Rewriting Miraculous Ladybug! | Bonds Beyond Fate: Second Arc

[@Bi_Panda]

When I heard that Chloe found cleaning supplies in the cabinet and that she saw a dog getting sprayed in the face when it wasn’t behaving I immediately knew where it was going

[@Sqewree]

i am so invested in the chloe luka storyline ....

[@ZZDoesStuffYT]

Poor Chloe... Poor Alya... Why did you have to make me cry T~T

[@nathanspradlin8570]

I'll be completely why I love this AU Miraculous fanfiction is the exactly WHY I love the superhero teen drama and what canonically SHOULD be but this is a fantastic retelling of the show. I actually LOVE Chloe is this version and I'm 100% behind what decision you make with her and love everyone else too. Great job 👍

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you so much

[@watermelon3266]

@@TheArtisticAloubell to add onto this: it’s so hard to find a miraculous ladybug fanfiction that isn’t 1. Only ten minutes long 2.incredibly contrived or 3. Read in a way that makes the characters sound “quirky” l

[@loveyourself-Hannah]

when I first saw the title I thought it said "blondes beyond fate" 😂

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

I mean...that's not TOTALLY incorrect in the context of this story XD

[@Sweet_and_Simple_Living]

Wow, I really like the way you wrote both arcs. I love how you balanced out the characters and their stories. One thing I didn’t like about the original series was that it got so focused on the romance that it neglected other characters. While Mari is my favorite character, I love her personality even more here. She isn’t as creepy and there’s much more to her character. Great job! A character I did not know I would get attached to over time was Chloe. This version fleshes her out to make her seem real. We see that she was a kind kid, but the neglect from her parents created this pompous behavior in her in order to get the attention she wanted, whether positive or negative. It was funny to me that the reveal can early, but this choice made the romance more complicated and not as one-sided. There are many times I laughed and teared up while binge watching both arcs in the last two days. It makes me look very much forward to the next arc of your series rewrite. You are very creative. Great work!😄 Have a blessed day.🙏🏻

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you so much for keeping up with the story

[@Wendeta-hq2cp]

🍬I love binge videos! I have already seen the first and second arc, so I will be out! However I'm happy that the second arc has a binge option too, since I have a tendency to binge previous seasons/arcs of shows (or in this case your rewrite) when new ones start! Sort of like a recap. 🍬

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

❤️❤️❤️✨

[@JinlongTheGoldenDragon]

I have to say I'm... thoroughly impressed with how you wrote this arc. It's somehow even better than the first one. I was entertained at hearing your what ifs on Miraculous on the first few episodes but then I got invested. Really, invested until I watched most of the episodes you'd made. Your writing of the dynamics of Ms Boustier and Chloe are to me some of the most impressive. In the actual show (the bad one) the writers and the creator made it clear that this 14 year old girl with a mother who doesn't love her is some kind of wicked irredeemable witch and nothing she does is ever good. And you wrote Chloe to do some really, really rotten things in this story. The difference is you gave her so much nuance. To the point that I was so, so impressed with how you wrote that cat fight scene. If Thomas Astruc had written it he'd revel in the chance of an "everybody clapped" moment and to humiliate Chloe and for the audience to be on the side of Marinette and for it to feel victorious and cathartic. But the way you fleshed out Chloe and what she went through before all this, this is not what happened. Chloe was humiliated. But instead of feeling any kind of karmic justice or catharsis, I felt... sad. For everyone. Every single character. The fight didn't feel like an epic anime battle where Marinette emerged victorious. It felt like a group of kids who had all individually been through a lot, and all of them hurt each other. Marinette never deserved to be targeted for existing. Alya hates Chloe for good reason seeing how she tormented them for years. Adrien... is completely split in half between his friends, the girl he loves, and his sister, who he also loves, all hating each other. And Chloe. Being so devoid of genuine love and support in her life (or at least unable to see the love she does have) seeing every instance of Marinette's existence as proof that the world is against her. It was such... such a sad scene. And a realistic one. This is how fights (especially physical ones) between people tend to actually go. So well done. Very well done. And of course the memories episode was visceral and fleshed out Alya's very valid reasons for hating Chloe on a personal level even more. And Chloe's twisted rationalization of "punishment" in her mind which therapy never healed. She is an emotionally broken girl, and hopefully time with someone like Luka will help put her on the path of proper healing (pleasantly surprised at how well you paired those two together too) overall I got so much praise for your writing.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@JinlongTheGoldenDragon I love comments like this so much! Thank you ❤️✨ I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far 😁

[@Ro994]

🍭 YAY, it's here! Now I can use this as background noise for those long drawing sessions, hehe 😁 I really loved this second arc! The drama and personal conflicts were SO engaging, and I love how everyone got their highlights and moments to shine! I think your writting has improved since you started working on this series, and I'm sure it'll keep getting even better! Cannot wait to see what you'll be bringing to us on the third act. 😄✨

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you so much for your support through all of this! 🥹🥰✨

[@cocoaskinn1897]

🍭🍿 If only there was more time in a day, so i can binge these videos all in one go. Man I am invested.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thanks for watching! I'm glad you're enjoying it ❤️

[@sober_katz]

your new artstyle is awesome! i really love this story :> 🍬🍭

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you! 😊

[@isma_ambas]

You are doing an amazing work Alou!!! I'm really enjoying your history. I have a question that i'm not sure if you already anwer it but why isn't Gabriel atacking Fu or trying to take information for him?. After all he already saw that there are new miraculous holders in town. Continue your awesome work!!!

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you so much! ❤️✨ Gabriel might not like to admit it, but he still has affection for Fu, so attacking his adopted father isn't something he wants to do. That, and he knows that Fu won't give him any info.

[@timotheebrasseur6188]

Can't believe you already gave us 7 hours of story already. It's so good! 🍭🍬

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

It's actually closer to 9 hours! Lol Thank you for your support ❤️❤️💖🥰

[@lexieguo9581]

🍭 can’t wait to see arc 3!

[@jyanthewitherkiller]

nah this needs more views

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you

[@rossjones8656]

Damn it all, the Juleka stuff really squeezed my heart.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

[@rossjones8656]

​@@TheArtisticAloubell someone else said this but I must give praise because this is so good. It helps me with my own plot so thanks for giving me inspiration.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@rossjones8656 thank you for hopping aboard the ride!

[@Why_not_Andy]

Thank you for sharing!!! I love the feel of your story! I mean this in the nicest way this video is like an audio version of a fan fic, it's so nice to listen to I love your voice!🍭🌸💐🍬🍭💝🪻

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Wow, thank you!

[@allycat545]

I love this rewrite so much! I can't wait for the next parts!

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@allycat545 thank you ❤️❤️❤️

[@Bi_Panda]

Why does part 13 feel like the plot of one of the holiday specials or something just without the holiday themed Akuma

[@jenniferhoward5303]

congrats on making such an awesome story. Big improvement to the world and to almost all the characters. I personally hate Ms Bustier : known victim and abuser situation. Ms Bustier chooses to keep them together despite other professionals warning against it... Screw the victim, I can use them to help better the abuser. 😢 like No don't do that!!! 🚩 maby just keep them apart. I understand wanting to help better someone but it's not the victims responsibility.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you for watching ^0^

[@supernova._.482]

I absolutely love bonds beyond fate ♥️

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you for supporting the story! 🥹❤️

[@noobmaster-cd7bk]

I fell asleep while watching this and I had a dream about miraculous

[@noobmaster-cd7bk]

Update: I'm half way through and this is amazing

[@journijones3253]

🍭🍬 love to binge this series so much!

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you! ❤️

[@journijones3253]

@@TheArtisticAloubellyou’re welcome

[@unripetheberrby6283]

🍬 Congratulations on the arc~ ^^

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thank you! ❤️

[@Selena223]

Bell you need to see something in my community tab

[@viktoriaschweizer8724]

🎉🍬Yes!!!

[@queenclarity4709]

I forgot that the Cat's Day Out part was in first person. Very refreshing. Do you think you'll ever do first person perspective for another character? 🍬🍭

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

I can't say I won't, but I don't plan to atm. Attempting to keep up a voice for that long is exhausting XD

[@queenclarity4709]

@@TheArtisticAloubell Totally understandable. You're good at it, regardless.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@queenclarity4709 thank you

[@gunfrost8778]

I’m only 20 min in but shipping cloluka was not on my 2024 bingo card

[@Hechauther]

4:29:10 lolol not me getting reminded of the crying child in FNAF 😅

[@Mothra1964]

This is great I haven’t even made it 3 minutes in but I love this story it’s great to relax to and also fixed a lot of my problems with the show, also here’s a candy for every time the show annoyed me 🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@Mothra1964 thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

[@greenstarlover1]

That's a lot of candy.

[@ralunix4612]

Wait... isn't this a reupload or do I have a massive deja vu with the luka scene??

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

It's a compilation of parts 11 through 20 ^^ So yes, all of this has been seen already ^0^

[@ralunix4612]

@TheArtisticAloubell i got teased. I watched all of them. .... wait your done? Like no more new ones?

[@Wendeta-hq2cp]

@@ralunix4612 This is the end of the second arc. There will be a third act after this since the story is not finished yet.

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@ralunix4612 like our friend said, no, I'm not done ✨ Since the first arc I just like to make a compilation of all the parts of an arc together into one video. Arc 3 will start soon! 😁

[@ralunix4612]

@@Wendeta-hq2cp thank you

[@ReemSherif-f6q]

When will the new arc begin ?

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

It already began with Part 21 ^^ There's a playlist on my channel!

[@ThelordHayden34]

Audrey what the hell did you soo to this girl.

[@AnimeStarSky]

Today is Thursday June 13th 2024 Hi Happy Flag Day!..,,, 😁 Oh you’ve done a much better job with character development in my opinion Your Friend!…… Neil ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Thanks so much Neil ^0^

[@AnimeStarSky]

@@TheArtisticAloubell You Are Most Welcome !…. 😁

[@Randomfnlover]

where cerise

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

Not included in this story~

[@Randomfnlover]

okay

[@greenstarlover1]

1:56:55 - pretty sure Marinette would kill you if you said that to her face.

[@boredblue9686]

🍭🍬

[@YourLocalSadYaoYao]

Is it just me or Chole kinda sounds like Furina from genshin 😂

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@YourLocalSadYaoYao I'm not sure who that is, but I'll take you word on it! 😁✨

[@YourLocalSadYaoYao]

@TheArtisticAloubell Your storytelling skills are magnificent ✨ If you were the person telling the stories at libraries I would definitely go everytime 🥹

[@TheArtisticAloubell]

@@YourLocalSadYaoYao Aww thank you so much

[@LorelaivanBeethoven]

🍬🍭

[@watermelon3266]

4:58 omg, amazing writing/ foreshadowing, I feel so smart for understanding this OvO