Pieces - a short film

[@hazuk.isonohara2039]

Moral of the story: Don't finish puzzles that aren't yours.

[@nothassanzaki]

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@jennycastanares969]

@@nothassanzaki 7

[@joanwallace1373]

True!

[@РахилПеличев]

Yeah! 😂Indeed.

[@AFoxInFlames]

Especially when you find a strange demonic notebook with it that says FINISH IT, that is a red flag if I ever saw it...then you hid the, DON'T EVER in another spot😂

[@ParadiseBae]

How rude lol. She had no business taking it upon herself to remove the piece from the necklace...it was obviously on the chain & not with the rest of the puzzle for a reason. I loved this! A+ ♥️♥️

[@allisonjames2923]

Exactly! Did she really think her friend was incapable of taking it off the chain & finishing it herself?

[@novaphonix8284]

An original plot, well acted, great editing. I really enjoyed this short. I would love a sequel to this short maybe a little longer.

[@thebigorangecup]

Thanks for watching and your kind comments :-)

[@Shahtree]

A sequel would be nice.

[@sophieargent1430]

or prequel!

[@himsart6049]

Watch "the jigsaw puzzle"... I didn't try to find it Intensionly KZbin recommend it and i remembered this comment... So....

[@oldeskoolnana7543]

Knocking on a door in the middle of the nights gets me everytime.

[@billmcanally7782]

but who was it? knocking at the door...

[@silverstream233]

I loved the plot! My hypothesis is that the grandma died trying to trap the monster into the puzzle and when the friend finished the puzzle, she released the monster and she died too. Very nice work!

[@richardcarr8233]

I like that theory but how did the demon rip the page from the journal if it was taped in the puzzle? Also Why not destroy the puzzle or at least the final piece? She could have buried the box containing the puzzle (perhaps with her) rather than leave it in the antic to be found after her death?

[@bossman1944]

oh...ok. no need to watch it then!!!

[@sophieargent1430]

@Bossman - in future, try WATCHING the video BEFORE you come into the comments. It doesn't take a rocket scientist to figure that out.

[@allisonjames2923]

@@richardcarr8233 Maybe the puzzle won’t let itself be destroyed. It does contain some creepy monster after all 🤷‍♀️ Seems like the pieces just keep turning up no matter what they do. Nana took one to the grave & it turned up 😳

[@eaglevision9791]

You know we live in a crazy world when a girl is more willing to follow a dark shadowy figure, UP THE STAIRS, than go to the front door when she hears a knock.

[@Talia.777]

🤣🤣😂👍

[@allisonjames2923]

Lol just what I thought

[@velmurugann8294]

yes..so stupid.. not carrying any weapons to defend.. I hate these type of horror films where women are shown as idiots, curious & incompetent

[@РахилПеличев]

🤣🤣

[@РахилПеличев]

@@velmurugann8294 Yeah, they just go, asking that stupid 'hellooo', without anything to defend themselves. Ghost or a person with bad intentions, going towards them is the wrong way.

[@shanibmulkins]

What a dumb friend, who just finishes someone else’s puzzle, mind ya own business lol!! Great horror movie

[@libbymills4432]

For real! Leave my puzzle alone!

[@oldeskoolnana7543]

Great horror movies always have a stupid friend.LOL

[@bigseanprice]

she loved booze yet couldnt just sip from the bottle?! terrible friend and person in general.

[@sallyoquinn]

Don't know how I've managed to miss this little gem for four years! Nicely done!

[@vadimc2144]

Now I see that somehow I liked this comment, even though I don't remember watching this short before.

[@SwaggerUnmatched]

I would have stayed in my dead Grandma's house in the first place and why do they always go up in the attic when they hear a noise in the middle of the night and then the chairs rocking by itself nope the f*** out of that situation

[@brooksequine7621]

@Julie W. : Hmmmm . All very valid points . Being the pragmatist that I am , very truthfully, I'd probably do the same thing . Maybe a family of racoon had moved in or roof rats . Very valid point however , IF I heard the spooky music along with the noises ... I'm out . Ciao !

[@libbymills4432]

Okaay?!

[@MMatz-ro1bj]

Truly an excellent "PIECE " of work. Really first rate and deserving of any award you've received.

[@Mikanojo]

What i enjoyed most about the story was how, even though she was startled, she realized she was seeing the ghost of her grand mother and managed to control her fear. Based on how one of the missing pieces just appeared with a knock at the door, i can guess why her grand mother did not just destroy the puzzle - she had probably already TRIED, only to have the pieces keep reappearing. The one piece in the book was covered on the surrounding pages with protection wards, likely intended to keep that one piece from turning up if some one else tried to put the puzzle together, and the piece around grand mother's neck.. she took to the grave with her!

[@GradKat]

Really good! But that girl broke several basic horror rules: never touch a funny old leather book with a string wrapped round it; never mess with a weird padlocked box you find in the attic; never open the front door in the middle of the night; and finally, don’t get the inside bit of your ear pierced, it looks awful.

[@jhsreader18]

Putting the last piece into someone else's puzzle, SERIOUSLY not cool. Punishment may have been a BIT severe, but still, party foul.

[@ALIENIGHTMARE]

stop spoiling it was a good movie, nobody needs to know how will it ends

[@michaelwertzy9808]

@@ALIENIGHTMARE, some certain idiots think they have to prove themselves to help their egos! Must have been a lonely child, without friends or parents that ignored him. Sad case.

[@sophieargent1430]

stop reading comments before you've watched the video. People come to the comments to discuss what they've just seen

[@ALIENIGHTMARE]

@@sophieargent1430 inteligent people can use more then a few words and they can discuss about movie without spoiling all the scenario.

[@rebeccavaiphei21]

@@sophieargent1430 valid point...

[@madnessbydesignVria]

What part of "DON'T EVER!!!" do people not understand? Seriously, well done! Great production values throughout. Kudos! :)

[@felicitycatab1278]

i agree...the more you tell them "don't do it" or "don't go there" ..they do it anyway 😃

[@martenlynch8239]

The moment you find an old dairy book of grandma that says finish it..the one thing that could cross your mind is..i aint finish shit!!😒

[@twinklestar620]

Marten Lynch 😂😂😂😂😂

[@G.Haze.1787]

You'd think Grandma would burn the puzzle, or be buried with the piece, or kept the damn page in tact in the journal.

[@jacksonmyers3187]

Maybe Grandma was super pissed at being called "Nonna" for 30+ years.

[@JeantheSecond]

Dead grandma was wearing a piece around her neck. Pretty sure sure was buried with it.

[@jonathangerbino2621]

You'd think she'd do all that, PLUS not apparate back in front of her with the piece just dangling around her neck.

[@tammylmitchell9433]

GypsyLionHeart333 I think she WAS burried with the piece, which is why her ghost was wearing it on a chain.

[@WhatTheHellRachelle]

Jackson Myers Nona is Grandma is Greek. With the main character’s dark hair, it’s easy to imply she is of Greek heritage.

[@thomasmorgan9163]

In theory the puzzle can never really be finished because of the hole drillied into the last piece for the chain 😉 brilliant stuff though would love to see more

[@ericstewart0921]

Suspense all the way throughout

[@DustWarden]

Maximum effect with minimal - if any - special effects. Fantastic work. Perfect in every sense. Actually found myself clutching my brow/covering my eyes at the end.

[@michelegianni389]

One of the best horror short I've ever seen. Kudos!

[@cjmacq-vg8um]

this was well produced and acted and with an ending that doesn't leave me scratching my head. also, the length demonstrates more effort was put into the final product than those 5 minute or less quickies (as good as some of them may be). well done by all involved. thanks for the film.

[@thebigorangecup]

Thanks for your kind comments, and thank you for watching!

[@katherinehalling6630]

Some are really well made. Personally, I like the 15 second horror contest. Some people are able to fit an incredible atmosphere and storyline in just that mete 15 seconds.

[@oldeskoolnana7543]

I can understand the ending, that's refreshing. Some of them are real headscratchers. LOL

[@canvasfaces]

Loved it, every bit! When gramma reached out in the attic, I jumped!

[@jamiewulfyr4607]

Wow! Nana was into some dark shit! That was excellent.It's great to see some independent British horror.That was atmospheric & very well crafted.A genuine creepy one! Nice work.I'll look out for more!😨

[@jean-paulmoreau7178]

WOOOOW Excellent stuff!! I got goose bumps on several occasions and that was a first in years. Well done to the whole team.

[@ryckgarcia9297]

Loved it! I love those cozy quaint homes. Perfect for the story.

[@apistosig4173]

Every great short film begins with a clever concept, gradual unpredictable development and difficult to assume ending. Bingo - you've done it.

[@abubaseet]

Now this is what a short horror film is supposed to be like.

[@Mislav24]

Great short horror film. Intense atmosphere, interesting plot, good acting and a chilling ending. The scene with the friend completing the puzzle was intense. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to watching more of your videos.

[@theblackflame4002]

Good job, great acting, story. Funny we get a character who is actually smart and doesn't finish the puzzle then her dippy friend does it. Only nitpick would be after Nonna screaming Don't never...I would have tucked that piece into the book or put it around my neck not left it next to the puzzle. About ten years ago, my sister in law passed at a young age(37) and every weekend for a month my wife and I would drive four hours to her house and stay the weekend to pack/clean it up. I can tell you it is an eerie feeling sleeping in the house of someone recently departed. This movie made me recall that.

[@ooTina00]

That was very well done. :)

[@РахилПеличев]

Excellent! I know it's one of these stories that I'll think about for days ahead. So good. Thank you :)

[@richardcarr8233]

A good film, just the right length for a horror. The usual tropes but far better than most short films on KZbin.

[@FlixHorror]

Very cool and original. Strong scares! Really well done. Great work.

[@arvinpagsibigan5390]

10:09... Grandma: "Don't ever!!!" Then the books says FINISH IT. 10:35... Friend puts the last jigsaw piece.... End

[@TOOLATETOOSAD]

Thank you for your time to entertain us with a suspenseful movie on a rainy, dull Sunday ! "Sleepless in Seattle"

[@scb0611]

Holy... I love it!

[@MichaelFrazierTube]

massively underrated

[@alonsosolano5117]

This is a really good piece of horror. Nice Job. For a moment I thought this end is going to suck but it was really nice

[@allisonjames2923]

Not sure that “nice” is quite the right word 🤔

[@bobbyk9148]

That first jump got me good!

[@amandaroman3471]

Very very good I didn’t expect that ending! Love a good twist. That makes the whole thing exceptional

[@eliza._..]

I would have dipped as soon as I heard that sound.

[@ashleymcmillian1455]

great creepy story but if a spirit or whatever left a piece of that puzzle on her door step that would be a great sign to burn that puzzle up

[@esmeraelillywing612]

I liked it. Interesting premise. Just few thoughts, if I may. 1- NO ONE packs that fast. 2- When a friend says "I brought the booze" and shows up with one stinking bottle of White Zin, you must immediately begin the process of finding actual friends. 3- You have the actual pic the puzzle is based on, and you *don't* notice the grim reaper? Never occurs to you at all???? Lastly, 4- Grandma had so many opportunities for this not to happen. a) Bury the damn thing in 100 different places, drop it in the ocean, or burn it. But nope. Granny had to keep it mysteriously locked in a chest that no one could resist opening, lead her to it by making sounds. Keep the diary warning about the puzzle intact. Lose the ONE damn page that expressely pleaded for this NOT to happen. Then show up all crazy like out of the Further to scare the living hell out of that chick, BRINGING WITH HER the single piece of the puzzle needed to finish it. Good job Grandma. You suck at this game.

[@dantuar]

haha! Loved this!

[@tthatesu2]

Imaginary Winchester I feel like the monster was dropping hint to get her to release it. Bc really if the grandma didn’t want her complete the puzzle I’ve never make noise to make her curious enough to look in the attic. The box had a lock that was unlocked the piece magically appeared on the door step and she would have no reason to rip a page out of her own journal. Grandma showing up with the last piece around her neck was her goof even when she was trying to tell her “don’t ever finish it” If I was the granddaughter I’d put two and two together especially with the creature in the background with a message in a journal that looks like satanic

[@dantuar]

Nailed it.

[@charaasmrbullsht8594]

Lol

[@k8fearsnoart]

And by doing/not doing those things, there would be no film.

[@ParthiBhardwaj]

*Lesson* First thing you do after moving in the house is throw away everything in the attic without using them at allllllllll

[@ParthiBhardwaj]

@Starr Child I always wonder y don't these people throw them right away n save these things in attic n wait for the next owner to move in n clean it all up..!! 😂😂

[@ParthiBhardwaj]

@Starr Child ommgg..people are really crazy these days..here In india we have tiny machines where your put the used needle n it gets destroyed on its own..I'm glad you n your family are safe☺️

[@LSBraham]

Wow! This actress is beautiful...she looks a good bit like Sean Young in the 80's!

[@MajesticEntertainmentNews]

Awesome video! Look forward to seeing more of your work :)

[@armcollector6660]

all I can say is this was REALLY WELL DONE LOVE IT, love a full movie or a part 2 plz it is NEEDED!!!

[@qlatiny]

This is soo cool! I really really love it.

[@thebigorangecup]

Thanks for awesome compliments!

[@vadimc2144]

One of the best I've seen, if not the best. I enjoyed every second, thank you.

[@rickysanchez8709]

Wish it was much longer. I liked it a lot

[@RM-io7qo]

One of the best performances that I have seen so far, awesome. Well done! Take care...

[@knninjagaming8159]

awesome short ...loved it 👌👌

[@PrototypeO]

Luv the cinderblock wall in the attic!....quite demented!

[@ChannieVee]

I’d be so pissed if someone else stole that satisfaction of putting the last piece of the puzzle in

[@vijayashrees7947]

Woah! Very good horror! Very different and weird storyline. I enjoyed every frame. And the actress was so beautiful and given a daring character. Really thankful that she was saved. Her grandma knew. So only she felt the scream while she pulled that piece from her... Well done. 👌👌👏👏

[@pablodisconnect5551]

excellent work! i imagined the ¨don´t ever¨ thing!, very well done!

[@peterharris38]

Great suspense and story excellent work.

[@highhighsky1]

She didn't read the Horror movie rules guide. Rule No. 313 , all recently dead grandmothers and aunts are either evil or they dabbled or conjured something wicked and that something wants nothing more than to kill the living, so never accept any inheritance gifts (houses, jewelry, artwork, books...puzzle pieces, etc.) because their Eeeeeval.

[@xrystal89]

Finishing someone else's puzzle is like eating the food off their plate w/o permission. How dare you? Good piece.

[@secondhandguru3558]

That was amazing!

[@raedgaj3878]

Stealing a puzzle journey is a serious no no, & no punishment too harsh in the twilight zone mwah mwah mwaaaaah. Very enjoyable, great work.

[@myalteregorocks4009]

FABULOUS! GOTTA NEW SUB! I'm a serial short watcher and this is one of the BEST I've seen. Can't wait to see MORE!

[@crazyfool7075]

🖕

[@thethrillaofmezilla81]

This was brilliant! ❤

[@Lonchanney1]

Awesome! thank you...

[@k8fearsnoart]

I really liked this, thank you!

[@calliecalliej.6431]

1) Well done plot, acting, camera work, mood. 2) I would've put the puzzle away! Or burned it! But I see that keeping the puzzle on the table continued the story for what took place next. 3) At least turn the lights on! I would not have slept in a dark, quiet house. Creepy. With or without evil spirits (spirits I say and not ghosts of the deceased because I don't believe in ghosts of deceased people; they already spent time on earth while in a body...they aren't going to hang around after death).

[@KelniusTV]

Oooh. That was creepy. Gave me shivers

[@axerxes3981]

Wow!! Nicely done. It gave me goosebumps!! Excellent. Ax

[@StupidEarthlings]

Kinda similar to that jigsaw short, except this plot was more fun. Although, did anyone else figure it out the 1st time they showed the 'finish it' page? Still fun tho, i did not expect that her friend would be the one gettin it.

[@andysixxstalkerangeloftrag5833]

The girl died and it wasn't really her fault.... To be honest... If I saw a puzzle with one piece out, I'd just leave it. I'd be like "Huh, nice pic." Because you can see everything, anyway. The entire time I knew it was a mistake, I knew not to even open the box, it should have been locked back.

[@carterTV1000]

very good, loved it : )

[@tanrose8645]

This was BRILLIANT! 👏👏👏 LOVED IT! 🌹 Please stay 'safe' , EVERYONE❣️ BLESSED BE~🌜

[@nelliesilvers1210]

Lol. I saw this a couple of years ago (not sure if I commented🤔) but like watching the good ones again over time. I come into the comments and you're here.... like most short horrors' comments. You're following me, aren't you?😉 JK. You just have great taste😁👌🏻. Blessed Be 🌒🌕🌘 ❤️

[@tanrose8645]

@@nelliesilvers1210 Merry meet again, Nellie❣️ No, not 'following' you; LOL 😘 BUT it's not a 'coincidence' either-we both have GREAT taste! (and MEANT to meet❣️) Are you on other social media?? I'm Goldie R. on FB/INSTA, Twitter... 🤔🤔 (Maybe go to my channel? Although I 'barely' post/upload there...🤔) Blessings, sister and have a LOVELY day❣️💐🤗 Hugs too fr. 🇨🇦❣️ xox🌜🌹

[@TheKeefed]

Really liked this one. Good acting.

[@NBA-ho1dr]

In horror movies all the characters walks towards ghost so illogical.. If I was alone and feel someone was there i whould leave the city

[@CroatanWolf44]

4:00 Im gonna repeat this for the ppl in the back, if you are not a P.I. dont 👏🏽go👏🏽investigating.

[@lordandsaviour1410]

Fantastic really well made too

[@rituparna6133]

Awesome, the protagonist was amazing.

[@irelandireland9724]

Again😑 i hate sleeping alone..or living alone😐

[@KarishmaNeha]

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂then it would be nice for u

[@twinklestar620]

Ireland Ireland 🥺😂

[@sarahoshea9603]

If u live in Ireland I'll come live with you n we can watch scary movies together🙂👍

[@mspottermouth]

this was amazing!!! always listen to nonna

[@envious_studios]

great stuff , def worth watching

[@spiritangel1367]

This was good. Very interesting. 👌

[@sydpoindexter6642]

Good short movie!

[@bluejuniata9808]

Who finishes someone else’s puzzle? It is usually a good idea to steer clear of anything that has a pentagram associated with it

[@notthejenfrombackthen679]

Super good short!

[@Juliett-og9vo]

AWESOME!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@kawaiislime686]

Who keeps there clothes on while sleeping 😂😂😂?????

[@MagicUzer]

uuuh many people?

[@kawaiislime686]

MagicUzer I don't mean pyjamas like clothes u go out with

[@MattCrawley_Music]

Very tired people

[@kawaiislime686]

Matt Crawley ok😂😂

[@soupkitchen666]

Right? The scariest part about this film was wondering why she sleeps on top of the blankets in her jeans the whole time.

[@ashesoftime5864]

Horrifying thing was they never got to drink the champagne :O

[@twinklestar620]

Ashes of Time that’s a crime right there 😂😂

[@billmcanally7782]

there's the distinct possibility Beelzebub drank it!

[@keithnaylor1981]

TERRORIFIC! More shocks in 14 mins than most movies can achieve in 90. Never, ever, go into an attic, or a cellar, ALONE! There's ALWAYS evil lurking in the shadows...

[@gilbertwilliams7256]

3:49 Hears noise in attic. 999 Hello Scotland Yard police! But of course, NO! LMAO

[@orsolyaritter7292]

This is what you get for finishing someone''s puzzle.

[@Onlypeachy]

Excellent movie! I really enjoyed it!

[@FIONA21ful]

The ending was great!

[@leroyapplegate5049]

the first attic scene when the ghost touches her shoulder.. that shit got me

[@libbymills4432]

For real, though, who goes up to the attic when they hear a strange noise? That "raccoon" would've been there til morning! I love these horror shorts!!

[@billmcanally7782]

i would have been out the door, in my car, driving around all night 'til sun-up!

[@alandobson2090]

Well done!

[@jccheloven]

Best script ever :-)

[@carlosidelone8064]

Very well done !

[@HowlinMadBob]

had it figuered as soon as I saw the missing page. then I just waited to see it play out. unfortunately the pay off just was a bit lackluster,,. BUT the music, acting and camera work was top notch tho! & the first time I saw the old lady I about jumped out of my chair! well done

[@Cecona]

Is the howl of a fox a common night sound in the UK? Is it like the British version of our owl hoot?

[@dantuar]

Almost! I'm a big fan of Jonathan Creek (which always seems to have them in night time scenes and thought they were creepy so had them put in) I actually live in a rural area and I've never even heard one in real life!

[@Cecona]

Dan Sunley that’s pretty interesting, foxes happen to be my favorite animal so I can recognize their calls and sounds. They can make some pretty weird and creepy noises for sure

[@billmcanally7782]

another good question: why do we hear barred owls, which do not exist in the u.k.?

[@aethellstan]

Very nicely done, I actually had goosebumps and that's a rare thing.