You are a great reader and the story structure very good ... But these stories are so predictable, lack drama, scant dialogue and not keeping ne on edge - and same formlea. Perhsps look for other script writers
@Cosmic_CreepsКүн бұрын
Ohh... great feedback Will improve
@russellmiles2861Күн бұрын
@@Cosmic_Creeps to be fair ... you have a good following, so many clearly like your work ... i do too. I have tried to write scary tales, but next to no one is interested in mine. Keep up the great work