Yes, this VERY heavily inspired by the written fan story, "The Cough". Is it a recreation or plagiarism of it? N o . I simply was inspired by the cough and many other infection au's on KZbin to write my OWN story. This may seem very similar to "The Cough", but I took some very big liberties to make sure it didn't seem like I completely stole the idea, because I didn't!! If you want to check that one out, please do! It's a pretty decent story. Anyway, please enjoy both that story and this one! The team and I worked super hard to make this, and I hope everyone can give me some positive feedback. ^^
@zozupskystar863910 ай бұрын
And ya did! It was such a fun video to watch! Also it's more intresting than the cough because there's actually physical evidence of the disease and this feels like there's more emotion in it... Btw, I do see similarities but hey that's bound to happen! Infection apocalypse stories have scenes like this in em all the time of 'oh, someone in this room is possbly infected' so it's fine. Edit: wanted to specify what type of apocalypse stories...I mean zombie/infection ones...not ones like nuclear fall out unless those have infection stuff in em too.
@Dingobabee10 ай бұрын
I have to say The confirmation that BOTH Rarity and Twilight were infected is fascinating Because in The Cough, it's heavily implied that fluttershy was lying about being the one who coughed But here there's physical evidence that Rarity was too, even if Twilight refused to come clean. It's a very good twist to add to an homage to the first infection fic
@zozupskystar86398 ай бұрын
Agreed
@bioman909010 ай бұрын
It makes sense she is the element of generosity after all
@MightyRobot334710 ай бұрын
This is like "The Cough" but with a horn cracking instead
@khalebgamble-moosewah85838 ай бұрын
Same
@DUSTEYY10 ай бұрын
FriendShip ain't gonna save this one.
@CharlieAnimates9 ай бұрын
Yeah, plot armour will
@fbg_yt61039 ай бұрын
I did not ask for rarijack angst😭😭🍎❤️💎
@FunnyK16_Art9 ай бұрын
So sorry 😭
@SugarSwirl10 ай бұрын
I’m so happy I got to be a part of this :D
@psychosister101710 ай бұрын
Loved working on this! Absolutely amazing!
@ThatOneMan83010 ай бұрын
Neat! It's always lovely to see a collaborative fan project like this coming to life.
@kaitlynboss349710 ай бұрын
So did both of their horns crack at the same time? Because we saw that rarity was actually infected.
@himelmao16979 ай бұрын
I think Twilght might’ve purposely put the light out and then cause rarity’s horn to break
@loganlin500910 ай бұрын
Hmm wonder how the dragon race is handling the situation, I'm not sure if you would include them on this au but could be interesting to add as I never seen any Aus mentioning them, imagine infected full grown dragons!
@nightshroud967110 ай бұрын
These AUs normally just ignore the other races mostly. Sadly most of them also either have Spike get infected/killed or just plain forgot he exists.
@violetthebat881010 ай бұрын
This is AWESOME!!! ~ ❤ 💜 ❤ 💜 ❤ 💜 I LOVE the name "UCRONIN" being an anagram for UNICORN & I loved the suspense that was kept all the way through up to the end! ~ 😊
@Seraphineglowingstar10 ай бұрын
So happy I got to voice this! It turned out amazing!!
@mandeepgill90167 ай бұрын
What part did u voice😊
@coolmaster4323210 ай бұрын
This was awesome. The D'lirium music being used is very fitting for an infection AU.
@zozupskystar863910 ай бұрын
This was amazing! I love it! Kinda wish it was a full series or a part 2 where we watch how they deal with infected twilight and other stuff! Or maybe a prequel film! I probably feel this way because I love this short film so much and wanna see more! The art and story is so good! I love it!!!
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
Well 👀
@zozupskystar863910 ай бұрын
@@FunnyK16_Art well, this is a surprise that you responded to my comment! :) Hello! Just wanna say you and everyone else who worked on this short film were amazing! It really brought the story to life and now I'm super hooked onto it! The plot/story, the voice acting, the art...it really got me hooked! The surprise from the horn cracking, the dramatic reveal....the despair in the voices to really bring on the feels...the twist at the end...oh my gosh! Just can't stop rewatching it lol! Sorry if I sound like a broken record with repeating the stuff lol! Just was so good! Now I can't help but wonder how long twilight had been infected, how she got it...aaaand how she hid her horn crack from her friends!
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
@@zozupskystar8639 I’m glad you’re such a huge fan of this! I had a vision in my head, then pitched it into a full written story, got some friends on board, and boom! Me and my friends are more than happy this came out SO well!! And feedback like this makes it all the worth.😄 Whenever I finished the story, my brain thought of plans for hypothetical sequels and/or prequels, that is… if the THIS thing did well! With how much traction this is earning, I wouldn’t hate the idea of that now…👀 We’ll just see what the future holds. ^^
@zozupskystar863910 ай бұрын
@@FunnyK16_Artwell I hope you do and make this a full blown thing because I got so many questions! (Btw if I really like a story or something like that, my mind focuses on it and makes up a bunch of questions and theories about the topic! So I tend to ask a lot of questions about something if I really like it! Also gonna share incase any questions spark up ideas for stuff or idk lol!) How did the infection start? How is it spread? My guess isn't through bites because rarity in the art didn't look like she was bitten. She had no bitemarks on her. What happened to the princesses? Did they die or get infected? We know alicorns can catch it via twilight catching it and I was kinda guessing alicorns could because they are a combination of all 3 ponies...and one of them is unicorn! How did it get to ponyville? Did it start in the everfree like other infection stories since it seems to be a trend that they start somewhere in the ever free? Who's patient zero? Did they unknowingly spread it before the virus was identified or were they quarantined when first made sick but then Escaped and that's how outbreak began? So many questions... Edit: Grammer mistake! Got too excited when typing it I forgot to check it lol!
@anthonyrausch570810 ай бұрын
Yes; MLP never died; and it was only “A MATTER” of time until “KA-BOOM” here come the “RAINBOW TK-O” out of “NOWHERE”…..
@anthonyrausch57083 ай бұрын
More of this; PLEASE!!!!!
@Gamebits_The_Unicorn10 ай бұрын
This is really well done, the art, voice and sound effects, I'll admit I thought it would be longer. Regardless I loved it! Also, was the ending that Twilight was also infected?
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
That would be the implication, yes
@LunaRunaSeluna4 ай бұрын
feel like this is the only infected au that remembers rainbow and fluttershy were childhood friends...
@myhnamejeff239510 ай бұрын
Great job on this, very well done. I would like to see more.
@RileyTitchenell10 ай бұрын
this reminds me of the cough
@ItIsTmart10 ай бұрын
Nice work
@quintonjones26998 ай бұрын
Amazing work
@siobhanprice46510 ай бұрын
OOOOOOOOH that was good oxoxo
@sneaker1ose25110 ай бұрын
What are you yapping about aj is crazy
@Y.A.Y916599 ай бұрын
3:20 "Yapping" 😮💨 I give up. Edit: 7:05, no comment
@nightshroud967110 ай бұрын
So Twilight was infected all along? Wonder is Spike still alive in this AU actually?
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
idk. haven't gone too deep into the writing yet
@demonwes10508 ай бұрын
Gallows humor pinky used to try to change the mood and help her grieve
@jetstream_samm10 ай бұрын
it would be more sensitive if Applejack and Rarity kiss each other for the last time.
@LightningWingMLP10 ай бұрын
What happened to Celestia?
@lisaandethanc428410 ай бұрын
How is twilights treehouse still up It didn’t exist in 28 pranks later.
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
Honestly an error on my part. Oops... :( But at least I can use the excuse of saying: "Eh' it's an au. none of this is canon anyway."
@lisaandethanc42848 ай бұрын
@@FunnyK16_Art or in this au tirek didn’t blow up twilight treehouse
@lunarcross55813 ай бұрын
are you planning on continuing this series? I'd love to see where it goes! it was really well done
@axolotlquestions640710 ай бұрын
This is very similar to the cough
@lunacipher596910 ай бұрын
Me too
@luckyanimalspecialanimalever10 ай бұрын
Is there going to be part 2?
@SleepyBus-en7zuАй бұрын
Twilight sparkle it was you the hole time.
@fauliniacurora37810 ай бұрын
Ah, a wonderful plagiarism of "cough"
@SageBatKat10 ай бұрын
It ISN'T a plagiarism, go look at the last comments reply or the top comment,
@zozupskystar863910 ай бұрын
Tropes exists. In this case the 'someone in this room is infected' trope. Plus stories can be similar but different. I mean look, some infected aus are similar but have intresting twsits. Like cough gets everyone, this disease gets only those with magical horns (or atleast it seems like that since it's 'unicorns only' but it's clear alicorns can get it too.)
@valkocast95239 ай бұрын
Not like you can do any better it’s called inspiration not plagiarism
@vincentlucario5450Ай бұрын
Go back to school kid
@fauliniacurora378Ай бұрын
It's so funny how all of you are pissed off at me for pointing a simple fact, that that IS a plagiarism of "cough", scene by scene
@Derpy_Hoovesplay3 ай бұрын
It's like the cough from mlp
@Jerkwad1523 ай бұрын
lulz, Unicron
@DawnShimmer1017 ай бұрын
Just cut off rarity's horn it'll be fine....right?
@Adam-n8g1k2 ай бұрын
This would traumatized tize girls mor then bois watch the (sonic dreams collection boys for boys ruined childhood)
@sagebushes10 ай бұрын
u cant just steal the cough, reword it a little and call it something else... ur not even crediting the creator
@FunnyK16_Art10 ай бұрын
It was heavily inspired by that, yes. But me outright stealing it? No no. I admit, I was super scared of the story coming too close when I was writing it. I tried adding in my own ideas and thought they would look cool in a video format. But if you want to be rude about it, then thanks a lot. In fact, I wasn't even inspired by the original story itself. A video done by StarlyCookie, rather. So there's your credit's worth.
@vincentlucario5450Ай бұрын
I know you’ve grew up with your parents telling you “you’re one in a million”, but with over a billion people, that just means there’s thousands of people just like you. And if you ask me, that’s thousands too many