Richard's Tale (Jenny and Screech Trilogy sequel [Ren Alternate AI Universe])

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@Bob-wv7ed 3 ай бұрын

That was absolutely beautiful!! Ren will love this. I listened to your work of art, I loved your work of art, and I cried to your work of art. Powerful! Thank you for that.

@marianneszijj 2 ай бұрын

Holy smokes! The Tales keep going! What a great concept and so Well Done! Absolutely brilliant!! 💔❤️‍🩹❤️

@Renegade-x7x 2 ай бұрын

Awesome, glad you enjoyed it, thanks! :)

@pom-pom 3 ай бұрын

Oh wow, Ren will be so impressed, that was beautiful. You are talented. ❤❤❤

@ameliAmuse1 2 ай бұрын

This is wonderful Completly - Lovely! 💭🤍

@gcarap 3 ай бұрын

The letter from Screech's foster mom was everyrhing.

@sunsayer 3 ай бұрын

Did you grow up in foster homes? I did,........ This is bull 🐂

@gcarap 3 ай бұрын

@@sunsayer I am not sure what your problem is? It is not unrealistic for the foster mom to write the officer a letter forgiving him, especially with Screech being the prick that he was. Even the foster mom realized he was beyond hope.

@valentindumitru9554 2 ай бұрын

Chapeau!

@belgand5555 2 ай бұрын

♥️❤️♥️Thank you

@badgerjoey 3 ай бұрын

Loved it - different vibe to the tales as it’s a more uplifting tale of redemption (although I was expecting it to take a dark turn and add one more to the bodycount)

@lynnewilson4605 3 ай бұрын

I love this. Wow ❤️

@leanneoneill5803 2 ай бұрын

Wow so good 😊❤

@nikrul 2 ай бұрын

Okay this was a bit monotonous but the lyrics and meaning were great and actualy got me to tear up. I'm curious, it's obvious the actual sound is produced by AI but did AI generate those lyrics too ?

@Renegade-x7x 2 ай бұрын

Hi! Glad you enjoyed the song. The lyrics were a bit of an iterative process. I asked GPT to generate some lyrics based on the story, but it didn't know much about the story just some basic vague understanding. So after about 5 full lyrical generations, it created one that was "mostly" accurate. It tossed Violet into the lyrics a lot, so I had to explain to it the backstory more and why Violet wasn't around. GPT finally understood, and I asked it to re-generate specific verses that didn't make sense. I had to tell it that the twins were likely raised in the Foster Care system, and that's where that note from the foster mom came from, although I had to regenerate that verse about 5 times so it rhymed properly and made sense. So, yes, AI generated all the lyrics but needed a lot of guidance and tweaking to fine tune them into a coherent story that fit the backstory and the Ren Tales universe. Thanks for your comment :), hope my explanation of the process sheds some light into the creation of the video!

@macronevicktor Ай бұрын

@@Renegade-x7x i'd really recommend continuing to practice writing without the use of ai, as the fun in creating comes from the process and to me, that is the meaning of life. AI being used as a crutch is tragic as it takes away from art, so i hope you can try to develop your own talent rather than replace it with ai

@emdiar6588 Ай бұрын

@@Renegade-x7x The story was okay. Not much more. Art, like the 'art' suffix in 'artificial' and 'artisan', literally means manmade (created by a person). This was therefore, by definition, not art. Your input was to essentially say "Not good enough. Try again until it makes sense." The Tales trilogy is definitely Art with a capital A. I don't know what I'd call this.

@Renegade-x7x Ай бұрын

Thanks mate for your comments! I have composed a classical (mostly) music album years ago in the 1990s and do have a music minor degree from college. The AI stuff is just a little side hobby for fun. I get your perspective though and understand it :). Have a good day!

@christyheffernan1248 2 ай бұрын

At least you wrote this one was AI

@piplevett4783 3 ай бұрын

wow This mafe me emotional

@sunsayer 3 ай бұрын

Sorta.. he didn't live, , , a ghost his whole life , sweet angel ❣️

@RedRampage9776 29 күн бұрын

I think the idea and concept of this is great - if Ren does decide to add another song to the JSV trilogy then I do agree that it should follow Richard, or some other closely involved character. However, with all due respect, I can't make myself like this at all. It's just kind of wrong to take this creative and interesting idea and waste it with something as trivial and corporate as AI - As much as this concept rocks, there's absolutely no soul. I'm thinking that a lot of the comments on this video are bots, thinking about the considerable amount of people who say "I teared up!" over this soulless, worthless creation that never took any emotion. If you had taken that college degree you said you had, and wrote a decent song yourself, then I would love this! If you don't like your voice, or you haven't learned how to sing/rap, then you can find a friend or hire someone on a site like Fiverr. But trying to play off a single-prompt generation from ChatGPT as a "work of art" or "something emotional" or literally anything that has any value at all is simply incorrect. What makes art valuable is the visual effort and thought it took to achieve a final product. I hate to be harsh, but this is just the truth. At least in my opinion, this idea didn't deserve to be conceptualized like this, and it certainly doesn't deserve to be praised. From your replies to other commenters, you said this was "just something on the side" and you had "a little degree in music" - that tells us that you have talent - or at least the potential to have talent. Use it. P.S: To those who question why this comment is as long as it is - Art being treated this way just makes me so angry. It takes the spotlight from real effort and creativity and forces it on dry, bland knockoffs that do it less than justice. I wish the world wasn't like this, and I do fuss a little when I see an example.

@Renegade-x7x 9 күн бұрын

Thanks RedRampage for your thoughts, I do appreciate the effort you put into sharing all of that, and your emotions and anger are definitely valid. My best friend currently may have said something similar, she feels emotions very similar to how it appears you do. I also appreciate the fact you took the time to look at other comments and give me a really holistic view of this song and the response it has. I don't think many comments are bots, and I experience a LOT of bots on discord so I think I'm good at recognizing them, however I do keep an open mind so maybe you're right and maybe they are. I do look for comments that call out specific parts of a video versus generic "that was great, I loved it!" comments, but it's really hard to tell for sure a bot from a generic real human comment, imo :). Again, thank you, and I will take your comments to heart; I still really enjoy the song, but I can appreciate your perspective. Have a great holiday/new years!

@leonardhaddlesey517 Ай бұрын

Sorry but this doesnt do Rens work any justice...not good.

@Renegade-x7x Ай бұрын

Alright, well I appreciate your comment nonetheless, thanks for giving it a listen :). I'm not trying to live up to Ren's genius, heh, just felt inspired by him. Have a groovy day!

@jr4653 3 ай бұрын

ai created, not a tale, more of a song, very cringe as well and not in the same theme.

@enskojigtyp 3 ай бұрын

I actually liked it, just a little bit hard to hear the lyrics in the beginning, but apart from that it's good. It's its own story, so it doesn't have to follow the same theme as the trilogy. And just because it's AI generated doesn't mean we can't appreciate it!

@Renegade-x7x 3 ай бұрын

thanks for the support! It's true, AI can make some good stuff, and it's not 100% AI, it takes some effort to generate a thumbnail that works well, and also I had to regenerate several parts of the lyrics that weren't accurate to the Trilogy Universe by explaining to the AI the backstory and what I wanted the story to be about to fit properly, and craft different styles of music until I felt this one fit the "mood" of the contents :).