"My Friend Moved To A Town Where People Aren’t Allowed To Take Photos" Creepypasta

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Mr. Creeps

Mr. Creeps

Күн бұрын

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@RiotShieldMan
@RiotShieldMan Жыл бұрын
I think there's more than one reason he didn't want to text or call Rose back. Literally one of the last people you would want with you in a situation like this. The moment she showed up unannounced Bryce's heart probably stopped cold as he internally thought "We're dead..."
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
The person in the story is so annoying. She can’t even follow simple directions. Whoever wrote the story did an amazing job of making the main character as annoying as possible.
@colRobinOlds
@colRobinOlds Жыл бұрын
Jeez, how else was author supposed to make the story scary? If they just followed rules and nothing happened what would be scary about it. This one is actually really good imo, one of the few actually scary stories out there.
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
@@colRobinOlds 👍
@demoneyin9390
@demoneyin9390 Жыл бұрын
@@colRobinOldsYou don’t have to follow the rules perfectly, but it just seems illogical to call the police after seeing some human like figure outside with the picture you just took off your phone, and then an ambulance just dropping off bodies with their heads caved in. I’m at 16:34, and hopefully after the 911 call she smartens up a bit.
@I-like-cows
@I-like-cows Жыл бұрын
​@thenextunabomber_ I have read a lot of stories where the main character breaks rules without being a dumb selfish bicth and this way of writing ruins the story for me
@Succubus_L0li
@Succubus_L0li Жыл бұрын
​@@colRobinOldsyou can make the rules harder to follow by either making them incomplete or conflicting at times with other rules
@mimiyo3997
@mimiyo3997 Жыл бұрын
It’s a great story concept but it was pretty hard to get through when the main character was clearly made to be the “need someone to make very compulsively dumb decisions in order to move the story along”. If you realllly need a character to do that, at least don’t make it the main character, otherwise you will have people dropping the story half way through.
@DocBree13
@DocBree13 Жыл бұрын
I agree!
@Gloomistic
@Gloomistic 11 ай бұрын
Yeahhh and although I mostly enjoyed it nonetheless, I didn't care for the ending. It felt like a cheap way to just undo everything with ease. Ontop of that once cops bring up how many rules she's obviously broken, yet she was never caught, it bothered me. Making that a central point, made me feel as if she was no longer at risk, and even the guys boss mentions it seconds after she enters his house. Then the story goes oh, she's basically God to that world and will just undo it all. I enjoyed the world otherwise but that part kinda felt like bro?
@Gloomistic
@Gloomistic 11 ай бұрын
​@@DocBree13INDEED
@demoneyin9390
@demoneyin9390 Жыл бұрын
Ngl, Rose seems a bit dense. After seeing that wild stuff at the beginning, why would you think calling the police of the said place where it was going on would be a good idea?
@MrBuns-yi2hk
@MrBuns-yi2hk Жыл бұрын
What I really hate about stories like this is how she is going to visit a really good friend, and she can clearly see how distressed he is, but instead of listening she acts combative. Girl! Listen to the man!
@thelonelywhale219
@thelonelywhale219 Жыл бұрын
I really don't like the MC.
@stringbeanii
@stringbeanii Жыл бұрын
i can picture the type ,too, they want everything to go how they want, not everyone likes selfies. funny how the word _"selfies"_ word-filters to _"selfish"_ .
@Acetyl53
@Acetyl53 Жыл бұрын
I don't who these people are that write in such obnoxious characters. I feel like they aren't even human, no one acts like this way. It's written by something trying to pattern people's view of themselves and others, program their behaviors, and generally numb the mind through sheer repetition. A degrading and insulting display, borderline malicious.
@marciturner4980
@marciturner4980 Жыл бұрын
​@@Acetyl53Writers are psychos with these types of stories. Don't like this story at all.
@marciturner4980
@marciturner4980 Жыл бұрын
​@@thelonelywhale219Then unsubscribe and permanently stop watching them. If I find any more of these specific kinds of stories, I am going to unsubscribe from this myself.
@winstonwins1096
@winstonwins1096 Жыл бұрын
I liked this story. It's far more than it's initial appearance. And yes the main character is hardheaded in the beginning. I think it was her insistence on calling 9 1 1 that had me like, WTF.
@mattymayhem1232
@mattymayhem1232 Жыл бұрын
The main character shouldn't be allowed to walk around without a helmet, screw the photos.
@xVenomousOnex
@xVenomousOnex Жыл бұрын
15 minutes in and I'm wondering if the main character is stupid or suicidal. How did this guy remain friends with this girl
@oindrilaroychoudhuri273
@oindrilaroychoudhuri273 Жыл бұрын
True
@Justadonkey
@Justadonkey 11 ай бұрын
lol thats too funny dude thanks
@MemristerBoogieDown
@MemristerBoogieDown Жыл бұрын
...huh. Not often you wish for the protagonist to get eaten slowly by many things with tiny teeth.
@VinwardWasHere
@VinwardWasHere 11 ай бұрын
I do agree things could have been different, but I loved the wholesome ending. Enough to make a grown man cry
@dawnbeltz
@dawnbeltz Жыл бұрын
"friend!" "It was just a joke friend." Is this a 90s sitcom 😂
@eddiewmmcknight13
@eddiewmmcknight13 Жыл бұрын
🎉😂😂
@Kim_YoJong
@Kim_YoJong 11 ай бұрын
Have you even seen one?
@hello_there9891
@hello_there9891 Жыл бұрын
Bro that ending almost got me. I’ve never been sadder from the ending of a creepypasta
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
Please tell me the annoying girl died.
@hello_there9891
@hello_there9891 Жыл бұрын
@@srideout91 no she doesn’t
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
@@hello_there9891 …bummer
@redengineer4380
@redengineer4380 6 ай бұрын
@@hello_there9891 That's pretty sad.
@kenosi7345
@kenosi7345 Жыл бұрын
At this point im addicted to Mr creeps stories. I have been sick with fever and his stories soothed me to sleep😊😊😊❤ when i was restless 😢. This voice is gold❤️‍🔥
@fishbarbeque8540
@fishbarbeque8540 Жыл бұрын
This is me a week ago!!! Its so true.
@Kim_YoJong
@Kim_YoJong 11 ай бұрын
A golden turd
@astonish8492
@astonish8492 11 ай бұрын
I’m saying, I’ve been listening to him for years he’s my #1 creepypasta voice
@chasitydejohn796
@chasitydejohn796 4 ай бұрын
Oh I agree 💯. I'm sick now and I'm doing exactly what you described!
@lokeyacolyte2145
@lokeyacolyte2145 Жыл бұрын
Honestly a lot of people are criticising the main character... I wonder how you guys would actually do in a similar situation? I work with the general public and I promise you, this lady would be one of my smarter customers.
@TheN4y0
@TheN4y0 Жыл бұрын
Secretary: "Thanks for visiting us Mr. Mayor" Brice: "Stupid dead end job"
@shambhavi3349
@shambhavi3349 9 ай бұрын
omgg this comment made me soo happy
@wtichery
@wtichery 8 ай бұрын
the absolute vibe that line gave
@yungguh5341
@yungguh5341 11 ай бұрын
I liked this story a lot, the beginning confused me but the end cleared it up
@jibby871
@jibby871 11 ай бұрын
This NEEDS to be a movie!!!
@MediaSpeeds
@MediaSpeeds Ай бұрын
Nah. The ending is essentially “and then I woke up” lol. Lazy.
@johnberg3364
@johnberg3364 Жыл бұрын
I really liked this, sure she was brash but also very relateable. And as always an outstanding performance by you Mr. C!
@XxTechnoCakezxX
@XxTechnoCakezxX Жыл бұрын
Ik there's alot of criticism towards this story but honestly, personally, I really liked the whole story and the way it played out. To me the character wasn't unlikable since in a way, her rashness shows how I feel like we would act in reality if something this insane happened and the level of regret she had to go through to realize that the rules weren't a joke. This story was really great in my opinion!
@lardinator
@lardinator Жыл бұрын
You tell em 🙌
@yupthatsbee3773
@yupthatsbee3773 11 ай бұрын
Thank you lol
@Thalia_Rueli
@Thalia_Rueli 11 ай бұрын
I agree!
@sporemaster97
@sporemaster97 11 ай бұрын
"I saw some lady chained to chair being mutilated and tortured, lemme keep being a stupid idiot and not listening to anything or anybody" is *not* how most people would act, wtf
@Thalia_Rueli
@Thalia_Rueli 11 ай бұрын
@@sporemaster97 under threat of death people would deal with a lot of
@jamiebumgarner125
@jamiebumgarner125 10 ай бұрын
Such a twisty, thought provoking story....thank you!
@germanapplemullentree6152
@germanapplemullentree6152 Жыл бұрын
I hate Storys with Main chars as brainless as this one !! This could be such a good Story
@SludgeMan90
@SludgeMan90 Жыл бұрын
Mr. Creeps is like the night-time story daddy I never had. Yeah, I'm a grown ass man, sue me😂
@fastfinger1plays716
@fastfinger1plays716 Жыл бұрын
Fr
@babs340
@babs340 Жыл бұрын
Funny 😂
@untitled2012
@untitled2012 Жыл бұрын
Sue you? Nah you’re getting in cuffs
@EjPool-k9r
@EjPool-k9r Жыл бұрын
Felt man. Didn't see my dad most of my childhood and my mom wasn't calm enough to ever read me stories. It's therapeutic for me 🥹
@trudimoreno1349
@trudimoreno1349 Жыл бұрын
Sooo, you wanted your daddy to scare the crap out of you every night, huh? Sounds about right to me, but there’s something wrong with me!
@ashashb8-b
@ashashb8-b Жыл бұрын
I just started the story but…you are almost at a million subs!!! I’m so excited for you, you deserve every one and more! I’ve been around since practically the beginning and I’m subbed to your other channels and I listen to you on Chilling. Thanks for all the extremely hard work you put in! I love you Mr. Creep💙🖤💙🖤💙🖤💙
@krazycats564
@krazycats564 11 ай бұрын
No one calls their friend friend that much
@universalequine8800
@universalequine8800 Жыл бұрын
Alright well it seems my opinion is unpopular but I loved every minute of this story.
@kylecarson4143
@kylecarson4143 11 ай бұрын
Whay a good storu heart breaking snd shows what we do for the ones we love even tho its crazy
@Chainsawwieldingbear
@Chainsawwieldingbear Жыл бұрын
yeah I couldn't finish this sorry the main character is too obnoxious.
@DustBunny7
@DustBunny7 Жыл бұрын
Had to drop out too annoying!
@elpretender1357
@elpretender1357 Жыл бұрын
The story was great up to the last part. The villain screaming out loud what does the hero has to do to win must be one of the worst tropes ever.
@chihirosen6996
@chihirosen6996 11 ай бұрын
This story heavily reminds me of silent hill. From the mist, the creatures that come when you take a photo, the black magic ritual of revival, splitting of the self, even the MCs name is the same as the mother from the first movie. I'm a huge silent hill fan and I really liked this one. Say what you will about the MCs attitude, but the metaphors about grief in this story is amazing. That's exactly what this story is about guys. GRIEF and how we handle it. And how we overcome our said grief. Explanation: The reason the rules make no sense is because, when you lose someone close to you, you wind up breaking down over small things that remind you of your loved one. And they will be mundane things that people don't normally cry over. Like if you were to see me at the grocery store crying over tomatoes in the produce section you'd think I was a nutcase. It wouldn't register in your mind that the reason why I'm having a meltdown over a tomato is because my mother recently passed away and she LOVED tomato sandwiches. And it dawned on me "What's the point in buying them anymore? Not like she's home for me to make them for her anymore!". So it makes sense, to me, for me to start bawling while for you it's just a tomato. Folks this is a real thing for me in my life. Granted I ran out of the store and to my car because I didn't want anybody to see me ugly cry in the produce section and have the men in white come for me 😅 This was 8 years ago. And here recently I lost a cousin of mine I was close with. And something small has already set me off on an ugly cryfest as well. Like I said. They're mundane and mean nothing to anybody but myself. Another beautiful thing about this story is the ending. Where she decides to fight her grieved doppleganger. She tried to destroy it but the thing is that grief never fully goes away. It just gets to the point you learn to live with it being a part of you. The "fake" Bryce I believe is his spirit or some form of what he once was. And he's carrying her grief with him because she loved him so deeply. It's also self explanatory as to why Meredith suffered. She blamed Meridith which is why those people were saying she was hated so badly. She finally forgave Meredith and let go of the grief that had her in a chokehold. It's a very poetic story about grief imo.
@ericasopko
@ericasopko Жыл бұрын
If she had just went along with everything she’d still be stuck there. So I can’t say I agree with all these comments.
@rubyh1706
@rubyh1706 11 ай бұрын
Not sure why there are so many complaints, this story is really good. I enjoyed it thoroughly. The main character was reacting to a seriously effed situation, understandably.
@achocolatebiscuit5087
@achocolatebiscuit5087 9 ай бұрын
True. It's hard to be rational in a tense situation, but there are limits. She gives me deer energy.
@keyboardwarrior9177
@keyboardwarrior9177 Жыл бұрын
Couldn't complete the story, was too fucking painful
@Chilli2001
@Chilli2001 Жыл бұрын
I hope the author see these comments because they had a good concept but the MC really ruined the story. Making your MC that obnoxiously dumb and unlikable works better in a visual medium or parody, reading/ listening to a dumb person is much harder than just watching one.
@staruchx
@staruchx Жыл бұрын
I don't agree that the concept is good, it's been in many stories now so got kinda boring and the reveal was stupid with obvious foreshadowing. Maybe there is way to fix the story but I do agree it would be less annoying in visual medium like short movie. I m disappointed bc I love listening to 1h+ creepypastas when working so I can really get into the story but this one was nothing but frustrating ride
@karenzwonar8779
@karenzwonar8779 Жыл бұрын
Well, it’s some people don’t like the story don’t watch it
@Justadonkey
@Justadonkey 11 ай бұрын
@@karenzwonar8779 People have a right to criticize a story they dont like, just let them be and live your own life
@johnny333X2
@johnny333X2 Жыл бұрын
If you are in a situation like this and all this crazy stuff is happening and you're seeing the photos and the smushed heads and the person you're with is telling you why it's happening and you still decided to not listen to that person, well Rose you get what's coming. Big dummy
@werecatpodguski
@werecatpodguski 11 ай бұрын
So sad sometimes we miss someone so much we can't let them go I know the feeling it hurts it's unbearable at times but sometimes it's better to let go.....then to hang on letting go let's them rest and be at ease
@TamijoCampbell-he9xf
@TamijoCampbell-he9xf 11 ай бұрын
This was a great story ❤❤❤❤ great narration too
@maryfrey2528
@maryfrey2528 Жыл бұрын
Good morning Mr. Creeps! It’s 1am here and I’m getting ready to sleep 💤. I LOVE 💕 having a story to listen to! Thank you 😊 Hope you have a GREAT day 🤟😊
@ryandunn6039
@ryandunn6039 Жыл бұрын
Lol look at all the crybabies. If y’all bothered to finish the story before complaining about it, you would realize why she comes off like that… Good job author and narrator, I like it even more because u triggered all these fools.
@itsyaboi1647
@itsyaboi1647 11 ай бұрын
Aww the ending sounded kinda cute, maybe there’ll be good for each other, in another life
@SaxyLament
@SaxyLament 11 ай бұрын
I liked it. Not all characters can be a Mary Sue and do the right thing everytime, especially in a creepypasta.
@user-tr2dh4xx6u
@user-tr2dh4xx6u 5 ай бұрын
35:39 "the least leg looking leg that ive ever seen"
@karenzwonar8779
@karenzwonar8779 Жыл бұрын
I think he should be over 1 million all his stories are great
@bobmasters9871
@bobmasters9871 11 ай бұрын
Why are so many people complaining about the mc being unable to follow rules? Is that not thematic of the story? She couldnt follow the rules of life and death and so caused this whole mess in the first place? So now she cant because shes repeating her mistake, until she breaks free and fixes things?
@thedogs3467
@thedogs3467 2 ай бұрын
Idk why but this is my favorite one any chance we can get more from who ever wrote this one
@sanniwartinen3595
@sanniwartinen3595 11 ай бұрын
Awesome and wierd story! I loved it!
@ImAnEmergency
@ImAnEmergency Жыл бұрын
Yeah nah I can't finish this one with such a useless main character
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
I had to stop listening after 15 minutes. Absolutely horrible.
@The_WINFINITY
@The_WINFINITY Жыл бұрын
Bro really saw himself in the photo and said "that's not me, see ya"
@TyanniaTarot
@TyanniaTarot Жыл бұрын
Awww...that was sooo sweet👏👏🥰 great story👏👏
@2corny683
@2corny683 Жыл бұрын
Holy shit that took a depressing turn
@marciturner4980
@marciturner4980 Жыл бұрын
Sounds more like the twilight zone. They are on another planet.
@chancehunter7988
@chancehunter7988 Жыл бұрын
This was one of my favorite so far! I also really liked the social experiment ones, it’s kinda neat how those tied together. I halfway wondered if some of the names would pop up in this story and it would be in the same universe. 😂 The end surprised me, didn’t see that coming. Great job!
@krmrivera83
@krmrivera83 Жыл бұрын
This one I liked very very much
@Starsforever38
@Starsforever38 Жыл бұрын
This was a really good story!! Excellent job author Wording was a little weird at times but plot was exciting. Keep writing
@chillycoldchomper9389
@chillycoldchomper9389 11 ай бұрын
"Friend!"
@Starsforever38
@Starsforever38 11 ай бұрын
@chillycoldchomper9389 Friend! It was a compliment friend. Enjoy your holiday
@gothmajesty1976
@gothmajesty1976 11 ай бұрын
I loved this story so much. I don't understand the hate the protagonist is getting, but clearly, not everyone can think correctly at all times. Realistically speaking, humans make mistakes too. The only thing I didn't like about the story is how short it is. I was baffled when I saw that it's 1.5 hours long. I think the plot would have been better laid out if it was 3hrs long. The author could've explained a lot about the weird stuff in the story, like why did Bryce have to die afte Rose learned the truth? How did Rose have her memories all erased in the first place? It would be better if there were flashbacks of her doing the ritual instead of it just being read to her by someone. So I'd give this story a 9/10. It was unexpected, thrilling, but could've been longer. Salute to the author! I teared up when Bryce was dying.
@king81992
@king81992 Жыл бұрын
Thumbnail Image- The demonic heads on telephone poles are one of many reasons why photos are forbidden in a certain town. The MC sucks at following instructions. Story went in an unexpected direction.
@traceyjadeboyer5181
@traceyjadeboyer5181 Жыл бұрын
Did not care for this story. The reason was a bit of a cop out.
@jonwalker8945
@jonwalker8945 Жыл бұрын
Tune in next week for “I dreamt I was Leroy Porkins! Now I can’t think of a title!”
@sandymiller2121
@sandymiller2121 7 ай бұрын
Everybody's talking about how they hated this story I enjoyed it very much
@AnUpo17
@AnUpo17 Жыл бұрын
Beautiful beautiful story
@jackdurden466
@jackdurden466 8 ай бұрын
I don’t think I could have seen that coming with NVGs with Thermal Imaging! In fact that may have been the most convoluted ending, although not bad, I have ever heard on KZbin. Definitely one for the books. Personally I liked it, she turned out to be a witch. Who saw that coming? And the different spells and incantations that were used, well you had to pay attention for sure, but if you were able to follow it, it was damn good. You won me over with this one dear author! Well played! I’d happily say it was worth the time invested to finish it in one sitting. Top Marks!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🏆🏆🏆🏆
@annmarieray3922
@annmarieray3922 Жыл бұрын
Rose need's to listen....jeez rose..
@chasitydejohn796
@chasitydejohn796 4 ай бұрын
Always thise friends who will find you when no one else can!
@BETV2
@BETV2 11 ай бұрын
BRAVO!!🌹🌹 Thank you for this wonderful story telling.
@adamswindells1
@adamswindells1 11 ай бұрын
What a twist!
@02DDP
@02DDP 11 ай бұрын
She made sure to remind him that he was in the friend zone 😂😂
@Mackenziejh89
@Mackenziejh89 Жыл бұрын
Oooh, I love a new post!!
@fastfinger1plays716
@fastfinger1plays716 Жыл бұрын
Nice video! Can’t wait to watch!
@tabathabarrett646
@tabathabarrett646 11 ай бұрын
Wowwwww THE ENDING!!!❤😢❤
@michael0z0
@michael0z0 Жыл бұрын
Really hoping the main character does not stay this stupid
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
She does
@RealShrigmaMale
@RealShrigmaMale Жыл бұрын
@@srideout91no
@jennifern1453
@jennifern1453 11 ай бұрын
dang that was scary but beautiful
@antoniomccullom2102
@antoniomccullom2102 Жыл бұрын
New story
@TheRedRaccoonDog
@TheRedRaccoonDog Жыл бұрын
My Friend Moved To A Town Where People Aren't Allowed To Own Blahaj. Now Everyone Has To Die.
@NalaDaKitKat
@NalaDaKitKat Жыл бұрын
Love your content
@C-SD
@C-SD 11 ай бұрын
"Sorry, a bit of a dick move on my part". 😂 that's an understatement
@Acetyl53
@Acetyl53 Жыл бұрын
Dumb characters, dialogue that seems television inspired. Meh. I'm to the part where the main character is calling 911. "His words bounced right off. My brain was on autopilot." Dumb, like a Pavlovian hypersocialized animal. An eternal infant. I am so sick of this trope.
@jericho_1337
@jericho_1337 Жыл бұрын
so he moved to china?
@xdyllan.b
@xdyllan.b 11 ай бұрын
I always look through all the names on the channel and go with whatever sounds weirdest or coolest and I didn’t expect this to be as cool and interesting of a story that it is from the title. I really, really enjoyed this. Definitely a top 3 for me of horror stories. Even though it wasn’t very scary it was a really awesome concept and well executed by Mr Creeps
@lizweber4996
@lizweber4996 Жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this one!!!
@Melanee-o1f
@Melanee-o1f Жыл бұрын
Wow brilliant thanks
@srideout91
@srideout91 Жыл бұрын
I could not finish the story. The way they brought the main character to be annoying as possible and the dialogue they use is very cringe worthy. I had to stop after 15 minutes.
@MichaelAdams3D
@MichaelAdams3D Жыл бұрын
Seriously, making a main character insufferable as a catalyst for the horror elements of your story is kind of cliche but everyone does it.
@brandienichole7474
@brandienichole7474 Жыл бұрын
It gets better.
@adrienekausner9701
@adrienekausner9701 Жыл бұрын
That’s unfortunate. This was a pretty decent story. You should give it another go.
@kiaragrant5116
@kiaragrant5116 Жыл бұрын
I agree
@ev92
@ev92 10 ай бұрын
Loved it
@Ghost51492
@Ghost51492 Жыл бұрын
Who ever wrote this story was on some good shit 😂. All jokes aside I still enjoyed the story it wasn’t bad.
@jeffreybrunette-lb1dy
@jeffreybrunette-lb1dy Жыл бұрын
Wow, crazy ride! Worth it but I have questions.
@troysimmons506
@troysimmons506 11 ай бұрын
Reminds me of the story Lo a love story with witchcraft
@dk7680
@dk7680 Жыл бұрын
She is the worst friend possible.
@mischiefart1032
@mischiefart1032 11 ай бұрын
A few minutes in and I already know Rose will get her friend killed
@Lazy_D3m0n
@Lazy_D3m0n Жыл бұрын
"Move to town that prohibited to take photos" Is it in N.Kor?
@jamiescott1062
@jamiescott1062 Жыл бұрын
Gen Zers scare the crap out of me with their total lack of common sense!
@stormbringer2064
@stormbringer2064 4 ай бұрын
i love this story ive heard it before tho
@LeeroyPorkins
@LeeroyPorkins Жыл бұрын
Tune in next week for "Many Dads Go Out For Milk. I Deliver Milk."
@antoniomccullom2102
@antoniomccullom2102 Жыл бұрын
Lmfao
@Dale-jd4nj
@Dale-jd4nj Жыл бұрын
But after you deliver the milk and leave, do you ever come back?? ...Dad??
@src6339
@src6339 Жыл бұрын
This isn't milk... Fascinating.
@Catsnayk
@Catsnayk Жыл бұрын
I didn't expect feels. :(((((((
@NonyaBuzinezz
@NonyaBuzinezz Жыл бұрын
Very interesting that the writer chose to write the story from the perspective of an insufferable female dog. You don't come across many creepy pastas where the character narrating the story is so annoying the reader hopes the typical monster beats them. It was almost too much. I almost couldn't enjoy the story because she has plot armor thicker than all the Harry Potter stories combined.
@Amber-OliverBear
@Amber-OliverBear 8 ай бұрын
Ugh damn KZbin and they’re “next” and “skip” now! I just want to listen to the story !
@RaxNRats
@RaxNRats 11 ай бұрын
Personally i think if a writer can make ppl feel like then genuinely dislike a character then they have written them well ( stories good ones are ment to make you feel and think and evoke emotions) . Also it would be very boaring if every story ended with the " bad person " chaging and becoming good & repenting for their selfish & petty behaviour & yes sometimes characters are written in a exaggerated way like so in real life a ppl might be a bit of a dick or bitch but in a story u can make it more so because its a story and not real life , if ur wrighting drama that is non fiction the yeah u would make ur characters more real and true to real life behaviour , reactions and actions but in horror fiction u can take liberties same as ppl do in movies . Anyway point being if u hate a main character or feel things are unrealistic then its prob job done well as its ment to be fiction and ur ment to feel something & have thoughs & feelings about what u just experienced. Idk but sometimes i hate characters or feel bad for them but then i think, man, they did a good job that i actually hate a made up guy or woman / person in a made up story .
@Aweqix
@Aweqix 9 ай бұрын
this is the first story where i was rooting for the main character to die
@lores-marinellemerlot7011
@lores-marinellemerlot7011 9 ай бұрын
I thought it was pretty good. ♥
@RyuchanWings
@RyuchanWings Жыл бұрын
So for the first picture taking incident I get it, there was no warning, but then with the thing about calling emergency... I mean at the very least it was obvious that local law enforcement was at the very least in on it, use a brain cell and avoid the darwin award mam.
@Haxcks114
@Haxcks114 Жыл бұрын
So basically this is just a hex from wandavision
@BrandonMcDougal-o7g
@BrandonMcDougal-o7g 11 ай бұрын
Awesome 🎉🎉
@surveyman1
@surveyman1 Жыл бұрын
My one pleasure was WorldAway Tweedy did not say " Furtive", but trepituity or some such word meaning fearful moving. H.P.Lovecraft was great, but overused furtive as a word.
@SWA81
@SWA81 Жыл бұрын
10/10 story and 10/10 narration. This was one hell of a ride.
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