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@CrimzonLizard Жыл бұрын
My weekend was very slow, Thanks for uploading. Now I can do paperwork while listening to your soothing storytelling voice!
@veggiechip Жыл бұрын
Yoo!! Had a great weekend and an even better monday thanks to you!! 🫡 Listening as we speak!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
@@CrimzonLizard i hope you enjoy it! have a good day!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
yay i hope you like it! @@veggiechip
@deanmorgan1821 Жыл бұрын
Pretty good! Got some much needed sleep. Glad you're feeling better man!
@kidcthulhufortney1320 Жыл бұрын
So I came in blind, expecting supernatural shenanigans or a serial killer confession; instead I got something way more visceral. Excellent job, Somn & Crew.
@itsfreddyboy11 ай бұрын
Agreed, this was so good!
@johnjohn480511 ай бұрын
Same, great story.
@Mygg_Jeager11 ай бұрын
My sentiments exactly. He's doing that more and more often on this channel and I absolutely love it.
@karenduguid394311 ай бұрын
Excellent story
@raichu614211 ай бұрын
Same
@nemesisastraea6659 Жыл бұрын
This reminds me a lot of my dad. He was drafted and had his fair share of stories to tell. Same age as Jack. He quit drinking before I was born. he had the same issues as Jack. Nightmare and a controlled anger issues. It wasn't till a couple of years ago he finally mellowed out. These last two decades were the closest he and I had gotten. Admitted to all his faults and wished he had been better. Always looked at him as this pillar of strength I could never match. These last few years he showed me he and I were more alike than I had ever imagined. He passed away this past May. I miss him a lot.
@shawna444 Жыл бұрын
I empathize my friend. My father shared the same experience in Vietnam and passed not too long ago from Agent Orange exposure. My heart goes out to you.
@Prototheria11 ай бұрын
Damn, dude... right in the feels. Thank you for sharing.
@ebuttsie11 ай бұрын
Much love, so sorry for your loss xxx
@VanillaSquilla11 ай бұрын
Sorry for your loss.
@DocBree1311 ай бұрын
I’m so sorry for your loss 😢. I’m really glad you were able to mend fences and have a close relationship with your dad before he passed. RIP, Astraea’s dad ❤
@justsam0511 Жыл бұрын
As a vet I really appreciate it. Thank you so much brother.
@floppaeditz123 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your service
@A_Black_hoodie Жыл бұрын
Thanks for your service homes
@basic6735 Жыл бұрын
Nice pfp
@michaelholmes467 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your service
@DavidPrObooMBer Жыл бұрын
What did Jack say about this combination of 5 words you bafoons
@drossano97948 ай бұрын
Great character, my dad is a Vietnam veteran 1969/1970. He doesn’t talk about it almost ever. My ex gf’s dad was also a vietnam vet, Marine infantry. Reminds me a lot of that character in the story. We went to the memorial wall in Washington DC, he brought a print out sheet of all his buddies he lost all those year ago. Will never forget him over 70 staring at those names whenever we located them for minutes like he was in a different place. At one point I put a hand on his shoulder and all he could say was we were only kids, will never forget it.
@katimius11 ай бұрын
i love how there isn't a forced ending to this story - they didn't become besties, no miracle 180 on their lives, no dramatic climax and plot twist - but something good did happen. as a result of crossing paths, they each learned something and changed their lives for the better. i just love how real this tale is.
@ParsnipCelery11 ай бұрын
What do you mean? The old guy quit drinking and started a support group. That's a complete 180 forced ending shoehorned in at the end. Goof.
@coolcat61039 ай бұрын
I don’t think you could have any more spoilers in if you tried!! 😂
@Lancelot0311 Жыл бұрын
I’m a Marine Vet myself. Demons and monsters are scary, but when YOU are the demon or monster, it’s much more frightening. This was such a great story. Thank you
@DocBree1311 ай бұрын
Thank you for your service 🙏 🇺🇸
@uvbe11 ай бұрын
@@DocBree13you really did not take away anything huh
@itsfreddyboy11 ай бұрын
So true 💯
@jonahhex817811 ай бұрын
Stay up, leather neck. From army 19 echo.
@josefmengele18111 ай бұрын
@@DocBree13no
@MrZombieUK9 ай бұрын
I really liked this. My dad wasn't in Vietnam, he was a firefighter/paramedic in South Africa during the end of apartheid and he was sent into some very horrific places and experienced stuff you only see in nightmares. He eventually had a mental breakdown which meant that my mother of 3 had to arrange us move back to England, where they were born, in just 3 weeks. 40 years later and i still can't bring myself to ask him about what he experienced in case he relapses, but i know he is busting to tell someone. Who knows, maybe I'll just ask him and write it all down.
@vaeraun1 Жыл бұрын
I normally listen to these stories because I enjoy the supernatural and horror elements, plus you have a great way of narrating and are easy to listen to. I wouldn't normally choose a story like this, but I'm glad I heard it all the same. I'm not in a good place in my life. Not suicidal, but lacking the motivation to wanting to live. Kinda in that dark spot where I'm just letting my life pass me by waiting for it to be over. This wasn't the story I was expecting to hear, but maybe it was the kind I needed to hear. I just want to say thanks.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
i understand what that feels like, im glad the story was able to speak to you. :)
@bobbyflay3007 Жыл бұрын
Don't give up on yourself. Find just one thing to improve on and focus on that
@Wiltac Жыл бұрын
I can feel this. You are not alone my friend..
@vaeraun1 Жыл бұрын
Thanks, Bobby. That simple bit of advice is actually profoundly helpful.
@DocBree1311 ай бұрын
I hope you get better soon - please don’t ever give up - I can relate to your struggle, and I know it can get better ❤
@lionwrathking5846 Жыл бұрын
This was a morbidly beautiful story which was so immersive into how vile people are at their worst. My gawd you can't imagine how brilliant and vivid this story was for me. I'm in awe of how you brought it to life🤯
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
im so glad you enjoyed it!
@roystonchase7990 Жыл бұрын
Damn,dark somnium,some of your stuff makes me cry,damn,I need no movies once your around,damn what a delivery,amazing,you are the BEST bro
@Kurazaybo11 ай бұрын
Who makes the voice of the neighbor?
@dustinmannel307111 ай бұрын
As a Vet this story as a special place for me. It really brings out the duality of war versus civilian life. It's like they say, nobody loves a warrior until the enemy shows it at the door.
@saltyseadog471910 ай бұрын
@@Darksomnium❤hey u forgot to heart it!
@sheofthegoddess Жыл бұрын
My uncle is a Vietnam veteran (sniper) and I sent this to him. He says the lesson is humanity and grace. Seeing everyone's point of view, accepting it from others and giving one's self grace and reconnecting with one's humanity as well as seeing it in others; enemy or loved one. He also said, "Damn good job son."
@realdreamerschangetheworld747011 ай бұрын
❤❤❤
@mot1vat1on8 ай бұрын
Cringe comment
@sheofthegoddess8 ай бұрын
@@mot1vat1on Go be triggered down range sir.
@shawna444 Жыл бұрын
Thank you, Ronnie. My late father, my hero, was in Vietnam, survived hell and became a Hall of Fame Olympic Swimming Coach, the best Dad a girl could ask for...only to die at 51 because our government saturated him with Agent Orange. I have been bitter and jaded about it for years. This story brought out every emotion I am capable of yet your delivery and the underlying message of hope moved me in such a positive way that I realized my Dad wouldn't want me to be angry and spiteful. I need to do some soul searching. God works in mysterious ways, doesn't He? You are the best of the best, sir. Much gratitude to you!
@kennimallinson2068 Жыл бұрын
I left a reply as well my uncle also died from cancer at 60 from agent orange & im an Aussie we were there beside you & it’s horrible how they treated them in Vietnam at least it’s finally changed around now, but what they went through was hell and the ones like your dad & my uncle who came back & led productive lives & put it behind them were incredible people & then for them to pass away still because of that war is just the cruelest blow of all sorry for your loss & thank your dad for his service they were hero’s! ❤
@josefmengele18111 ай бұрын
Charlie is pissing on his grave cheers
@krystiebighaus2291 Жыл бұрын
This story was absolutely amazing. It made me cry and it’s really captures what veterans have gone through and what they still struggle with. My grandpa went through a lot of similar experiences in Vietnam. Great story!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@demoneyin9390 Жыл бұрын
This story flew by. I could listen to this all day. It really showed the differences between two generations. One stricken with war, and the other without. Jack had some serious shit, but he spilled his heart and guts out, but the MC couldn’t even tell him why his girlfriend went for her co-worker without getting in a tizzy. Everyone wants to hear about someone else’s personal darkness, but deny their own. Awesome narration as usual from you guys!
@DarkAlex197811 ай бұрын
I agree. I at least could respect someone like Jack for the reasons you said. The MC on the other hand is just a guy fed with do-goodism but without any true experience of what is like to face darkness himself.
@silvereye717 Жыл бұрын
This is a story to remember. My dad always told me, “No matter how bad you think you got it, there’s someone out there who has it worse.” Amazing job again 👏
@sarmythreader Жыл бұрын
Yes, self pity gets you nowhere. I also think it's important that there is always someone who has it better. It's ok to be sad or to complain, but to your point, if you are focused on just that you lose what you have.
@al89519 ай бұрын
Tf is this advice?? just because someone has it harder doesnt mean my problems are invalid. Why should i give a shit that someone has it harder? Doesnt solve my Problems at all
@CREEPYxFACE Жыл бұрын
I remember hearing T.W. Grims stories on another channel before and thought about how awesome the stories are. It's refreshing actually because, to me, Grims writing style is a gift to our dark little corner of the internet. As if 'Grim' wasn't already a perfect title for the author, its their name too.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
T.W Grim is an awesome writer, im glad ive been able to work with them lately!
@NickyGliotta Жыл бұрын
The Settlement, Uncle Henry's Farm, Bonesaw Vic...T.W. Grim is a genius.
@calebfoster4855 Жыл бұрын
@@NickyGliottaoh i completely missed he was responsible for the settlements
@TWGrim Жыл бұрын
@Darksomnium I think you folks did a fantastic job 👏
@TWGrim Жыл бұрын
@@NickyGliottaThanks for that, but I didn't write The Settlements. That series was written by Dubbed Emotions.
@gabrielles.519111 ай бұрын
Hi! I just got out of the hospital for the 2nd time for suicide, and this story was so unexpected and really encouraging. I’m not a veteran, but I understand PTSD. Trying to heal from trauma leaves me feeling like a monster. This story was wonderful. Thank you 😊
@societyreborn3311 ай бұрын
Please Stop doing that. Just live out a long, shitty life like the rest of us. A shitty life is still a life worth living. I'm doing shitty as hell, suffering endlessly....but I ain't giving up. I'm here for the shitty long haul. Hopefully you too 👍
@TraveleronMywayHome11 ай бұрын
@@societyreborn33 Amen. The greatest words I ever read about life: "Happiness is a mirage on the horizon that moves when you get closer." It's absolutely the truth. Suicide doesn't change that fact. There is beauty in the suffering of life. It is harder to live than to die. We are the survivors.
@graceyoung377111 ай бұрын
My prayers and well wishing are with you. I have experience with this issue as well. I have been well and at peace for the last 23 years and so can you.
@yourwife11118 ай бұрын
I hope you’re doing well still. For what it’s worth I’m proud of you for every day you keep going. I’m sending you my love. 🤍
@Flamingpinapples7 Жыл бұрын
I kept waiting for this one to turn supernatural, but it never did. I feel like the meaning of the story is one that it states itself. That things aren't black and white. But there's also a healthy dose of "don't let your past define you" and "share the burden". No one can help you if you don't tell someone that there's something wrong. As always, great work and thank you for your videos!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Yeah I agree with your analysis, I'm glad you liked it!
@Sp00kyQueen3 ай бұрын
“The past is behind you and the future is out of your reach. The present is where we exist and the perfect time to turn it all around is right now.” What a profound statement. I’ll carry this with me.
@ab.bull1179 ай бұрын
24:05 That voice crack and throat clearing was such a good touch, props to the VA
@spinyvegeta1 Жыл бұрын
Damn, that was a great story. Not exactly horror but still enthralling none the less. Loved the characters and the entanglement between them.
@keiththebat111 ай бұрын
This story is somebody's story. Thanks for sharing really enjoyed this one.
@ashstorm8754 ай бұрын
The raw emotion and how this could actually be a real person's story is so good
@sarajohnson685511 ай бұрын
As someone who works as a caregiver to veterans in a skilled nursing facility this story really has touched a spot in my heart. Alot of the Vietnam vets have the same conclusion, " it was a pointless war, we didn't need to be there" many are recovered alcoholics and ex- addicts.
@steamboatmischy176710 ай бұрын
The mere sight of T.W. Grim's name is enough to send shivers down my spine after "The New Fish."
@deltanoiro Жыл бұрын
Really digging these more grounded stories. I got lost in this one, and the hour flew by.
@lenjapita Жыл бұрын
I grew up surrounded by veterans, my father, a couple of uncles, fathers of friends, many neighbors,... (I was born in Yugoslavia) and I always admired that most of them remained normal and caring people regardless of the hell they were in . I know some of them who didn't adapt well to life afterwards, I also know some who deliberately did quite bad things, and those who were in paramilitary units, but the vast majority are decent people. I fear that the time is coming when many people will be in that hell again.
@shawna444 Жыл бұрын
Me too, my friend...I pray we are wrong.
@kungfuvoodoo9889 Жыл бұрын
Ditto on your last sentence, when Jack was talking about the cycle it really hit me hard seeing how things have been playing out irl lately. I doubt I'd get drafted at my age, but either way I fear things are going to get a lot worse before things get better, if things even can get better.
@Aether-master Жыл бұрын
My dad he saw his neigbhur slaguhterd he slept in the woods for weeks
@travismiles588511 ай бұрын
I did three tours in the Balkans during the peacekeeping missions there in the mid to late 90s with IFOR, SFOR, and KFOR. I still don't quite understand the region. The politics, the ethnic differences and so on. It is all very complicated.
@lenjapita11 ай бұрын
@@travismiles5885 Here is a short version of the history of the Balkans: Almost all people living in the Balkans, except the Greeks, are actually one people. We all know it, but no one will admit it, because it is a "shame" that your great-grandfather changed his religion, or fought on the losing side 100 years ago. For centuries, Austrians and Turks have been at war, and more than half of the armies on both sides were Serbs, Croats, Bulgarians.... We all remember what they did to us, and we hide what we did to them. And so it goes in circles, foreign interests change and we cannot unite, so we fight each other out of habit.
@stephenstevens6573 Жыл бұрын
Another feelspasta! You know what? Your voice is just as effective on empathy as it is in terror. Great job! Your little insomniac
@Max-jp5zu10 ай бұрын
what are some other feelspasta?
@stephenstevens657310 ай бұрын
@@Max-jp5zu where a story elicits emotion, instead of horror or fear.
@ruth_southernstar Жыл бұрын
My goodness, I have been gripped through this whole story; what tension, what sorrow, what terrible versions of ourselves we can be. I'm now nowhere near sleeping. I am wide awake in North West England! Thank you for sharing this story, it really resonated with me. Best wishes from Ruth x
@rowanlavellan9755 Жыл бұрын
I've known too many people like Jack. "You people think you're so right about how to raise kids, shut up." *goes on to prove exactly why hitting your kids is a bad idea* The last line hit me kinda hard. I've been struggling a lot lately (same story as a lot of horror fans, eh?) and trying to find some kind of point in continuing.
@khalakrean689011 ай бұрын
"everybody was hitting their kids, it didn't hurt them permanently" I don't know bro you just told use he died of an overdose, can't think of something more permanent than death
@carlosfant542111 ай бұрын
This story is a masterpiece!! It takes the lives of 2 different people and combines them to tell 1 story! The best part of the story is them not knowing one another, but end up helping each other!!
@RicardoHernandez-ih6hb10 ай бұрын
Very beautifully written. Very emotional and very real
@Kevc0re_11 ай бұрын
“The past is behind you” is easier said than acknowledged when your past is terrible nightmare. Psychological torture and physical abuse (though not related to this story) sticks with you and it’s hard to shake. I would know.
@johnnsong5078 Жыл бұрын
I'm late bit just hearing this story has given me the courage to go see my dad after a year. We both argued and haven't seen each other since but hearing this has finally given me the courage to go see him. Thanks love your work and videos
@societyreborn3311 ай бұрын
Go and see him! Manage your expectations maybe, but definitely go see him 👍
@FreshDougan9 ай бұрын
Dang. This was a really heavy one. My dad was a violent drunk growing up and beat me regularly. His demons caused him to be one himself. And hurt the ones he did love deep down. I cant forgive him tho. The scars, broken bones and missing teeth are a constant reminder of the horror I went through. I ended up leaving at 16. But before I did I beat him nearly to death. Haven't seen or heard from him or my mother since. Had some tough times after that but I have a great life now. Anyway great story as always DS.
@The-watter8 ай бұрын
I understand. I still love him but I can't forgive him. I'm glad your life is better now ♡
@Hiikey.11 ай бұрын
This one was a hard listen, my dad used to beat up me and my mom when i was a kid so this was pretty difficult to get through, but I'm glad i did. phenomenal story and voice acting 👏
@Darksomnium11 ай бұрын
im sorry you had to experience that, im glad you enjoyed the story otherwise :)
@bran7n8 ай бұрын
Being a 19 year old boy in the army this was a Great story and honestly i find myself apologizing for being mean to people i care about much like the old man. Dark Sonium never miss with the narrations man ❤🤘🏾‼️
@johnnyivie9751 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your channel, it never fails that your choice of stories to narrate are of the highest caliber.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
ty for coming by to listen :)
@itsfreddyboy11 ай бұрын
My god this was amazing, sad, depressing, but intriguing all the same. The way you narrated this was incredible as always dark somnium. This story didnt need any monsters or demons they already existed.
@juliotorres80728 ай бұрын
DAMN!!! This was an amazing story and telling! You outdid yourself! My new favorite Channel🤙🏾
@cyndaquillover5975 Жыл бұрын
As a Marine who just finished their contract I appreciate stories like this. My mom always taught me to appreciate the ones who came before me because without them we wouldn't be here. Vets today are treated a bit nicer than those of old. Especially those who went to Vietnam and Korea.
@darksecretsz11 ай бұрын
The pacing is relentless, and I love it. It's a relentless descent into darkness, and I can't escape the horror. Well done!
@jshade1238 Жыл бұрын
It’s a hard pill to swallow this one--this, story is heartbreaking and extremely heavy--the horrors of war-abuse of all kinds and the dark side of human history….
@kennimallinson2068 Жыл бұрын
I absolutely loved this story , this author is one of my favourites, I really like a change from the paranormal stuff at times & Grims story’s are so good they could be from real life experiences! My uncle was a Vietnam vet & he got the same homecoming down here in Australia as we’ve been right there beside the US in every conflict & it was exactly the same , kids being sent to a far away place where they didn’t want to be , then ostracised for it! I’m so glad the Vietnam vets are no treated differently, my uncle did 3 tours & stayed in the army for 30 years & left with a great pension & he was able to work as a security guard as well as recurve his pension but the war still caught up with him he passed from throat cancer caused by agent orange, so this story hit home a bit, & your narration was superb , please throw in more stories like this every now and again, most times real life is a lot scarier than the supernatural! Ty again!
@ianfortuna938511 ай бұрын
I worked with a lot of veterans. One in particular was former MP and did 4 tours 2 in Iraq and 2 in Afghanistan, and often I would listen to what he needed to get off his chest. I made a point of letting him know that he had a confident in me at all times. Last thing he told me was “The final 8 days of my last tour in Afghanistan, was when I was most frightened. Waiting to be sent home, he said he couldn’t eat, he couldn’t sleep.” all he did was clean his rifle and pistol. Said the day came when he left he didn’t calm down until he landed in Munich, Germany. Today he’s a police officer in our town and is doing more for his community.
@wimsy69 Жыл бұрын
oh my, this is the earliest Ive ever been. I know of your habit to scroll around comments when the video is new so Ill throw out some words :) This is honestly my favorite channel all over youtube, the stories, the narration, I love it so much. It honestly helps me a TON throughout my days as a neurodivergent person. I can focus on the story and whatever I’m doing besides without my mind going haywire (how do you spell that (I’m not a native speaker)). I’ve listened through so many of your stories as they are basically playing all the time when I’m home, making dinner, crocheting, playing the sims (lol) and even now when I’m working on an art assignment which is pretty important for my art class grade (doing my A-levels). Basically all my friends know of this ‘podcast’ I’m always listening to lol. Through this channel I found my love for narrated stories which honestly help me so, so much. I hope you’re having as much fun managing this channel as I (/we) have, being the community. Even if I’m just a stranger from across the globe, you make this persons day a bit better :) thanks for that
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
wow thank you so much, im honored :)
@Levi_Skys Жыл бұрын
Loving the story, listening to it while i work. Also i love ypur channel and has inspired me and a friend to start writing a story of our own and try to V.A it. Thanks for all you do!
@Hellisfine Жыл бұрын
Hey man, really appreciate your work. Your narration keeps me going when life gets difficult. All the best!
@zeyface6366 Жыл бұрын
For anyone reading: Phrases like “Get over it” are ones I’d avoid around people with PTSD. It’s not like getting a normal wound, it’s like having a really bad and visible big scar You can recover, sometimes very very well but even after successful therapy you never quite completely remove the scar.
@ruth_southernstar Жыл бұрын
Totally agree
@michaelpowers655111 ай бұрын
For most wounds I don’t believe you ever remove the scar! You just learn to live as positive a life with them…
@johneurek818111 ай бұрын
Does ‘Calm down’ work any better?
@Lady_Coral11 ай бұрын
Thank you! That’s one of the reasons I didn’t really like the main character. Trauma can turn people into monsters , and he seemed way more quick to judge Jack then help him like he claimed to be doing. He said that it was good for Jacks soul to get out the trauma, which is true, but then proceeded to judge him on actions Jack regretted doing, even going as far as to ridicule him like a child. When you do that with someone who has trauma you’re just making things worse. Don’t praise them for their negative actions, but there’s no need to grind salt in the wound. Contrary to popular belief, but shame and judgment doesn’t help in healing or changing a person
@michaelpowers655111 ай бұрын
@@Lady_Coral While I already said my piece on the main character i definitely also agree with yours! I grew incessantly tired of his judgmental attitude! Then he had the audacity to not speak on his own life when Jack called him out on it lol! I get a feeling there was a good reason he got kicked out…
@karenroot45010 ай бұрын
This is a fabulous story of redemption! Quite different than what I usually listen too. The writer has a gift the ups and downs really pulled me in. I felt like I was sitting in my kitchen just listening to them delve through life. Great positive message about your own future! Thanks for this.
@mutilixusX Жыл бұрын
As a non-confrontational person, this evoked a different type of fear from me, unlike any other fear that the other stories made me feel. I'm the type that would rather ignore confrontations and just resort to a subtle, sometimes petty, kind of response. Be it via words or actions, so this scenario gave me chills not because of the topic but because of the tension.
@funnelvortex7722 Жыл бұрын
Yeah, I agree. I am also a non-confrontational person and a raging toxic asshole like Jack is my worst nightmare.
@Davavo Жыл бұрын
Same I was instinctively trying to back out of the conversation as things were getting more and more hostile 😂 the tension was done just right
@cobaltusaАй бұрын
Great story. Great narration. Thought provoking. Thank you
@releasethechimp9499 Жыл бұрын
"It never fails to amaze me how people who have yet to miss a meal criticize people who were starving to death"
@paulinaalonso8579 Жыл бұрын
Very much adding this to the next thing to listen to once I come home from running errands. Thank you for putting out quality narrations every time.
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Thanks for listening
@paulinaalonso8579 Жыл бұрын
Finally heard it. I think a lot of people may resonate in different parts of their story. For me, the first one was that we don't know someone's story. A grouchy neighbour, a bad teacher, a disinterested cashier....we don't know what they went through and what they are living with. It's very very rarely ever about us. There's definitely more to it, but that was my first thought.
@dakistle10 ай бұрын
This feels like it could easily be adapted to film.
@thelordofbarbarians736611 ай бұрын
This is one of the most vivid and deep troubling stories I've heard in a long time.. yet I absolutely loved this. One of your finest works of narration and thank you and the crew for this gift. Well done Som!
@kuresafaavela598711 ай бұрын
Who ever wrote this should put this whole story into a movie. I would definitely watch it.
@ShojoBakunyu2 ай бұрын
"WAS A Marine." Once a crayon eater always a crayon eater.
@darrylwilliams6888 Жыл бұрын
The message at the end of this video, was eerily what I needed to hear this morning. It literally brought chills when I heard it. Thnx
@nolangriggs2770Ай бұрын
Hands down grims best story
@skjarvis110 Жыл бұрын
I think the message that this story conveys is that no matter how broken you are, no matter how badly you have maltreated others, you still have value and you can still take those bad things and learn from those decisions and mistakes and be a better person. I'm one of those people, who has in the past not treated other people, I am also one who has been severely maltreated. Once I get myself pissed back together my plan is to help other people like me
@emmaobrien137611 ай бұрын
The message is wrong, though. A man who has beaten his wife, assaulted another woman (likely a minor, too), and killed his own child does not have value. That is a man who has taken more from the world than he could ever pay back. Let's stop with the atrocity apologia.
@balther10 Жыл бұрын
This is my favorite story. Period. Thank you for narrating. This story made me tear up at work
@malice1s1k90 Жыл бұрын
Always a perfect way to start the day! Thanks DS! Semper fi!
@CaseyClouse-qj8ok11 ай бұрын
Nam, the hippies. That was a hell of time. The man who raised me was a veteran. I didn't have a childhood, being raised by a cold blooded killer has a of giving you a different perspective in life.
@KuroKumo96 Жыл бұрын
This was a great story and a great narration. It’s really easy to judge from afar and it’s also easy to lie to yourself and justify any actions you might otherwise deem to be wrong. In the end, the world isn’t simply black and white… it’s full of evil and darkness, but it’s also full of love and light, and shades of greys and oranges and reds and blues.
@gordonwybo89810 ай бұрын
That was the deepest one I’ve heard from you, thanks!!!!
@wadeball747811 ай бұрын
Praise to the author of this story. This is so much more than some creepypasta.
@nucle3ar_wint3r Жыл бұрын
I grew up living with my grandpa. He used to be somewhat like Jack. And I used to be a lot like Ben. He would just yell and yell every day. I would just stare at him. He would shove me sometimes but, he only hit my once, when I was 15. I hit him back, right in the face. It was on and we were about to break into a full on fight. Then, we both stopped. He got that "what the hell am I doing" look on his face and I imagine I did too. From that day foward we started making attempts to fix our relationship and now, 2 years later, I'm proud to say we're both better men. This story made me realize just how bad things could have turned out if we didn't both accept that we had problems and we both needed help. I'm happy that now me and my grandpa are very close and have a much healthier relationship.
@oubliette88 Жыл бұрын
This one brought me to tears...in a liberating way. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
@wolfmoon343110 ай бұрын
This sad and thought provoking story reminds not only of the reason why I always keep a healthy and distant boundary from my immediate neighbours (lol) but reflects, the very real echoes of trauma that, are so often, embedded in soldiers of war and the long standing wounds that become the emotional scars of such an experience. It is also, I feel a lesson in addressing our inner demons and not leaving them to rage and ultimately, become regret (in later life)😔
@mov3m3nt84 Жыл бұрын
damn, i needed a long story at work and was thinking about it all day. come to check again to see this and danced literally lol. i appreciate the stories man
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
I hope you like it! :)
@kaybee264311 ай бұрын
This is such a compelling story. Very real. These dynamics play out in so many families every day.
@stefanstefan699811 ай бұрын
I love stories with more mature themes like this one, and so close to our reality.
@brotharobmusic Жыл бұрын
This one by far is my favorite story but the message at the end is so powerful! All we have is right now, the presence. Nothing else matters
@commandercorl154411 ай бұрын
This was a damn good narration, Somnium. You and Dusklight did a great job. I like it when the villains aren't some boogeyman, but instead, people.
@dragonmaid136010 ай бұрын
I used to be a journalist. Interviewed a chap from vietnam.very sad. Very dark. They should never have gone. Humanity at its worst.
@Maya-jz5qn Жыл бұрын
pov your neighbour reveals his deepest darkest secrets and u drop the hot tea on the internet u r so real for this ngl
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
haha xD
@TheIndianSpice10 ай бұрын
Awesome story with a positive message at the end. Great job!❤
@Darksomnium10 ай бұрын
Thank you so much!
@The-mcnuggit-man Жыл бұрын
T.W. Grims story’s have a sort of violent realistic vibe to them Even with the ones with things like the new fish its realistic but vile It reminds me of witherow, its vile and horrifying and i love it! I love storys that end with tinges of hope like these ones
@stevenmitchell57909 ай бұрын
Ok, I came into this story same as many others…expecting something paranormal or slasher type story but instead got a story that hooked me In and kept me till the end, this is a great story! What a roller coaster
@nickmendoza6615 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for this upload, just came back from a early thanksgiving and I’m sick, I’m bored out of my mind scrolling TikTok so this is really refreshing thank you so much, can’t wait for your next story 🙏🏽
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
oh dang i hope you feel better soon!
@scionofdorn91017 ай бұрын
I’m a Gulf War vet. My father’s a Vietnam vet. His father (now passed) was a D-Day vet. My other grandfather (also passed) was a Korean War vet. Each of us had stories we only shared with each other, other vets, or close friends and family. War isn’t glorious, fun, or righteous. It’s just a sad reality of the human condition. The only good that ever comes of it is when you and your buddies manage to come out of it alive, and maybe some other people’s lives are saved along the way if you have the fortune to be fighting to protect them. Other than that, it’s just toil, pain, loss, and for far too many, death. When you’ve seen that kind of ugliness with your own eyes, you don’t want to see it anymore. Only the foolish or those using them for their own gain think war is worthwhile. Hollywood and video game war is nothing like the real thing. The real thing is so much worse. There’s no do-overs., no rewind button or reloading. If you get killed, you’re dead, end of story. It’s such a simple thing, a small, simple truth. It’s the moment you realize that, truly comprehend that, usually when the bullets are coming your way and the dying starts, that you know nobody should desire war.
@mimikyutie477411 ай бұрын
Man, the way he flip flops between wanting to confess and feeling bad over how he was, to defending himself by saying 'well, me choking out my wife didn't *actually* hurt her, well, me screaming at my son on a daily basis didn't *actually* hurt him' is so fucked up and scary.
@Valleriena10 ай бұрын
This one I think is my new favourite, it's got the most emotion, it made me cry, so that's a W
@savagefurya1312 Жыл бұрын
What a great story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! Much love from SW Louisiana 😘
@WingManFang110 ай бұрын
This was pretty real, I wouldn’t be surprised if it’s from someone’s actual experience and not just a story on the internet.
@spookie1091 Жыл бұрын
gotta say i love ur upload times, its always when i get back from a shitty day of work and just boosts my mood by a million, keep up the good work man, much love
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
glad they can help :)
@Allestya6664 ай бұрын
This is such a horrifically awful, yet simultaneously beautiful story. The .essage i recieved from this story is that no matter what youve been through, even if circumstances led to some absolutely awful things, even if youve done some horrifically awful things, its never too late to start trying to do better.
@paleoleft11 ай бұрын
Jack having his life entirely uprooted by the draft, changing the course of his life and leading him to the lonely angry man we see feels like such real horror, like i could experience it and end up a similar person
@thaithaiox10 ай бұрын
Munching on a bag of shredded cheese, who is this guy? ME!
@johndrake4165 Жыл бұрын
Story was awesome as usual. Does seems to amaze me with your narrations I really feel and understand your story a whole lot better thanks Ronnie for all your hard work and dedication to bring us great Story hands down u da man bro 🙌 🙏 ❤
@Skyyywalkerr Жыл бұрын
LOVED this! Reminded me of my grandpa. Brought back some awesome memories! Thank you!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@The_DASHER Жыл бұрын
Hey ronnie you nailed the narration as always btw i have a little suggestion can you continue the ""backroads"" series no pressure tho its all upto you 😀
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
yeah i plan to do the next part of that soon!
@The_DASHER Жыл бұрын
@@Darksomniumthank you
@nicholasryan7766 Жыл бұрын
Backroads is by far my absolute favorite creepypasta of all time. Can't wait for the newest addition to the series 💯
@PuristicRaver11 ай бұрын
Hey man, that kinda rang a bell inside my head. I went trough some very traumatic events during my childhood (it wasnt war tough "just" physical & emotional abuse as wells as neglection)...and I kinda understand that the neighbor fell in a very dark hole. Luckily, I only turned on myself and not on others...but, dont ge me wrong here, thats also quite a stupid thing to do. Anyway...thank you very much for this story, it tells more about being a human than one might think. Keep that good work up, youre helping me through some dark times here.
@Patrickbatemaninurarea Жыл бұрын
What a great story! It made me think a lot about my own life and the mistakes I’ve made and the people who’ve come and go. As usual you did a great job narrating too! ❤
@finnjake2896 Жыл бұрын
You and @mrcreepypasta did a beautiful narration of this heartbreaking story dude
@sweetpeasarah1 Жыл бұрын
Just heard the worst news of my life…thank you for this story…it takes my mind off things for a small amount of time. Thank yiu I’m sure the story is amazing!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
oh no, i hope you're okay!
@sweetpeasarah1 Жыл бұрын
Thank you! My fiancés cancer has spread-they gave him a few months and we just started our life😭
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
Oh im so sorry to hear that, I cant imagine what you must be going through.
@scarletking8348 Жыл бұрын
I lost my father when I was 4 to cancer although a little different please know this... make the most of the time you have left with them and make the best memories with them and let everyone know of how great they are/were
@sweetpeasarah1 Жыл бұрын
@@Darksomnium thank you…I’m in shock…I know it hasn’t even begun to fully hit me, but in all honesty this community-all the work you do to put out such amazing context is such a comfort to me. So from the bottom of my heart thank yiu! What you do MATTERS a lot and helps so many❤❤❤
@dylanhider7090 Жыл бұрын
Hands down one of the best stories you've posted I loved every second of it, great meaning behind it
@assassinojack3432 Жыл бұрын
Let’s go another story to listen to at work!
@Darksomnium Жыл бұрын
have a good day at work!
@chasmoney915 ай бұрын
Wow this story shook me and it really doesn't relate to me personally, but I felt all the emotions. Just wow!