**READ DESC** Original Music..? 1 - A Time Of Dreams (WIP)

So I made this song awhile back long ago, and I was just experimenting the instruments around, and you know I do think that this sounds good, but I also want to want to know on what you guys thinks, criticisms are welcomed though!
Programs:
Movie Maker (Editing the video)
Ibis Paint X (From the speedpaint)
LMMs (For the music that I made)
My art from the speedpaint:
DaSonicLoverFan/s...
pCekuTz1O3...
My Discord Server:
/ discord