New found job / Prolog / Oc lore / (read desc)

ITS DONE, this sucks ass ngl didn't turn out how i wanted to be but nonetheless I hope you guys like it😭
PS. the discord message is hard to read I know bear with me I couldn't fix the quality 💔
There's probably so many mistakes in this video but It's okay just don't notice it pretend it's an effect, this was quite rushed because my motivation was actually draining while making this, I'm not sure if I'll make another episode. I really hope the story isn't that hard to understand LOL, I'm not a writer I'm an editor I hope the writing isn't shit

[@Iour]

This was supposed to have voice acting LOL using AI voices but i scrapped the idea

[@nokiasnumbskulls]

im reading the dialogue with the tiktok rizz party voices

[@medz-cb7mh]

id love to va for this ngl :3

[@wifi3971]

SAME​@@nokiasnumbskulls

[@ihatemyself640]

I might do a voice over of this, but my voice sounds like a femboy twink so erm😐 ...

[@Officail_Auther]

"Kill them?" "Kick them out." "YOUR HIRED!" has got to be the best ways they got hired.

[@deviouswanderer]

Got me saying “HOLY SHIT??” 40 seconds in, this is REALLY good

[@BooTheEater]

I was like: "they waited 9 whole hours in that room? Wow i could never" but apparently fig just locked them in there LOL Not only that but they almost got killed. Poor jgsaw and burroku! XD

[@hlam__]

OMG IM SCREAMING im struggling with my english skills and i barely understand what's going on BUT--- this is really cool im crying. im a pathetic jgsaw fan 😭 help he is so sillyy

[@Zenn4nimator_0]

THE DISCORD CHAT I CAN'T- 💀💀 i love your content pls don't quit🙏🙏 i love jgsaw and burroku💔

[@lasagnerr]

those 2 r gonna like accidentally break everything in that damn shop i bet😍 BEAUTIFUL VIDEO LOUR!!!

[@marshejj]

and thats the story of how the freaky store got even more freaky... AKSKDJH BUT BRO UR SAYING "im not a writer hope this isnt shjt" BUT LIKE DAMN??? THIS IS ACTUALLY SO COOL🙀 AND PLUS WITH THE EDITING THIS TURNED OUT SO YUMMY

[@PikachuFan-mz4fy]

Not jgsaw doing the Peter Griffin dead pose at 4:58

[@ihatemyself640]

And then arguing right after😭

[@pinklime2051]

I read the description and 100% this isn't bad at all, this is great!! 8 minutes is a SHIT TON of work and I'm just impressed that you were dedicated enough to pull through with it! The characters are unique, interesting, and funny, and so is the storyline! The pacing isn't bad either, like most of these similar projects I've seen. Bravo!!

[@strawberrystars_]

THIS IS SO GOOD!!! i love how you move things along and add little details to things if that makes sense the introduction was really creative and had me hooked in the first few seconds already 🎉🎉 jgsaw and burroku are very silly aswell, and better than me i wouldve broke into the staff room if i had to wait that long great job as always, you never fail me to leave me in awe 🎊🎊🎊

[@BooTheEater]

Yeah if i'd had to wait as long as they did i think i might actually go insane

[@Sabon_]

AAUAHHAHAHA THIS IS ACTUALLY AMAZING I LOVE THEM I LOEVEVTHEM SO MUCH I LOVE HOW THE PPLICEMAN WHOSENAME IS YO SOMETHING SPEAKS I LOVEBEALLOGJTME

[@marxiliary]

THIS WAS ACTUALLY SO SICK!!! I LOVE LORE THIS SI SOSOSOSOSOOSOSOSOSOO COOL

[@meloaf]

holy SHIT I LOVE THIS?? YOU'RE SO TALENTED

[@michellebonagua2920]

It's okay if you don't like the video you made, cause ALL OF US LOVED IT. KEEP IT UP!! ALSO VERY MYSTERIOUS CHARACTERS YOU GOT THERE ❤

[@HENRY-worm]

YONECX IS SUCH A COOL NAME AND THIS IS SO COOL OMH?? i love this

[@Catdemonsanimations93]

omg this feels like an actual show. im intrigued and i hope for more of these guys they r so cool!!

[@yenuuki]

aghhh i'm back for a second time bc this is just so cool 😭 i'd love to see a second episode !! ik you said you might not make a follow up so no pressure 🙏 the writing is really great, i love how the dialogue flows!!! a lot of people make stories w/ a high school setting so this was a great change of pace......... lovelovelove the intro as well. i'm a sucker for the 3d and the dictionary definition ........ Ur definitely one of my inspirations, ur editing (and writing) is actually phenomenal, creativity is mad impressive 😭 i rarely follow any OC stories but this was so interesting i loveee it

[@xoxoEstrella]

Your literally one of those youtubers i will continuously call underrated until the day i die.

[@prismatic9836]

this is actually so cool oml!!! RAHHHHHHH I AM INVESTED

[@OnlyAmemory]

“This sucks ass” BRO??? THIS IS AMAZING OML YOU EARNED SUB! I CANT WAIT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR CONTENT!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!😋

[@-CloudEater-]

WE’RE GETTING EMPLOYEED WITH THIS ONE 🗣️🗣️⁉️⁉️‼️🔥🔥🔥🤩🔥‼️⁉️ BUT AHHH THIS LOOKS SO COOL YOUR CHARACTERS ARE SO INTERESTING AND I CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS GOES

[@cherryy__]

LOURBY THIS IS AMAZINGGGG YOURE AMAZINGGGG I’m so into this can’t wait for more

[@st4rsar3c00L]

this is crazy good- im so excited for the next part!!!!

[@Will.Schmidt]

YAOI CONTENT

[@Cawffee7]

HELP

[@ihatemyself640]

ERM😦 I mean I get your point

[@Catnip.Sniffer]

DUDE THIS IS SO WELL MADE IM SCREAMING!!!!!! YOUVE IMPROVED SO MUCH

[@_lexury]

BRO THIS DOES NOT SUCK THEI IS ANAinf aAS SOON AS IT ATARTED I LOCE THIS SO MUCH LOUR YOU R SO TALENTEDD OH MY GOF🥺❤️🙏

[@BooTheEater]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JAJFAKAHAJA HOW DID I MISS THIS LMAO- ANyways, omg this is amazing. Love this!

[@fl0w3r_0]

the intro looked so cool oml

[@RIFTStudios_88]

Interesting 👀 I like the characters too

[@Zottosuru]

8 MINUTES LONG???? THIS IS SO GOOD

[@Partypretty_noob]

THE DISCORD PART IS SO FUNNY DUDE (but this story is really good and im glad you got to finish it!)

[@eredolour1145]

Im so glad you decided to uplaod this anyway!!!! I really like the visual aestheticss

[@-abandonedchannel-chiyxko2357]

Jgsaw looks like such a silly guy omg

[@mayaily520uwu]

8 minutes long and it's still so well-made 😭✨✨✨

[@SillySopaMan]

This is so well made i love it !!

[@marimari54321]

HOLY QUACK???????? THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING YOU DID AN WONDERFUL JOB!!!!! hope you're okay and safe now

[@Zt1nkych33z]

3:00 THAT CAUGHT ME OFF GUARD- 😭 Tbh this is so good??

[@bluecrambarrie3742]

I don’t know you but this is pleasing

[@Yoctoe]

When you put more effort into one video then I have in my whole school life:

[@EpicExperience123]

Why do you think this sucks? ITS EPIC🗣🔥🔥

[@kcd715]

THIS IS SO GOOD LOL- especially that one part when they got hired lol-

[@Meucutacocando]

This is so good I think I'm going to cry, goodbye

[@s1lly_sunny]

THIS IS SO WELL MADE

[@ray010]

chat CHAT BRO COOKED

[@ihatemyself640]

BRO DIDN'T JUST COOK HE MADE A WHOLE MEAL‼️‼️🔥🔥🔥

[@switchbladeX3]

I have high hopes for this. this iz amazing!!!!11! 1!

[@Ros33ns]

THIS IS SO KEWL! Looking forward to more episodes if you are gonna continue this, no pressure though! i already love your regular content \(@^0^@)/

[@cxmrvy]

OMG OMG ITS OUT GUYS ITS OUT AND ITS SO GOOD ?!??!! THE EDITING AGH MWAH 🫶‼️‼️

[@yenuuki]

YESSS THIS IS SO COOL OMG

[@yenuuki]

On my way! TO REQATCH UR TOHER VIDEOS WIRH THEM NOW THAT IK HOW THEY ACT AND. THE RELATIONSHIPS AND STUFF YES

[@kailverkami]

LOUR THIS IS SO GOOD WTH BRO DID U SRSLY TAKE THAT MUCH TIME IN ALIGHMOTION

[@Iour]

WHAT DO U THINK😭

[@kailverkami]

​@@Iouruhh ngl i thought u would take this video to make more longer bc laggy ahh phone ☝

[@Iour]

@@kailverkami this was supposed to be longer im I got lazy asf😭

[@kittycatrittycatalt9523]

SKFKFKKTKGKG I CANT I LOVE THE MUSIC THE THEME EVERYTHING i rlly wanna learn more about these guys😭😭😭😭🙏🙏

[@realisticwater]

holy moly 😮 this is awesomesauce 😮

[@Makophobiaa]

THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING…. You need 100k ASAP

[@Sabon_]

I love the soundtrack

[@jermalover78]

THIS IS AWESKME

[@zombiedd_]

Another Lourby banger

[@TheCatInToaster]

HHOLY COW

[@thickslimspastries5061]

Is this a show or oc lore?!? Looks like both ngl

[@Dinkywinkykinky]

Best 8 minutes of my life

[@nyowisxandermatthewskisser]

0:24 CHAT ITS ITS AKRIASO AND LOUR

[@ishyel]

I wonder if they're going to make an appearance 🤔

[@bowserblaster6418]

This is good

[@cherrithecherry501]

IM EARLY YASS !!!! >_

[@16itkunyz]

thi s is so good

[@aunipro5759]

WOAAAAAWA PROLOG???!???

[@StarThePencilOSC]

IMODOUSNCRSOCODSCRE I LOVE THIS SMM OMGGG

[@Damianz_me]

I LOVE THIS VIDEO SOOO MUCH URGHHH !!!!! EATS IT ALSO AT 4:38 WHAT WAS THE SONG NAME BECAUSE I REMEMBER LISTENING TO IT I JUST DONT REMEMBER THE NAME 😰😰

[@Iour]

Runaway kanye west

[@Damianz_me]

@@Iour AH THANK UUU AGAIN I LOVE UR VIDEO SO MUCHHHH :33

[@wifi3971]

SLAY

[@jellybeanie151]

I luv this!! but the purple text is bit hard to read ^_^;

[@Iour]

Thanks for mentioning! I'll make it more visible next time

[@jellybeanie151]

@@Iour Np! Can’t wait to see more!!

[@TheAnonymous-qd2pv]

WHAT THE HELL, HOW IS TGIS UNDERRART3ESD????????????????????????????????????????????????/

[@FRUITCANOPY]

Cooooooooooolioooooooo

[@faith_6]

cool beans

[@Ghostissapie]

JSJSHWJSHSNSWAT

[@mahounoyanne]

I LOVE

[@poplakalam9569]

Omg yass👩‍🦯🙏🙏🙏

[@teddybearbmb8380]

THSU IS SIKCKK

[@EllaArchive0]

Omg

[@Sabon_]

Waiter waitwr augjiabdb dies

[@ShuwiSushi]

peak

[@AUCreatoer]

LORE YES

[@Jupiterisnt]

Nom

[@Sabon_]

AAAYAGHHAHHAH

[@BooTheEater]

Lourby more like loreby hahaha amiright guys am i

[@ihatemyself640]

Bahaahahahaba so funny

[@Sabon_]

AUAGHAHAHHAHAHA

[@BooTheEater]

This is so real

[@RenRoll]

THIS WAS AWESOME

[@Cildircam-ox8mj]

Only if getting a job was this easy