My Husband Hit Me After a Burglary, but What the Police Revealed Was Shocking

[@glprime2814]

18 million?! I realize this is fiction, but that really takes the immersion out of the story

[@simnath]

And a few paragraphs later it was 15 million to everyone

[@adriennelirio203]

Millions? I assume you mean yen not dollars??!!

[@barbaraunderwood1762]

So many inconsistencies. 1 baby , kids , man in house , woman in & out . Confusing.

[@tami8027]

Written so poorly, it did not make any sense. Was is it one bag or many?

[@brettster3331]

This story is alright, but you keep changing the number of bags as well as children it is very confusing to listen to.

[@JeanStrukus]

Expensive bags how could they afford t

[@Cherylgielow]

Poorly written and the reading was horrible!

[@parveenahsan6914]

Badly written and very confusing

[@kathleenkiernan1787]

The story is badly edited, very dull story, but twice as badly narrated

[@adriennelirio203]

This doesn’t make sense and has terrible narration.

[@simnath]

Mixed gender pronouns & adjectives, confused references. Any English speaking person could edit the story!

[@JeanStrukus]

Expensive bags how could they afford t

[@JeanStrukus]

Expensive bags how could they afford t