I have pretty much taken the reader by the hand and led them very carefully through the story so far, but I'm doing my best to let myself write without worrying too much about 'show, don't tell'. Getting words on the page is so much more important than editing atm. On a three day streak of hitting my daily goal so far!
@r70297 сағат бұрын
So far on target. Thank you for creating this rough draft challenge. I’m tackling the sapphire 25k level . 🎉
@GodwinOkojieII7 сағат бұрын
Again, slowly. Didn't write anything for Day 3. Extending deadline of Car Gone Rogue draft to December 30, stretch goal November 27th.
@KimtheElder9 сағат бұрын
Best opening EVER! Yay Evie! 💜💜💜 I bought "The Disappearance of Vanessa Shaw" today! Can't wait to read :)
@PolkadotSparrow14 сағат бұрын
I hope Evie's confidence never grows up! So inspiring! You're so busy, but if you ever need video ideas, I'd love to see a plotting video using Save the Cat. Thanks for all the great content ❤
@fralou_sind_kreativ25 минут бұрын
There is a video series by Liselle Sambury where she's having a video for every Save the Cat beat and how she's using it and changing it to fit her writing needs :)
@KHWriting8 сағат бұрын
Evie is so confidently herself. And I hope that never changes. Good job mom and dad! This whole video had me smiling from beginning to end. Your family is beautiful. And omg, Andrew may need to pivot to basketball. The boy is all legs! And you and George are so cute with each other. Your backyard is beautiful and I love the animals. I'm not sure if today will get words or not. Today got the best of me. Also, I'm so excited to be part of BSC and getting to see this story unravel with you. Your joy for AMOS is very inspiring. 10/10 vlog. 15/10 dance moves!
@HeartBreathings7 сағат бұрын
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@melanie98d13 сағат бұрын
Evie is preparing to take over the channel 😂 She's so cute!!❤
@DebbieLukasDesigns13 сағат бұрын
Huge like for Evie's dance routine! Watch out Sarra, she may be stealing the show here soon! lol I fell off the writing bandwagon about a year ago then whilst on holiday in Spain last week, I lay on the beach and couldn't help thinking out scenes for my next book...so my first stop was back to your channel and whoah....so much has happened! I love the rough draft challenge and website and now I'm writing my little fingers off!! Thank you for all that you do for your community :)
@Laura-ti2tm14 сағат бұрын
Evie's bringing the flared trousers back into fashion 😍 Seeing you find time to write in your busy life gives me motivation to keep trying.
@as_shewrites9 сағат бұрын
What sweet intro from sweet Ms. Evie! Thanks for all you do!
@barborasvandova789913 сағат бұрын
I'm at the end of day 4 and my goal was 0 words today as I'm at work for 15 hours plus sleep shift. But I still managed to write over 900 words and in total, I have 6063 words, which is great, considering I have only 25 000 words goal. I hope I will be able to continue like this.
@mariajromaley4 сағат бұрын
That's so beautiful that you can speak with your husband. I feel really alone in this. My husband and kids doesn't read my books and I can speak with no one about my world. Really happy to see your diaries. Thx very much !
@BelleGardener13 сағат бұрын
This one video will help so many writers (like me) realize that the world doesn’t stop if you take care of yourself! Thanks for sharing your writer’s life with us. 💕
@DakotaRebel14 сағат бұрын
The best dance moves I’ve ever seen! ❤
@nikkijoy59714 сағат бұрын
Evie's the dancing queen! And those glasses look so good on you. 👓👍😘
@DianaMayeDesigns13 сағат бұрын
You are so inspiring. I have been struggling with coming up with my story idea. I get to a certain point and then lose interest in it. I am inspired because you show me that even established authors have struggles and sometimes need help getting through the plotting stage. I really appreciate the videos that you have been posting. Thank you.
@agameoffangsandthrones5844 сағат бұрын
I love that sweet little hug you and George had right at the end
@cate502911 сағат бұрын
Evie is so precious! Her joy is contagious!!❤❤ I love how you described to story blooming process! It is the perfect description. Love your excitement.
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
She is sunshine! Thank you
@Smilingturtle9614 сағат бұрын
Good girl! Family and health and self care is FIRST! 🙏🏼🥰🌈
@Brittn3ySamon312 сағат бұрын
I love seeing your excitement grow about a new project. So infectious! ❤
@allanahhatcher332514 сағат бұрын
I love Evie's dance moves and I love her pants :) The flare at the bottom is so cute!
@fralou_sind_kreativ24 минут бұрын
Isn't this moment where you feel that the story is coming together just the best?
@Zi.B.Writes9 сағат бұрын
This was such a cute vlog! Thank you for making me smile today.
@tonyaroche773312 сағат бұрын
Oh my gosh! I haven’t even gotten to the intro yet, and I’m already smiling. Lol How adorable!!!! She reminds me of someone. 🤔 😉
@shadee1514 сағат бұрын
OMG I just melted! She is such a star!!! ❤❤❤
@cassiemerson778910 сағат бұрын
Capture the flag sounds like such a great idea! So happy to see you loving the process again
@KimtheElder9 сағат бұрын
I remember you showing us the dresses you were taking to a convention back in your rental house days! I'm pretty sure it was pre-Evie! You've come a long way baby! Dreams coming true
@HeartBreathings7 сағат бұрын
Yes! Probably for Denver RWA back in 2018!! I remember that. You've been here a while! That means a lot.
@kellyrees461912 сағат бұрын
This video kept me smiling the whole time. Your happiness is contagious:)
@philippawood50473 сағат бұрын
I love hearing you describe your process, I relate so much even though we are in totally different genres etc. Feels so good to know I am on the right path in seeing your success and how much you still love it, Sarra. :) I feel like your rough draft challenge will end up being a diamon in the rough!
@Dancingbutterfly_art13 сағат бұрын
Doing some world building: describing the cottage and getting to know my character more. I love to discover the story with her. I forgot how fun the rough draft could be. No expectations, no one who sees it yet. Just fun.
@hannahj42654 сағат бұрын
Girl. I love your vlogs. Your "high energy" is just what I need to relax and get into my writing. 😊 Tell Evie her dancing is adorable! ❤ I love seeing you joyful. I hope your eyes are doing better. I also don't know if I will get a rough draft written this month, but I am putting in a couple hours a day to sorting notes and getting outlines written so, eventually. I think this challenge is good for me.
@JodeeJeanDanielsJustWrite12 сағат бұрын
Evie is awesome!!
@staceyshillingburg796611 сағат бұрын
BRAUMS! That made me so excited and nostalgic (I lived in Texas most of my life)
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
It's so tasty!
@moonykmi13 сағат бұрын
Evie having fun put a smile on my face, thank you for sharing! I need to get into a writing reset as well.
@ghostyplans13 сағат бұрын
I’m at 5500 words so far. Getting ahead now before the holidays. Yesterday was a busy day so I was only able to write 87 words 😅 but at least it’s something! Today my goal is to hit at least 6k-though to hit 30k this month I’m ahead. I know that won’t last, so I’m pouring all I’ve got into the WIP now.
@Smilingturtle9614 сағат бұрын
My gosh, her little outfit is ADORABLE! 🥰 I love cheetah print ( or leopard).
@singingsanja1674 сағат бұрын
Hopping in while getting ready for work, but I have to say: You look great! I love the glasses, and the combo with the teal of shoulder shirt - love it! 😍
@unm00red10 сағат бұрын
Evie has grown so much!
@TheSuitemates11 сағат бұрын
Ugh that is my dream home and life right there!
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
It was a journey to get here but we made it! I know you can create this too!
@Dan-ne2et13 сағат бұрын
I wrote a fun scene today, and I'm glad I showed up for my writing session. ✍️ 👍Sweet progress. 🤓
@AdventuresInFantasy14 сағат бұрын
I'm doing pretty well with writing. While my word count is low, I've been showing up to write and I feel like, for me, that is a bit more important right now. That is a very good way of looking at things. I grew up with one of those go-go-go households so yeah... slowing down was a tough lesson. That is a really interesting business model for clothes. I can see why that would be really useful for some. I'm vaguely curious how... broad their types of clothing are. I love hearing how story ideas evolve; it is always so fascinating.
@HeartBreathings14 сағат бұрын
I would say this particular rental is not broad. I mean, they have event, vacation, and work wear, but there isn't much at all for casual wear. It's a lot of dresses, blazers, and then night out type stuff, but other than coats, there's not a lot of "everyday" stuff. But Nuuly is another one that does have more casual everyday clothing and less formal event wear, so I might try that one next time. And yes to finding it hard to slow down, but it is nice to find that space of allowing.
@susanmckenzie14710 сағат бұрын
For a great enemies-to-lovers, try The Creepy Hollow Series by Rachel Morgan. (I think she has renamed the series, but the first book is The Faerie Guardian.) The relationship between Violet and Ryn is just fantastic.
@lindaholbrook744713 сағат бұрын
Yes, you have to take care of you!!!!
@legalgirl13135 сағат бұрын
I love the cows and chickens 💓💓💓💓
@angeljackson748513 сағат бұрын
Evie has the best moves! 💃☺ I was almost done with Act 1 when I decided a major scene needed to be moved to Act 2 🤣 Other than that, progress is progress is all I have to keep saying to myself. Also, I have those lemon lime Waterloos too! My hubby says I have problem but with PCOS and insulin resistance, it's nice to just have a fizzy drink with a little flavor that's not sugary or fake sugary 😋
@megwriter3power-gg6mlСағат бұрын
Beautiful house and home. It will increase more in value because of being on the outskirts of Dallas. I plan on purchasing a second home with my books sales. Thanks for sharing 🇺🇸🇬🇧
@maryearly325914 сағат бұрын
one book i can recommend is Single White Vampire by Lynsay Sands. it's a good enemies to lovers. She is a good author and the others in her series are good reads as well. i'm glad that you got some rest and that your getting the spark back. Kudos to you and we look forward as always to more vlogs.
@KylieStewart_Author13 сағат бұрын
Omg I want to be Evie when I grow up! ❤😂
@WORDSANDBRUSHSTROKESSTUDIO10 сағат бұрын
Day three went really well. I'm glad I choose to do The First Draft Challenge!
@StephanieWhitson14 сағат бұрын
Cute glasses! Love the best dance moves ever! It’s been a slow start for me too.
@ivad.13415 сағат бұрын
Evie is so sweet ❤️
@caramullaney204313 сағат бұрын
Loved this video. I'm behind already after being poorly but think I can catch up and have a full writing day planned for this friday. x
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
I hope you feel better!
@caramullaney204338 минут бұрын
@HeartBreathings Much better thank you.x
@AngelaHesterBooks9 сағат бұрын
I peeped a Sir Bean shirt in today's vlog! :D
@LeahWriter14 сағат бұрын
Cute glasses! Super slow start for me. I got sick on Thursday afternoon and have been in bed since. Looking forward to rejoining the land of the living in a couple days😊
@HeartBreathings14 сағат бұрын
Oh no, feel better soon!
@eeveequeen2514 сағат бұрын
This might be a writing blog, but it would be nothing without Evie 😂 Do you own both the chickens and the cows?! If so I'd love to hear more about them. I'd love to rescue farm animals some day. It's wonderful to see you move into a new chapter of your life with this fresh story 🩷
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
The chickens we share with our neighbors and the cows belong to our back neighbor but they graze on our land sometimes and it always makes me happy to see them out there!
@kalikuz10 сағат бұрын
Just read your new book yesterday. Great job on it!!!
@fantasyafield9 сағат бұрын
Enemies to lovers-wise, I enjoyed Quicksilver by Callie Hart SO much! It has one of the most intriguing openings I’ve ever read!
@DeeBlaregold10 сағат бұрын
Omg! 😆 Evie is too cute
@giuliaidiometri18614 сағат бұрын
Oh, my God, Evie is so cute and sweet!
@mayadeslilas44 минут бұрын
You look so good with glasses!!
@TheWriMoBlog14 сағат бұрын
I'm having a bit of a slow start to my project too, but progress is progress!
@miaramck674610 сағат бұрын
Not exactly enemies to lovers, and not remotely romantasy, but Sabriel by Garth Nix is fantastic. An 18-year-old necromancer's father goes missing, and she must travel to the old world, where the have magic instead of technology, to try to rescue him before it's too late. I've basically been listening to it on a loop all year 🙈
@kimikobuford14 сағат бұрын
Slow start over here 👈🏽 Thanks for sharing❤❤❤❤
@BonnieDragonKat14 сағат бұрын
Evie you are absolutely adorable❤🎉 best moves ever girlfriend!!!
@CM-fo2he8 сағат бұрын
The Selection by Kiera Cass, not enemies to lovers per say but its a YA romance series about a regular girl and a prince. It describes the dresses and is very royalty.
@HeartBreathings7 сағат бұрын
Oh I forgot about that series! I never read it! Thank you!! I always meant to read that one
@CM-fo2he7 сағат бұрын
@HeartBreathings your welcome! Happy reading.
@shadowswept14749 сағат бұрын
I love enemies to lovers, but none of the ones I've read are fantasy. It's a really great way to add conflict to the story though.
@annebracher184314 сағат бұрын
Evie is so 😍 and she is you and George all over ❤
@SusanGHaws14 сағат бұрын
Thank you for sharing your process and home and family. Enemies to lovers The Awakening by Nora Roberts start of a fantasy trilogy. Ilona Andrews Clean Sweep series add the Kate Daniels series starting with Magic Bites starts as enemies to lovers then they become a team.
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
Ooh great recs thank you so much!!
@TracyP074 сағат бұрын
I wish I had someone to talk things through with.
@sarabreugelmans48593 сағат бұрын
Love your videos! I'm off to a slow start, but we've still got weeks ahead of us 😅
@alyssahebert560213 сағат бұрын
I’m still working on my outline.
@suzisaintjames12 сағат бұрын
11:48 it's not "woo woo". Michelangelo said almost the same thing when he carved statues like "David". The statue is already in the marble, he just releases it from the stone. 💕🌞🌵😷
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
Yes exactly!! ✨❤️
@nadineduerksen655614 сағат бұрын
too cute!
@itcanbedonedollars36935 сағат бұрын
❤
@Elizabeth-wr7mn7 сағат бұрын
I’m trying for 75k which may be a Mistake because it’s like 2500 a day and that’s a lot. But I’m going to try. I’m glad you were getting some rest. The stress between election and work. I’m pooped
@MillaSch14 сағат бұрын
Hey Sarra, I saw, your screen is right in front of the window. Maybe your eyes would do better, if you change it? My eyes get pretty exhausted when my screen was in front of my window, because of the brightness. Question : What are you doing with the calender sheets from privious months? Keeping?
@HeartBreathings10 сағат бұрын
Oh I didn't think of that. It will make be sad to move it because I love the light. Something to consider though. I take the monthly and weekly pages and put them into another storage planet but I don't keep the daily pages .
@Kat_Author202114 сағат бұрын
Little Evie is going to be so embarrassed about that first clip when she gets older, but she was so cute! 🥰 Now to go watch the rest of the video. Lol.
@HeartBreathings14 сағат бұрын
Haha, maybe. I wouldn't have been! I think she'll love it!
@Kat_Author202114 сағат бұрын
@ haha. Maybe you’re right. She is like a little you. 😁
@ghostyplans13 сағат бұрын
Well I hope the comments of her being so cute help her *IF* she’s ever embarrassed. She’s adorable! ❤
@TravelLove30513 сағат бұрын
Games of Command - Linnea Sinclair
@HeartBreathings11 сағат бұрын
Thank you!
@LeahWriter14 сағат бұрын
The most recent enemies to lovers I've read was Fourth Wing
@brittneysbookshelf949114 сағат бұрын
I'm sorry, but did Sarra not just give birth to her? I fee like that was like last week and she is so big now! Those were the best dance moves I have ever seen.