She took out a lot of lines... which makes me believe the person who she wrote this for either didn't get better or got way worse. There is so much more pain in this verson, as if the things she removed could not be done anymore. As someone who struggles with mental illness, I hung on her every word, telling myself that my friends would say this to me. This one, with all that in mind, was heart breaking. I love her works..
@jusmarvin35196 жыл бұрын
she used this as her two minute poem for the two round in the slam, so she shortened it. Im glad you love your friends enough to love yourself this way. I love you too, just incase you needed to hear that!
@mandi5758 жыл бұрын
I thought this poem was titled "I won't write your obituary," but either way it's gorgeous.
@Supergirl99097 жыл бұрын
mandi575 // both
@leahgibson68686 жыл бұрын
I feel this so heavily. The anger. God. This is perfect. I am so sorry for the hurt. It is so hard.
@galaletsangsanyane75065 жыл бұрын
Had to watch this twice to understand and Wow!!
@realperson8068 жыл бұрын
Really can't get over this 😩😩💔
@kylipsso6 жыл бұрын
Beautiful! ✨💫🔥🔥🔥🔥
@johnkeithrobinson73994 жыл бұрын
i enjoyed your poetry
@johnkeithrobinson73994 жыл бұрын
thanks
@fluffypuppy07 жыл бұрын
damn this was wow
@dryramennoodles35275 жыл бұрын
its so different than the original. the title is different. is whoever she wrote this for? gone?
@imid34405 жыл бұрын
Dry RamenNoodles that’s why i’m thinking :(
@emi-hq3gb8 жыл бұрын
she took out my favourite line, nooooo
@kaylutz58248 жыл бұрын
What line?
@emi-hq3gb8 жыл бұрын
"i will write you a body whose veins are electricity because outlets are easier to find than good shrinks, but we will find you a good shrink," i also like the line right after that, which is "i will write you 1-800-273-8255, that's the suicide hotline, we can call it together,"
@gabym99136 жыл бұрын
yeah both those lines were so impactful! i feel like something maybe happened though? bc she seemed more distressed in this one... so maybe she shortened it for that reason
@rikuiijima66773 жыл бұрын
“i won’t say goodbye or that i love you, one last time, you won’t leave on good terms with me [etc]” was my favorite line