Future star for sure. Deserved a smarter audience.
@JoshPhoenix113 ай бұрын
Well done young lass, that was really good. Your comedy writing is far superior than a lot of professional comedians. Just try and work on the nerves, breathing, and pacing yourself. Your style and natural tempo is already moderately paced and witty which is what I really liked about you, and so the nerves speeding it up even more at times just made some words a little hard to understand. But thats only a small thing. I just wanted to give you something you could take from because of how brilliant your set was.