Orphaned Little Alien Starved Until Old Man Adopted Her

[@tazyload]

The AI really gave up with the background image this time. "Nobody will notice if I just throw Thor in there, right?"

[@warhawkbm]

Its really just AI watching some of these anyways... right? >_>

[@justinmellott5475]

Thorn look like Thor.

[@popeyeandthejeep7459]

Not a terrible story. Ending could use some work.

[@GbonesNDhouse]

good outline. needs work. need to take determination out of your vocabulary, develop side stories, fail occasionally. and not every good story benefits the known universe. unity recurs way to often.

[@roserea3156]

Looks like a Lauren to me.

[@roserea3156]

Another L name how Rachel

[@Bill-1370]

Same old story yet again. Boring.

[@notagovslave5614]

Something besides butchery does help some of us balance and center ourselves. If I were to guess we will have plenty of war up close and personal again soon. But Semper Fi anyway Brother and Happy Father's Day wishes to you Brother.

[@notagovslave5614]

Actually you are correct.