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@Mop222Ай бұрын
How do you explain the gap in the story? The son goes to see the dad, he tells his son about the affair, he goes to the park, comes home to find Mia sitting on the couch, scrolling through her phone, he says we need to talk, then it is next morning, and he is confronting her in the kitchen? What happened in between? He slept in the same bed as her after finding out she slept with his father? If you want to improve the content, you need to do better than this! This OP is annoying as is the narrator. The whole thing seems really off. Where is the rest of OP’s family?
@eversondecarvalho6255Ай бұрын
What a bad story, the guy spent more time philosophizing than telling anything.
@summergoldenАй бұрын
Got that right , like this mofo is writing a book
@cbjcolourblindjim6160Ай бұрын
It's betrayal bingo I bet he said it 20 times. The road ahead scars of the past.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
I understand your frustration! Balancing depth with storytelling is important. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
Absolutely! Sometimes less is more when it comes to storytelling. Thanks for your comment
@sherlocksteve9109Ай бұрын
If he had lawyered up and sue his ex fiancee and his dad, he'd be well compensated.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the contribution. Stay well. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@lynettephillip2412Ай бұрын
For what? He wasn't married to her! He just has to let her go!
@abhay9432Ай бұрын
U know that's a fake story right??
@lynettephillip2412Ай бұрын
@@abhay9432 Does it really matters? I am not going to analyze what is fake and what is not fake
@workrmtly5582Ай бұрын
He isn’t married, he dodge the bullet,running is the smartest way. Plus, dear daddy expects op to raise his child. Though luck.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the contribution. Stay well. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@NeleKadiricАй бұрын
And sick
@michellealjunaidi8471Ай бұрын
Out of all the people in the world she had to cheat with his dad. The fact she was so selfish and only cared about herself. She didn't care that she wreck the relationship between her boyfriend and his dad. That type of betrayal cannot be fixed with therapy or time. All you can do is cut contact with both and move on. Seeing your dad will always be a reminder that he stole your future and the woman you loved. The fact the woman he loved is pregnant with his dad's kid is also an everyday reminder.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That's a powerful perspective! The depth of betrayal in that situation is hard to overcome. Thanks for sharing your thoughts
@johnblaze187824 күн бұрын
This story could have been told in 10 minutes. Way to much babbling from the husband!
@BgNarration24 күн бұрын
I’ll work on being more concise in future stories. I appreciate your input!
@stephaniecherry9136Ай бұрын
I am a vengeful type I would have had them out on the internet told everybody the whole family what would happen plus I would soothe them both
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That's a strong approach! It definitely highlights the emotional impact of betrayal. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
@naptime1900Ай бұрын
Get DNA on the child just incase.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
You’re right.
@elsaflood6393Ай бұрын
He came home, she was seated waiting for him. He said "we need to talk " then its morning shes making coffee and he said "we need to talk ". Again???
@reneedaughterАй бұрын
This is a fairy tale. Unfortunately the screaming, hollaring, throwing things out of the house and denouving the offending partners to the world...is the reality
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That's a powerful contrast! Real-life reactions can be much more intense and chaotic. Thanks for your insight.
@Fiero425Ай бұрын
Only a woman could be as delusional to tell a man all that shocking news and expect immediate forgiveness. I'll never understand the double standard. If a man even compliments another woman they're ready for divorce. ;-(
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
you are right!!
@roselinepeter786Ай бұрын
He is enjoying himself wallowing.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That’s a keen observation! His reaction definitely adds another layer to the story. Thanks for your comment.
@russellkeeling4387Ай бұрын
He confronted her when she was making coffee in the morning. After she told him the baby news he walked to the park and it was already nighttime. The story needs a better timeline.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the feedback, we will improve our content in the next videos, stay well 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@summergoldenАй бұрын
This story was so long for no reason , the same words used over and over , im angry and sad , sad and angry and shattered heart, broken heart. Just get to the point DAMN
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
I understand your frustration! It can be exhausting when the story feels repetitive. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
@grumpyoldman53Ай бұрын
This garbage story made no sense. Are we being bombarded with AI stories? I couldn't even finish it.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the comment, we will improve our content in the next videos, stay well. 😃😃
@luisavalos-yu9hzАй бұрын
I believe the person that wrote this must be a female or a beta male.Because Every decision that he made makes no sense a father. That betrayed a fiancé that really didn't show any remorse. This person really needs to act analyze their writing style because it's all over the place and makes no sense and gives no true ending, nor could nor bad. Just leaves you hanging on a.What what a stupid ending.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thank you for your contribution, we will try to improve our content in the next videos. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@jamess6203Ай бұрын
Weather in a story or real life if you suspect something is seriously wrong immediately get ahold of your partners phone. You will find the answer and if they are upset then that. ‘S their problem for being sketch to the point you felt the trust is gone. Don’t be weak listening to insults of your insecurities, and or privacy. Trust but verify!
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That's solid advice! Trust is crucial, and being proactive can help clarify doubts. Thanks for sharing your perspective!"
@BillieFloyd-n7oАй бұрын
Story kept rehashing same thing over and over. Story jumped from morning to bedtime, we lost Alex? Where was the rest of his family (esp. mom) a lot of missing pieces don't add up.
@michellealjunaidi8471Ай бұрын
I think Alex was code for his dad and they were still seeing each other.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
That's a valid point! It can be frustrating when key details are missing or repetitive. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
@marilyndwilliams5202Ай бұрын
Some people can be so low. If you were going to cheat on man. Why screw his father. Not to mention the father messing with his son fiancee . The fiancee and father is nasty. Then they want him to stay. I say for what. To ease their conscious. I hope this man find anew lady to love.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
There are also people who don't care about others!
@lawsonallen7741Ай бұрын
So this is a story of you letting them getting away with what they did to you. In no way were you Brave. You needed to tell every one from the start.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
We will improve our content in the next videos, thank you very much for the feedback.
@lawsonallen7741Ай бұрын
@@BgNarration Frrdback? I'm not talking about you. I was talking about who the story was about. How he let them get away with what they did.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
@@lawsonallen7741 Yes I understood, but I took it as a contribution so I can improve my content.
@gungral2097Ай бұрын
@@BgNarration , You better improve really quick, you going run out Betrayal Story ideas soon. Feeling guilty and ashamed and the end doesn't cut the mustard. There needs to consequences of their actions, LIKE the fiancé's parents find out about the affair and the pregnancy. and they beat up the MC;s dad. I hate your stories, how everyone is okay with it at the end, the MCs sounds like incels. It one thing to say they will find hope, It;s better if you show it or the reach for it. Send to gym to burn off that anger, They get buff and rip from the results, then they notice they attracting hotter women then his ex.
@abhay9432Ай бұрын
I am never ever watching this guys video again
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
"I understand your frustration. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
@abhay943225 күн бұрын
@@BgNarration ur welcome
@maxxstarrdom6816Ай бұрын
WOW! That was an excruciating 30 minutes of Shakespearean simping. 2 thumbs down. Do not recommend channel.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the comment, we will improve our content in the next videos, stay well. 😃😃
@Anusdemon27 күн бұрын
@@BgNarrationfuck the hell off dude. You are a minimal effort channel that steals content from reddit for KZbin money
@sakura44560Ай бұрын
i be like oh gross so wrong there something wrong both of you
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
thanks for the contribution 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@VIRFAATASIAULELEILAVAOIAАй бұрын
JUST MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE" SHE HAVE NEVER LOVED YU" UNFORGIVEN BETRAYAL" IF SHE WOULD LOVE YU NO MATTER THE CAUSE SHE WOULD NEVER BETRAY N MANUPILATE YU" no more explanation just move on with ur life" YU ARE MORE THAN THAT" YU WILL PREVAIL FROM ALL THAT PAIN THAT NO ONE SHOULD EXPERIENCE"" GOOD LUCK" YU ARE A GOOD MAN" someone will love yu more than yu ever think or imagine" ❤❤ much love❤❤
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
exactly! It's time to move on. You deserve someone who truly loves and values you. Stay strong! ❤
@hellmouthisnogod1843Ай бұрын
Congrats to your dad!
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
You are bad. 😂😂
@Nerdburger007Ай бұрын
It's funny how many of these stolen stories are about people who not only get cheated on but also how they end up doing nothing about it. They run and hide. Basically saying, you're going to get screwed, so take it like a b**ch and don't fight back. Honestly had this happened to someone with a spine, the dad would be toothless and his family jewels would be damaged beyond repair.
@kabirsardana1282Ай бұрын
id a man wit a spine had this happen to him, the father would be dead along with the fiancé
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the contribution. Stay well. 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@gungral2097Ай бұрын
what a asshole dad. After he revealed the affair to his son, he didn't bother to warn the his son's Fiancée.
@winniethepoohandeeyore2Ай бұрын
Written like a dime store novel story...
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate your honesty about the writing style
@IkeMase12541Ай бұрын
Too many figures of speech to sound real.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
I see what you mean! Too many figures of speech can make a story feel less authentic. Thanks for your input!
@kenpojebАй бұрын
Who writes this crap?
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Thanks for the comment, we will improve our content in the next videos, stay well. 😃😃
@rubenperez1404Ай бұрын
Yes, he was horrible Dad, but he actually did you a favor, he showed you how your fiancé would betrayed you. If not with your father but any other person that would give her attention. They would then blame it on you for your lack of attention. That she’s sorry and they could work it out with some counseling. Straight from the cheaters handbook. Obviously there are some men who have low self esteem and take their fiancé or wife back and that’s why it works for them. Now, your fiancé is having your brother. When was she going to tell you when the baby was born and after you bonded with your baby brother and raising him as your son. 😂 how shameful and she is pure evil. 😢.
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Sometimes things come to pass for the best 😂
@gamerkat1492Ай бұрын
don't confont her hire a PI
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
thanks for the contribution 🙏🏻🙏🏻
@gamerkat1492Ай бұрын
@@BgNarration you're welcome I wouldn't have said ANYTHING to EITHER OF THEM I would've said I need to think & POOF VANISH LIKE A GHOST move change number name E-Mail packed & left while she was at work make sure you WORK KNOWS NEVER to TELL HER WHERE YOU ARE EITHER & tell them the teason WHY you DO NOT WANT TO BE FOUND
@AnimegamanАй бұрын
OMG. The last 15min are literally him just monologuing. If you are using AI to make these stories PLEASE start cutting out the fluff.
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate your suggestion about trimming the fluff to improve the storytelling!
@colmain1Ай бұрын
Too much fluff.... Get in with this story... Too wordy
@BgNarration26 күн бұрын
Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate your thoughts on the pacing and wordiness
@HeavyBirdPilotАй бұрын
Holy crap, there are so many descriptors. Don't bother!
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Totally get it! Sometimes less is more!
@ZakiJamil-i9zАй бұрын
Want to ask also scared???? Lan. Chiawlah bugimak!!! Too scared ahhhh!!!! Bo lan chiaww!!!! Bo lan chiaww!!!!
@BgNarrationАй бұрын
Sounds like someone’s feeling a bit scared! 😂 Just take a deep breath!