NASA Lied About an ALIEN Planet PX-919... TRUTH Is Something TERRIBLE || Sci-Fi Creepypasta

[@sergionylatino]

Good to go keep up the great story's and the great work peace Sergio NYC 👏 🙏🏽 👍🏼

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

thanks ❤️... means a lot!

[@LakhanPrasad-g7p]

Good work... lad❤

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

😇thanks

[@Codyjrt]

New subscriber. I love it.

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

Glad ! ♥️... There're more such stories on the channel. ENJOY 😉

[@tomsculpture]

I was so bored I fell almost asleep

[@mrapplesauce3025]

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[@Cosmic_Creeps]

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[@marcmckenzie5110]

I enjoyed the first piece I heard on your channel, but the more I hear, the more formulaic the stories seem. And your voice tone identical. Try truly different ideas and narratives. I don’t know if this was AI or a young writer, but the stories show high creative potential.

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

Surely i will... can you please suggest me some ideas And thanks for the constructive feedback

[@marcmckenzie5110]

@ Here’s a few ideas: 1. Try a story variant without a hidden, malevolent, alien. Or sift the focus to hidden enigma, or a different kind of threat. 2. Think of a different motif from inexplicable squirming figures. I like your idea, but don’t overuse it. 3. Imagine other endings than panicked escape. Like stand to fight, creative stalemate, comprehension and out thinking, etc… 4. In your voice reading, imagine totally different personas of the narrator or protagonist. What would that person sound like? Old, young, middle aged, child, etc. Soft voice, hard voice, confident voice, anxious voice, etc. you have a very good dramatic voice that just needs practice in developing different personas and flexibility. What’s your longer term goal? A book? A script? Filmmaking? I’m excited for your future! Best wishes.

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

@@marcmckenzie5110 damn, thanks a lot... I have read all the points and will try to work on it! Great Help

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

@@marcmckenzie5110 my long term goal is kinda bland and currently I wanna grow as a narrator on yt as well as on other platforms thanks for the wishes😇

[@RaisedxFist]

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[@Cosmic_Creeps]

Thanks 🤗 for watching

[@Diginixx]

Well done! Here's a sweetie 🍬

[@Cosmic_Creeps]

@@Diginixx thanks a lot!