Hey man, I couple of things I know you said you had bad audio, but you didn't help yourself. Music is to loud compared to your voice, and you are to "hot" on the mic. Next time, take a step back from the mic, also investing in a pop screen might help as well. If not, sounds stupid but a sock over the mic can help reduce vocal pops. visually you need to tighten up a bit, there are some ok shots but for example, between 00.31 and 01.42 these shots need a lot of work, you clearly have a tripod for the talking head shots, I would use it for the product shots as well. make quicker cuts, you are leaving the shot on screen for to long, which only highlights the flaws. I think if you locked the camera down, and had quick shots to show off the phone,it would look a lot cleaner. keep the camera and phone still, move the lights. this is will show off the details and make the video look more professional. for example at 04.26, when showing off the lens. You are making more work for yourself tracking the movement and it looks worse than a static shot. also, if you haven't I would look at scripting the videos. and if you have I would cut the video in about half length wise. feel free to ignore me, just my opinions Keep it up man
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I did rush this video, sorry dude, hope it was still worth a watch!! and i am going to be scripting videos thoroughly from now on, and also im going to attempt to fix the Mic Problems