READING FAN FICTION WITH ZALFIE || MARK FERRIS

[@ceci8947]

"Alfie and I were holding hands and Mark was holding Nala's lead" 😂😂😂

[@lazicraft6503]

Ceci Newhart I just read, "Alfie and I were holding hands, and Mark was holding Nala's HEAD." I completely lost it, omg that was too funny.

[@falxhsan]

Soul Dais I laughed way too hard at your comment! 😂😂

[@alblake1213]

Ceci Newhart omg they said that as I read your comment😂😂 that's so creepyyy

[@ffionjones9480]

Soul Dais I did too lol 😂 Omg I was mad 4 a second 😂😂

[@georgia6919]

Lol😂 and btw i was your 1000th like

[@sophiramorris8439]

I laughed so hard when Mark said "don't you have work to do, Alfie?"😂😂😂

[@jasminedonaldson6809]

I screamed with laughter. My sister was like wtf are you laughing at 😂

[@anikaannabellestrachwhitlo7301]

Jasmine Donaldson

[@Leo-dx2ye]

Sophi Morris ya I fell off my bed

[@lazzyrazzyyasna2855]

I actually thought that Zoe's top said poppy deyes

[@bethduncan9928]

lazzyrazzy Yasna same it looks like it does

[@rainbowunicorn6842]

lazzyrazzy Yasna it says puppy dogs

[@jessdite2467]

lazzyrazzy Yasna sameee

[@crazyjesslittle771]

lazzyrazzy Yasna same lol x

[@jessicafoxall7427]

Jess Dite Aa

[@caitlinhearne2059]

When Zoe said "MARKS POINT OF VIEW" I died 😂😂

[@reganlouise3275]

Caitlin Hearne sameeeeee

[@itz_meriley6483]

Girl same

[@carleylandmark3712]

The whole vid, I was staring at Zoe's one piece of hair that was out of her part!

[@paigeblume9383]

It's been bothering me so bad!

[@jamieee03]

SAME!!!

[@inspire5529]

LOOOL SAME! It got me so agitated

[@jennahsidiabed460]

Me too!!!

[@gosiaoleszczuk3290]

Omg yesss

[@rhiannaadlam4878]

Plot twist Alfie and mark find love together

[@emilysmith6571]

😂😂

[@tx865]

Yaoi! ¯\_ᵔ ͜ʖᵔ_/¯

[@vimariaraphaela5200]

dude, i'd totally read that.

[@gayestdomino9141]

( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) would buy at Barnes and noblws

[@Lpaschal]

+_ amazingemmaisnotonfire _ hey m8

[@izzyhol]

On Zoe's jumper I thought it read "Kittens & Poppy Deyes" I was like, does she have mercy or what? 😂 but it said "Puppy dogs" 😂😂💗

[@izzyhol]

Merch** haha autocorrect 😂😂

[@megankcollins1__]

OMG SAME😂😂

[@chloemarie1409]

😂 Same!

[@lucyleigh374]

omg so did i😂

[@gayson5139]

Same

[@imank1245]

Mark turned away in this like 50 times😂😂😂

[@MarkFerris1]

im SO dramatic haha

[@artsyhassan2362]

Mark Ferris OMGGGG.. i can relate to that. I love your passion, creativety and confindence. You never fail to impress Mark ;))

[@kittyportsmouth4976]

Love u mark!!

[@katieannabelle7999]

Alexx K. Wheh

[@kaylee2170]

Haha

[@maddywood7014]

Those three strands of Zoe's hair annoyed me so much 😂😂

[@ainetierney3977]

OMG ye

[@TeenSquer]

Hahaha I was imagining a hairbrush fixing her hair the whole time..

[@cookiemonster4668]

Lmao me too xD

[@ceallaighgorman6387]

+Roy Assink Me too, I wanted to grab a comb and just move them to the right side.

[@TeenSquer]

Ceallaigh Gorman excactly!

[@sunnytoparti6606]

love how posh zoe is when she reads

[@fraochmataz]

that's how I sound, a problem with being British is that you always sound posh...well most of England

[@sunnytoparti6606]

trust me, know the feeling.

[@louiselee1997]

I always sound posh when I read and I'm British too

[@_katie_munro7451]

+Louise Lee me too

[@evierhianna3776]

she should do audiobooks

[@amandadavies5659]

I denfinitely think someone should make fanfiction where Mark and Alfie are in a relationship.

[@nevealexa422]

yes, i agree

[@lunacorell]

Omg yes

[@iliketoreadstuf]

Alfark

[@amandadavies5659]

+olivia clark perfect !👌🏼

[@verityscorer8208]

OMG yes! 😂😂😱❤️

[@paigewilcox4549]

Imagine if mark was in the car that Alfie got hit by 😱😱😱😱

[@em-br5ho]

Paige Wilcox 😱😱😱

[@aliyahwise1239]

Paige Wilcox omg reading that just gave me chills

[@hollieha7747]

Paige Wilcox omg that could be an idea

[@KristinaSandnes]

It would be SO fun if you acted out these fan fictions and made it a little series!!! :O

[@Lunamcmanus]

YES OMG

[@jazznava2406]

yes

[@sarahhellicar5105]

Yes !!

[@riyaa.8421]

I also feel like Zoe can definitely do a series where she takes children's books, or just her fav books and makes them into a dirty version (basically what she did with the polar express😂)

[@ellajordan6811]

YESSSSSSSSS

[@KristinEklund1222]

I'm literally dying laughing. It was making me laugh so hard my dog was like bitch it's bed time

[@teekoike]

😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@theofficialwatermelon8583]

I can't 😂😂😂😂

[@venesabytyqi3356]

LMFAOOO

[@user-kz6hw4mz4n]

same

[@karaclaire412]

Lmaoo

[@gobabygogo]

Omg I need to see you act out a fanfic 😂😍

[@mmorganbrookee]

yesss!

[@rubymcl_7184]

yaaasssss!!!!!!

[@zharaprice206]

Yessss

[@anitabenedetta3790]

YASSS

[@LexsAmphitheater]

YES PLEASE MAKE AN ACT

[@bercemyelogru8351]

Alfie and mark should do a prank on Zoe where mark tells Zoe "how much he loves her" and just see what happens😂😂

[@lainedg7]

Xoxo Gossipgirl What if zoe says he loves him too more than Alfie 😂 That would gooooo so wrong!

[@xx-og5cf]

Lelaine de Guzman but it would be so funny

[@katieannabelle7999]

Xoxo Gossipgirl yeah

[@zoevelez3408]

Zoe and mark should prank Alfie. I can imagine it already😂

[@nickrandall3181]

Xoxo Gossipgirl yeah we need to like this loads so mark sees it.

[@henna452]

One piece of Zoe's hair is on the wrong side, and for this whole video I was staring at it about to explode.

[@reregaming3596]

sameeeeee xD

[@cassidywilson9767]

OMG SAME

[@ellie-pm9hp]

same :) but at 1:18 it was fine

[@haleydutton9121]

SAME omg

[@tiny-pineapple2983]

omg I saw that to it was driving me crazy

[@rubyomaraholt]

I was crying with laughter at this 😂 There needs to be a part 2!

[@ainetierney3977]

Ye

[@baileyarkham9395]

YASS

[@kirstylich1818]

+Bailey Arkham yess! :D

[@lizziebmoreno]

yasss

[@TRACY-ji2yt]

YES

[@saraholeary8805]

at first i thought zoes jumper said kittens snd poppy deyes😂

[@daniellesings9325]

same

[@weirdowithoutano962]

What does it say?

[@lenadonavic4410]

+PeekabooHamsters it says kitties and puppy dogs

[@myahrolf9925]

i seriously thought i was the only one

[@lenadonavic4410]

+Lena Donavic kittens

[@dizzydee3121]

I thought Zoe's top said 'kittens and poppy deyes' hahahaha

[@553zz]

Dizzy Dee that's what I thought 😂

[@abbieharrison3951]

Dizzy Dee it says kittens and puppy dogs

[@emilyisme8]

Does it not???

[@cocopops2378]

Emily Sears it says kittens and puppy dogs 😂😂

[@kay7539]

Dizzy Dee sameee 😂

[@1013isabella1]

I FELT SO BAD FOR ALFIE THIS WHOLE TIME HAHAHAHAHHAHAH

[@maggiek.745]

Same 😂😂

[@cartwheelingkatie5717]

Same lol

[@elliejones5822]

Same

[@chloeward2680]

ur profile pic is my life

[@mypinkichigo]

same!😂😭

[@777mckaylee]

IM CRINGING AND LAUGHING SO MUCH THIS IS MY FAVORITE VIDEO EVER JDFJJDJF

[@777mckaylee]

4:31 ALFIE DSKFICNEKCNSKE

[@777mckaylee]

update: im crying i cant believe this

[@katelynjene7188]

I NEVER SEE ANYONE WITH THE LAST NAME POURCIAU! P.S. My last name is Pourciau

[@777mckaylee]

+Katelyn Jené really?!! me neither! where are you from?

[@katelynjene7188]

Louisiana

[@Jahdae_Thomas]

if you really acted this out I would literally piss myself PLEEEEASE do it😂😭

[@lauramackellar1067]

Want them to act it so bad

[@kathy97.]

Omg I commented almost the exact same thing. I would pis myself too 😂😂😂

[@poppygrace9381]

I would cry laugh so much😂

[@user-gz5wn4th9b]

yes pleaseee

[@olivermoth]

Mark's a savage in this fanfic😭😂

[@sophietrafford9156]

Am I the only one that thought this video was so awkward for Alfie...

[@kacifollett6656]

He looked like he was left out asf it was probs so awkward for him

[@jeanettefrisby8282]

SO AWKWARD FOR ALFIE!!!

[@kashmalakhan3735]

Alfie looked and seemed like he wasn't meant to be in this video lol! he didn't seem quite happy

[@sarahheley8254]

At various points he looked really sad or really jealous

[@oliviameehan6860]

Some story's do come true 😱

[@ixMissTeddyBear]

DO PART 2 WHERE YOU ACT IT OUT

[@kirstylich1818]

YESS! 😂

[@isabellezaroubi5518]

i need a part 2

[@jadamiles5444]

yaas

[@ameliatomlinson]

OMG yessss 😊

[@meganharris8097]

Definatly!!!!!!!

[@isobelmugford8253]

is anyone else wondering what happened to Nala

[@lillyvictoria5012]

Isobel Mugford Me

[@harrisonkez6092]

Isobel Mugford OMG yeah 😂

[@aminaali4138]

Isobel Mugford Mark was holding her. The person who wrote this made another part. Poppy is in it aswell

[@kelseybateman9298]

Is it on Wattpad? what's it called?

[@sarahc-l5098]

there's another part??

[@stephip6429]

Alfie is going to be suspicious now😂

[@reganlouise3275]

Stephanie Payne ikr

[@carlyking2658]

I know this is probably fake but everyone should understand that Zoe and Alfie are in a strong relashionship mark is just a great friend

[@tashahaire1958]

It's fake I promise

[@HiMeMeYT]

What's fake?

[@jessicawingrovepb8372]

The fanfic they wouldn't be reading if it was real 💗

[@coffeeaddict9198]

Yes xx

[@jamesewer4362]

its fan fiction course its fake

[@clarixaortiz6923]

idk but I feel like there is real tention between all of them..

[@MarkFerris1]

we all hate each other.

[@Samantha-wk3fb]

+Mark Ferris LMAOSJSN

[@laurajpakenham]

+Mark Ferris Yass Mark👀

[@nerdysponge2091]

+Mark Ferris lol

[@gishalipiyatunga5015]

.

[@dldell2320]

I felt so bad for Alfie through this whole thing

[@dldell2320]

+Aleysha Roper omg ikr!!! haha

[@whythefuck1047]

I thought it was only me, I feel like the made him the third wheel.

[@sashabarnes9274]

+DL Dell ikr!! 😭😫

[@elfiena]

ikr😭😭

[@AAlbaricoques]

This was jsut so awkward all the time

[@iloveyoutubers9580]

I can't wait for the acting scene for the fan fiction imagine them doing a breakup scene LOL HAHA😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣😅😅😅😄😁😆

[@freyadavies5325]

Crazy World do u know the app they use

[@iloveyoutubers9580]

No I wish i knew but I recommended search mark ferris fan fiction

[@lenadonavic4410]

Crazy World there using WATTPAD 🤘😄

[@kiera6176]

Freya Davies Wattpad

[@maddie045]

They never did it im so sad

[@Kapadem]

I TOTALLY THOUGHT HER SHIRT SAID KITTENS AND POPPY DEYES

[@aadila9670]

So did I but what did it say?

[@Kapadem]

+It'sJustAadz I think it says kittens and puppy dogs

[@beckymclaughlin5194]

same 😂😂

[@미혜-w3i]

kittens and happy days

[@eleanorm3356]

+Mxdi Mm kittens & puppy dogs

[@crustg0th]

Ive never heard Alfie swear before and I WASN'T expecting him to say "what a bitch!". OML

[@crustg0th]

Wait... And he said shit? Since when? Hmm? Why was I not aware of this?

[@jasem2702]

+Netherangel555 He keeps it non explicit most of the time for the young veiwers and so does Zoe, like Zoe says Fuck often but if she does in vlogs she bleeps it out but if its on other peoples channel of them swearing its stay unedited.

[@garlicbread3675]

he does swear, but not a lot

[@sarahboyd1649]

Zoe and Alfie both have contracts which don't allow them to swear because of younger viewers. I'm guessing Mark's contract is more relaxed :)

[@garlicbread3675]

+Sarah Boyd yeah, Mark did more paperwork for his channel to have cuss words

[@l.h.s.7861]

Zoey's shirt reads "Kitens and puppy dogs" But for half the video, I thought it said "Kittens and Poppy Deyes" XD

[@henna452]

Same XD

[@miaxx2789]

Lily Helen Kyne zoey?

[@fungusbungus2378]

So, Zoë talked to poppy, Alfie got hit by a car and Mark stole Nala

[@aliyahwise1239]

Slytherin’s Heir 4306 that’s it bro couldn’t have said it better myself

[@eIIioni]

Thats how we know that this was all fiction, Alfie had to "edit three main channel videos"! Lol, just kidding! Loved this video and all three of you, especially together!

[@squashyhat]

Hahaha!!! True story 😂😂😂

[@moniquerussell6738]

😂😂

[@lindsay7115]

Zoe's shirt says "kittens and puppy dogs", but i thought it said "kittens and poppy deyes." hahaha

[@maiseyrosee2100]

So did I 😂😂

[@erinwilliams8402]

+

[@aafreen540]

Hahah same!!

[@queensiri4263]

I thought it said "Lilacs and Poppy Deyes" I was like 'What does Poppy have to do with a flower?'

[@reneerobertson3688]

Lindsay same😂

[@태라이-z7o]

I think if Zoe dated Mark it would just be too weird

[@arloo8234]

Tara Green yep

[@NonsensicalSpudz]

*mark turns his head*

[@vtaehyung4678]

Tara Green BTS OMG !!!😱

[@jesscastle5366]

태라이 TOO

[@kay7539]

태라이 same

[@jacktaylor1564]

mark's like a fucking turn table in that story

[@marthabald3]

Yeah

[@juliafuller6325]

THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS AND SHE'S WRITING A SCRIPT VERSION. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS IT'S SO CUTE!!!!

[@EndlessSky26]

To answer the question: yes, sometimes we do turn fanfics in for grades in English.

[@sharminaisha]

EndlessSky26 True that!

[@shannonhill9127]

Next weeks video on Zoella 'Break up tag' Next weeks video on Mark Ferris 'Girlfriend tag' Next weeks video on Pointlessblog 'I lost Nala!'

[@ishitabisht6169]

I wish this never happens

[@pelaskaxd]

Lol

[@abix3430]

+Ishita Bisht yeah it seems like Zoe is forgetting about everyone except mark

[@nourasoumahoro5856]

lol

[@suzanne2655]

😂😂

[@Ailujporub512]

“Savage, I’m just still not there” I was CRYING lmao

[@georgiathompson732]

When mark did that edit on Zoe's voice it sounded like Miranda Hart😂😂

[@Srinkleofvicky]

Georgia Thompson YES.YES.

[@Machancheese]

I wanna know what happened to Alfie after getting hit and where did mark end up going WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END WITH SUCH A CLIFFHANGER.

[@tashahaire1958]

It's called Three Way Love Affair on Wattpad I'm updating tomorrow

[@sfgrgfsf212]

+Tasha Omg you're the writer?! Congrats! I like how accurate the details are.

[@LifeWithElla]

+Tasha Haire you could literally do so much your story is amazing! Now you have all the power 😂

[@lisabrown6374]

+Tasha Haire u should become a author

[@charleyrose5495]

Alfie: "savage I'm still not there" his voice broke bless, think it started getting to him 😂

[@sophiebrocklebank233]

I was crying with laughter. please act it out!!!

[@aminamohamed8862]

I do feel like Alfie does feel a bit weird in general when marks there I don't blame him tho

[@hannahb9102]

Yeah, he did look a little uncomfortable.

[@makailacarpenter6319]

+HannahB +Amina Mohamed You guys, Alfie literally bought Mark the necklace that he's wearing. If he felt uncomfortable around him he probably wouldn't buy him gifts and let him stay in his home... Don't overthink the video, it's all just fun. :)

[@jadexox2476]

Literally how? Look how close he's sitting with mark there clearly is no tension between them. Yes Alfie doesn't always laugh when they do together but not everyone has the same sense of humor at least Alfie wasn't being fake shows he's real in front of the camera

[@hannahb9102]

+Mak Leigh I don't mean with him I just meant with what was in the fanfiction.

[@makailacarpenter6319]

+HannahB yeah, I get that he could be because of the story, but I still don't think he was. He seemed interested as he was laughing and reading along. :)

[@emmapook]

At 1:25 Mark sounded like Stitch... 😂💗

[@Ryan-hd8fw]

IKR!!!

[@isabellarey5798]

Heard that too.

[@isobelnewman5562]

omg yesss

[@lottiecoleman1344]

Omg yes he does

[@floralaimee4563]

Yes!!! My 3 fave youtubers in one video

[@pixielatte9495]

Same! Woop Woop! High five🖐🏻

[@FreyaWolfy]

Mmhm, I love them all

[@harveypulford4691]

Same !!!!!!!!!!

[@charlottewellington]

Same 😊

[@cosmic.sparkles]

hilarious! please do more!

[@ebonylacey7919]

I've just checked and there are more chapters❤️

[@xx_just_gem_xx5120]

WHATS THE FAN FICTION CALLED

[@ebonylacey7919]

+GemzaSB three way love affair and its in wattpad!❤️

[@izymnc6925]

ayeee pham!

[@xXx_puy_layrz_xXx]

+Phandom Love link

[@michelliejegatheepan5680]

What is the fanfic called

[@LuckyNumber7]

The tears out of my arse bit had me laughing wildly 😂😂😂 great job guys - such fun to watch! 👌🏼

[@harryao8078]

whAT

[@LuckyNumber7]

+Isabelle Hopkins Lane haha Zoe was reading and just made a mistake/ joke 😊

[@LuckyNumber7]

+Isabelle Hopkins Lane 17:22 - go have a look haha

[@fahimrahat1920]

Is it me or do Mark and Zoe look alike or related?? Especially when they laugh and their noses' flare

[@superflyriri4153]

It's you xD

[@lucassacks6045]

no nothing alike!!

[@weronikaz687]

I think is just the sense of humer

[@blizzardandmai1129]

They could pass as half-siblings or cousins.

[@blizzardandmai1129]

They could pass as half-siblings or cousins.

[@emily9183]

"I beamed up at my two favorite boys..." *Joe slams fists on table*

[@maisyrosecourtneykeane2283]

Loved this vid sooo much! Never laughed so hard, please do more and maybe one of you guys acting it out !? 😂😂 you and Zoe are goals ❤️😂 ( and oh I can totally feel the tension rising between you and Alfie 😂😂 ) love you so much xx

[@maisyrosecourtneykeane2283]

+Mark Ferris

[@neelamanjum5056]

I'm going to try and write a script

[@cathrynoneill1207]

+Neelam Anjum cool

[@Maelstromoneil]

I'm writing that script fanfic! Does anyone know how to contact them?

[@elizabethwhite5108]

Email them, I'm sure they will all have a business email that will be in their Twitter or intact am bio or something

[@Maelstromoneil]

+Ella Berry what's the email

[@Maelstromoneil]

+Ella Berry thanks!

[@anthonyphan8714]

I wrote one too :D

[@Maelstromoneil]

+Anthony Phan thats awesome!

[@jpye]

i wonder if mark is behind the wheel of the car..

[@LailasLyrics]

Omg PLOT TWIST!!! 😂😂😂

[@jamesmortimer2947]

Dun dun dunnnnnnn

[@Hailsdhan]

OMFG LOL

[@MyLifeAsShannon]

THATS WHAT I THOUGHT

[@MarkFerris1]

THATS WHAT I THOUGHT!!

[@thatnickchick7966]

im crying. please act one out!!

[@marthabald3]

Imperfect Imposter yasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

[@kellyfox7520]

I thought Zoe's sweater said "kittens & poppy deyes"

[@startintedwater]

SAAAME 😂😂😂

[@katierussell7641]

same

[@lunacorell]

Same 😂

[@eviecockfield1997]

Oh my god same lol

[@moonlightgomez1469]

What does it actually say

[@zee5759]

FINALLY I WAITED FOR THIS VIDEO XX

[@ellamaydew3668]

Your username is goals! Xx

[@nikola4153]

username goals!

[@nikola4153]

+Ella Martinez ikr

[@VickyVidz]

omg your channel name is DA BEST

[@brookedaly4760]

Your username tho! Wish I was that smart

[@BethanLong]

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Do this again!! This was sooooooo good!!!

[@chloeedwards9490]

Loveyou Bethan xx

[@tonis7234]

this made me laugh so hard my sister told me to shut up 😂😂😂 also i felt bad for alfie omg

[@gemimataylor9904]

Toni Stulz ik

[@sampilimatalawwe2171]

Alfie was not happy that he got hit by a car.. He looked so upset at the end. :(

[@sampilimatalawwe2171]

19.38

[@rainbowsheep2410]

lol it was a joke 😊😊😊

[@Grimadex]

Banner

[@ceci8947]

I'm reading this 4 mins into the video... Spoiler alert 😭😂😂😂 jk lol

[@oliviavincent6847]

I feel like Alfie is Noah, Zoe is penny and mark is Elliot???🤔 am I the only one thinking this

[@ilyanajiwa5076]

Olivia Vincent buy when Zoë wrote Girl Online, her, Qldie and Mark weren't that close of friends...

[@oliviavincent6847]

+Ilyana Jiwa I just mean like the clothes mark wears and zöe and mark are such good friend and then Alfie and zöe are so in love x

[@nickrandall3181]

Olivia Vincent same.

[@ilyanajiwa5076]

Olivia Vincent yah,I agree

[@georgia9812]

Olivia Vincent When zoe wrote the first book mark and zoe weren't friends

[@miadommx2184]

U should make this into a short film. Who agrees? X

[@aliyahwise1239]

Mia Domm omg yaaaaaaasss

[@hollyelizabeth1748]

I thought Zoe's sweater said 'kittens &a poppy deyes'

[@nicolafirth2959]

I want a guy to look at me the way Zoe did at 7:10

[@keishabennison976]

I just want a guy to look at me

[@cerysmarie6639]

+Keisha-Mae Bennison 😂😂relatable

[@avamartucci2690]

+Keisha-Mae Bennison HAHAGA😂

[@tashaestelle5838]

+Keisha-Mae Bennison lmao 😂 same.

[@ashvankad8467]

It's ine of those times when the reply has more likes than the comment itself

[@abbeymitchell3016]

Omg I watched the entie thing and got into the story! I would see a film of this ❤

[@aquariuslostie]

same omg I was so into it haha

[@tashahaire1958]

It's called 'three way love affair' on wattpad

[@AnaMartins-df3ry]

+Tasha Haire what's the writer's username?

[@samanthadownsworth2119]

+Ana Martins She is the writer

[@AnaMartins-df3ry]

+Samantha Downsworth I know, but I can't find it by searching for the fanfiction's name xp

[@stephanielam4344]

Alfie LOOKS REALLY UNCOMFORTABLE

[@zebras_123]

Ikr😂😂

[@marthabald3]

ikr I don't know why

[@imanmir1427]

Yh he does😂😂

[@datsvewynice]

this is literally my favourite video of the three of you and i can’t stop coming back😌

[@zairahnaz720]

Me right now I come back every couple years 😭

[@Sam-mk8sl]

I still laugh when Mark goes "Knock Knock let me in" 😂😂😂

[@xxcandypandaxx2759]

Elliot - Mark Alfie - Noah Zoe- Penny

[@victorianewton3447]

I love girl online!

[@aimeesmith839]

Victoria Newton same 😊 I'm reading them again for the 1929829299228827 time😂😂

[@itsmaelouise]

That’s literally who I imagined the characters as

[@marthabald3]

Don't you mean that mark is Elliot not Elliot is mark

[@staceylock9844]

This was amazing I smiled all the way through especially seeing your reactions too. You've got to do this again. Acting out would be cool too. There is nothing better than a Zoe Alfie and mark calab!! Amazing! Whoever wrote that was brilliant too. I really hope they do a part 2, I was like Nooo it can't end already! X

[@lucymorris2838]

type into google three way love affair zalfie and mark wattpad and read the next chapter, shes updating tomoz aswell

[@EllieHangerx]

This was actually hilarious

[@sophaiello2694]

Please do it again Mark

[@sophaiello2694]

And please act it out it would be hilarious

[@kenzienorton4278]

YAASSS

[@rustichomebeauty5169]

Mark deserves way more subscribers ❤️❤️

[@a.6243]

Yeah

[@SiennaRnais]

Ikr

[@0mar.1]

That is soooo true!

[@Jade-5713]

I know right !

[@jamieee03]

When Zoe said "Oh come on Zoe, don't be so ridiculous." I laughed so hard😂😂😂

[@amyxbabyyy]

This must be really awkward for Zoe & Alfie.😂

[@britneysoubannarath2287]

Amy Aguilar and for Mark too

[@katherinecumming3437]

But they are all great friends soooo, but ye I guess!

[@ellamay2018]

And mark

[@frankiebaxter2590]

why they're adults

[@aliyahwise1239]

Amy Aguilar it’s should be for Mark more than anything

[@kiml5050]

Anyone else noticed that Mark said "I'm joined by Zoe *points at Alfie* and Alfie *points at Zoe" 😂😂

[@lucymorris2838]

Yeah im not sure if he ment to do that or not but it was funny lol

[@kiml5050]

Lucys Morris Yea maybe.

[@MiaCooper2305]

He did it as a joke that's why they all laughed x

[@kiml5050]

+MiaCooper 298 OK I was wondering if it was a joke or not.

[@alyssam2011]

It was on purpose to be funny

[@TheDrT321]

Plot twist: This is Mark's real intentions but he wanted to see Alfie's reaction first

[@sarahtipper5657]

when they update it read more !

[@tashahaire1958]

Updating it tomorrow 😝

[@BunnieVamps]

+Tasha Haire wait is it your story?

[@Emily-jp6qd]

+Tasha Haire what's the story called?

[@julietteliz]

+Emily 2003 three way love affair on wattpad

[@tashahaire1958]

+PLAYDBECK yeah

[@thatnickchick7966]

"what about the necklace" im dead

[@urmother6819]

Oh my god I cried with laughter at the bit where Mark said "Knock knock , let me in!" 😭😂😂😂😂

[@Gabriella-lc4px]

zoe is me shes like listen fanfic zoe u need to calm down and das me but to myself everyday

[@Gabriella-lc4px]

"i just hope im not walking nala and das me"

[@sheenaneilblog]

I was glued to every minute of this story. more please :)

[@emmybayley2595]

The way mark says 'don't you have work to do Alfie?' Is just hilarious 😂❤️

[@Abrmiclau]

SO FUNNY!! PLEASE DO A PART 2 CONTINUING THIS FANFIC!! MAYBE EVEN ACTING IT OUT?!

[@ellieknowles7541]

Please do another one I loved this it was so funny😂😍

[@zainmaan2825]

Yeaaaah

[@florencemercer869]

yesssss please!!!!

[@Gagging4Lit]

When your fanfiction is better written than your own fiction...cough cough Zoella.

[@folkwhorex]

STFU

[@carolinem5056]

Oops true

[@cbb3480]

Wtf

[@lil3735]

No hate 😉 marks channel is such a positive place. Girl online is an amazing book. Please don't hate 😥😥😥😥

[@TheMaryvanilly]

hehe

[@heathertracey6886]

OMG Alfie must have been pissed

[@filmedbydev]

omgi died at the part when it sad you 'handed zoe her ice cream with a worried look on your face' HAHAHA

[@filmedbydev]

oh HAHAHA and the part where you 'whisper in her hair' HAHAHAHAHA im done omg haha

[@apparentlylucy]

who else scrolled down into the comments to try to stop cringing

[@RaspberrySprinkles1]

me this vid was tense

[@justteishax8512]

Me😂

[@simplyoverit9232]

Legit what I'm doing rn 😂😂

[@sarahallen2862]

Which then brings me here😂

[@lilym5168]

Yup

[@natashafarwell6718]

zalfie are goals? More like Zark (best friend goals).

[@keishabennison976]

No one likes u so go away

[@nicolexlecitona3639]

Get out of here man

[@alexisg6054]

they look & act too much like siblings for me to even think about them together. lol

[@hooudedie]

yes

[@annareidy6301]

No! No no no, they could never be together they are just to close as friends 😂

[@sarahmcclintock2837]

When mark said "Marks point of view" a literally laughed so hard 😂😂 these three are just the best

[@TheGerasim00]

I'm interested to see if there is a fan fiction about Mark and Alfie. 👀 😂

[@TheGerasim00]

[@saraaljasmi3767]

😂

[@stellularjimin2394]

Sme

[@emilyharrower5964]

there defo will be one now

[@sasaoldbarn]

Yes that's exactly what I want to see!!!

[@IsobelBuxton]

please please PLEASE act it out!!

[@maiseyrosee2100]

Yarsssssssssssssssss

[@oliviameehan6860]

Omg yessss

[@paigegoodall1455]

Please!!!

[@mirazaffira8223]

YAS I WANT THAT TO HAPPEN

[@frankielochhead1820]

I looked on the story and they are making a script 4 them, let's hope!

[@lisbethsoone5690]

In Estonia it's very late currently and I'm secretly on my phone watching this and trying to hold back my laugh, but I can't help it! Laughing so hard! Love you guys!❤

[@fraochmataz]

in England it would've been 21:00 approximately when he uploaded it (I know because thats where I am)

[@gayson5139]

Omfg Same

[@empty912]

Lol I do that all the time😂

[@luq44]

"I reached into my bag and pulled out ny vug-ug-ina" Im dead 😂😂😂😂😂