Mystic Heirs Episode 1: A Hidden Truth Part One (MCTV)

[@PRO_VIPER]

_A very big episode as for the beginning of the story, a lot of things I saw, it was wonderful ✨._ _It's already like a routine, Mack's father, King Mason, has forgotten what it's to be human and has turned into a tyrant who thinks everyone around him is his servant 😔._ _Mack is an adorable prince with a good soul 💖, ready to do anything to protect the people of the kingdom, considering it the most important duty for him. I feel sorry for him that his parents are constantly fighting over their differences in worldview, which causes him to wander alone like a shadow, accumulating hatred ❤‍🔥..._ _Good thing he's not alone, Hazelbeard's wisdom and Rebecca's ability to be a true friend saves him from falling into the abyss of hatred 😮‍💨🙂, which can make him much worse than his father, hatred turns anyone into a monster 😑. Especially after the most interesting moment - he has the blood of the Gods in him, the golden blood of creation 💛, the line between creation and destruction especially in his case is very thin, because everything was created from the balance of these forces 🌀._ _The interesting plans of the dark creatures and their "Mistress" to enslave the world at the very end of the episode inspire interest, so I wait for the next episode 😁._ _Ah yes, true friends can be more than friends, can't they 😏? This could be that moment for the future (which you wrote me about in your reply to another comment) that combines romance in itself 🤭?_

[@apple-uh5ui]

WFT BRO WHY DO YOU HAVE TO write SOOOO MUCH

[@PRO_VIPER]

@@apple-uh5ui _Not why, just wrote from the heart, this work deserves such comments 😌._

[@GRUGorious]

I like seeing the MCTV tag to a new age of this expansive genre of Minecraft!

[@WarlockGamingYT]

I feel ya, my hope is to continue bringing this content

[@Fireplayz14YT]

Isn't it from favremysabre??? Why roleplays r diein vid?

[@GRUGorious]

@@Fireplayz14YT yeah, it is and I’m EXCITED!

[@NotuxCreations]

Nice to see you made some use of my old Conderial map and made it come alive in this way, appreciate the link in credits✌️

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Thanks man! Good to know you're appreciated👍😁

[@BingBong1-27]

OMG LMAO!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝

[@isabellacullen1349]

Mac: I’m going to kick your asses. I love that part. 🤣😂😍 It must took a lot hard work but this was awesome! I can’t wait for part two!

[@WarlockGamingYT]

It truly did! I'm glad someone can appreciate a good bit of comedy 😂

[@bryaneduication8310]

I love comedy, esp. if the tone hits right! Idk but I always look for good writing within the series and I believe this story would tie in perfeclty to Mob Kingdoms over at Giga Entertainment

[@hdl_tw]

That's actually a creative way to tell story, and the voice acting, the map building, the camera setting and the story setting is amazing! Good job and I'm looking forward to the next episode! - (a little suggestion: maybe you could try to cut out the unnecessary pause after some of the lines!)

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Noted, thanks for the critique! Glad you enjoyed the episode!

[@bryaneduication8310]

I agree, you should also try watching Mob Kingdoms over at Giga Entertainment, they put a lot of work into the story and while the prelude is rocky the story is awesome!

[@hdl_tw]

@@bryaneduication8310 I watched it when I saw comments of this video, that's actually awesome as well! And I noticed that there are many similar contents on KZbin, so we should support videos like that!

[@gigablast0228]

@@hdl_tw don't be shy to tap that red button now ;)

[@hdl_tw]

@@gigablast0228 I did a week ago haha. Stay creative!!!

[@MayjkAnimations]

Love the details on the skins and just the world itself. I'm excited to see what you pull out for episode 2! Keep up the motivation, I love seeing more of these kind of roleplay videos!

[@bryaneduication8310]

This is a really good series and it's awesome to watch, but might I also recommend Giga Entertainment they also have a great roleplay but was unfairly supported by the YT algorithm and all of us minecraft roleplayers need to stick together lol

[@scottishwarrior3547]

Don’t uh go to drastic with head shaking it uh distracting, but you are doing amazing

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Thank you! And thank you for the nice constructive criticism 😁👍

[@RyalnS.-ks2ln]

Don't say uh so much it's distracting😂😂

[@puppylove-gaming]

Even if this is not read, I will say… Well done on the episode! Keep up the good work; and take your time on the episodes. I saw this on my recommended page and decided to watch; I read a few comments and saw the accusations but also saw that you handled that quite professionally and kindly along with your acquaintances. I do want to note that cutting out unnecessary parts that aren’t needed could help with the episodes; those cut out parts could make a great bloopers reel. Fighting scenes are something I will never figure out on how to do, of course I can’t animate; but you did well with them. Creativity is key for sure! But I will say, it’s sometimes hard to come up with a story that’s never been done before. I will also note that I saw a comment saying that the first episode was the same as Mob Kingdoms, but after watching both I don’t exactly see where they are the same on start. But I will say that either way, if you have permission to use similar characters, stories, etc; then I would think it’s fine. Of course, don’t take the whole thing of another story but I can see that it was made to be your own in someway.

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Thank you!! This comment is both very nice and very insightful! I'll admit on the video length that was the one BIG thing I didn't really notice and I've had plenty of talks with my crew about fixing that, and I've taken measures to ensure the second episode corrects that mistake. Coming up with a story CAN be very difficult if you don't have a certain amount of experience but at that point I had enough to get a good start. No Minecraft role play is written perfectly, even Aphmau's my street and obviously Mob Kingdoms too, but as long as it has that value shared by both crew and audiences, it's got a chance, I love making stories purely for the fun of them and not necessarily for the money, not that it's a bad thing or anything, though sometimes you have to find a balance between the money and the fun of it. On the fight scenes, I'll admit they were not the easiest things to choreograph especially considering all fights were done with the blockbuster mod using custom npc character models, which is also what's very unique about the filming of the episodes, and that some are done with actual body across and other segments with blockbuster. This was a very helpful comment and one that I will absolutely treasure, I hope I can continue to fill your feed with pure entertainment ,action, and comedy😁

[@puppylove-gaming]

I honestly had nothing against the length of the video actually, I just figured that maybe I’d give the idea of bloopers for scenes like the “And scene..” background voice that was heard in the first scene. I can’t agree more! I understand the difficulties of making a series; one that will catch audience attention as to entertain. Having fun with making a series, or just a normal video, is always good; makes it better on the creator and crew. Definitely! I’m sure, but you seem to have done well with that. Just don’t push yourself and take all the time you need to create all future episodes. I wish you luck on your journey of being a Minecraft Role Player!

[@BiMoBoo]

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[@silvanhaven6447]

This is very well done. Really it's the sort of quality I'd expect from a channel with hundreds of thousands of subscribers rather than a little over a hundred. The panning shots, music, and especially the voice acting. It's clear that a lot of time and effort went into making this all work. A couple notes. Just some rough bits that stuck out among an overall really well polished production. First is the combat. It's incredibly hard to make combat look cinematic and interesting in Minecraft as I'm sure you've noticed. The fight with the bandits at the start was good. Short clips that suggested certain movements rather than outright showed them. With something like the fight at the end where it's an extended battle between two individuals you might be better off doing a series of stills. Each player model positioned to show a snapshot of the action. Essentially like a comic book. Again, loved it and you got yourself both a like and a subscribe. This thing is probably three times as long as your average episode of a minecraft roleplay on youtube and you definitely took advantage of that runtime.

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Yeah the runtime was twice as long as intended and I'm working out those kinks so it won't repeat the next episode, but I agree on the stills, which as you might have noticed I had two through out the episode, one in each fight with Mack, and these help convey complex poses in fight scenes. I definitely want to experimemt with more of those in fight scenes as the series continues whenever a fight scene is required. This was overall good critique and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[@silvanhaven6447]

@@WarlockGamingYT I did notice the still you had in there and they definitely helped. I've seen the technique used in a fair amount of roleplays and always thought that some motion lines might help impact some extra feeling of motion and force to them. Like a few sweeping lines showing the path that a sword cut through the air. Long and/or thick lines would show the viewer that it was a big swing with a lot of force behind it. Stuff like that.

[@bryaneduication8310]

Buddy then i've got an offer for you! Try going over to Mob Kingdoms and checking out a channel called Gigablast02, he and his friends put a lot of great quality into their content, especially for season 1

[@supersavagegamer410]

Hello there, so love the episode and hope your having a great day! I’ve been doing the same thing your doing with these Minecraft roleplays for like 6 years now and I wanna know what’s your secret? How are you gaining more views than me that fast?

[@Roicht]

great

[@tifany1368]

Hi, I'm a new sub and I say that this series is great I loved it!! and I want to see what will happen!!✨✨

[@bryaneduication8310]

Try watching Mob Kingdoms over at Giga entertainment, their teams collaberated to make mystic heirs and if you loved this one you'd enjoy mk just as much!

[@Ken220]

This is a great series I am looking foward for episode 2

[@MythicalStrike]

Good job on the video Keep it up

[@bryaneduication8310]

I know right? Such a great way to introduce a series, but might I also recommend checking out Gigablast02 for his series known as Mob Kingdoms. It has great story and characters!

[@bluesir9683]

This was good you need to make more

[@bryaneduication8310]

I agree and it has awesome characters similar to Mob Kingdoms over at Giga Entertainment (in which helped make this series possible) If you like this you would love that too :D

[@Kenzieandher]

this needs more views.

[@notexistingg]

Hey there! I created a story and I decided to name it “The Mystic Heirs”, then I searched it up the to see if the name already existed and I discovered this video. Do you mind if I keep my story title?

[@WarlockGamingYT]

No, I would change the title entirely. Thank you for at least asking though

[@gigablast0228]

As executive director/producer, I think it's okay that you can still call it Mystic Heirs, lol. As long as the story is different. The title of Mystic Heirs can not be copyrighted, seeing how it is not an original title, lol. Thank you for asking :)

[@WarlockGamingYT]

@@gigablast0228 yep, I can confirm he has permission to say this :)

[@WarlockGamingYT]

@@notexistingg History? If you mean the title of my series then no

[@shapeshifterandmany]

32nd Subscriber

[@bryaneduication8310]

Try being the 341'st subscriber over at Giga entertainment ;)

[@Ken220]

I would love to see one of the gods who trains the prince on how to master his powers and discovers the origins of his powers and family came from. I'll let you decide on the rest of the story i don't want to spoil it for everyone.

[@bryaneduication8310]

try Mob Kingdoms as well if you want some cool action like that

[@elyanahdickerhoof7968]

Please do more parts I love this so much

[@WarlockGamingYT]

You betcha there's gonna be more 😉

[@elyanahdickerhoof7968]

@@WarlockGamingYT can’t wait ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

[@bryaneduication8310]

I know it's a really great story but if we help out both Mystic Heirs and Mob Kingdoms, we could see a cross over between the two !!

[@Shamoose]

Well made.

[@bryaneduication8310]

Have you checked out Mob Kingdoms on Gigablast02 yt channel? I think it needs a proper advertisement

[@Shamoose]

@@bryaneduication8310 how lovely

[@Shamoose]

@@GoatZillaPower cool

[@Something5omethingSomething]

Keep it up

[@BiMoBoo]

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[@whatifmaster1531]

Hope you upload more soon I'm quite interested on your journey and I wonder if you're going to be like aphmau.

[@bryaneduication8310]

Well he wasn't alone in this process, you should go check out giga entertainment and view some of their content. His character in that story is over there too :D

[@BFS_Productions]

not bad

[@amberrowan2441]

Pls make this a series

[@WarlockGamingYT]

This is a series 😁

[@justinlovenduski4163]

I know this one came out relatively recently but is there a set date for the second episode? Don't wanna be pushy just asking. Also great first episode 👍

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Not necessarily but should take less long to create

[@justinlovenduski4163]

@@WarlockGamingYT ok thanks for letting me know. Keep up the good work.

[@bryaneduication8310]

You can check out Mob Kingdoms while you are waiting, I promise you won't regret it ;3

[@valediversion]

Esta historia se ve que tiene mucho futuro y es tan épico el prólogo No se si lo leas pero me darías permiso de doblar el prólogo en español? Y subirlo a mi canal obviamente dando créditos a este canal😃

[@gigablast0228]

Go right on ahead :)

[@WarlockGamingYT]

Sure why not

[@valediversion]

@@WarlockGamingYT genial!!!!

[@Fireplayz14YT]

Of course u made the robber at the beginning black smh

[@skyfall282]

lol fr fr but ay thes video is good

[@realSofaYT]

bro's prob- black irl so he did it to himself

[@foxysanseverything]

my gf voice acted in this

[@endless510]

The voice acting is to slow and its kinda awkward and the music is not epic during the bandit fight

[@bryaneduication8310]

Try Mob Kingdoms, they will deliver