please critique (angriest 12.57 3x3 average of 5)

save me from the tornado v3
Generated By csTimer on 2024-06-22
avg of 5: 12.57
Time List:
1. 11.63 F U L2 U F2 R2 B2 F2 D2 R2 L' U2 B' F' L U B L' F'
2. (9.73) R2 D F' R2 U' L2 U B2 U' R2 B2 U F2 U L D B R2 D' R' U2
3. 13.06 F D2 B2 F2 D R2 F2 U R2 U R2 U' B' R F R B' D B D
4. 13.02 D2 B R2 F L' U' D L D2 F U2 F2 L2 B' L2 F U2 R2 B2 L
5. (13.27) R2 D' U2 B2 R2 F' D2 B' L2 R2 U2 F L F U' F2 R' U2 L2 F
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[@dantetellecheahultmark2881]

your cross looks really bad but your look-ahead is good

[@ricoF]

thanks.

[@dantetellecheahultmark2881]

@@ricoF np😊

[@dantetellecheahultmark2881]

@@ricoFforgot to say but your f2l is also really unefficent