Sci-Fi Creepypasta "Logs of A Stranded Astronaut" | Post-Apocalyptic Story

[@StarBrained]

Really great story, was going to try to sleep but it was too interesting

[@ashokrayvenn]

Loved it--now for part II: “How I raised a hybrid alien baby”

[@bullboo1]

a hybrid evolved human/ old world human baby.

[@timothydavis1734]

This was a good one…

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[@cpt.barker4767]

Agreed, I'd love to hear a part 2

[@harrygrimley4352]

Yep. I like it. Maybe movie worthy. Thanks for sharing this with us.

[@shannonjohns2308]

Great story! I would love to hear the adventures he and Eve had during the 10 years they were together. Nature is amazing, no matter how stupid we get, it always seems to find a way 😊

[@BrennaAckerson]

I agree. This story was excellent and I too would like stories from those 10 years. 😊

[@Allantitan]

Life uh….finds a way

[@urimorales3364]

Yoooo we need more of this what happened in those 10 years

[@DanielKay06]

I haven't fully listened to the story yet and will keep it for later but here is a small suggestion. For any "recordings" story I know there is a temptation to use the "playback" filter to make it actually sound like you listen to one but it can get a bit grating to listen to. My suggestions is something a few others do, only let the filter play for a bit in the beginning but then fade it out into a normal narration. We then already know it is a recording and are in the mindset. You can even bookend it by letting the filter fade back in towards the end.

[@TheDuckface999]

Oh wow, such a great story and beautiful narration! 40 mins passed like 10 and I was definitely fully engaged. Amazingly done!

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Wow, thank you!

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you for the kind words! 😁

[@PhilieBlunt666]

Tantrum? He was headed to get rid of his blue balls 🤣🤣

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Michael was being professional about it :D

[@PhilieBlunt666]

@@TheDarkCosmos1 lmfao, whoops 😆😏

[@floydbaker2240]

​@@TheDarkCosmos1"spasmodic, reciprocal hand gestures" :o

[@sorcesscores5366]

Welp, this ain’t a bedtime story. It’s an edge of your seat story. Good story and narration.

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you! 😁

[@lavuntecolquitt]

Excellent story and luv the progression.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@matthewhummel1572]

Dang. That ending hit harder than I expected it to. Very well done!

[@LGDV]

Amazing story!!!! We need to know what happened in those 10 years :D

[@sweatt4237]

Best narrator yet, fine job. Fantastic story.

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you! That really means alot 😁

[@ChrisGreenland]

This voice actor is one of the best I've heard during the 5 yrs+ of space/sci-fi creepasta listening

[@TheKristianEros]

Wow! Thank you! That's so kind of you to say! 😁😁😁😁

[@floydbaker2240]

​@@TheKristianErosyeah man, you sound like Kyle Reese hardcore. Could DEFINITELY imagine you telling me "it cannot stop, it WILL not stop..until you are dead"

[@poormanintexas]

That was a damn good story. Wish there was a part 2.

[@Mrlegoking-uy3lv]

Love the sound effects

[@TheKristianEros]

Thanks! I used 3 different fx libraries to find ones I liked 🤣🤣

[@alantaylor353]

OH... This is getting saved for bedtime tonight.!!! 👍 👍 👍

[@GeminiNight]

This was great! Thank you.

[@robertknell1949]

Great story Really hit home when he gave her proper burial

[@LaQen25X]

I was waiting for the part when he'd say he had a child with Eve, lol

[@lyndellrobinson3611]

😂

[@deacondawg1416]

3 or 4 I thought

[@nevasoba5953]

Me also. I thought she took him for that purpose.

[@robertknell1949]

I think he did. How else would he know how fast the babies grow?

[@Dazecat11]

@@robertknell1949 Would also say he would know those details from experience. After all getting closer to the other ones may be a death sentence.

[@Shadow.Dragon]

Great story! It would be interesting if a sequel exploring the reclamation of Earth. Would Homo Sapiens be able to live in peace with the evolved humans? Or would we fight each other till one side is wiped out?

[@Allantitan]

Or would one of the 2 wind up like the Neanderthals?

[@Beatlesfanize]

WOW . I Just Found Your Channel After uploading a video. This is Fantastic!!!! very well Done! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB! Cheers.

[@TheKristianEros]

Yay! Thank you for your kind words! I'm so glad you enjoyed it 😁

[@axel4196]

Damn good story. Loved it!

[@MsMtheory]

This one was FANTASTIC! Thank you so much!

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

You're so welcome!

[@AlexanderTheGreat1000]

This was 🔥

[@nevasoba5953]

Fantastic story. Great narration.

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😁

[@lyndellrobinson3611]

Excellent story and narration!

[@TheKristianEros]

Yay! Thank you! 😁

[@EZurg]

I like the speaker helmet voice do some more of those it's different than a lot of others and just get tired of hearing the same voice on all the same channels so thanks!!

[@TheKristianEros]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it! The filter just made sense to me 😆

[@EZurg]

It was a great choice I would consider experimenting with other voice filters I'm not too sure any other channels do that

[@floydbaker2240]

​@@TheKristianErosit made it all feel like I was uncovering the story like in a video game. It really was a damn great choice.

[@JosephKano]

Wait wait hang on, is this a real voice and not a speech to text? This sounds listenable too. There's so few actual voiced channels and most of the speech to text ones are simply not listenable. Please let this be real. It seems... Genuine. If it's fake it's a good one so far. None of the usual issues...

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

This is voiced by Kristian Eros, a highly talented voice actor! Fun fact: Theodore is our virtual narrator who tells our classic stories :)

[@Mafyeux]

@@TheDarkCosmos1 +1 for real people narrating, the subtleties can never be captured by AI.

[@TheKristianEros]

​@@MafyeuxI agree! Thank you for supporting human voices!

[@floydbaker2240]

​@@TheDarkCosmos1is Theodore the British sounding one? :o I thought that was just a normal guy...

[@Warlady_]

Oh this was amazing 👏 ❤

[@zachariahbarber5794]

Awsome Story

[@eenabutter]

WOW 👏

[@mikescholz6429]

Michael should start calling himself Prometheus

[@antarcticmoongiant2691]

Excellent

[@robertcypress6604]

I love the name Michael Newtown! Micheal the unwavering warrior of Christian fame. Newtown to grimly remind us of the lost hope this story is deliciously flavored with LoL!!!!

[@omaracevedo4784]

Loved it. Sad fate of humanity

[@JohnSagin-SimViDeLucis579]

Blown out the airlock, just as i had hoped.

[@tammywagner8032]

Really good!

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thank you! Cheers!

[@juliemunoz2762]

Riveting story. thank you for sharing.

[@robertknell1949]

This would make a great short video for love, death and robots

[@labased2539]

Amazing story!!

[@clubkabuki3414]

Wonderful story!!!

[@jeremycollins09]

Loved it!

[@rogerallen1767]

awesome

[@rishabhsingh7106]

If possible will like to have a part two ❤ was amazing story

[@horsetarget123]

Great story

[@franciszekkowar3962]

Thanks

[@Kojoanna]

A very good story, find more 🥰

[@leroymontoya1725]

good story

[@Cheshire5174]

Spoilers below Damn... Honestly didnt expect Eve to die... Hit harder than I expected...

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

😭

[@deacondawg1416]

Good story. Thought he was gonna start a new line of humanoids. Smarter but sightly weaker.

[@drasticallyfantastic7164]

Was the creature faster than projectiles or was the characters pantomiming their next moves

[@Airmanmx1]

So many questions, what came of him? Did he make contact with other “natives”? Did he use his technological expertise to surpass and subsequently make peace with the “natives”? He should be able to have created metal tools from forges? So many questions!?!?

[@GlenOkert]

This was 5 star you rule

[@ancient-rhinowang6641]

this would be a great video game

[@michaeljoseph9881]

Since the story you are on a radio there's a transmitter could've transpitted an emergency bacon and hopefully it would get to somebody within a couple. Of years.

[@davidturner4824]

Very sad story.

[@simpeldisaster4533]

Kind of want a follow up but I really don't want to know want happened with him and Eve. Guess we kinda got an end thought.

[@theonechillbeing9317]

Well time to make arrows and spears including stone throwing slings.

[@robertknell1949]

He knocked her up

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

LOL

[@potatoesorsomething]

Damn thats so sad

[@nancyM1313-Boo]

These are awesome stories Tyvmuch 👻🗯boo!

[@ghoststalker4490]

Wonderful story, I was hoping they were genetically compatible and a child would have been born to carry the story further.

[@cindaschuster6725]

💙👍🏼

[@JoelJoey-w9x]

😮 were the f. .k is the captain all this time crsping his pants IAM sure

[@Way2caffeinated]

No way, the story ends here, bro

[@OShackHennessy]

Awesome narration

[@TheKristianEros]

Thank you! 😁

[@thatrandomredengine9430]

How could Biden buy this a way into office twice? He’s only in his first term 😂 Plus Biden bringing upon nuclear annihilation is funny because he would have accidentally hit the button while looking for his crack po- I mean his ice cream.

[@BedlamBoy1978]

The breathing was slightly annoying but the story was good.

[@JoelJoey-w9x]

😮dude u got kidnapped going to get lucky or maybe not good luck

[@walterwhitaker1395]

SOLID COPY! OVER AND OUT!

[@GamingGridOfficial]

This was a great story

[@Itsalljustgonebad]

Eve, man😭

[@livetotell100]

This happened 2 years ago. I guess we are all dead, or in a virtual reality. Good story otherwise.

[@dawnallen431]

I have to say I cried about EVE LOL😢MY HUSBAND SAYS THAT IM A BIG SOFTY, big nope soft he’s right 🫠😁

[@xochipili1]

Opened the hatch to go outside to releave herself?

[@livetotell100]

OK. This expedition to Earth had what? 5 people? And only 1 left now. He should have plenty of water, since he's only consuming. Plenty till evac gets there. Same with food. Still a good story though.

[@mathewallen9813]

Bruh, did you listen to the whole thing? They aren’t evacuating him.

[@livetotell100]

@@mathewallen9813 Right after the other members were killed the guy said he would be evacuated. And how he was running out of water. That was the plan. There was a designated pick up date. As long as they stayed in contact. BUT he never contacted them again. Never even tried to. So they never came. Even when he came back to the camp months later, he listened to a message that said since they had no contact, they are not coming for him and presumed dead.

[@thebuddha4208]

OK even if this story sucks this is a great title

[@Vanilla_Neko]

Bro finally found the one way to get a puppy girl GF

[@syedarefinulbarkati6782]

Who is the original author of this story?

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

I tried looking for it on reddit, but couldn't find it anymore

[@arthurchadwell9267]

Eve has herself a boyfriend!! 😂

[@weddellseal8414]

he didnt get the alienussy ?!

[@josephwisniewski3673]

How was this "horror"?

[@patrickancona1193]

Relief from terminal TDS/PDS is possible, ask your doctor about Trumpitall!

[@RevenantMain1]

177013 💀 I can’t be the only one that caught that reference

[@cal4111]

Russia hasn't been Soviet for decades yet all of a sudden they have a Soviet moon base?

[@floydbaker2240]

The Soviet Union had a sequel.

[@Boogie_the_cat]

OMFG. This is the first creepypasta story I've seen in my entire life that has a title that ISN'T in the first person. Damn. I may actually listen to this, simply because i refuse to listen to any other creepypasta because I'm so sick of the titles. Every single story has "my" or "I" in the title, an incredibly amatuer attempt to engage the reader and grab someone's attention. I'm so sick of that because all these authors of boring stories think that making them (and the titles of the stories) occur in the first person causes their crappy writing to sound compelling and interesting. And now, EVERYONE uses that incredibly annoying amateur trope, so there is no way to differentiate between the good stories thay simply are following a stale (but popular) formula for their titles, and the sh1tty stories that are following the same, stale, boring, same-y formula to try and hide their same-ness and sh1tty-ness. Its like, geez, just because creepypasta is amateur writing for "the everyman(or woman) it doesn't mean that every story has to be told i the first person in an incredibly boring and over-used attempt to engage the reader and make it "more interesting" I have given up on creepypasta, but i had to tap this video title, because it wasn't in the first person, like 99.7% of the rest of the "pastas" I may give this a listen tonight, but i wanted to come here first and thank you (and the holy lord god Yog Sothoth) for uploading a video of a story that does have a boring-ass, same-y title like: "I'm a monster hinter for the U.S. government, and then X (or Y, or Z) happened" So fvcking sick of those titles, i assumed nobody wrote pastas without that goddamn terrible naming convention. Praise your bravery, and i hope it will encourage other writers eaders to stop writing \ reading boring-ass titles like: "i stepped on a slug demon, here's how that went" Or: "i work at a ghost toilet factory, here are my worst encounters" Or, the always popular: "my imagination is so stale that i have to write in the first person in order to sound interesting. Here is my spooky shopping list. Isn't it spooky and boring and formulaic?" Or even: "I'm just a normal guy giving out really unoriginal prompts to AI algorithms, do you wanna read about spooky aliens putting probes in Whitley Striebers anus? Is that spooky? Okay, well, maybe the aliens are breeding us for FOOD! Soylent Green is people, man!" Or, the very original: "my ass was red and itchy, guess what fell out of it yesterday?" Etc, etc... until the end of days, amen. Goddamn, i haven't even listened to this story, yet i have hope for mankind's future now. I'm not fvcking joking. I swore off clicking on any more creepypasta after the hundredth video on my feed titled: "I'm an intern at a hospital for werewolf fetuses, here's what my Social Security 401 tax form looks like" I mean, haven't we all read enough about werewolf fetus pediatricians yet? No? There's still an audience for that dreck? BTW: i already tapped "like" to help you out fighting The One Who Will Not Be Named (YT algorithm). We need more stories like this, to prove to budding A.I. writers that not EVERYFVCKINGTHING needs to be in the first person, at least not the title of the goddamn story. Oh yeah, i subbed as well, sonce there is a decent chance that you may have been born in order to do battle with the antichrist (YT's algorithm).

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Welcome to our cosmic community!

[@rbeckmal]

Damn tds lol he is a Russian plant, but the Russians for some reason are gonna go to war against him 😂

[@StickySyrupEverywhere]

This is stupid. Carbon levels? A womanizing captain, picked from a very small remaining population of humans based on criteria which would no longer have any meaning?

[@demigod_inc]

Off world for 2000 yrs and going to reexplore? So evolution studies died too huh? Like damn. He sounds like Misha Collins and he hits a sign for BW😂

[@denm8822]

Это вам мозги промыли, у нас то все в порядке

[@cadebritt8001]

I think this will change.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

What will change?

[@geneaddleman4144]

I need to know one thing....did the russkys win?

[@thebuddha4208]

OK this is weird

[@bspitler0]

Id skip the opening political hilarity, but yeah okay. 😂

[@cadebritt8001]

It's not going anywhere.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

What??

[@churlish7851]

Wack

[@errantintent]

The manner of speech is awkward and a bit unnatural. This is why you do multiple drafts...

[@errantintent]

Additionally, the descriptive parts were very out of touch with how people actually talk, and there was a lot of awkward repetition of phrases and words close together that also isnt how people talk. With the normal short stories, it wouldn't be so bad, but this entire one was supposed to be all spoken aloud.

[@i_eat_soap792]

@@errantintent Not everyone is going for realism, especially in scifi where you’re almost expected to make characters that are completely unique.I didn’t find any of these criticisms to impede from enjoying the story and based off all the praise he got I’d say he did a good job.

[@errantintent]

@@i_eat_soap792 you have not understood what I'm saying. Listen again to the part where the fight gets described. It's written like narrative prose, not speech. No one talks like that. There is an expected level of realism when it comes to believable monologue/dialogue, whether you're writing sci-fi or any other genre. I'm a writer myself, and a critiquer. I'm good enough to get paid for it. I know what I'm talking about.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thanks for tuning in! If the writer comes across your feedback, I'm sure they'll take it into account!

[@errantintent]

​@@TheDarkCosmos1I'm not sure how much you guys directly work with the writers, but I'd love to offer my services to help improve the quality. I can even do a few for free as a test run.

[@chaddts]

This sounds like it was written by some women guy who never worked a day I'm theor life nor paid a single bill. Totally self insert, and they even describe themselves as some idealized version throughout the entire beginning.😂