My Dad used to Tell me a Story about a Cave in the Mountains | CREEPYPASTA

[@delgrengo2135]

"What's the matter? Are you scared?" Uh yes Larry we don't have lights and we have never been to this cave before.

[@damonx99]

hahaha, totally.

[@squidlipssupreme168]

Everyone knows or has known someone like larry!

[@Safety3d]

Larry's Life: Memoirs of the Permanently Uninsured

[@christopherdwiggins528]

Freakin Larry -_-

[@CosmicErrata]

"Johnny Johnny." "Yes papa?" "V̧̛͘͘̕͠ Ò̡͝ ̶̛͘͝͡͝͡Í̴̧҉̕͠ ̡̕͝D̷̴̛" "No pap̸̛a͜!͞!҉҉ ̧"

[@37thraven]

Little Johnny watched _little_ Collin burn up, running quick as his _little_ legs could carry him, the monster hot on his _little_ tail. Now if you go you'll hear his _little_ feet tapping, still trying to get out" - Bob Ross telling horror stories about monsters in the happy little trees 😂

[@delgrengo2135]

Soooooo no one reported Larry missing? Multiple people knew that they were together when he went missing. When he said "I didn't bother mentioning the cave or Larry." It's like.....wouldn't people be asking you what happened to him?

[@atlf3357]

Ikr, that kinda threw me off a bit. It’s pretty disappointing when such a good story is derailed by something like this

[@christopherdwiggins528]

No one cared about Larry 🥲

[@zetharerey3761]

Yes!! like what kind of person don't report their friend missing to begin with.

[@Xbalanque84]

@@atlf3357 Don't forget getting back in the SUV when Larry had the keys.

[@atlf3357]

@@Xbalanque84 unless Larry indeed had the keys and the MC is still stuck in the cave, with the escape and aftermath being mere figments of his imagination

[@tonybahama6817]

He ABANDONED his “friend” & didn’t tell authorities? Friggin COWARD.

[@irena4545]

Good narration, but the story is riddled with plotholes from the very get-go. Given how traumatizing the experience was for the father as well as the retelling, why would he even START telling the story in the first place? (And why would he continue telling it and not come up with something else instead?) Wouldn't know if shirts (undoubtedly sweated from the hike) would catch fire, but if you are inside a cave so far deep in that you don't see a thing for a while already, you won't find any firewood in there, not to mention a branch thick enough to function as a splint, and if Larry's leg was twisted at a weird angle, you would need to set the bone first, anyway (and how would he be able to keep running from the darkness if he was only able to crawl?). And why give Larry the car keys in case he realized he forgot something, when you can just as comfortably hand them to him when and if he does realize that he did? And did I miss the part when the narrator recovered the keys from Larry? And why and how did Larry continue to walk inside the cave in the dark, without any light, anyway? I've been inside a cave or two without light, and there's not much fun in that, there is literally no point stumbling on if you can't see a thing. And the biggest problem - why not say that Larry went missing? They go hiking together, and then bam, the narrator comes back on his sole own, injured, no Larry - wouldn't police investigate Larry's disappearance and find the silence suspicious?

[@luckykid1231]

This is what I literally wanted to comment about. Full of plotholes.

[@christopherdwiggins528]

He's really just a fisherman telling stories 😂

[@MrsCaranAmy]

That was an amazing story tonight. It was very well written and well narrated by you @Dr. Cr. Creepen. Caves give me me a claustrophobic feeling anyway. This story tied it'd itself together nicely between the father and the son's experiences. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend 💖 🌟

[@Other_People]

Every time I hear the intro to this channel I feel nostalgia and know it's going to be a good listen.

[@Taker_1993]

Doc’s narrations are always on point!

[@kathyannalexander4506]

So no one was looking for Larry?

[@moniquemacdonald7893]

Thanks Doc!!! It is very healing to be read stories. Looking forward to another chapter on Sunday.

[@jackdurden466]

I’m shocked that it took so long for him to figure out who the story was about. Of course it was who it was. And apparently he inherited his father’s cardio! Thanks and praise goes to Corpse Child for another great story! And of course to have it brought to us by the top tier narrator, the one and only Dr Creepen, that makes for one exceptionally enjoyable time! Well played chaps! 👍👍👍👍👍

[@kellysavage7073]

As usual Morgan, you have told another great story again keep up the great work.

[@DrCreepen]

Thank you! Will do!

[@dianewright5575]

Nooooo!!! Nobody leaves their friend behind! !!!!! Then acts like they don't exist!!!!( Lololol)!!! Sweet Dreams to U2!!!! As always LOVE when you narrate for us??

[@robertvanderhoof5283]

Another great tale from corpse child . Thanks Doc

[@anjejg777]

Good one doc! Love them all...thanks!

[@annettew5740]

Hi Doc! Its 1:30 am and I'm snuggled in and ready to listen! Thanks Doc! I hope you and anyone reading this has a fabulous weekend!🤗💜🌻

[@DrCreepen]

Enjoy!

[@madashellmunchies7992]

Who’s not listening to “Operation Appletree”? They’re missing out!! The whole Robert Cassidy universe/storyline series is incredible. Truly sucks you in.

[@gaynemorris3731]

A great way to start my afternoon!

[@jamesjustice2962]

Driving 11 hours and this is exactly what I needed Doc!

[@kamak24]

Personally ,caves , Forrests, wilderness are my favourite subjects of creepy pastas....

[@mothertrucker936]

How that voice gently nudges you into the darkness, to be enveloped in fear. Ahhh well done as always

[@Loubear23]

See ya Sunday! Can’t wait, you’re talent is recognized by us all!

[@alfrededwards6738]

Enjoyed it Doc! Both the author and yourself knocked it our of the park with this one.

[@druidictroy1157]

Should have made torches instead of building the fire.

[@Jose_Cuevas]

I really enjoyed the story and that ending

[@atlf3357]

“I didn’t try telling the doctors, or anyone for that matter, about the cave or Larry” Larry’s parents: bruh The audience: bruh Larry’s corpse, still in the cave: bruh

[@madge777]

Great storytelling!☕ Kudos, Dr. Creepen!

[@DrCreepen]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@awolstew1036]

Listening to this omw to work thanks Doctor

[@michelepruitt3145]

Yeah The Good Dr.Is In The House! 🤗 Hi A.J.! I've got last night's video and tonight's to get caught up, been Real busy and falling asleep on you! 🤣 I know you're the Best and they'll both be Wonderful! 🧡💚💙💜💔 Your #1 fan! 🤷‍♀️✌🌹👻🐶😹🐢🐾🍄💋👀🙏

[@loanianderson1978]

Thank you Dr.!!

[@sebastianreeves6801]

I thought his friend had the keys to the SUV?

[@1first367]

Cheers mate to the good stories. There’s truly something peaceful about listening to the stories you tell.

[@DrCreepen]

Thanks for listening

[@heathermcmichael6462]

Another great story Doc. Have as great weekend mate cheers.🍻

[@DrCreepen]

Same to you

[@loripeters3133]

Loved the story and narration. Another great one Doc! 💜🌻👍🏽 Have a fantastic weekend! 🙋🏽‍♀️

[@DrCreepen]

Thank you! You too!

[@error882]

i’m literally in my room so comfortable in a huge lightning storm listening to this. Absolutely Amazing!!🖤

[@kittyroars8758]

I absolutely love your enthusiasm for what you do, Doc....it's so genuine. Anyone who listens to you can tell you derive as much enjoyment from reading these amazing stories as we do listening to them Thank you ! 😘

[@Miles7955]

Damn, another one by Corpse_Child! I really do enjoy their stories!!!

[@dawnweaver6583]

Love your stories you have the most soothing voice many nights you have put me to sleep 😴.

[@DrCreepen]

Glad you like them!

[@g1stewart321]

u/Corpse_Child here, Kick-fuckin-ass way to start the weekend, with ANOTHER horror gospel read by Dr Creepen himself!💀

[@lewenhart205]

That was really good! Well done and thank you for the nightmares! XD

[@scrappydoo7887]

Excellent work corpse 🤙 Do you have any other stories that are narrated by the doc?

[@turtleanton6539]

hey man

[@bisonjoy70]

@@lewenhart205 it was not really good, it was chock full of plot holes!

[@maynardskunk7612]

Doctor I can't tell you how much I appreciate falling asleep to your voice!

[@DrCreepen]

Glad to hear it!

[@LuisaD93]

Another awesome tale narrated by the Doc ! Excellent story Corpse Child! 😃🌹

[@Mess-_Jess]

Nooo I missed it. Love your voice an the stories..

[@heartfireful]

Another brilliant read, finally settling down here in Taxes but I always make time to listen to the great Dr Creepen 🥰

[@benhelmenstein6669]

The main character is kind of slow I mean fucking obviously his dad was the kid from the story lmao Nonetheless, good story, and great narration as always.

[@kconnor4568]

Hey Doc hows it going? Sounds like you finally got rid of that nasty little bug that you had. Sorry its been so long since last I commented on your video.. But as usual you still give it 110% and that is why I recommend you to any who will listen. Thank you for this fantastic video and your excellent narration of it.

[@kimmobley3821]

Great story! Great narration by you of course 🖤

[@thelazarusproject7028]

Well done Doc 😎

[@madge777]

Thanks!

[@DrCreepen]

very kind of you!

[@madge777]

You are awesome! Your voice is amazing!☕

[@yduronerom6380]

Here I go. Thanks man

[@jackalina91]

As so often happens when I listen to your smooth “Doctor like” voice I just drift off to sleep. (Which is great by the way) But then of course I actually want to hear all the story- so I have to listen again lol 😂 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️✌️

[@morgue8580]

I love ur voice it kind of reminds me of Johnny depp

[@wendy7661]

Bravo!!! 👋👋👋👋

[@kellysavage7073]

anytime my friend

[@bisonjoy70]

The narration WAS great. The story not so much. Right away when the story began, I picked up on the question of why would he tell that experience to his children for fun as a ghost story in the first place when it was a horrific experience for him? Then when the main character and his friend look in the cave he says something like the 3 of them would fit twice over into it. The 3 of them??? And the main character is a total piece of shit not telling anyone his friend was still in there! It also never said that he got the keys from his friend!

[@allisonshaw9341]

I'd like to sit back with my favorite drink, but the medication I'm taking doesn't play nice with alcohol. So I'll have to pretend I've got 2 fingers of Uncle Nearest in a glass, neat, and am sipping it as I listen.

[@thedayidied]

Everybody gangsta till SCP-106 takes some kids to his pocket dimension.

[@roymunson1]

love the narrations, as good as they get but you're work is making up for very average at best stories. hopefully the standard goes back up soon, because I haven't seen much written in the last year at least that has come close to the 2016-19 level of writing.

[@mq9893]

Sure, though I half agree (respectfully), there are not as many but Michael Lockhart, Eli Pope, Wayne Harbison, Edward Smith, Luke Penton and a few others on Chilling Tales for Dark Nights and several above-average writers on DMT Forest of Fear. Cheers

[@roymunson1]

​@@mq9893 cool, I'll give them another shot. been a fan of creepypastas for years, but for me the standard has fallen dramatically. between lazy writing and plot holes to washy endings I've become exhausted waiting for a genuinely intriguing story worth investing my time in. obviously I get the odd one here and there that gives me hope, but I've been finding myself going back listening to pre pandemic classics more and more. thanks for the reply, appreciated.

[@mq9893]

@@roymunson1 I absolutely hear you about the plot holes. washy endings, and the subpar standard. Maybe it's just me, but the standards in society, overall, have dropped. So, the few fellas I've mentioned are lifelong writers, published (though I know that is not a quality guarantee haha) w/solid plots, character depth, longer series, real places creatively included, infamous tales/historical info deftly woven into intriguing fiction, and most enjoyably genuine literate talent for weaving tales. Story & Author recommendations: 1*Bayou Moon 2*Death rides the Red Jack LaFountain 1*Shadows Over Mobile Bay 2*Shadows On a Tin Star 3*Feline Factor: The Vampires Daughter Wayne Harbison 1*(The Dissapearences of) Deep Fork River Bottoms 2* Pond Creek Road 3* The Ape Men of Ape Canyon Edward "Ed" Smith 1* Boneless 2* Whiskey in the Jar 3* The Last Buffalo Hunt 4* Field Training in Aztlan Michael G. Lockhart My apologies, I got carried away. Someone did something similar for me when I was searching. There are several others I've enjoyed but I feel like these are solid-top tale weavers. I hope you get the enjoyment I've gotten w/these stories.

[@roymunson1]

@@mq9893 that was such a nice thoughtful thing for you to do and I really appreciate it. I'm starting to work my way through them from tonight. Again, thanks a million and the very best of luck in life. Huge respect.

[@mq9893]

@@roymunson1 Sure thing, I truly hope you enjoy them. A stranger did something similar for me, so I wanted to pass on the kindness. All the best to you as well. Cheers

[@nancyM1313]

🎆hadn't listen in a bit. My 2nd story today. Everything feels so Right again. lol! Thank you & the author for sharing with us. ☮☯️🕉

[@davidmcdonald5068]

Police: "You were the last one to be seen with your missing friend Larry. It's been ...weeks. When did you last see him? Other witnesses said you and Larry were going hiking on this day. Where did you go? How again did you receive your injuries? Can you explain this?" Answer: "I need to speak with an Attorney."

[@paulherron1647]

Caves have to eat too

[@lindajarvis4517]

Hey Doc what did you drum on for the sound effect.... Biscuit tin?

[@cassandrawright2781]

Hey doc🥰🥰

[@khtauhidislam7505]

✅

[@jnokomis]

Ah the ignorance of children assuming it's just a story

[@DSWL_]

🖤

[@Xbalanque84]

Wait, how'd he get back in the SUV if the reason he went into the cave in the first place was because _his friend had the keys?_

[@enlightenmentworldunited8545]

162 likes would be good.✔️

[@nuggetbandit726]

used to listen to these stories to sleep in but the constant ads make it pretty hard, unfortunate… i understand you need money too, maybe put them in the beginning or so. otherwise keep up the amazing work!

[@brett4264]

Why no mention of the keys being on his friend. This was also predictable. You need to pick better stories. These stories written by 14 year olds are no good.

[@teresakirkland995]

If ya have any brain power at all anything you read, watch, or hear is predictable. The “keys” situation is a staple in most all means of scary horror stories. If this was dreamed up by a 14 year old then I can’t wait til they’re grown and publish novels!! Jeez. Lighten up :)) Or better yet maybe you could write one eh?

[@tammygarrett8427]

Larry why would you go into a cave at nightfall

[@christopherdwiggins528]

All the plot holes in this can be explained by stupidity..... Not the writer just the characters and be honest people, he's rolling with Larry so we know he doesn't have the best judgement!

[@kellydavis6821]

We get.it. they're little! Lol...

[@richardlynch5632]

😎👍

[@JackJack25]

Lovecraft Good!

[@custyzone]

7:40

[@angelaverbowski995]

#30-✅👍🏻

[@bubbafrump74]

Yup...I should read the comment FIRST!!!😏 Bit of a stinker this one, but thank you all the same. Always appreciate the stories, and the narration is always superb.

[@samasiaskipperable]

👍🙏👍❤️

[@chrism4008]

Sorry about the appletree story doc. Personally, theres plenty of that in the real world, so when i want to go escape i dont want to listen to an epic serail about sado-masochistic sex predators. The first one was ok-ish to me, but like Dexter, or walking dead, or game of thrones, it got old fast. Stories like that seem uninspired to me because there is just so much of that everywhere you look. Of course, ive never found sex predators interesting, so maybe thats why i can't get into it 🤷‍♂️

[@Other_People]

This story is about a cave and two friends, not about operation appletree...

[@chrism4008]

@@Other_People i was commenting on the blurb at the end. I often comment multiple times because im scatterbrained

[@Other_People]

Ah ok, I gotcha. I am too.

[@brett4264]

👎 your link to the story didn't work as it was in error.

[@DrCreepen]

you need to replace the - in the reddit.

[@turtleanton6539]

xd

[@drownthedays]

Corpse_Child really is a very inconsistent writer.

[@r.s.dissendissen6752]

WOW. ITS. 911. AM

[@pamtweed751]

Thanks!

[@DrCreepen]

Very kşnd of you!