa. Great videos by the way, I went from a 7 to a 9 In my recent mocks for lang and lit

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Nicely done! 13+ quotes

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this is an amazing video. i have gcses very soon and would love a 9. im currently following the edexcel examboard but most of this video has been incredibly helpful.

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Best of luck! Glad it works for you.

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How was literature paper 1?

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got 26/30 in my aic essay yay

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[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Thanks

[@oElmer]

4:47-5:12 could I reference points like this in the exam? would it count as AO3?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes

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[@ellie22222]

can you give an example of the 3 points to be used in the thesis please?

[@dicebot9617]

should I apply this "entrepreneur" method to the rest of the texts as well? for example in macbeth paragraphs on God and the betrayal of the gift of free will

[@yellow7210]

I definitely would! Have an idea in your head about what you will say for each key theme along with fitting quotes and just adapt this to the question you’re given

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Would Priestleys point of view be ao1 or ao3

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2 and 3

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if we learnt only these quote could we still acheive top grades or should we learn more

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Yes to both questions

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is this video compatible with the Eduqas exam board?

[@blackeye305]

What I like to do at the end of my essays is to talk about how priestly did not portray the Berlings as be portrayed the cap family from his previous litrscy pieces 'black out in gretly' suggesting his prespective on capitalism has been calmed as British society over time has changed or is

[@killingspree-1]

Hi sir, I have just finished my mock exam and I believe I've done fantastic due to the points you gave in this video and other ones too (so thank you so very much). However, I didn't have enough time to write a conclusion. Do you think this will severely limit the grade I achieve or will it be just a case of not being able to get a couple of marks or so. Your kind reply will be highly appreciated. Thank you

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my teacher was literally speaking to me about this cuz I'm always running out of time in my mocks. The conclusion isn't necessary, its just a good way of ending the essay. It shouldn't effect your overall results at all if you've made a solid essay. You should be good 👍🏼

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thank you for this

[@karam8335]

Should you write about the theme or character

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Theme is easier for top grade

[@rix_1723]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish sir the exam is over and they only gave character questions for AIC

[@emmal3819]

Hi, this video is really useful thank you! I’m new to your channel so I was wondering what a thesis statement is? It sounds very useful😊

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an introduction

[@mannanhanda5564]

Hello Sir! So does that mean for our modern prose question(An Inspector Calls), we'll have two choices to pick from one on a character and one on a theme. We can pick one out of the two and write about it...?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes

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How would you structure the essay?

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whts ur xam board?

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@ Aqa

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@bluelizzard0840 ok mines edexcel

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Hi, my creative writing is not the best as i dont use ambitious vocab. Pls could you recommend how i can improve my vocab.. could you please suggest some books i can read, which help a lot with english. P.S. i do aqa english language and aqa english literature

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Just look and study a thesarus and look for words that have similar meanings that youve never heard of before.

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somehow, i learnt all my ambitious vocab from the internet. usually finding argument like on reddit (don’t use it but pretty sure its got some incels who use big vocab) or yt ones. if you don’t know a word then you google it. this might help more than a thesaurus or something as its quite a large task. if this doesnt work, borrow words from top essays.

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But I thought last year the paper had two character questions

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What board is this for?

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AQA

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[@ibrahimmalik2489]

Couldn't you talk about the name 'Daisy Renton' itself being a pun. Daisy = innocence - link it to bible/religous imagery//Mary. Renton = 'Rent' she's renting her self. Juxtaposition of the idea of innocence and being cleen and being in a dirty place like a brothel.

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Yes

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Used this in my exqm 😭😭

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Got a 9 with this analysis 🔥🔥

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