"My Neighbor Drew Some Weird Chalk Symbols On The Back Of My Bedroom Door" Creepypasta

[@MrCreeps]

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[@onsitenerd]

This one is so good, I’m dying for a follow up . The writer has tremendous skill, and paired perfectly with the narrator’s flawless reading. Thank you, you rock!

[@rosetanner9817]

That's Exactly what I was thinking! Well said my good fellow 🎉❤

[@debacofzomb9889]

Agreed

[@daniell1483]

This took some unexpected turns, and at the end, I was almost surprised it was over. Fantastic story!

[@ingridkantor4411]

This would make an awesome TV series, or movie...and the ending, while offering closure, still leaves lots of option for a sequel. To the author, WELL DONE!

[@DeepFleeceheart]

Leave them wanting more

[@blackbutlerloner7727]

This sounds more like a anime tbh

[@DeepFleeceheart]

@@blackbutlerloner7727 specifically a Ghibli production.

[@katherinezuber544]

I really want a sequel, or a series. I know the story had closure… but it left me wanting more. Big thumbs up to the author and you Mr. Creeps!

[@Jp82911]

I hope there is more to this story. I actually liked this one a lot.

[@einienj3281]

It feels like part 2 might be a thing.. hopefully. 🤞🏻😊

[@treeherder42]

Checking the nosleep link to the story looks like the orginal is 5 parts written 3 months ago but didn't see more of this story on the writers profile.

[@DanBCooper]

Props to the author, this one was awesome ! Thanks for bringing it to us Creeps 🙌

[@MissBebe64]

Awesome story and narration thank you Mr Creeps❤

[@winstonwins1096]

This story was certainly leagues above the "just another entertaining but forgettable creepypasta" impression the title gives off. Excellent work here.

[@woodenfloor6374]

Halfway through the story, so far its actually epic Edit: IT WAS INDEED EPIC, need a part 2 ASAP

[@sashafortin1695]

24 mins in.. pretty awesome story so.far 👌🏼

[@bradsly3386]

I'm 3/4 and hope this doesn't end horribly and hope that this has more stories

[@JustJack2012]

I know it’s not strictly speaking the way creepy story’s go, but I really do like a form of happy ending, it feels so much more like the struggles we hear/read were all worth it in the end

[@ginamilligan9385]

Wonderful, magical, Joyful tale! It rekindles that childhood fantasy of evil being redeemed by the power of love - a message this world desperately needs to believe in again. What a wonderful gift!

[@zypixi666]

I don’t listen to these stories/readings unless I’m in a “mood” I’m very glad I picked this one to get me through the rest of the day. ❤

[@delgrengo2135]

This is in my top 5 for sure. Just an amazing story I could see being a full book and movie

[@SirChristoferus]

It’d definitely be a very captivating book series if the author adds more chapters to the story. And with all the great advancements in CGI and camera technology, the movies would probably complement the book series quite nicely. “The Mortimer Chronicles” could be a potential title for it.

[@trip898]

I want this to be made into a movie and then go on into a show about Matilda and Ms Mortimer teaching him magic and maybe collecting more abused or homeless kids and saving them and making a community for themselves 😅

[@TimelessEssence13]

This ended up being surprisingly wholesome overall 🥰 Really awesome story and narration 🎉🤩♥️

[@einienj3281]

1am, a thunder storm and creepy long story? Yes please! 😅 Thank You! ⛈️💜

[@kentworch]

I love a good thunderstorm.

[@einienj3281]

@@kentworch Me too!

[@gingersnapps]

Same here ....but 18 hours later where do u live?

[@kentworch]

@@gingersnapps I live in South Carolina.

[@gingersnapps]

@@kentworch NORTH CAROLINA! LOL FUNNY 🤣 😂

[@Haze420_za]

Absolutely brilliant tale! Big ups to the author and my favorite narrorator!

[@jacobstewart146]

Very cool story. I hope to hear more about their adventures

[@sanniwartinen3595]

I REALLY loved this story, soo good!!! Im going to try to find other stories by this author now.❤

[@twist7763]

this one is now one of my personal favorites, love it!

[@laggyblue]

I love that when I'm marking stuff at work. My boss allows me to listen to this cause it's not near customers

[@Cander617]

This story was great haven't heard one this good in a while!

[@TheChellybean85]

I was so sad that this story ended! I need this to have many more parts!

[@privatejapan5599]

This there a Part 2? This is really excellent!!! ❤

[@FitzUrse]

I NEED more of this story.

[@willowleaves5806]

I loved this story! So unique and inventive.

[@MoistBrexit]

Love the cryptic hunter stories defo need more!

[@The_Shogun_of_Harlem]

This was a really good story. Not to dark or to kiddy

[@welshgirl-sl6tf]

This was so intriguing, many twists and turns and kept you engrossed to the very end. Loved it.

[@wolfmoon3431]

"It's rags whispering as they dragged through the grass" reminds me so much of salad fingers (who I love dearly, lol). What a brilliant story... I didn't expect the surprise twists and turns of this story's narrative and it kept me most throughly entertained❤

[@reesofraft4166]

that's finally a really well done story. content wise and told by you. so many of the stories are just clichés or not well-written. you got a really good voice to pull them off but that does not change the fact that most are not very good.

[@wizeller5040]

Part 2 please, this was amazing.

[@breadscream6619]

As soon as this pasta started and i heard the words hungry. I went downstairs and reheated some pizza😂😂😂

[@GreenBaji]

In my head the first 1/3 of the story played in a very grim dark style, but the rest played as a studio ghibli movie. I really wish a animation studio would pick up this story, it's so great I wanna draw something of it.

[@Omnishredder]

I kinda can't believe I've found something a friend might enjoy, didn't expect to share about how interesting these stories are to her and the like, and ended up suggesting them, she's lovely, and I feel like it was worth sharing, in fact the first one I shared was dungeons and darkness, it was more relatable to baldurs gate 3 she was playing yesterday, and I really enjoy these stories

[@geneericname7138]

Only halfway through so far but I'm getting A Wrinkle in Time vibes from this one and I love it.

[@alisonduddy837]

No one reads em like Mr Creeps. Love and look forward to them and have been an avid and loyal listener for years and years. Just wanted to say I'm still listening Mr Creeps and your content is still top of my list. Thank you from me in the UK 🖐💕

[@Silently_lurks_beneath]

This was amazing. I wish for a sequel.

[@oceanairbrush]

This would make an awesome series if they'd start training the kid

[@leogol6045]

This was a great one!! Would be awesome as a well-budgeted film!

[@lorenmurphy9524]

You are the best reader, partly because of your stories, partly because of your voice, but 100 because of your consistent audio levels holy fffffff thank you for not bouncing around with audio so much when I like to fall asleep to these because they sometimes defeat my insomnia. Thank you 🙏

[@silviaflorez-ramey6350]

Are there any more stories by this Author? Sounds like some of the tween books I like ❤!

[@redbull444]

Could do so much with this story I truly hope for a sequel

[@MarshaKlein8425]

I've just discovered this channel by chance. What a find and what a great story this was, utterly engrossing. I would love to hear it continue. Miss Mortimer kicks ass!

[@tonybahama6817]

Well done, well done. A lotta love mixed-in with the nether world. Kinda had a Clive Barker feel from some of his lesser known but epic novels…

[@kentworch]

Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. This was a good one and definitely made my night. Thank you so much 🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@TerianaCreations]

I was so surprised that it ended. I need more!!! good job

[@greatsongz1211]

This was so sweet I LOVED it!!

[@thepagan5432]

Although parts of the story were telegraphed I thoroughly enjoyed it and hope there could be further tales from these spirited accomplices. Great story, thank you 👻

[@merileedehnel4673]

I absolutely loved this story!!! Looking forward to your next story ,can’t wait

[@deviousnyc1976]

I enjoyed this one a lot, In fact I can't think of a creepy pasta I enjoyed as much or more.

[@Caleb-pb9ez]

Most of the stories I hear from Mr creeps are epic

[@ElohimMiran]

Ms. Mortimer has to fight it out with a certain white faced monstrosity.

[@KryptoKn8]

Sniper TF2

[@issabugmarie4219]

I need a part two😭 desperately

[@scarytugboat7382]

Damn this one was good. Hopefully there's more coming

[@anthonylavallee4238]

This would be an awesome movie

[@ngcmhaven]

was this... an isekai...? This was a fun one. Really enjoyed. Thank you for your work! I listen every night and I have never found such a treasure of a voice >:]

[@crissy2420]

Great story! That was a good one!

[@rishabhyadav3137]

This one was an awesome story❤❤

[@DominusAurelium]

When is the second part coming

[@jessicatibe5402]

Please tag me if there is a part 2!! This is amazing 🫶🏾

[@laymayday]

Wow! Loved the story!

[@christinebadagliacco8972]

Wow great story. Any chance for another story about the three of them. Thanks for sharing.

[@truthylucy7068]

I absolutely loved this story! 🩷

[@Nico-rb4cc]

Great story need part 2 pls

[@LS-ti1rz]

With a bit of revision for the screen adaptation this could be a really great adventurous movie in the vein of those great movies of the 1980s like the Goonies etc. Perhaps a bit scarier. It gave me sort of that kind of vibe I got while watching a Harry Potter movie yet a bit darker thematically.

[@wolfmoon3431]

Great idea... I absolutely love the Goonies (and many 80's early 90s movies of that era)... They had a special kind of quality!

[@virginiavarble7818]

That was an epic story. Well written and well told. ❤❤❤❤

[@jorgemandez210]

5 mins In and I can't wait to see where this storyline goes

[@lisamariehennessey4532]

Wow this story is not just awesome it s arr well done to the author and thank you Mr Creeps for bringing this story alive 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

[@korosheht5446]

That was a really good story im really happy it had a good ending

[@maryfrey2528]

Just 1 word Mr. Creeps - OUTSTANDING ❤

[@melissamcgillivray]

Part 2?

[@laurelwoerfel7598]

LOVE THIS need the next part ASAP! Excellent job ❤

[@ConservativeSatanist666]

Great story 🖤

[@pumpnix]

OMG!!! this was an amazing story! 🩷🩷🩷 the visuals in my head were awesome; truly great writing! 🤞🏼🤞🏼 that there is a part 2 (or more) of this story! i would love to see how this story continues to unfold! great job narrating and great job to the writer of this! i join the many more in the comments wanting part 2!! 🫰🏼

[@saragog]

I am loving this one! Thankyou! ❤

[@gingersnapps]

Love'n this one already only 17 mins in ❤❤ its storming outside giving it that extra chill to my spine 😊

[@aaueiahrt]

Mr. Creeps!! Your stories and voice are bada**!! No doubt! Keep em comin plz!! I'm hooked! Been subb'd since your channel popped up in my feed more than a year ago❤ Much love

[@lissabaker7414]

Thank you for another great story 😊 It's greatly appreciated to get away from everything listening 😊

[@Stopstaring101]

Mr. Creeps: Stay hungry 🐗👹 Me: OK 😳🥺

[@r.s.dissendissen6752]

Such a beautiful story !! .........

[@melodiethompson535]

Ahhhhh! I gotta tell ya, that was one of the best stories I've heard. I'll prolly hear it again soon! I'm glad I came across it. Great job to both Mr Creeps and author. 😊😊

[@angelatitmuss1999]

Amazing. Next chapter son I hope

[@Dsxfuego]

I need more of this

[@andrewowens92]

I’m convinced that you force the word “maw” into every story you tell

[@MtnManMikey]

Just a reminder that inter-dimensional vandalism is a crime

[@bradsly3386]

Yep, this needs more stories, we'll, volumes, chapters?

[@NicoleChorney]

Another amazing story, but ehy was Ms Mortimer surprised the kid followed her into the Inferno? She all but adopted a precocious child who had no issues following her through magical realms and learning the mystic arts through trial and error. For better or worse, he's her kid and she should have seen it coming.

[@cac2821]

Awesome story 👏

[@jackeilhigh]

This is amazing actually

[@prollyfishing6903]

This needs to be a movie "the witches assistant "

[@RichLunaMusic]

Mr. Creeps. This was a great story but could you please turn up the music volume next time you're mixing it like you use to? We can barely hear it nowadays. Thanks and you rule!

[@dyani4779]

Favorite! This was great!

[@silviaflorez-ramey6350]

That was Awesome ❤❤❤‼️ Thank You 😊‼️

[@hunkeymoukey6118]

This was amazing 🎉

[@thekatboi]

its honestly weird how the ending was happy

[@stephanieborah4388]

That awkward moment when your new stepmom has tried to eat you on multiple occasions

[@prollyfishing6903]

Seriously though if we don't get a sequel to this imma be upset

[@pimplepanda1932]

I hope there's more

[@calvinscheiner770]

This was so good.