Pony Tales [MLP - FiM Fanfic Readings] 'Forever Faithful' by Konseiga (horror / darkfic)

[@aidankeogh9994]

"I've known many powerful spellponies, and none of them, have ever broken Death's Veil. It's NOT POSSIBLE." "But were any of them the Element of Magic?" DEAR GOD THAT'S AN AWESOME EXCHANGE

[@FlyingDoveExScopress]

you got that right

[@DarthZilla138]

It was a very chilling line

[@Streifi]

Jack Antila And a very convincing one...

[@aidankeogh9994]

Sabrina Allen Struck by lightning, if I recall.

[@Rofloflcopta]

Your omnipotent student, twilight sparkle...

[@LitteBirdRey]

Dear Princess Celestia, I don't feel bad for killing all my friends. I feel so powerful, and you, can't stop me. There is so much I can do, and so many ponies to take. No longer faithful, Twilight sparkle

[@Stick_and_stone]

Dear princess Celestia, Being dead is....quite nice actually I'm sure you won't mind being dead. Well it's kind of scary but now I think about it. I don't care what you think. Soon this place will be filled with hills upon hills of grass and there'll be enough space for every pony (and other creatures) in Equestria! And it will all be mine. Oh yeah, you won't be princess here. Sorry not sorry! Your no longer faithfull princess, Twilight.

[@LitteBirdRey]

It still baffles me that two years later I am one of the top comments on this video

[@autisticfanontheinternet4913]

.....Bubble Thought.....SHES GONNA DIIIEE! (Bubble Thought is my OC with a Thought Bubble for a cutie mark which resembles the talent to Imagine and/or think)

[@imaginationmaddness2176]

@@LitteBirdRey well you made this fanfic more scary with your comment

[@magicgirl8705]

600th

[@CedarCritter]

Wow, that was really good. "Congratulations, Princess. You're first on the list!" I bet Celestia was like, "Well, shit." XD

[@pikagirl9712]

hi tnkqp zimoq 😦 aqsum? 🔪 ahahahah >:)

[@reky0mum27]

Ikr XD

[@cube5337]

Mittz The Trash Lord more like hmmmmm HOLYFUCKINGSHITIMGUNNADIEOHHELLNONIGGA

[@Teddy_DHEJKFKG4308]

lol

[@sonicgamingkirbyfan2005v-xm2rl]

Welp...were dead.

[@bandicootsauce4569]

Twilight: "Come, Celestia. You'll LIKE being dead." Celestia: "That's what they told me about being alive!" #FuturamaReference

[@YeyKallik]

LOL

[@carlthomaswilliamsjr.2995]

Twilight: Oh well i'm sure you'll love death. Celestia: *Chugs her coffee mug, throws it at the wall, cracks her neck, and prepares for battle* Not without a fight my former student.

[@smithsoniansmith2433]

Shadow Bear: What the funk is wrong with all you!?

[@itz_tommy_boi2570]

HAH! same

[@smithsoniansmith2433]

Shadow Bear: You feel the same?...@@itz_tommy_boi2570

[@vegetafan9922]

And as Luna saw the life empty from her sister's eyes, she began to back away from the corpse, violently shaking her head as tears streamed down her face. Suddenly a letter poofed into the room and fell to the floor, unraveling itself with no sender or reciver written upon it, stating one simple sentence, "You will be joining her very soon." That was one of the last things the Moon princess witnessed before she saw two sickly purple maggot infested front hooves grab the sides of her head and she heard a quiet snap before slipping into darkness.

[@viriyananda]

Deathlight kill her by snapping Luna neck in 180 rotation

[@minecraftwolf45]

Princess Cellestia's eyes widened. "No..." she said, fear clamping on her stomach. Suddenly, Cellestia felt a tight sharp pain around her chest. "Hello, Princess!" Then, she knew no more... ******* Luna screamed when she saw Tia's limp body on the floor of her bed chamber. Equestria was falling apart.

[@minecraftwolf45]

My own little ending. ^^

[@aerysuniverses9838]

Commander Anna Cupcakke Nice little ending you thought up though :)

[@Celestia5782]

That was a good ending u thought of!

[@minecraftwolf45]

Oh! Thank you!

[@minecraftwolf45]

Sammy Samuel Sharples Thanks!

[@excelsiorwolphskye9985]

EPILOG: Completely fan made by me, Shy Wolph Skye Celestia dropped the parchment. Terror scorched her heart. The white alicorn stumbled to her hooves, dashing madly to the door. "Hello, Princess!" Celestia turned stiffly. "Tw-Twilight?" A sickly purple unicorn stood behind Celestia, eyes black pits, and fire seemed to surround her hooves. Twilight smiled. The smile sent a chill down Celestia's spine. "Ready to go?" The unicorn asked. "N-no," Celestia stammered. "Please, Twilight, you don't have to do this!" Twilight cocked her head to one side. "I had hoped you would come willingly. But, I suppose I will have to bring you with me by force." The unicorn advanced on the Princess. "LUNA!" Celestia shrieked, slamming into the door in an attempt to escape, but to no avail. "Now, now, Princess," Twilight began, "Just calm down. I thought I was you prised pupil?" The unicorn's voice seemed to get lower and lower with every word, until it was a hellish rumble. "Tia? TIA!" Luna's voice rang out from the other side of the door. "Luna!" Celestia called, "Run! Run as fast as you can! Get out of here!" "No, sister! I won't leave y-" Luna's voice was cut off by a dark crunching sound, followed by the sound of liquid spraying everywhere. Slowly the door began to open. It creaked ajar to reveal a blood stained scene, featuring a sickly unicorn with eyes black as hell. "Why, hello, Luna! Are you ready to come with me too?" Princess Luna screamed.

[@mckinnellfamilytrio5752]

YES SCRIBBLER DO A READING OF THIS PLEASE......

[@imaginland1596]

YASSS!!

[@RedeemerofDark]

Excelsior Wolph Skye now if only we got to hear celestia experience the new world....

[@sandyfordham8172]

Excelsior Wolph Skye that was good

[@Stick_and_stone]

@@RedeemerofDark "Wh- Where..." Celestia woke up with a jolt. Twilight was standing over her smiling, but calmer now. Not so...creepily. Celestia noticed she couldn't really feel much. Luna layed against her with her head resting on Celestia's lap. Celestia felt something. A slightly stronger hint of love then the other slips of feelings she felt. They were hard to recognize, but she though it were anger and fear of Twilight. It would make sense...right? Twilight killed her and her sister after all. But Celestia couldn't do much. She didn't feel angry enough to yell at Twilight. Why? She just got murdered by her! Why couldn't she get angry? "W-why did you do that?" Celestia asked. Twilight had turned her attention away from Celestia for a moment, to talk with her friends. Probably about who to kill next. Celestia worried about how strongly the words "kill next" felt. "What do you mean?" The black-eyed purple unicorn replied. "Why did you...take me and Luna here?" "Well, I had to." "You'll understand soon." She went back to her friends and ignored Celestia's following questions. Celestia gave up and turned to Luna. Nothing. She felt nothing anymore. The hint of love was gone. Wearily and searching for comfort, she stroke her sister's mane. A slight sliver of love. Slightly fainter then her anger and fear. Sorry but I could keep writing like this for forever. I have to go now, bye. Hope you enjoyed.

[@Flynnisthename]

Wow, shinning armor and cadence didn't even show up to the funeral

[@BloopTheNoop]

Small Gay that deserves a “dam son”

[@theprehistoricplayer3553]

_ \__(=/)__/ Where is my hand?

[@revaslatts8011]

They probably had royal business to attend to. But they probably held their own funeral back at home.

[@BloopTheNoop]

Reva Slatts nigga pee. Lmao, if someone important dies, you SHOW UP

[@iona5917]

I guess Shinning Armor isn’t her B.B.B.B.F.F

[@Thatoneeclipsefan]

"I miss Spike most of all" Well you sure didn't bring him with you Twilight

[@ambaricoco4502]

Then how she send all those letters to the Princess? Black fire... Maybe spike died of grief or smt like that.

[@revaslatts4301]

​@@ambaricoco4502 That's what I'd been wondering.

[@viriyananda]

What if spike is first victim of deathlight sparkle and when he dead he the one use new power a dark flame of death

[@revaslatts4301]

@@viriyananda Interesting...

[@SpecialInterestShow]

Maybe her magic can only kill ponies? Or perhaps she simply doesn't want to take him because he's a baby, so she wants to let him at least grow first?

[@flutterfazbear1140]

I'm watching this in invert colour and twilight looks perfectly fine XD

[@imaginland1596]

ha ha ha! *sarcastic laughter.

[@deadchannel4619]

FlutterFazbear lmao

[@aerithgainsborough7763]

FlutterFazbear How?

[@darkrose7774]

FlutterFav

[@MelissaDiamond48]

FlutterFazbear Me Too Lol

[@beepthsheep]

I can imagine Twilight bringing Celestia down and Celestia going all, "I Am Highly Disappointed In You." But ya know. In a sad type scenario.

[@MischiefHowlVA]

I remember my first reaction to this. The beginning: This is to sad to be dark! The end: .... well shiz

[@sleepiihead]

Ikr XD

[@cube5337]

MischiefHowlVA begining of fic oh well she dead end of fic oh well she dead (im seeing a pattern)

[@poopface6009]

what did pony with 14 letters mean?

[@smithsoniansmith2433]

It more DARK!

[@smithsoniansmith2433]

(O_O)

[@sayadiva123]

I was able to hold in my tears in until Pinkie Pie started crying But then my tears dried hearing all those haunting letters from Twilight. Replaced with sheer terror. 😰

[@imaginland1596]

why?

[@elainafazio3154]

Luna Noire omg when pinkie started crying omg me to

[@hhgg6077]

Luna Noire ...

[@revaslatts8011]

Pinkie crying is like Spongebob crying. Nobony can stand it! Your heart breaks upon watching it. Excuse me while I cry my eyes out.

[@dearestmothersoleil3052]

I will not cry, I will not cry, I'm crying, Still crying, Oh, I stopped.

[@Starry-eyed_Samantha]

She's nonchalantly writing to her princess on how she's dragging her subjects into death. That's far beyond the point of being remotely fine.

[@anthonya.p.dellaquila8183]

This has to be one of the darkest stories i have ever heard. it brings a very strong feeling of dread when i listen to it. most people believe that if we have a soul, it survives death when the body dies. What freaks me out about this story is it's like Twilight's body and soul died and what remains is a hollow dead soul hungering for life. that's what i think is canon to this story, a afterlife in which the soul exists with out life or substance. sorry guess i just had to comment on why this story hits me so deep. thanks for the reading, all your readings of course. hopefully one day the writer will write a second part. thanks for reading my lengthy comment. take care Scribbler

[@Zidabrine1]

Princess twilight princess of death and friendship.

[@Rofloflcopta]

I half expected twilight to say WE ARE MANY... YOU ARE BUT ONE

[@imaginland1596]

i which she siad that.

[@kimswartz231]

WE ARE THE SWARM!

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

That is extremely creepy,thank goodness that never ended up in the show.

[@GLMELEE13]

NOOOO!!! WHY'D IT END THERE?!?!? I WANTED A THRILL SCENE! One where Celestia is running for her life through her castle and ponies are dying left and right, that'd be so cool!

[@mcsquiggle6902]

Amen to that, buddy

[@mcsquiggle6902]

***** XD

[@GLMELEE13]

STOP SCOLLING!!! /) You've been anonymously selected to write the story for the comment above, continuing the events of the story, you most likely just listened to. You don't gotta be good at writing, just give it your best shot. There is no time limit to this, just do your best. There are a growing number of people who want to see this done, so be that one who continues this amazing story! Best of luck, post the link to the story you've written so we can marvel at it. BTW, this isn't a contest, it's just for creativity's sake and shits and giggles.

[@nursejeannie3593]

Celestia dashed through the Castle halls, Guards left and right were shaking violently as They fell flat and limp...Suddenly Twilight appeared and, Celestia felt weak, as she fought to stay standing, She Screamed "Don't Do This Twilight!" Then suddenly she fell limp, just as the Guards had, Luna came in just as Celestia Had Fallen, "No No No No..." Whimpered Luna as she stared to cry, Fluttery shy appeared and said, " Don't Cry it's not Of Any Use..." As Luna felt a wave of cold came over her as she slipped in and out of death, she felt like she was being ripped apart piece by agonizing piece, then she slipped away into death...

[@jakeb526]

wow that was good 10/10

[@jamauln1]

That was beautiful. Kinda want to know how Celestia deals with being "first on the list".

[@anthonya.p.dellaquila8183]

yeah, i thought the same thing. beautiful in a terrible dark haunting type of way.

[@Kevin15047]

Is it a poor reflection on me that this is the most I've cried at a funeral? Also, dear Princess Celestia. Today I learned you're never too old to hug the stuffing out of your teddy bear.

[@nonamenoname9322]

I think Fluttershy and Applejack would be the most miserable without family and animals. And I think Rainbow's loyalty to her friends would make her the last pony to die cause she's loyal to 5 live ponies and her beloved Cloud's Dale. With Celestia gone, they'll have a sun in death at last. Then it's Luna's turn to bring the night to the lightened landscape and so on... Till Lyra comes in and brings humans or something XD

[@SpecialInterestShow]

Flutters would be fineeeee She can simply... Bring the animals with her. And I'm sure Applebloom is on the new list...

[@poisonouscam7457]

Ummm... Each time she said Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle It got scarier... Perfect!!!!! Poor Mane 5.

[@imaginland1596]

i love wen stores are tolled through notes or logs!

[@emmy3220]

and its like at the end theres another letter: Dear Trollestia, LOL! YOURE A NERD! Trolollolololollololololollolololololololololollolo Yours Trollfully, Trollight Sparklol

[@CreeketsCreek]

XD

[@friendorfoe2210]

Ha

[@Smoloompaloompa]

XD omfg

[@peachy8565]

Emalie C. that's not funny.

[@lillis4620]

Ya I agree

[@breadthatsred5815]

This is the best dark story I've ever heard in my life, I like your dark readings....and this one is really dark..& very missed up (thanks to the last line it was even scarier). I really like the idea of Twilight 'missing' her friends, she want them to join her to fill the void by *ahem* ..killing them... (Sure thing she was doing it for 'good'...right? RIGHT?? There is no need to call the FBI..[is won't work anyways] ). Each time she kills somepony, the void (death realm) get filled with more friends, eventually, new stuff appears in the void like the balloons with Pinkie. The really creepy thing in the story is that Twilight never get enough of more friends (and probably she won't), meaning she will kill more and more (if the death realm went from emptiness to some trees, clouds and some party stuff just by adding 5 ponies..... She would like some more ponies..ya known, adding some houses, shops and..Ohh don't forget about a nice bar, a club and maybe a five star hotel?) .....she will more ponies until...*ahem* ..THE END

[@KalikaStorm]

Twilight-"Congratulations Princess, you're the first on our list!" Celestia-**chuckles** *I'm in danger.*

[@gren8te319]

twilight slowly drowning in her power as she collects the bearers in these creepily nonchalant letters is an awesome villain origin

[@Megatyrant]

The background music certainly creates a fitting tone for this story. I love it, it's fun listening to stories like this at night. Well, it is for me. Don't know about the rest of you... *grins*

[@Zeruel3]

Excellent fic, brilliant reading, starts off tragic and becomes terrifying very quickly, especially with the realization that not even the Princesses can stop Twilights deranged shade

[@lucian_blaze]

I can’t lie, this story did unsettle me slightly. Bearing in mind that I’ve read plenty of grimdarks such as cupcakes, rainbow factory, sweet apple massacre, lil Miss rarity and other creepy pastas on top of that. This by far has to be the most unsettling, psychological one. The way that twilight slowly loses herself and encourages her friends on long with her, hearing celestia break as she reads. In all the years I’ve been in the mlp and creepypasta fandoms, I am truly in awe here. Well done.

[@Mlpstopallthemotio]

At first I was crying now I am not going to bed

[@slender169101]

why

[@chocoman926]

Same here

[@Mlpstopallthemotio]

it scary

[@Nevermind_Nai]

Mlpstopallthemotio this is freaking messed up but i want more for some reason idk why i see when its complete

[@simoncrys3445]

yes it is

[@wahwah4404]

there should be an alternative ending, where twilight tries bringing the ponies into the veil and fails, so she ends up killing 5 ponies for no reason

[@peabody66]

When Twilight said told Princess Celestia that she was "first on the list" to join The Mane Six in death and after seeing that freaky pic of Twilight with that tolling bell in the background, all the hair on my skin stood up. I don't know if I'll be able to sleep tonight. :(

[@imaginland1596]

that HELPED me fall asleep. cuz i like creepy.

[@revaslatts8011]

Beginning: so depressing Middle: unnerving Ending: *hugs Twilight plush for dear life*

[@Liongirl5137]

when it ended i wasn't looking at the screen and then i looked up and jumped at twilight's face. the hair on my neck stood on end.

[@anthonya.p.dellaquila8183]

i never knew it was there till reading your comment, damn that's scary.

[@agent_okami827]

Wait there is a jumpscare?

[@PerilousRaptor]

This is the first MLP fanfic I've actually cried while listening to. God it was so sad, dark, and beautifully creepy c:

[@mis.astrid2635]

This feels like she turned to a lich or a crasy reaper. I am scared.

[@xxto3nailsxx548]

(I feel like continuing the ending, this is fan made, by me) Princess celestia dropped the scroll, wide eyed, and stood up shakily Suddenly, a bubble of black smoke appeared in front of the door Then. A pale and sickly looking unicorn stepped out from the smoke, her eyes nothing but blackness “Hello Princess! Are you ready to join us? I’m amusing you got my letters?” There was a stiff silence “I..I..” “Don’t worry princess! Death isn’t scary, don’t be afraid.” “No!” Suddenly black smoke surrounded celestia “LUNA!” She screamed desperate to live “..TIA..?” Came a faint reply “LUNA!” She called out again, her breath catching in her throat “Celestia! I can’t have Luna ruining this one chance that you’re alone!” She said, sounding annoyed. Luna barged through the door. It was too late. Celestia had died. “Why hello Princess Luna! Are you ready to join us in death?” The pale sickly looking unicorn turned and asked her Silence rose around them, before Luna teleported herself out of sight. “Too bad, I need both princesses in death, so it can be just like life.” She disappeared. Soon every pony around Luna was dying. She was starting to go a little insane, she went from canterlot to ponyvile, but she found that everyone there was dead, besides a few, Only a few fillies were left, and Luna took them to canterlot, and stayed there with them Twilight didn’t come back until a few months later A bubble of black smoke appeared in the open doorway A pale sickly unicorn stepped out from the bubble “Hello princess Luna! Are you ready to join all of us now? I have every pony in all the nearby towns!” “Go away Twilight!” Shouted Applebloom Luna jumped up and opened her wings wide, protecting the fillies. “Oh Applebloom! Your family missies you!” “Go away!” “I guess you don’t want to join us yet.” A silence stirred. “I’ll come back soon.” She disappeared. Luna folded up her wings and laid back down with the fillies. “Luna..?” A voice that sounded like Fluttershy’s echoed Luna looked around, and when she looked at the doorway, she saw a limping Fluttershy, Rainbow dash, Pinkie pie, Rarity, and Applejack They escaped death? (I’m sorry I like happy endings xD, should I continue this with a replied comment?)

[@MartinThomas]

I like it when you put your computer in negative mode it looks normal.

[@MartinThomas]

on a mac it is ctrl, alt, cmd and 8.

[@jennibeanthesweetsqueen5245]

Im on an iphone this is awesome

[@nozimo243]

Gosh that was scary. Had goosebumps all throughout the story, and none more than seeing Twilight's face at the end. I wonder what Celestia will do when she is brought over to death's side?

[@uchihamonster9580]

it continues the story! Celestia dropped the parchment!. Terror scorched her heart. The white alicorn stumbled to her hooves, dashing madly to the door. "Hello, Princess!" Celestia turned stiffly. "Tw-Twilight?" A sickly purple unicorn stood behind Celestia, eyes black pits, and fire seemed to surround her hooves. Twilight smiled. The smile sent a chill down Celestia's spine. "Ready to go?" The unicorn asked. "N-no," Celestia stammered. "Please, Twilight, you don't have to do this!" Twilight cocked her head to one side. "I had hoped you would come willingly. But, I suppose I will have to bring you with me by force."The unicorn advanced on the Princess. "LUNA!" Celestia shrieked, slamming into the door in an attempt to escape, but to no avail. "Now, now, Princess," Twilight began, "Just calm down. I thought I was you prised pupil?" The unicorn's voice seemed to get lower and lower with every word, until it was a hellish rumble. "Tia? TIA!" Luna's voice rang out from the other side of the door. "Luna!" Celestia called, "Run! Run as fast as you can! Get out of here!" "No, sister! I won't leave y-" Luna's voice was cut off by a dark crunching sound, followed by the sound of liquid spraying everywhere. Slowly the door began to open. It creaked ajar to reveal a blood stained scene, featuring a sickly unicorn with eyes black as hell. "Why, hello, Luna! Are you ready to come with me too?" Princess Luna screamed At Twilight Than screamed more when she saw Tia's limp body on the floor of her bed chamber. Luna know Equestria will fall fall apart do to Celestia death.Luna ran out the chamber knew she was next. Then Shining Armour. Princess Cadence. And soon... all of Equestria. Darkness would fall. Death would prevail. No one would survive.

[@sonofcthulu8772]

You copied at least you changed it

[@uchihamonster9580]

Yeah I did copy yet a little bit but I tried my best to add some stuff to look like it with missing because I cannot really write very well so might be some spelling errors I was younger.sorry to the person who wrote this The beginning

[@nickcalingo2160]

First Impression: Ohh, Twilight will be evil. Second Impression: What Twilight died!?!? Third Impression: How on earth is Twilight alive and is she alive in the grave!?!? Fourth Impression: Twilight your becoming insane!!! Why kill... murder your best friends and Celestia!?!?

[@Leah-kf7gv]

I bet when Celestia read the letter about her being next she was like 'shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit' O_O

[@Zorban]

I remember being like, a week into the fandom fresh of gifs like university days and some other fics, then this rolls into my recommendations introducing me to one of my favorite narrators and my entrance into the wonders of the darker side of the fandom

[@Chillbot17]

"I dont think, theres anything you can do to stop me" dear god

[@ticksygeartamer2641]

Holy... horse apples..... this is freaky....

[@ambaricoco4502]

Dude, if Twi is this powerful without being a alicorn... How powerful might be Luna or Celesstia or even Discord

[@twilightspaaarkle]

"Now, I dont give a damn about studying, I need more friends!" Never thought I'd hear twilight say that

[@francisadvice]

This is so Bloody GOOD. Cant flipping stand the sadness at the beginning D:

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

They're really should be a prequel story where the main six see Twilight and then die. Edit:And also we should also probably learn if there's ever a prequel story on what happened at Cloudsdale that killed Twilight Sparkle. And I personally think that maybe Rainbow Dash might had something to do with it judging by the way that she's acting around Twilight maybe she's feeling guilty.

[@shadoetrax5928]

I've just listened to 3 of these in a row. Please keep your passion for doing this. There is something in the way you read these that almost magically resonates with the emotions the stories engender. I really hope you keep this up for a LONG time.

[@AnimeFreakX4]

I loved how dark this was I really hope that auther dose a sequel for this and that you would read it. Keep up your awesome work it's really fun to listen to them.

[@torntokoroa]

That part with pinkie almost brought me to tears. Something about her breaking down like that hit hard.

[@nekob0ng]

the picture shall forever haunt me

[@jayjayblitz122]

ur profile pic tho

[@keelanbarron928]

Which one? The one at the end? Or the last creepy one?

[@SuperGodzilla2]

damn that was freaky, loved it anyway, Twilight sounded pretty cheery for somepony that was dead

[@reapernightfall]

This story scared so bad, I stayed up for an extra few hours just to make sure that I’m not being watched. Such good narration!

[@Su1t3dBr0n3FiM]

This story... Its sad.. Its Dark, Two things I hate.. But i want more? I'm being messed with...

[@schustette4]

Nice reference to Lesson Zero. Also, magic of death, hm. And OMG, TWILIGHT HAS DRIVEN HER FRIENDS TO SUICIDE

[@azureflame2223]

i inverted the colours of this photo just to see what it looks like. great artwork.

[@TheSwordofFlames]

24:40 My face was WAY too close to the screen when that picture came up.

[@TKlovesWeepingAngels]

I agree...and I watched it at 10:47 at night now Im scared to go to sleep...

[@TheSwordofFlames]

It doesn't help knowing that she talked to them in their dreams.

[@TKlovesWeepingAngels]

TheSwordofFlames yeah...dreams can be very realistic that you think there real but this is freaking creepy! 8(

[@TheSwordofFlames]

Too true.

[@TruePieGod]

lol

[@rearouge]

HOLY WHAT IN CELESTIA'S BEAUTIFUL MANE WAS THAT?!

[@alweighswright9510]

This remains one of my favorite fics to listen to. I love it so much

[@chelseyberstein1406]

this has to be one best and creepiest fanfic's I've seen

[@Victini415]

I knew who Twilight's sixth target was when she mentioned the lack of sun.

[@Pamcakie]

TWILIGHT IS SO FREAKIN' CRAZY!!!

[@kirakirah5480]

The moment she said, "but we don't have a sun here," I was like OH NOOO!!!

[@adomaniacs]

OH MY GOD. THAT LAST PICTURE MADE MY SPIRIT SCREAM! EEK!

[@t.l.cwwediva4ever338]

The part when Celestia is grieving for twilight sparkle reminded me of the scene from Steven Universe where blue diamond is grieving over pink diamond

[@fatecosmic923]

I've been looking for this story for SO LONG! I love it so much

[@Ghastea]

I rlly like this one. I stumbled across this a while ago and im so happy i found it again. It just has so much potential. Some may say I love it to *death*

[@BronyDude100]

Amazing! Just read the story on fimfiction and it was already creepy. The way you read this just made it so much creepier and better. You just earned a sub. And I`ve read some of your stories on fimfiction. I really enjoyed them.

[@chriscowan3967]

Thank you scribbler this one was quite interesting and very entertainingit most definitely had an interesting and creepy twist to it. Appreciate your reads and keep up the great work

[@dragonsvendetta832]

" I don't give a damn, about studying, I need more friends." XD lmao, same...

[@VibingVampire]

this is the 4th or 5th time listening to your reading of this. its so good, and so well read by you that i just cant stop listening!!

[@ChazzItUpToTheMoon]

That was one of the best stories I have ever heard!!! The effects made it even more vivid and awesome!!!

[@laddylynn]

"Congratulations princess your next on the list!"the white alicorn dropped the letter in shocked and terrified,while the white alicorn was just sitting there trying to forget what the last letter said the alicorn heard a loud "poof!"in her room.when the white alicorn turned around,Twilight was right there behind her."T-Twilight?"the white alicorn whispered in shocked."of course princess celistia,I'm guessing you've been getting my letter's."the unicorn said."y-yes,b-but why...h-how!?"the alicorn asked."oh celistia,like I said in my letters,I don't want to be alone,and I need more."the purple universe corn said.Celistia started to stand up."so Twilight,before I go with you,do you want to look around my room or look out my window for a bit before you have to go with me?"the white alicorn asked."oh,well that's very kind of you princess,and of course I will look around."while the purple unicorn turned around and looked around a bit,the white alicorn took the chance to run out of her bedroom,but the door wouldn't open.the white alicorn tried as hard as she could but,the door wouldn't budge."Celistia,why are you trying to leave?I thought that you would actually be exited to come with me...*sigh*I guess I'll just have to make you come with me by force."Twilight said."P-please no!Twilight d-"The white alicorn stoped talking,but her mouth was studering.blood was going every where in the room,while the princess was on the floor,she was begging to not kill any pony else,but when Celistia finished begging Twilight to not kill any pony else,Luna came in."oh,hi princess Luna,do you want to come with us too?"Twilight asked.Luna was just standing in front of the doorway."h-how could have k-killed Tia!?"Luna asked while shocked and terrified."don't you worry Luna you'll be next to join us."Luna was scared so scared that sane ran to one of the guards and told them to protect herself."huh?I wonder why Luna did that.well,time to come with me Celistia."when Twilight said that,she stabbed Celistia right in her chest.when Celistia died,she actually like being dead with Twilight and her friends.Twilight letted Celistia send Luna a letter,so she did"dear Luna,I miss you so much,but we'll be back together soon,Twilight said that she'll be there soon,until then,see you soon my dear sister."Luna was terrified even more but when Luna dropped the letter her own sister sent, twilight was right behind Luna."hello Luna I see you gotted Celistia's letter,don't worry you'll be with her soon,now say goodbye to the mortal life,hehehehe"Twilight has gotted what she wanted,but what will her friends and the princesses and her self do next? THE END 😊

[@weirdo-sh1yz]

Panda Playzs123 cool

[@lordandromadahith8094]

This is a good ad on ending that it should have

[@jennibeanthesweetsqueen5245]

So she came back in her friends dreams and drove them to the point of suicide....

[@imaginland1596]

probably.

[@jennibeanthesweetsqueen5245]

Imaginland it's a theory

[@imaginland1596]

i know its a theory. i was agreeing with you.

[@michellepuppy18]

I kept thinking, Twilight find the death note o.o

[@imagenationtown1290]

pony darkfics are cool

[@bluebl2867]

Oh man. That old intro… Nice job being able to go on for 7+ years

[@michaeljohnson-el9hp]

Think about it, she never once thought about Spike, the baby dragon, I think if this was continued that he would be one of the few to resist her and might even be her defeat, would be epic. Like this if you agree

[@dawnforest1506]

...I hope I don't scare anyone by saying this...but I actually want to be in Twilight's position...

[@anabelalmeida4396]

Why

[@dawnforest1506]

Anabel almeida I'm not quite sure

[@mavkadavis4746]

my two. and pdjm (pdjm is short for plz don't me)

[@imaginland1596]

dawn i would too. i think it would be VARY intreating, for all who were involved. sorry for the scares, i just get that way sometimes.

[@charactercreator6396]

same

[@CyberWarezz05]

'I miss Spike the most"she said,while bringing in death only her mare friends....

[@avrie6668]

An entire five years later Maybe twilight focused all her former empathy and morality on spike and maybe sweetie bell if she couldn’t stop herself from saving them all she’d at least focus on what she can save

[@darkandsweetfairy091]

Good thing I have immunity cat on my side!

[@sofig1237]

why aren't Twilight's parents at their daughter's funeral??

[@Cecelia021]

After hearing the story from start to finish, I'm getting the idea of Discord the Lord of Chaos using all of the magic that he has to undo it all 😶

[@mikistenbeck6517]

“On a side note, I realised i murrrdered rainbow dash..... or a least a part of me realised it, wanna know something funny? I don’t care, I don’t care i took another pony’s life, in fact. It felt good, it felt like i was in Control of *both* worlds....... I don’t think...... There’s anything you can do...... to stop me, your *_OMNIPOTENT_* Student, Twilight Sparkle,” *shudders* welp, there goes my sleep, xD, and that face in the dark..... geez, FYI, omnipotent means all powerful and all knowing, like with for example Odin,

[@stapleseverywhere7288]

The beginning made me cry

[@DemonHellGirl10]

That was VERY FREAKIN CREEPY!!!!! That should be the title!!!!!

[@nagyakos8467]

Go on an MLP Creepypasta marathon and take a shot every time Rainbow Dash dies. If you're still alive by the end, you just weren't paying attention.

[@emilylarson8837]

I love the music in about the middle of Twilight's first letter.

[@queenkaterose]

You know I think this fic was the one of the few that made me cry

[@officechairpotato]

Stunned by the quality of your work. I've heard audio plays on the radio that aren't as good.

[@GAZ888F]

I love this fic more and more every time I hear it, well done.

[@TubaGeek]

You did a great job using River Song's theme for Twilight's funeral, I'm in tears now 😭

[@Dusk_Mightyena]

“So many souls to play with, so little time. Would you agree?”

[@thatfancymango7564]

"I don't give a d-mn about studying, I need more friends."

[@DarkGhirahim]

Oh... My... Goddesses.....

[@chelsea1062]

Bro! Scratch that, I know it's from Doctor Who. This is from David Tennant's time as the doctor! I love your music choice for this

[@emissary8071]

5 minutes in and I'm crying so hard.

[@austiny6512]

No no Twilight I started crying in 1st few minutes so is just to sad for me I can't help but cry