"I can't draw a straight line anymore but thats okay because her hair is naturally curly" this is so beautiful.
@laagan43667 жыл бұрын
Chiara Esposito omg this is why i watch it everytime
@rebeccaariola4559 жыл бұрын
The one thing i loved most about this entire poem is all of the support she recieved from the audience. By the end of the poem she was calm and that is because of all the "come on"'s, the audience shouted for her. Plus the comment at the beginning, "come on, poet, remember why you wrote it." Beautiful.
@artemis49359 жыл бұрын
her voice sounds so on the edge of crying it's besutiful
@masonkemper17938 жыл бұрын
She starts off so soft and innocent sounding, almost childlike. And as she progresses you can hear the maturity and pain. And lord I just can't get over it. Gives me chills every time.
@Yellowducky6659 жыл бұрын
"I can't draw a straight line anymore but that's okay" omg omg
@MrFrozenUndies20008 жыл бұрын
'I would give blood to my brush for her to blush at me in that shade' fuckk
@lissylyrics19878 жыл бұрын
@SweetRubes8 жыл бұрын
I never thought that someone could speak the thoughts that echo in my brain but here it is... "You're not supposed to look at your friends like that" that sentence hit me hard; and so did this whole poem
@bowlingally8 жыл бұрын
+SweetRubes The other one that hit just as hard for me of not harder was "When you watch your best friends dance with boys who will never be you" This whole poem was hard hitting and beautiful
@leynalouise53298 жыл бұрын
this whole poem made me cry. it's echoing my thoughts.
@gwenrees75947 жыл бұрын
SweetRubes that line is so hard hitting xx
@then.e.r.d30496 жыл бұрын
Same
@EpsilonA7898 жыл бұрын
She is the poet I aspire to be
@sophieschmidt2218 жыл бұрын
In my kindergarten art class, sunlight dripped through fingerpaint-covered windows. I learnt the primaries: red, blue, yellow. I could make the whole rainbow out of three colours. I was older when I started telling myself that I only looked at the female anatomical models for reference. I had so much experience dressing quickly and keeping my eyes on the ground in the locker room, but this girl made me understand why they say “pretty as a painting”. You can’t touch museum art. We have the same lotion. It smells better on her, it makes me think of cookies and old Paris cafés where the great painters had lunch. The colour palette I bring from home is so dark, but she makes me lean towards romantiscism. I can’t draw a straight line anymore but it’s okay; her hair is naturally curly. A boy called her weird yesterday, and I wanted to tell her that I have spent hours practicing shading to recreate the light in her eyes, but that would make it obvious I’d been staring. You’re not supposed to look at your friends like that. Our teacher says the colourmaker Diesbach tried to make a perfect red and created ultramarine. In a time when ultramarine paint was worth more than gold he added animal blood to his flask and out burst blue, worth more than gold! I wanted vermilion like Romeo, ruby as sunset, flash lipstick, scarlet forget-me-not kisses, I would give blood to my brush for her to blush at me in that shade I would take cobalt as a new sky, azure as cornflower, schoolgirl skirt navy hiding held hands or even yellow sunflower petals. Dutch painters whispering “she loves me… she loves me… she loves me…” Our teacher didn’t tell us that the creation of prussian blue led to the isolation of cyanide. I can’t breathe without [???] the poison, it’s apple seeds and seeping through junior-high gym floorboards when you watch your best friend dance with boys who will never be you! I always liked friendship bracelets more than promise rings. My middle-school diaries are filled with girls, like a pick-pocket sketching the Hope Diamond. I’d be lining my [???] with stolen glances. I don’t have a partner in crime to keep me warm. I know the signs. The teacher’s assistant, a nice junior who comes to school with cherry eyes every time her lab partner gets a new boyfriend. Throw over your men! My history professor and her roommate of 15 years. I say someone in another time will remember us. I want to be five years old mixing all the colours until i get the drark brown of her Monet shoulder freckles, and you give a Valentine to everyone in class.
@horsecrazy22668 жыл бұрын
I think it's lining my coat
@horsecrazy22668 жыл бұрын
***** Sometimes people would like the words (to look at or if they speak another language)
@horsecrazy22668 жыл бұрын
***** I think someone else wrote it down :). I was just answering for why a lot of people like it
@horsecrazy22668 жыл бұрын
***** It's okay :) hI! lOvE yOu anyway
@andrequeijeiraa9207 жыл бұрын
Sophie Schmidt
@jilianjilianson71939 жыл бұрын
This is so comforting, it's exactly what being gay in high school and having a crush on a friend is like. Favourite poem
@sophiereadstoomuch9 жыл бұрын
this is honestly my favourite of all rhiannon's poems. suddenly I'm starting to see colours that I didn't know existed.
@its_sigh95459 жыл бұрын
Freshman year of high school, I fell in love with a girl who considered me her best friend. Her boyfriend liked me, he thought I was funny. She is an artist. She paints all the time. She has natural curly hair. No words can explain how hard this poem hit me.
@duravis00658 жыл бұрын
I was only nine when I started seeing girls differently, and one in particular. I remember her, naturally curly hair.
@alwaysaugust44365 жыл бұрын
This is the one slam poem that can really get to me no matter how many times I hear it. "I can't draw a straight line anymore but that's okay, her hair is naturally curly."
@BriWhite08 жыл бұрын
Her poems always give me chills omgg
@garfieldlemanski17319 жыл бұрын
I always thought poetry was for people who thought deeply into things and could right amazing poems I cannot write poems at all (not that I know of) Listening to her and the others like in "Somewhere in America" I actually started to cry and realized my love for poetry I listened to others and I cannot satisfy my thirst for true poetry at its finest The amount of thought that must go into every word is amazing I'd love to be able to write such a powerful poem that it brings people to tears
@professionalcoffeeaddict42299 жыл бұрын
Same
@kaitlynruiz28798 жыл бұрын
I can agree so much to that. I never relived how much I loved poetry until I listened to these.
@sparkytheterabithian75267 жыл бұрын
You know what, that is such a great speech.
@oliviapodraza25976 жыл бұрын
try. don’t make it perfect just feel it when you say it and it is already on its way to being poetry
@artoriastheabysswalker32068 жыл бұрын
I absolutely adore this poem. I love how she's so nervous at the beginning, it really feels like she's in love with whoever this poem is about. Even if her nervousness is really just stage fright, I think she's behaving exactly like I do when I'm in love and I really like her performance. Thanks Rhiannon
@WillowJaie8 жыл бұрын
She's actually crying at the beginning
@ManicureSlick Жыл бұрын
"I say someone in another time will remember us" - Sappho. I've listened to this poem so many times for so many years and it just hit me. You're a genius, Rhiannon
@just.dee5552 жыл бұрын
“remember your purpose, poet. remember why you wrote it” 😩💓
@hileman86002 жыл бұрын
this poem finds me every couple years. its one of the ones i remember the most. how i have changed so much, yet her words stay the same. but the meaning and how they hit me change. i hope she has found beautiful love.
@Aria26-f2b5 жыл бұрын
Damn if only this girl knew. She truly loved and love till it hurt. I personally don’t believe when people say they love me or are in love with me but if they ever wrote me something like this I would cry and believe it. I envie the girl she wrote this for ❤️
@kstorey948 жыл бұрын
I related to this so immensely that I couldn't help but cry.....for hours.
@theresafrancis4517 жыл бұрын
Remember your purpose poet, remember why you wrote it.I love how crowds in these competitions are so kind and encouraging.
@PhantomPhreafication9 жыл бұрын
I didn't think I'd find anyone who understood so well, but here it is, spoken in colors that I see every day, a feeling of connection as I cry while I listen to your voice tip towards tears.
@helluvo3 жыл бұрын
i come back to this poem always
@lillianhatch20358 жыл бұрын
Whenever I hear one of her poems I just get chills, she is amazing
@oliviatuel23549 жыл бұрын
I promised myself I wouldn't cry
@TheStrangelyLiteral9 жыл бұрын
The more I watch this, the more it takes my breath away and leaves my guts in all kinds of knots. Needless to say, I can relate.
@MediumGhettoMachiavellian10 жыл бұрын
Amazing Rhiannon one of my favorite pieces by you so far
@PolesitterPictures9 жыл бұрын
This was wonderfully raw, and I know exactly what that's like, Rhiannon, because that all happened to me, too. I know I'm not alone, but it's always nice to have a reminder. Thank you. It means a lot. :)
@bearfamous_5 жыл бұрын
I realized today that “I say someone in another time will remember us” is a reference to a Sappho poem!
@robinhood94099 жыл бұрын
This is beautiful. Well done Rhiannon.
@user-jq4ee9zv9o3 жыл бұрын
This is my favorite poem ever
@betina42576 жыл бұрын
Used to cry while listening to this 2 years ago bc it was relatable. Now the girl I cried for is my girlfriend :)
@caseycoyle82094 жыл бұрын
I remember listing to this when I was 14 and crying
@DaniMorganCharity9 жыл бұрын
She is incredible
@lovebriny9 жыл бұрын
Everything. Yes each emotion, and word was as it should be. Thank You for this.
@mckennakaszynski74125 жыл бұрын
"You're not supposed to look at your friends like that" To the girl I loved years ago: you still hold my heart
@CREATIVEART1009 жыл бұрын
I feel this and relate to this on an emotion level I can not even imagine. She is a marvelous poet and this had to be my favorite as I'm an artist and having the same experience (except in Highschool )
@mileycass79 жыл бұрын
I love her poems so much all of them are perfect, gives me chills
@JanuaryLovesSelena5 жыл бұрын
“Watching your best friend dance with boys who will never be you” STORY OF MY LIFE
@xNoToUrZx9 жыл бұрын
This is my favorite of her poems I listen to it everyday and have it memorized, it's so good I cry every time.
@xNoToUrZx7 жыл бұрын
why am i watching this in class now im crying frick
@chaoxiangalula4086 Жыл бұрын
This poem always makes me cry :(
@ajkillem88508 жыл бұрын
this has touched me so much I couldn't help but cry.
@lexie62999 жыл бұрын
I love how she is so powerful in this. Amazing!!
@katemaguirebuck44869 жыл бұрын
I watch this all the time but this is the first time I've probably understood it and this is what I love about Rhiannon's poetry
@septunderground7 жыл бұрын
"You are not supposed to look at your friends like that" I am DELIGHTEDDD by this
@hayleerose29889 жыл бұрын
I really wanna do this for forensics but I know I'll never do it as good as her. she's so wonderful jfc
@whateverlol27673 жыл бұрын
I used to sob to this poem every day on the bus before school lol how times have changed. Still such a beautiful poem.
@kiararose88964 жыл бұрын
I found like 5 years ago and it’s still one of my favorite poems. I’m bisexual and have synesthesia, this hits different.
@haleybingham82719 жыл бұрын
This poem is just so amazing I can't put it in to words.
@Yellowducky6657 жыл бұрын
It's been two years since the first time I watched this, but I cry almost every time I see this again. This poem has touched me so much, given me so much hope and love. Rhiannon McGavin, thank you for this poem. Its words and themes are so beautiful.
@_emily.virginia_27078 жыл бұрын
why is this so relatable.... and why do I have to cry at everything
@huntermarcus7508 жыл бұрын
She gives me chills I connect with this so much
@laurengracelove8 жыл бұрын
I love this. I've never been able to put the feeling to words and you did it perfectly. Bravo Rhiannon
@bambiboo23699 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of the character Natalie in the book Love Letters to the Dead. Couldn't have fit her more perfectly. Beautiful.
@chasingthestarsxoxo10847 жыл бұрын
Rhiannon is definitely my favorite poet there is and I look up to her😊
@orangeaccount75358 жыл бұрын
every time i watch this i think of a different girl just as beautiful
@duravis00658 жыл бұрын
I got chills four times through this. Wow.
@amandawerner76379 жыл бұрын
got goosebumps from this
@miapinnick6978 жыл бұрын
everytime i need to ground myself, i take myself back here. seeing rhiannon's passion and emotion run free and watching her stand her ground just inspires me to be just as free and passionate in my craft one day. not only that but never before has something so accurately captured that immense overwhelming realisation as a young gay person finding their way in life that your heart knows others more than your brain knows itself
@sneeze16476 жыл бұрын
This was so beautiful and heart breaking it nearly brought me to tears.
@bisexualantigone9 жыл бұрын
Oh she's so nervous... dear.. I know how it feels. You can do it, I love this very much
@fairlyjamie6446 жыл бұрын
i just burst into tears
@aylinitzel.7 жыл бұрын
I can’t tell you how hard this hits home. Falling in love with girl friends who will never love you, but constantly drawing portrait after portrait because she’s so beautiful.
@spezria269 жыл бұрын
This was actually so beautiful and amazing and.... ugh absolutely flawless and moving.
@gracecondon62227 жыл бұрын
i literally cry every time i watch this it's such a beautiful poem
@Nicktotheleft9 жыл бұрын
Wow. Reminds me of someone I care about. Beautiful.
@ambercastner85267 жыл бұрын
she has such a powerful voice when saying poetry. she is amazing
@cakeforbreakfast9 жыл бұрын
Beautiful.
@Yellowducky6659 жыл бұрын
Holy shit?/ This gave me the chills. Best poem I've seen yet. Really touched me.
@ginagia59369 жыл бұрын
this is beautiful. she's my favorite.
@ashlynnnfairchild33556 жыл бұрын
I would love to listen to her talk about poetry and how she got into slam poetry and how she became such a beautiful poet
@ajbee58818 жыл бұрын
That was an amazing poem. I can relate to every bit of it.
@chevvy4278 жыл бұрын
This is honestly my favorite poem.
@dianegaile6 жыл бұрын
'remember your purpose poet, remember why you wrote it' 😭😍❤
@lydiaspears40476 жыл бұрын
drew me to tears
@katschmitt19137 жыл бұрын
I love her voice
@sleepy.dreamer7 жыл бұрын
oh my gosh. this is the most beautiful thing. I relate to this so much.
@bearfamous_6 жыл бұрын
She's breathtaking
@Celiaisbored3 жыл бұрын
everytime im drunk at home i end up coming back to this poem. Makes me feel like sandra cisneros said, like I'm still 16 somewhere within the current version of myself - what a special work
@stephaniemclaren97069 жыл бұрын
I literally had goose bumps oh my goodness
@andystanford71179 жыл бұрын
Fantastic!
@AffySkins9 жыл бұрын
So beautiful! I always get chills (I've watched this video and read the transcript so many times that I just have lost count). I love it as a whole, but some specific lines gave me an idea for a little shortfilm. I wish I could have permission to develop it further than just the idea of it.
@allisonjohnson97729 жыл бұрын
If you don't mind telling me, where did you find the transcript?
@viviofalabasta46247 жыл бұрын
I love these poems
@sugar1princess9 жыл бұрын
Damn it!I'm crying
@sleepless-cc4mo7 жыл бұрын
i love her voice it makes that more powerful
@sleepless-cc4mo6 ай бұрын
16 when I wrote that. Couldn’t imagine myself bringing a girl home, introducing them to my family or what a life could even look like. I’m twenty two now, I imagine our home together, she comes over often, I still hold her hand tighter when people look at us. I can imagine our life together.
@xNoToUrZx4 жыл бұрын
This still makes me sob
@hannahkline91048 жыл бұрын
This poem hit me so hard.
@maxcarter29748 жыл бұрын
So many chills.
@walkergirl029 жыл бұрын
This is so powerful
@madsterpiece5 жыл бұрын
this one. this one i watched once and her description of sunflowers and painting and swirls stuck in me. cant believe i found it again
@isabelleviolet68729 жыл бұрын
There are real tears im so
@delaneydimarco80764 жыл бұрын
Still my favorite spoken word poem
@tangysadness53098 жыл бұрын
i can relate to this so much oml
@gcakes17 жыл бұрын
GOOSEBUMPS OMG
@tryingtobeeloquent7 жыл бұрын
I have no words. Wow.
@lilianhennebryosborne88387 жыл бұрын
holy fuck this took my breathe away, instantly my favourite of hers
@woodsarthobbies65159 жыл бұрын
This is a powerful poem.
@xx_ratfucker321_xx23 жыл бұрын
Favorite line I practice hours of shading trying to recreate the light in your eyes I see 2 meanings 1. The girl she’s shading for is depressed and she want to put light back in them 2 the girl has such beautiful light in her eyes and Ann knows she can’t try and make it herself