(Part 1) Watch Me Write Sales Emails | Over The Shoulder Sales Email Copywriting

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Coach Carmine Mastropierro

Coach Carmine Mastropierro

Күн бұрын

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@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Learn more about copywriting and marketing in my free online courses.➡carminemastropierro.com/courses
@RethsonAboja
@RethsonAboja 3 ай бұрын
Could you make a video of how to send emails to clients
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 3 ай бұрын
@@RethsonAboja For sure!
@mkbts815
@mkbts815 10 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for this video. Saviour!!
@Tomisinshalewa
@Tomisinshalewa Жыл бұрын
Thank the good Lord I found your channel!😭 I've been looking for good copy tutorials on KZbin and I've been reading all your extremely helpful content on your website! As soon as I saw your name I knew my problems where solved Thank you so much! I'm subscribing right away cause I need this in my life😩
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Thank you for the kind words! Happy to help :)
@richardonojeghwo5284
@richardonojeghwo5284 7 ай бұрын
Website???
@nikitajain2274
@nikitajain2274 Жыл бұрын
Loved this break down 🎉❤
@TressesAndTips
@TressesAndTips Жыл бұрын
I'm so lucky to come across this video, you are good at what you do
@rehammohamed5776
@rehammohamed5776 Жыл бұрын
This was super helpful. Thank you so much, Carmine!
@husn222-g6f
@husn222-g6f Жыл бұрын
Great video! I've never come across an email copywriting video broken down like this. I went through the comments and read your answers to all the questions. Thank you for these great guidelines.
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much and it's my pleasure :)
@warrenbarrow2910
@warrenbarrow2910 Жыл бұрын
That was very informative and to the point. Now, I have to jump in and start writing my copy!
@kathyalmansoob4941
@kathyalmansoob4941 2 жыл бұрын
Omg thank u so much that was sooo helpful. Every video I watched just shows me criteria but not an example. Honestly you nailed it
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome and thanks for the kind words!
@evefavourite3168
@evefavourite3168 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much 🙏. Hope to see more of this
@ayandas851
@ayandas851 Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much, It is really helpful.❤❤
@ooo5376
@ooo5376 7 ай бұрын
Thanks you coach 👍
@richardonojeghwo5284
@richardonojeghwo5284 7 ай бұрын
Thanks so much coach
@Oxmbr
@Oxmbr Жыл бұрын
Thank you Carmine you’ve helped me a lot
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
You're very welcome :)
@MarvinLarry
@MarvinLarry Жыл бұрын
You're very smooth with your writing. Keep it up.
@olabanjooyeniran6060
@olabanjooyeniran6060 2 жыл бұрын
Wow I love this formula it's simple and straightforward
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Great to hear!
@GettingPremium
@GettingPremium Жыл бұрын
Great video!
@Abdul.Basit.Entrepreneur
@Abdul.Basit.Entrepreneur 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for this amazing video training!!!
@beenishmubeen709
@beenishmubeen709 2 жыл бұрын
extremely beneficial and to the point!
@HamidCopywriter
@HamidCopywriter 4 ай бұрын
thanks carmine
@swen575
@swen575 2 жыл бұрын
You explain very well! Thank you!
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much!
@Xhar308
@Xhar308 Жыл бұрын
Carmine, you're the best. It's great to have tangible examples to see how an email should be formatted. My question..., when a client hires you to do a job, do they provide you with material to review, or do they ask you to write a sales page on "X," and you do the research yourself? I'm unsure of how much detail they provide.
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Thank you, and no problem! Each project is different. Most of the time, clients will give me branding and content guidelines as a start. Then, I do my own research on their business, customers, competitors, and read things like case studies, statistics, and industry reports to understand more.
@shubhamdavey
@shubhamdavey 2 жыл бұрын
Really helpful. Thanks for sharing.
@emberior
@emberior 9 ай бұрын
I learned in the video that the email should be short. Am I correct?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 9 ай бұрын
Not necessarily short, but only write as much as needed. 👍
@simontibasima6871
@simontibasima6871 Жыл бұрын
a great straight to the point video. i would appriciate a tutorial on sales letter( long form copy)
@nicolecristob
@nicolecristob 2 жыл бұрын
Carmine, this helped me! Thank you!
@theacaciaboost4282
@theacaciaboost4282 2 жыл бұрын
wow this video was great, thank you sooo much! would love to see more videos like this if possible.
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! And you will very soon :)
@Rizzoman_
@Rizzoman_ Жыл бұрын
hello carmine, its nice to see you bring the example of this video. you are very good at it. But the question is, what is the job that the copy writing do to affliate marketing sales once you has been accept to working on for the client, is it to posting the content product on the social media or anything that related to the product to promoted?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
It depends on the client. You might be writing sales pages, emails, social media copy, etc. They may ask you to publish it or have their team do it. I work out these details with the client first.
@seemaYadav-tt9qu
@seemaYadav-tt9qu 3 жыл бұрын
hey Carmine you are really really a very helpful person 🙏👍👍👍👍 tons of thank for your efforts for us
@kim0007
@kim0007 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you.
@g._yz1892
@g._yz1892 2 жыл бұрын
amazing video, these examples are perfect for marketing. appreciate it
@happycutebox
@happycutebox 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, this was good. Thanks so much!
@akinoluwaseun1488
@akinoluwaseun1488 2 жыл бұрын
This is really really good. I love it. Thank you so much.
@ajayijoy6195
@ajayijoy6195 Жыл бұрын
Thanks so much for the detailed video. I have a question. Does the subject line necessarily have to contain so many questions in a sales email?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
You're welcome! You don't have to include a question in the subject line if you don't want to, it's just one of many strategies that help increase open rates :)
@FeooTubee
@FeooTubee 3 жыл бұрын
Awesome!
@nkernest66
@nkernest66 Жыл бұрын
keep doing over the shoulder tutorials❤🙏
@paulmaking1980
@paulmaking1980 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the video bro, very helpful for people who are new to copywriting and want to do this for a living.
@animetownforlife
@animetownforlife 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks!! This help me a lot!
@belaouma7983
@belaouma7983 3 жыл бұрын
THANKYOUUUU
@hammedmuhammed5243
@hammedmuhammed5243 Жыл бұрын
Thanks 👍 for the tips it was so helpful ......umm what p.s?
@NITIN_BISHT40
@NITIN_BISHT40 6 ай бұрын
I am thinking about getting your $19 course but I have a few questions 1.why is it so cheap compared to other copywriting courses which are around 500-700$ 2.I am new to copywriting so will I be able to learn and write emails that sell. 3.How long will it take to learn copywriting and land my first client.
@win0044
@win0044 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the value packed video! I had a quick question. Where do we get all the information to write the email. Will the client give us all the information and the email campaigns and Write it or will I have to ask for all the information?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! I like to ask the client if they have resources and documents they can give me before I begin writing that'll help me understand the product, industry, etc. I'll still research competitors, go through their website, and take my own notes too.
@heightgrowthbros8948
@heightgrowthbros8948 3 жыл бұрын
I just wanted to ask Why don't you make a video which gives us an Idea of who you are? Your copywriting journey, brands you've worked with, your earnings and all. ( I'm interested in it too) A bit about me - I've done a bit of freelance content writing I'm planning to start copywriting freelancing from June currently I'm 17. I saw your video and these are definitely great and value packed I'll surely binge watch them after my exams!
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 3 жыл бұрын
Cool idea! I'll definitely schedule that for one of the future videos
@PearlAddo
@PearlAddo 2 жыл бұрын
please from what you stated that does mean the subject line being question-centered should be one. meaning you can choose one from any of the questions?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
A question-focused subject line would be asking a question within the subject line of the email. Think, "Do you want to learn copywriting?" or "Struggling to get freelance clients?" for example. It engages the reader and prompts them to open the email :)
@PearlAddo
@PearlAddo 2 жыл бұрын
@@itscoachcarmine thank you very much
@strahinjagocic6210
@strahinjagocic6210 2 жыл бұрын
For ads and things like that, do I also need to create a full ad and stuff like that, or just text and content?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Normally as a copywriter, you're just writing the content and structuring it, a designer will handle making into something that looks nice :)
@Iamfiance56
@Iamfiance56 2 жыл бұрын
I notice these days from observing some copy emails, that the emails aren't to much writing focused, but are more visual with very little copy. I'm finding it a bit hard to know when would someone need emails with more copy? I assume it's for more "complicated" businesses for ex; coaching, meal prepping, online course, etc. Vs product focused like skin care products, hair care, a quick sale off a hoodie etc? Would love to get your opinion on when to write more depth email copy vs email copy that only requires very minimal copy.
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
You're exactly right! Typically, as a rule of thumb, more complex products and industries require more sales copy while simpler ones require less. It also depends on your audience. If you're speaking to customers that are at the top of the funnel and aren't 100% aware of what you offer and what solutions are out there, it will naturally require more sales copy to educate them. On the other hand, you can tighten and shorten sales copy for customers who've already converted because they have more experience with your offer/business.
@Iamfiance56
@Iamfiance56 2 жыл бұрын
@@itscoachcarmine Okay I see, that makes a lot of sense! Thank you, I'm currently working on a writing portfolio and have been wanting to create a section for emails, but didn't know how to properly write them. lol
@ahmadtharwat2670
@ahmadtharwat2670 2 жыл бұрын
Do you give mentorship programs..? On teaching writing emails for newbie copywriters
@BurnTheShipsMotivation
@BurnTheShipsMotivation 2 жыл бұрын
How do the emails get distributed to the consumer? Do you just give the text to the company and they handle it, or do you have to send them individually to random emails?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Usually, you're sending it out to an email list you've built, or a client has. Or, you could send these to cold prospects using a tool like Apollo or Hunter.io
@israrmalik4336
@israrmalik4336 Жыл бұрын
Most most help full course .i have question .if i want to sell .course that teach how to set up your advitizing agence .waht could be title headling
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Thank you :) You could have a headline like "Learn How to Build a Profitable Advertising Agency in 30 Days" or "The Done-For-You 6-Figure Agency System". Just some ideas!
@israrmalik4336
@israrmalik4336 Жыл бұрын
@@itscoachcarmine thank uuuuuuuuuuuiiii
@nkernest66
@nkernest66 Жыл бұрын
pls specialize in this kind of tutuorials pls🙏❤
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
More are coming soon :)
@Edp-jf8zn
@Edp-jf8zn Жыл бұрын
question i dont want to have a business i wanna work as an email copywriting how can i start
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Start studying and practicing email copywriting. Write sample emails to build a portfolio, and you can include that in your resume. Get email marketing certifications as well, and apply for email copywriter/marketer positions on LinkedIn.
@MrDaan073
@MrDaan073 Жыл бұрын
For the mini-course tripwire offer, I'd have gone with the following subject line: "Build an extra income stream for just $19" Your thoughts on this variant?
@israrmalik4336
@israrmalik4336 5 ай бұрын
Is sale mail also d.i.c and welome email
@orjidivine5162
@orjidivine5162 Жыл бұрын
Pls can I also use Microsoft word to write email
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
Of course!
@Marcelo-ix2tq
@Marcelo-ix2tq 3 жыл бұрын
How much do you charge for these? They're gret!
@Zenaciousrootz
@Zenaciousrootz 2 жыл бұрын
Gained a subscriber !!
@Vee_K96
@Vee_K96 3 жыл бұрын
Hi Carmine Just a quick question, how long do you think a sales email should be?
@CashConqueror101
@CashConqueror101 Жыл бұрын
Not long but it varies, I’d keep it under 200 words, the shorter, the better!
@vilain_inspiration
@vilain_inspiration 2 жыл бұрын
this (first name) I have to give my name?
@MrDJCue
@MrDJCue Жыл бұрын
Curious, 3 days into researching copywriting so forgive my amateur questions: - Do clients require you to provide graphics for the email or just the text? - Also are you the person who is sending the emails on behalf of the clients?? Or are you just providing the text and they send the email?
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine Жыл бұрын
No problem! It depends on the client, but some may have designers that will take care of designing and sending the email itself. If you have the skills to do so, you can charge extra and include it as a service. The same goes for sending the emails, some clients will give me access to their CRM and I'll send them or they may have their team to do it.
@MrDJCue
@MrDJCue Жыл бұрын
Good looking out Carmine! 👊😎
@ufcnutta4203
@ufcnutta4203 Жыл бұрын
Can barely hear you!
@FuZiOnSEdits
@FuZiOnSEdits 2 жыл бұрын
Volume is so low
@itscoachcarmine
@itscoachcarmine 2 жыл бұрын
Sorry, fixing that in new videos moving forward
@artielarengano9287
@artielarengano9287 2 жыл бұрын
Dude why aren’t you writing in Google docs
@Kyoto99952
@Kyoto99952 Жыл бұрын
WARNING THERE ARE MULTIPLE ADS IN THIS VIDEO --- WATCH OUT FOR YOUR EARS ----- THIS DUDE IS WHISPERING IN THE MIC
@emberior
@emberior 9 ай бұрын
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