Ronnie, thanks so much for reading my story. I wrote this one many years ago, and there's actually a longer version which hints at the origins of the creature, but I only left some of those strands in the finished draft. The old factory where the creature lives is a real place that I encountered one night in Scotland, walking along a trail. It was an old power station and I remembered looking at it and instinctively feeling like I should keep my distance. I was certain I was being watched. In any case, a brilliant performance as always. You're one of the best out there. I really appreciate you taking the time, and hope to get those exclusive stories to you I promised many moons ago! I hope all is well. ~ Mike
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Wow that's so awesome thank you for the added details, i always love narrating your work!
@CleoHarperReturns9 ай бұрын
Finally, a third-person narrative! I've missed these! Jones seems okay; I respect any dog person. Okay, maybe not. Nope. Just -- no, Jones. No. I see what you did there, Michael Whitehouse. Beautifully written, thank you so much for sharing! A beautifully written parable. Off to go sub your channel now.💜
@coreyrogers48199 ай бұрын
Part 2?
@ThisHandleIsTakenTryThis9 ай бұрын
Part 2 poggers?
@IndrasChildDeepAsleep9 ай бұрын
You are such a good writer, I am honored to be listening to your work!
@faultyinterface9 ай бұрын
I don't think I've ever disliked a character this quickly. Well written and great narration.
@vanessaashford92039 ай бұрын
I honestly laughed out loud when, not only was he dying, but he got to see his stupid car, the lifeless hunt of metal this psycho cared about more than any living thing (because he could kill with it), get torn to pieces in front of him, like the only thing that would actually hurt him emotionally and the creature chose to destroy it in front of him, almost like it knew
@faultyinterface9 ай бұрын
@@vanessaashford9203 Every time he attributed the qualities of a living creature to that stupid car, I got so angry.
@Etamine9 ай бұрын
@@faultyinterface I sure do hope you don't eat any meat then 💀💀
@oren13059 ай бұрын
@@EtamineEating meat to live is not at all the same as killing for the sake of killing. You know that. Especially since some people eat meat locally or hunt their own, which is more ethical than factory farming.
@Etamine9 ай бұрын
@@oren1305 I respectfully disagree. None of these animals wanted to die. Most people can live without meat, but would rather kill animals because of taste pleasure. It's all just for fun.
@noelisbald9 ай бұрын
narrator: "hes not rotten to the core" jones: *is a godless freak murdering random animals for funsies and nothing else*
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
haha xD
@villager7369 ай бұрын
Hey now, those vultures, crows, and ravens need something to eat
@EnvyKay-zy8nq9 ай бұрын
"For funsies"😂💀
@princemafia55509 ай бұрын
This genuinely scared me bro. I’m probably the only person listening to this story walking through a factory complex reading this. I picked up my pace bro I was scared as hell
@rollotomasislawyer34059 ай бұрын
OK PeTA boy settle down!
@WV_Smoke9 ай бұрын
Only 8 minutes in, this guy deserves whatever about to happen. You should show nature some well deserved respect. I digress, please continue.
@DerrickRG919 ай бұрын
Nah. Animals are food.
@WV_Smoke9 ай бұрын
@DerrickRG91 oh I totally understand hunting. I just feel being cruel for fun is very different then hunting for meat to fill a freezer.
@meneither38349 ай бұрын
@@WV_Smoke Idk, killing is killing.
@captaindisabled83789 ай бұрын
@@meneither3834 do you eat food?
@meneither38349 ай бұрын
@@captaindisabled8378 Food ? Sure.
@huntercortez58849 ай бұрын
I have this saying, that not every great story is something original and grandiose. Sometimes it is an old idea, a simple story, but handled with such care that it shines above others of its kind. This, is definitely one of those stories, one of my favorites- despite all things. And your narration added so much to the experience. The sound design in this one was particularly immersive, really helped increase the dread and suspense, I was honestly impressed. And your of course voice work was excellent like always. 😊
@devinedgin6739 ай бұрын
You have to get extremely niche for an original story at this point. People (like Hollywood) could definitely do less copy and pasting though
@FernBlackwood19959 ай бұрын
@@devinedgin673 Absolutely, if the inspirations were taken from more than one thing, rather that the copy-paste/“make everything the same” method, it might ALMOST make it feel like a new idea and it would absolutely be more refreshing than getting the same movie again just because “it’s what sells”.
@leadedbison19979 ай бұрын
That's not really a saying but yes
@huntercortez58849 ай бұрын
@@leadedbison1997 yea "saying" isn't even the right word. It's more just something I say lol
@leadedbison19979 ай бұрын
@@huntercortez5884 I was up late and being pedantic, sorry 😂
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Content warning for this story, it contains Animal Abuse Hey everyone! I recently got a new mic, so if you would like to give me feedback on how it sounds, i would appreciate it!
@deanmorgan18219 ай бұрын
Sounds great! Hope you're doing good man!
@capritatalent72839 ай бұрын
it sounds preem man!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you! and yeah im doing pretty good! about to clean the office :D@@deanmorgan1821
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
yay! im glad it sounds good :) @@capritatalent7283
@charlottesometimes69779 ай бұрын
The 🎤 mic 🎤 sounds nice. Check 1
@mnalghrenn8 ай бұрын
It's kind of funny that the narration is so thoughtful and deeply worded while the subject of the story probably couldn't rub two thoughts together.
@darksecretsz9 ай бұрын
I love the psychological depth explored in this horror story. It goes beyond jump scares and delves into the human psyche. Truly thought-provoking!
@eric42649 ай бұрын
The sound designs are so well done and make me get into the story a lot more.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoy it!
@DonChodle9 ай бұрын
@@Darksomniumhow do you design the sounds
@gregg.6179 ай бұрын
Mic sounds great. Your dedication to sound quality, design, and music really sets you apart in the creepypasta narration community. Lot of KZbinrs have great voices for this, but you have the whole package.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you so much :)
@lyndellrobinson36119 ай бұрын
Excellent story. Beautifully written. I think the unlikable protagonist's changing view of the "monster" was an interesting touch. It added depth to the character. Great sound design and narration as always. The new mic was crisp and clear.
@kaos24059 ай бұрын
The sounds of the creature were awesome with headphones. If the audio in this video is what the mic can do then I am certainly looking forward to more videos from you.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
im so glad you enjoyed it!
@ethanpine56699 ай бұрын
The slow hunt, anticipation, slimmer of hope that would be crushed in an instant. 10 points. Great hunt.
@TheLooterArmy9 ай бұрын
Not even 10mins in and i had to stop the story to take several deep breaths. I dont think ive ever wanted for the death of a character more than right now. I remind myself to have faith in DS and press play.... And my faith in you is rewarded! The mutilated pigeon coo sound effect came across so perfect. The suspense and fear was tangible despite my hatred of the jerk. Well played. Also now the sound of everything gives me a "danger close" vibe, making the whole crafted world feel uncomfortably present on the same plane as where i sit. Absolutely loving it.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Agreed haha, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
@TheLooterArmy9 ай бұрын
Oh dude, you just made my day this this one, for sure. Heard and felt it like I was inside it
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
yay happy to hear that :)
@mrmarksman49659 ай бұрын
Now I'm thinking that creature was the cause of the abandoned area. Great narration!
@dog-gone-it59449 ай бұрын
The sound was perfect. I live in the country where we have all kinds of critters that come into our yard. My dogs trapped something under the house once, and I came out to see what it was. I sent the dogs inside, and for over an hour, I could hear what sounded like water escaping from a hose or pipe. My first thought was a rattle snake, but I'd heard them before, and there wasn't a true rattle sound. Truly sounded like water. I spent a lot of time searching. Finally, it was just dark enough for my flashlight to show more. I finally saw a large body of the snake. I was on my knees, head down near the ground to where my hair was lying on the ground. I looked up only to realize the body I saw was only half of the snake. The other half was right beside my head. The part with the fangs and eyes staring at me was less than 1 foot away. That was the scariest thing I've ever experienced. I managed to get up, and I shot it. The rattlesnake was 5.5 feet long. The part under the house was so large that I thought it was curled up trying to hide. I never thought there was more of it.
@VickaCastello9 ай бұрын
Your audio is crispy clear at the beginning and then for the story I started to feel it a lot more velvety, very interesting quality, it definitely takes more on the air that comes through when you talk, but it sounds pretty good, congrats on the upgrade! 🎉🎉🎉
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
ah yeah i didnt think about it and recorded the intro with my old mic haha, so the story itself is with the new mic. thank you for the feedback!
@VickaCastello9 ай бұрын
Still sounds awesome, no worries, thanks a lot for the upload, as always just in time to make a boring day good 😁👌👌
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you vicka! i hope you have a great day :)
@bobbygonzales839 ай бұрын
Great story! I almost thought the beast would say, "2 points". The audio was great!
@xxxFALLENRACExxx9 ай бұрын
Oh so i definitely heard the difference between the 2 mics the old one caught more of your mids and highs and the new mic definitely way more dynamic where your range of low to high is really heard. Even the raspiness in your voice really come through. Did you get a new fancy condenser mic and preamp? @Darksomnium
@denniseriksson61359 ай бұрын
The creature then smiled and thought to itself: 10 points!
@Faint3668 ай бұрын
I totally thought that was gonna be the last line lol. “And as his light went out he heard one last thing before he died: ‘Ten pointssss.’” _Dark Somnium music outro_
@thetowerofbabble63076 ай бұрын
Now that sounds like the ending to a Tales of the Crypt episode!
@mjmaslin9 ай бұрын
Dude, when you’re able to make basic stories sound so thrilling and exciting it says a lot… also I’m really a geek lol LOVEE the sound designing & composing, keep it up :)
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you so much! :)
@mjmaslin9 ай бұрын
😎❤️👌🏿
@Annihilation_Studios9 ай бұрын
FINALLY! my favorite type of story. Old school classic ghost/monster story like that skinwalker one you covered awhile ago.
@fishsan45089 ай бұрын
There is so much detail about what Jones is thinking but the whole time I'm internally screaming "what happened to the Chinese food he was delivering?!". He drove to an abandoned factory... Why? It didn't say anything about him leaving the food for a lone night guard. It's the whole reason he's in the road, the damn sociopath, and the story doesn't tell me where the food went. I'm gonna be wondering all day.
@mayaevansli89949 ай бұрын
I rarely come across a creepypasta with a more awful protag, truly deserving of the glory torment they get. I actually considered stopping because I was so disgusted by his internal monologue, red flags the size of texas. But I waited it out because the pacing had me so damn curious! Definitely worth it! Well done! Also, the new mic is wonderful!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
glad you liked it! :)
@metallicbigtoe39499 ай бұрын
4 mins 44 seconds, that's all it took for me to wish a horrible ironic fate on the protagonist, to the writer of this story I say. Well played 👏
@aj97519 ай бұрын
Wow... just finished. First off your mic is damn good and the sound effects are impeccable as always! Such a strange creature, the sounds added actually helped me form a mental image. I am a fan of 3rd person stories, especially in horror. First person tends to give away the survivors ending or might lead to, God forbid, "as i write this" ending lol. Thanks for adding the content warning. And yea... can't say I'm so sad that he died lol. Now he can get a glimpse of what it's like to be hunted and killed by something he could never possibly comprehend.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Thank you for the feedback! And I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
@blueismylove31289 ай бұрын
When listening I was so hoping the 3rd person perspective would mean he'd die. I'm glad I'm not the only one who hated this guy.
@nevyanplamenov54098 ай бұрын
@@blueismylove3128 It was his parents fault he was like that, i mean he literally remembers how his dad mess around and laughs at his dead pet hamster while he was crying
@blueismylove31288 ай бұрын
@@nevyanplamenov5409 Most bad people have reasons why they are "bad" 🤷🏾♀️
@nevyanplamenov54098 ай бұрын
@@blueismylove3128 Yeah, i mean he isn't a bad person by choice
@Thealseie9 ай бұрын
Good stuff man, as much as I love the long videos about aliens or ancient horrors, sometimes it's nice to just have a nice creepy story about a monster. Oh, and the mic seems good as far as I can tell. I'm not much of an audiophile but I cant hear anything to complain about
@anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu95519 ай бұрын
20-40 minute really scary stories are my favorite for two hoursI wanna watch a movie TV shows or read but I do enjoy some very long pastas
@GrimM0nk3y9 ай бұрын
Good, that guy got what was coming to him. And the new mic sounds great
@anotherhuman81739 ай бұрын
This is the best one I've heard in a long time. Perfectly balanced writing, perfect buildup and suspense, a perfect, grimy, dilapidated atmosphere, a fascinatingly alien but almost plausible monster, and a protagonist just relatable enough to sympathize with and just nasty enough to deserve what he got. Huge props to the author, and thanks for another great narration!
@cyndytower12637 ай бұрын
Actually the sound was perfect. Clear and able to hear the words very cleanly, the background music was as it should be, there but not overwhelming the talking. It just to be some of the best recording I've heard in a while. Thank you for caring for your listeners. This was the perfect mix for everyone. Thank you and God Bless.
@AnimeBae3709 ай бұрын
The tension you built with the sounds/music in this story were 100/10. I'm in a fully lit room with 12+ people and it was creeping me out! 😵💫❤️
@princemafia55509 ай бұрын
This genuinely scared me bro. I’m probably the only person listening to this story walking through a factory complex reading this. I picked up my pace bro I was scared as hell
@princemafia55509 ай бұрын
This story needs a sequel
@dantekinkade87659 ай бұрын
The new mic sounds great and unlike other stories where I feel bad for the main character having horrible things happen to them, this is one where I am hoping that he gets the worst fate.
@jakethegoat10289 ай бұрын
Gonna be a long comment I think. First the story is great, love the audio and love your voice. It's nice and relaxing. I found it kinda of funny when he asked for sympathy when confronted with the creature. Like bro you hit it with your truck and are like "please spare me." like always keep up the great work and the great stories
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
im glad you enjoyed the story jake! and yeah its not often theres a story where we dislike the main character haha xD
@FireTurkey9 ай бұрын
This is the first time I've actually hated a character in one of your narrations, I can't wait for him to get it, lol.
@ze_doodles18859 ай бұрын
Exactly the same way I feel.
@ze_doodles18859 ай бұрын
Not only animal abuse but misogyny as well. 😅
@FireTurkey9 ай бұрын
@ze_doodles1885 I'm someone who's trying to get into conservation education the animal thing just HfjddjjdjDJDJRJdhdj
@thecassandraeffectvsperilo67549 ай бұрын
Was *NOT prepared* for that jump scare at 52:20 😳 *Officially the first time* a creepypasta made me literally jolt up, knocking everything out of my lap! 😂
@Hustler0ne9 ай бұрын
I recently found your channel and I got to say that it's A+ material and production. I already have a few stories saved as favourites. Hope you get to 1 million subscribers! Rare to find a gem like you.
@firefury60539 ай бұрын
love the new mic, DS. happy for you & almost an hour story! thank you, listening now. have a good week!! ;w;
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Thank you! You too!
@1ronw1ll789 ай бұрын
Its nice to hear a more old school, strait to the point creepypasta sometimes. This was definitely more traditional in the strait forward sense. Great Cryptid/ hybrid monster too. The uncanny head with a spidery disjointed body.. creepy as hell. He saw those eyes in the dark so i take it this thing has eyeshine too? Great night vision makes it a nocturnal hunter and natural hooked claws with its speed and ambush capabilities makes it an Apex predator
@negligent_omnicide9 ай бұрын
Really good creature horror story. The sound design was really well done, both the sounds of the creature and the music. When he discovers the thing in the wheel-well, the tension conveyed thru the soundtrack is on point. The end tho, when he is attacked just as he makes it outside and lays there dying, this is THE SHIT. That music is fucking awesome. The high drone gives anxiety, the strings have incredible weight, and every time the sub hits it drives this darkness into your bones. Altogether, the music in this scene feels existentially like something absolutely brutal and most irrevocably final.
@officialtac8549 ай бұрын
Your mic sounds amazing. Don't change a thing. Also, what's great about channels such as yours, iv told you before, is the mind who writes it. You put the cherry on top of course. But as time goes on, especially after listening for years or in your case, producing and narration, is simply the endless possibilities. If you continued doing this and never gave up you could do this for the rest of your life. Cheers friend.
@playfulpanthress9 ай бұрын
Great story!! I'm so happy the monster was defeated!!
@KiwiBirb639 ай бұрын
Mic sounds great and clear. The sounds you produced for this one though... Omg, terrifying and perfect! You are seriously talented and I love your work! I've listened to about every single video on your channel 😁 I love getting immersed while I'm welding at work, makes the time pass quick!
@deaninegant27259 ай бұрын
This was a hoot. I read it as revenge of the road kill. It had a similar vibe to the story from that anthology Trick r Treat with the old man that had to face Jack and then got taken out by the revnants of his victims…. Or maybe that’s just me. While I know you asked specifically for audio feedback… I’m not the person to help. It sounded good. Your productions always sound polished to me though. Thanks for the great stories, always!
@ghotlygamer9 ай бұрын
Great to listen to in the barracks before lights out, great narration as always, the new mic sounds a bit less clear. Best way I can put it is it sounds more stuffy and less crisp than usual, either way, this soldier appreciates your hard work, Merry Christmas in advance!
@moms799 ай бұрын
I really don't think you can do much better. Your voice is captivating and enjoyable. Awesome as always
@Or_Am_I_Alpharius9 ай бұрын
38th request for The Left Right Game to be re-recorded 🤞🏻 The new mic sounds great! Love from 50🎄
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
You're slowly convincing me 😎 and thank you for the feedback!
@parfentealexandru24829 ай бұрын
EXCELENT! I was longing for a creepypasta right about now! Thanks somnium!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
I hope you like the story!
@tebetramirez32099 ай бұрын
Let’s goooo❤ thank u for uploading while I’m at work❤ my head hurts from yesterday Christmas party from work 😅😂
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
I hope you have a great day at work! and i hope you feel better haha xD
@lokeyacolyte21459 ай бұрын
God, this one made me feel physically ill! Which means it's a great story. You did an amazing job narrating such a twisted individual.
@johannageisel53909 ай бұрын
A guy with a politics degree who thinks that wildlife is vermin deserves to be eaten by a giant frog. I hope so much that giant frog appears in this story!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Haha xD
@u12uNiiGuNx9 ай бұрын
Oh my this really scared me, I’ve been listening to creepy pasta for years, this is second one that actually was scary. Just to note I usually listen going to sleep and this kept me awake as I was too scared to sleep, specifically the first half with the monster creeping up the undercarriage. Brings me back to the one a few years ago you covered with the being buried alive. And the witch or something is digging up to you from below. Your sound fx with your narration is a match made in heaven (hell?) ❤
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
glad you enjoyed it! :)
@lachabean11349 ай бұрын
This is going to be a good one! I just started listening to you videos again recently and they’ve been helping me out, the new mic also sounds really good. Thank you!
@BiigBean9 ай бұрын
YES a spooky story about a spooky monster. I love stories like this 💛
@simonyin92299 ай бұрын
the microphone sounds great, Its warm and full. Also the narration and sounddesign is top notch as i came to expect from your work. Great work thanks for sharing
@OfficialJP989 ай бұрын
Wow, the voice narration sounds crisper, also there's a subtle change in the hiss sound too, I don't know if it's just me, or because of the mic or how you were mixing it, but it sounds different, in a nice way - loved it! Of course, always impressed with the foley and sound designs 🔥 As per the story, I enjoyed it, classic scary stuff. I was for some reason expecting him to run over a person for whatever reason (I'm sorry 😅), and that scratching thing was someone clawing for their dear life, I don't know what I was thinking haha. Anyway, keep it up man, you're awesome! 🤘
@TyroneisWhite9 ай бұрын
Mic is great. Have listened to every video and only seen progress in your narration. Hope you see this! P.s we need some more space stories ;)
@Existntlangst9 ай бұрын
Mic sounds awesome. You sound great. Loving the sound effects!
@mysticharlowe9 ай бұрын
Sounds great! Your voice actually sounds much more velvety and like it has more depth. Great video as always
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Awesome, thanks for the feedback!
@taylorfain69579 ай бұрын
I love this. The audio is beautifully clear. It was sharply noticeable as soon as you started talking.
@MissNurseNoir9 ай бұрын
The audio is mixed well. It has better bass, so overall, your voice has a fuller sound. The music is subtle in the mix but audible. It's not distracting ❤
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
awesome, thank you for the feedback!
@eleanor03129 ай бұрын
I really liked this story.The ones with build up like this are good. Reminds me a little of "Turn it Off", one you did a while ago. New mic sounds good.
@dustygardendormouse9 ай бұрын
i enjoyed the sound design a lot!! not too much, not too little, just overall enjoyable and adding the right touches at the right places ^_^ ! this story was very refreshing and fun to follow along, i love the weird stuff happening around abandoned areas trope as well as the karma lesson one. and, ur new mic sounds great to me :D !!
@MrMetalDanny9 ай бұрын
Your narration is as awesome as ever the mic really does your narrating justice nice upgrade I’ve always love the background music in your videos as well 😀
@realtalkwithj-man51959 ай бұрын
The new mic sounds great , you have always had superb quality but the new mic is crisper sounding . Great narration like always .
@richardfierro26999 ай бұрын
New mic sounds great. You still deliver the same quality voice wise but the texture of it feels a lot smoother than the old mic. Definitely a good thing i like it a lot z congrats on the new mic!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Awesome, thank you!
@xmastersrule9 ай бұрын
I love your videos and high quality work! I like the time you put in your audio and it makes is just so mutch better then all other channels out there
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
wow thank you so much!
@andrewkubisch92259 ай бұрын
“An aged breath filled with flem and fluid of a failing biology” such a phenomenal narration I can really appreciate, paints such a precise image in my mind of every scene. Incredibly well done 👍🏼
@kaygordon74549 ай бұрын
Love your stories The mic is GREAT!!
@kidcthulhufortney13209 ай бұрын
This was rally good. The sound design was AMAZING. And I liked that it was open ended and weird rather than over-explaining the monster.
@bitmen12969 ай бұрын
I enjoyed the sound design in this story. Even though the story structure is simple the extra sound effects gives it a lot more texture and presence, having a great narrator also doesn't hurt 😉
@smallsynth7 ай бұрын
i've always loved Rural places and roads, it's so quiet and solemn. This seems like the perfect thing to listen to
@kellyosullivan9909 ай бұрын
Now that was some good old fashioned body horror. And like you said I was hoping he would get what's coming to him. Lovely story as always. For the sound it was awesome for the most part. The mic upgrade really helps bring out your voice, just be careful with the s, t, p and st sounds. Thanks to that upgrade in mic quality you bombed those sounds a touch. Not to bad just enough to be noticeable with a set of headphones on. For the extra mixing loved it. The sounds help raise the tension in a story as you said didn't have that much. For listening quality the walking on gravel sound could be turned down a touch. It didn't over power your voice but was just loud enough to be distracting. The one part where the sound effects did over power your voice was when the creature hit Jones in the face and it was hard to hear what you said. Not sure if that was a choice to appease the KZbin algorithm or not but it was hard to hear you in that spot. Anyway a great story as always, and I hope my thoughts on the new mic and mixing helped. And I'm looking forward to your next video.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you so much for the feedback! i really appreciate it!and im glad you enjoyed the story!
@kellyosullivan9909 ай бұрын
Your welcome@@Darksomnium
@Mecht009 ай бұрын
Love the new mic man, keep up the great work.
@fancyelk23739 ай бұрын
As a deer I am incredibly offended at being called vermin by someone named “jones”. The audacity of such a generic name.
@dustygardendormouse9 ай бұрын
literally. as a mouse i personally find vermin to be a compliment (not to invalidate your being upset, you have every right to be! and well yeah you’re not a mouse so i see why you’d feel hurt)! but this “jones” character turning it into a derogatory term really just screams insecurity about himself being a basic btch to me. unbelievable >:(
@X3cloudX39 ай бұрын
I love to hear your stories when I drive my car this was an extra scary story for this scenario lol
@benjaminh.morgan31939 ай бұрын
I feel like the main characters unlikable nature creates a narrative parallel. He opens up by talking about the animals he would or wouldn’t kill based on their ability to love or be loved, and by the end of it we find ourselves hoping (at least to some degree) that he survives despite being quite precisely the type of beast he would not think twice to kill.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
ah yeah thats interesting, I wondered if the creater was supposed to be some sort of reflection of him, but then i thought i might be looking too deep into it and it was more so just him being in the wrong place at the wrong time, but also him putting himself in that place by killing animals.
@nitalowrey50219 ай бұрын
The new mic is very crisp and clear. Congratulations!
@spinyvegeta19 ай бұрын
A quaint little story that came out of nowhere. Loved it!
@stephenstevens65739 ай бұрын
The new mic is deathly quiet!! No interference! Sounds great! Story was great and your delivery fantastic, as always! Thank you. Your little insomniac
@TheStuart-of-Cosby9 ай бұрын
Awesomeness as always Mr Somnium. Its another cold day on the job site. Nothing like a good Creepypasta and a Heater to pass my hour Lunch break Thanks again my Friend
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
ahve a good day!
@Anti-Villain-Wolf9 ай бұрын
Been a fan of Michael Whitehouse since the story Bedtime. Remember hearing it many years ago
@MarkusVeller9 ай бұрын
This is a very cold take but I actually really liked the jumpscare near the end. I expected some horrible closing accident but the suddenness of it really boosted the spook factor up! Even if it did nearly make me slip on ice on the way to work, hahah!
@CaseyGray589 ай бұрын
Creature reminded me of the monster from Splice for some reason especially the things at the beginning of the movie. That was the first time I had a chill down my spine from a story in a while. Bravo. The audio was absolutely perfection dear boy!
@terryslabbert59 ай бұрын
The best horror narrator has posteddd😫😫🖤🤌
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thank you so much!
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
B)
@abbywolf97019 ай бұрын
I think the new mic gives a much better depth of sound! Only thing that stuck out to me is the better resonance. Very nice quality!
@lc14359 ай бұрын
There's got to be a part 2 of this one 😀 I want to know what they are building!
@spadefish51467 ай бұрын
The sound design in this one is absolutely amazing! It's been a hot second since I've listened to one of your videos, and I'm so glad I jumped back into this one.
@Scp-6819 ай бұрын
I feel as though you’re somewhat… louder; In the sense that I can hear even more detail in your voice. I think it’s a step up for sure! Adds to the immersion.
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
@teslastellar9 ай бұрын
Thanks for the story 🙂 Audio was fine 👍
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Ty! :)
@0Ciju09 ай бұрын
I've been loving the upload consistency!
@RyllenKriel9 ай бұрын
I loved coming into this story cheering for the monster. Well done!
@BookOfWorms9 ай бұрын
Great story! Mic seems to be good from my angle. Good echo effect, and your deeper voice is still alive and well
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
thanks for the feedback!
@SkillSMB9 ай бұрын
i'm two sentences in and already eating this up 😋
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
glad youre enjoying it!
@SkillSMB9 ай бұрын
YO YO THE ANIMALS
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
ikr?! :O
@briealice10659 ай бұрын
The sound and story is amazing as always. 😁
@nickmendoza66159 ай бұрын
I’ve been missing out on your videos the moment they come out but I’m glad I got this one as soon as possible. Can’t wait to hear your bigger projects when they release. Keep up the great work man 👍🏽
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
hey! thanks for coming by so early! I hope you enjoy the story!
@Gym_bros5089 ай бұрын
New mic sounds amazing man keep up the stories i loved your settlement series
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@superbird.mcthunderfly9 ай бұрын
You are by far my favourite story telling channel out there! The quality of your content is unmatched and I really love your voice. Every winter I binge your channel while knitting. Thank you for all the hours of amazing and spooky stories! :)
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
wow thank you so much :)
@bosozoku_volvo9 ай бұрын
Microphone sounds amazing. Great narration as always, and the story was super solid and very neat. Main character was kinda twisted and probably deserved it imo
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@pipthewarrior37389 ай бұрын
New mic is good so far
@Darksomnium9 ай бұрын
awesome! ty!
@ghostfacekilo63109 ай бұрын
Sweet! I heard Jason Hill narrate this on CTFDN, love your version too!
@sadiebrown80509 ай бұрын
I would’ve been genuinely upset if the main character had made it…I think it’s the first time I’ve ever felt this way😅