Okay I made it into a song!

[@nyancat-meow143]

GIRL I LOVE IT I CAN EVEN ADD IT TO MY PLAYLIST

[@moonrise45]

@nyancat-meow143 THANK YOU GIRL

[@alphago9397]

I think our facial expressions matched pretty well while we were listening to this .. 🤣 overall, this sounds really good! it seems like your all your experience this year has culminated into this piece.. looks like you really fixed the issues you had with timing/percussion previously. It's so symphonic sounding; I really liked the little vocal harmony at 1:20 .. 4:27 ; "acoustics" is the word you're looking for; you don't like the acoustics of your room.. sounded fairly good to me, though.. maybe you need a sound-proofed room for recording.. I have also heard the size and shape of the room makes a noticeable difference in acoustics. good job so far ..! keep working on it! (I had a giant paragraph of stuff written before my browser crashed and erased everything .. I hate web browsers.. )

[@moonrise45]

@alphago9397 Thank you for the time effort you put into writing feedback even after your browser crashed 😭. Thank you so much! Yeah the timing wasn't messed up this time 😅. Yeah I also see people with those foam things on their walls...I might look into those. I think my room is also weirdly shaped, so maybe the sound is weird. Maybe I could test out a different room. Anyways, thanks again for the feedback! 🙆🏻‍♀️

[@aaronsmithas32]

It is not that bad. I liked it good job

[@moonrise45]

@@aaronsmithas32 Thank you :)