"there was no music playing" as quiet piano music plays in the background
@Daniel-lf3jg3 жыл бұрын
There should have been a piano in there. When I hear the piano man song I think of a place like this.
@hopegrimsley34279 жыл бұрын
"They're sharing a drink they call loneliness, but it's better than drinking alone."
@aramkesoon9 жыл бұрын
Glorious reference lol
@CosmicErrata9 жыл бұрын
+Hope Grimsley Sing us a song, you're the salary man.
@flashvent97439 жыл бұрын
Love it
@starthekid89358 жыл бұрын
Yes I love Piano Man! 💙
@loljustice318 жыл бұрын
+Hope Grimsley That is so deep and profound.
@rumblymclovin35789 жыл бұрын
The real horror is the fact someone had to get to work by 4-am.
@cosmonaut3799 жыл бұрын
...
@Rezplz9 жыл бұрын
Welcome to the medical field
@cosmonaut3799 жыл бұрын
someday you'll have a job too
@cosmonaut3799 жыл бұрын
+Rez I mean the op not you lol
@rumblymclovin35789 жыл бұрын
+Gavlick Apthesycerski I do have a job, purely stating that getting up at 4am is never fun.
@artyomsherwin6487 жыл бұрын
He managed to get kicked out of hell? That's impressive.
@dark_taco6 жыл бұрын
Artyom Sherwin RIGHT!? lol
@Horde1Blades6 жыл бұрын
by breaking da rulz
@imnotfrfrr5 жыл бұрын
Harley Quinn 100
@misdafireinfexus58284 жыл бұрын
So have I
@giuseppethegoat46604 жыл бұрын
Hitlers the owner
@BabyBeautyBloomer9 жыл бұрын
" I don't really remember it but I'll explain it in full detail, from the color of the wall to what everyone was wearing"
@williamtattersall35288 жыл бұрын
Pfft you do that
@velikalourdes34583 жыл бұрын
Ikrr XD
@ViVALaKiRAxx9 жыл бұрын
"a grown up who still needed a grown up." yep, i still need an adultier adult.
@MrCreepyPasta9 жыл бұрын
Don't we all
@GODLIKE_-jo5oc9 жыл бұрын
+MrCreepyPasta Hi
@tomsalt68819 жыл бұрын
+Kira ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ノ raise your dongers ヽ༼ຈل͜ຈ༽ノ
@Travelers.Chosen8 жыл бұрын
cocoatreeprincess (,,'_',,)
@swantonicx79778 жыл бұрын
I need an adult!
@RaccoonRevolution9 жыл бұрын
Moral: Hell gets cellphone service. Not good service, but service nonetheless.
@Keleindor9 жыл бұрын
FUCKING FINALLY!!! a main character who can think fast for once.
@NickWright6 жыл бұрын
Still one of my all time favorites!
@NickWright Жыл бұрын
Revisiting this gem again 👌🏼
@Detinator2479 жыл бұрын
Damn if hell was that intense Heaven must've been THE SHIT boi damn I wish I couldve gone there
@ravenmontoya62258 жыл бұрын
I kinda wanna know what the Heaven Bar is like, she said that the elevator could go either way depending on what one wanted, probably pretty interesting. either way, interesting story.
@brodi-liciousdre93192 жыл бұрын
Me too!!! I think I would've asked if I could go to Heaven. Just the thought of going to a bar called Hell doesn't excite me!
@gunhead71592 жыл бұрын
They'd probably only serve spring water lol
@koltennguyen9604 Жыл бұрын
@@gunhead7159 good spring water
@ShadethewolfyАй бұрын
@@koltennguyen9604 From SCP-006, too! (the Astrian Spring, or the Fountain of Youth)
@daikaijuzilla8 жыл бұрын
The idea of people willingly going to Hell is pretty creepy, very well done!
@angelmorlett54558 жыл бұрын
I agree
@elguerokabron7 жыл бұрын
Daikaiju Danielle well just look at people nowadays who bash on religion
@nickhannah95436 жыл бұрын
Dudley Dingleberry Explain
@littlerollingbean8 жыл бұрын
This is a good interpretation of hell, and done very tastefully. It did make me feel tense for the main character rather than boredom from most hell interpretation creepypastas.
@MathewSteeleAtheology Жыл бұрын
All hell interpretations are boring. The whole concept is an eyeroll.
@marcovalentini863 Жыл бұрын
@@MathewSteeleAtheology L opinion
@MathewSteeleAtheology Жыл бұрын
@@marcovalentini863 k
@timrosswood4259 Жыл бұрын
@@MathewSteeleAtheologyexplain
@MathewSteeleAtheology Жыл бұрын
@@timrosswood4259 The concept of eternal suffering for offending an all-powerful, all-knowing being who knows what you're going to do in advance and permits it to occur is, in a word, idiotic.
@Muykle9 жыл бұрын
It makes you wonder which cell phone service company built a cell phone tower in hell.
@ShedonistaShamanatrix9 жыл бұрын
AT&T fo' sho'.
@VAStarGazer2119 жыл бұрын
+Shedonista Shamanatrix nah man its gotta be verizon
@Muykle9 жыл бұрын
+VAStarGazer211 both have alot of coverage
@mankind-redefined19824 жыл бұрын
Veri-Sin.
@officialiCurze4 жыл бұрын
telia
@TheShadowSythe9 жыл бұрын
Fuck, that was good. Probably an instant top 10 for me.
@HelloZukoHere79 жыл бұрын
I'm thinking the same thing lol.
@bearsbeetsbattlestargalactica69 жыл бұрын
It makes me think of Jodi Arias for some reason 😂😂 I don't know why, probably because when that case was on tv all of America was saying that. (If you don't know who she is look her up on here)
@MaryVishnevskaya9 жыл бұрын
Wow. First ever creepypasta to creep me out a little. This is beautiful!
@youwatch2muchtv9 жыл бұрын
Yeah it gave chills down my spine tbh
@MaryVishnevskaya9 жыл бұрын
***** Exactly. Especially when you do almost everything that the people in the bar did. lol
@youwatch2muchtv9 жыл бұрын
+Mary Vishnevskaya woah now idk about all that!
@bubbelsmarin40169 жыл бұрын
+Mary Vishnevskaya you should really find more creepy pastas cause this one isn't even that creepy just saying
@MaryVishnevskaya9 жыл бұрын
bubbels Marin It's not creepy, it's just very interesting and goosebumpy. Because of what Jody said in the end, that he could of take the elevator up just like down. Very deep meaning behind what people think Hell is.
@cutefandomedits23313 жыл бұрын
"Every patron in hell gets to enjoy their threats without judgement, after all judgement has already been passed, de exist beyond that now." There is just something i love so much about this
@marfish55203 жыл бұрын
Man this creepypasta really just hits hard, idk how to describe it but i feel like the protagonist being saved from the evil they are facing by the love/kindness of a friend is such a good concept thingy that should be used in more creepypastas.
@Niobesnuppa8 жыл бұрын
Easily one of my favorite creepypastas. It's so refreshing to see a creepypasta that isn't about being chased by some monster or a haunted video game or something cliche like that.
@maximusmech95 жыл бұрын
Every night, I listened to this Creepypasta with my #1 favorite uncle. He would always stroll into my room just to hear this story several times without fail. Even the famously completed My Property Isn't Normal story made us laugh several times. I still miss him, since he always played video games late at night an hour early into 8:00. By 1:00 or 2:00, he'd be out like a light snoring his ass off. You, Mr. MCP. You introduced a man who saw horror as comedy; to something quite different when it came to a story such as this. His interest in secret bars is what led me to this story. Of course, he didn't dare cross over to that route. But, his curiosity without a doubt... led me to this masterpiece. Bravo to you, MrCreepyPasta. Whenever I go back to this story; I think of him.
@karenmcvey48619 жыл бұрын
congrats on the up and coming wedding. mcp.☺
@MrCreepyPasta9 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. We've got a lot of planning to do but if you follow me on Twitter you can keep up with a more personal side of things. @mrcreepypasta0
@GODLIKE_-jo5oc9 жыл бұрын
+MrCreepyPasta Hi
@karenmcvey48619 жыл бұрын
+MrCreepyPasta . i do follow you on twitter and on your gaming channel as well. i wish you both the best of luck for the future.😀
@maackiimoo9 жыл бұрын
+MrCreepyPasta congrats he or she is a lucky person.
@DoomHydra9 жыл бұрын
+MissMystery NightShade he
@ClockworkCryptid8 жыл бұрын
18:21 I'D CHIME IN WITH A "HAVEN'T YOU PEOPLE EVER HEARD OF CLOSING A GOD DAMNED DOOR?" -I'm so sorry-
@YarnyKate9 жыл бұрын
By far one of my most favorite creepypastas. Just...amazing.
@toringaming7234 жыл бұрын
the tension in this story is the best I've seen in a creepypasta.
@tinalouise19702 жыл бұрын
I agree ! Very well written and his narration with the appropriate background audio, has me worried about what nightmare I will have tonight because I'm more than sure it's coming ! Lol
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
I'm definitely proud of the soundtrack for this one. I hope I can continue to write good scores for your stories man :)
@MultiBallz2u9 жыл бұрын
I subbed! cant wait for your uploads
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
+MultiBallz2u I'll try later tonight
@EmergencyL0tion9 жыл бұрын
What's the name of the song when he was being chased by the bartender
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
+Evan johson its on my channel man
@EmergencyL0tion9 жыл бұрын
wait you wrote this? Because if you did damn man this is top 5 creepy pasta
@shelbimetrejean53439 жыл бұрын
Dude, the way you story tell is literally the best. Whomever you marry is SUPER lucky im sure in lots of ways, but the scary bedtime stories are gonna be the best!!!!! ;)
@angiec41163 жыл бұрын
Lol
@Bardockfan1502 жыл бұрын
Shout out to Mike. He's a good friend, more than he'll ever know.
@stinkmeaner22618 жыл бұрын
6:56 "I considered this, and decided to leave" story ends there.
@senvr119 жыл бұрын
"It was full of butts" I giggled like a Japanese 7 year old
@nehemiahbaines15169 жыл бұрын
A lot of creepy pastas are hit or miss...this one was a grand slam!!! Great story! Please do more like it in the future!
@impartialthrone20973 жыл бұрын
The music at the climax always gets me with the feels.
@ashley0601899 жыл бұрын
This narrator reads SO well! Lots of inflections in the correct places. I will certainly return!
@zachmontminy2 жыл бұрын
The way that music crescendos as he's escaping is just _wonderful_
@AsdfAsdf-mi6ks9 жыл бұрын
I was reluctant to click this because the thumbnail really really scared me.... But this story. It's amazing. It kinda reminded me of the story of Adam and Eve biting into the fruit of knowledge. Some things were to be left unknown.
@jeco03579 жыл бұрын
Hell has rules isn't that a bit of a buzz kill?
@zura3039 жыл бұрын
Yeah, I mean, if I'm gonna spend an eternity somewhere, it better be entertaining.
@Felix-ot9sk9 жыл бұрын
+Castiel Winchester Well, as we heard in the story, you always get exactly what you came for in hell...
@sopretty43vr8 жыл бұрын
Rule 1. No ac in hell Rule 2. Eternal burning Rule 3. You can't leave and suffer for all eternity Hell always had rules
@CallMeDental4 ай бұрын
What really makes me think is the fact that Jodi said that Kurt could have gone up. She also said in her poem that "pain becomes pleasure, and pleasure becomes death." It makes me think that taking the elevator up takes you to a false heaven fabricated by Din, which slowly takes away your soul bit by bit in return for pleasure... or perhaps that is a natural consequence of meaningless pleasure.
@wearegoingcrazy67582 жыл бұрын
they don’t write them like these anymore 😭
@kenetickups61468 жыл бұрын
scared straight: ultimate edition
@SillhouetteSonata9 жыл бұрын
"The second coming of lestat." Lol
@mochaj9426 жыл бұрын
That was really an awesome story! Wonderfully written and of course experty narrated! You really picked a winner this time and please please never stop narrating- you have a gift!
@wikikomoto8 жыл бұрын
HOW do you get a cell connection in hell? i cant even get one in the subway
@mrrattlebones52758 жыл бұрын
wikikomoto maybe the subway is a deeper version of hell XD
@inexena4 жыл бұрын
Heck, I cant even get one in class-
@TonySamedi9 жыл бұрын
I'm from New Orleans and the scariest thing here is that EVERY detail is right. I can only assume Banning K is either from here or has been here a lot to get the city so right.
@ZeroToWealthRedistribution8 жыл бұрын
The background image during the video is literally an epileptic trigger lol
@Thugrobb1991 Жыл бұрын
Mr creepypasta been talking me to sleep for 10 years now, much love man
@draxtheliteralist11079 жыл бұрын
Ecclesiastes 1:18 "For with much wisdom comes much sorrow; the more knowledge, the more grief".
@koretechx16 жыл бұрын
This just definitely landed on my top 5 favorite creepy pastas! Great narration and very creative!
@ClaireSunshine9 жыл бұрын
Will their be a Krampus pasta this Christmas? *Crosses Fingers*
@MrCreepyPasta9 жыл бұрын
+Tickles McGee yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
@ClaireSunshine9 жыл бұрын
***** YES! After I saw the new movie I rushed home and re listened to your old ones, so I'm really excited for this!
@taylorjones82169 жыл бұрын
+Tickles McGee is the krampus move any good?
@ClaireSunshine9 жыл бұрын
T Jones Dude. It Is AMAZING! If you love Krampus, you'll fucking love it.
@ClaireSunshine9 жыл бұрын
+Charlie Willis It's really good. Lil cheesy at times but still pretty good
@kirisaki55849 жыл бұрын
This was actually pretty nice. I usually don't really like these overly long, overly elaborated stories, but this one was quite entertaining and kept me interested.
@fermiLiquidDrinker8 жыл бұрын
This was so refreshing. It's nice to have a creepypasta about something other then a monster a killer.
@addieb13145 жыл бұрын
Seriously one of my favorite stories. So happy to see a reading done by you!
@A_Strawberry2 жыл бұрын
I've heard many many many creepypastas; this is still one of the best ones I've ever heard. Probably my second favorite of all time.
@aethelsteadtheunsteady4502 жыл бұрын
What's the first?
@erinbeth16217 жыл бұрын
My all-time favorite creepypasta and my all-time favorite narration.
@trikillerx9 жыл бұрын
See kids cigarettes are bad mmmkay. You'll go to hell if you smoke cigarettes! Thou shall not smoke cigarettes.
@charlieevergreen35143 ай бұрын
26:02 Wow, good coverage! Wonder who his carrier was.
@Immolator7729 жыл бұрын
A realistic view on hell, i'm honestly impressed.
@punkyreggaeparty87864 жыл бұрын
This one is on my playlist/favorites. The music, graphics, and the narration are perfection! Thank you, MCP.
@darionjohnson76468 жыл бұрын
i hope somebody makes another 1 where the guy chooses heaven instead of hell im curious what his heaven would be like😇
@lapis18397 жыл бұрын
darion Johnson some people consider hell heaven cause some people are so fucked up they view it that way
@savage_kingfireflare70335 жыл бұрын
darion Johnson quite honestly that would be very interesting
@taylormazoku65396 жыл бұрын
One of the best Creepypastas I've ever heard, read and narrated by one of the best people I've ever heard, this is excellently done.
@16xthedetail769 жыл бұрын
Getting Death Parade flashbacks here.
@zura3039 жыл бұрын
Oh my god yes
@despairia9 жыл бұрын
+C Ziggy Death Parade was so awesome. * _ *
@16xthedetail769 жыл бұрын
***** indeed it was.
@thewicca68969 жыл бұрын
+C Ziggy IKR??
@katicasey46109 жыл бұрын
Same.
@thequackhouse46586 жыл бұрын
Outstanding! One of the best I believe in my humble opinion.
@thomas-tk6ce9 жыл бұрын
There's cellular connection in Hell? Sweet
@zura3039 жыл бұрын
Well... Now I know when I get to hell I can tweet this
@chasecash13632 жыл бұрын
@@zura303 if only we knew Twitter was hell
@Sh4tterdL0g1c9 жыл бұрын
This is the best creepypasta and best commentated creepypasta I've heard in a while great job
@wanderingrandomer8 жыл бұрын
Well, obviously they knew the protagonist was going to escape, because he heard secrets of things that hadn't happened yet, so, with that kind of foresight, are we really sure that they were lies?
@TheNukaColaMan108 жыл бұрын
Are we really sure that they were truths either though?
@Chronicler93 жыл бұрын
"This is your chance to back out" repeatedly. and this dude be like "Good show~ Good show~"
@tornadonick64809 жыл бұрын
Love myself the occasional good ending creepypastas! Fully expected the guy to buy the house and become the new bartender or something stupid like that.
@gv85219 жыл бұрын
This is possibly the best creepypasta I've heard, the voice acting, really did it think, especially when the "secrets" hit him and he knew the things he didn't. The music and the voice made you really feel as if this was happening to you.
@justinoleon95429 жыл бұрын
I had three bowls of hell for breakfast this morning.
@melvindavid4859 жыл бұрын
the graphics n music really add to the tale.
@triciawatts56188 жыл бұрын
about 3 weeks ago I had such a horrible infection hit my blood system that I hallucinated with just a touch of reality for 5 days it was my private hell I've never ever told a soul about what happened over those five days so needless to say this story really hit home
@Shadethewolfy7 жыл бұрын
Blood infections are never pleasant... D:
@ryanfarmer26937 жыл бұрын
Only been on a scary story kick for about two months now. Most days I work alone at my construction job and usually listen to 10 hours of scary stories a day. So far this one takes the cake so intriguing and it painted a perfect picture of the situation in my head love the narrator two thumbs up!!!! Anyone have any recommendations to other stories like this??
@darthzaida18819 жыл бұрын
This is a great one
@SG-bs6dm6 жыл бұрын
Great story and incredible narration
@Ketchupsandvich9 жыл бұрын
Fantastic story and reading
@RegretfulGreedler9 жыл бұрын
Holy shit; this was the best pasta I've heard in a /long/ time. Whatever song you used once Kurt was escaping the bar was perfect.
@Brain_Barf8 жыл бұрын
Does anyone else imagine the bartender as the one from Catherine?
@enignma4trmble3406 жыл бұрын
One of the best Stories!!
@TheReelRapNerd6 жыл бұрын
This would be great to see a film.
@thekingofshlock6 жыл бұрын
I agree!
@emilysorcha52767 жыл бұрын
This is my favorite story he's ever done
@CJ-cb4gj9 жыл бұрын
Hey creeps just a suggestion instead of being the victim or last survivor why not play the monster it would be nice hearing you narrate as a monster or demon for once.
@Mr_Doodleydoo9 жыл бұрын
The world needs more anti hero creppypastas
@danielhowton31479 жыл бұрын
Well he does not write these. But you could write one and send it to him if you want
@NervousKraken9 жыл бұрын
That would be awesome! I'm sure there are some good ones out there!
@PotawatomiThunderNew9 жыл бұрын
+Senica Allen He's reading stories that are written by other people. He can't read a story from the point of view of the monster/demon/villain/etc. if they aren't written that way.
@kennablack32958 жыл бұрын
I live in potawotami!!
@wormwood83527 жыл бұрын
16:06 "Yes, they're sharing a drink they call 'loneliness.. But it's better than drinking alone!"
@SageWarrenSageywageypoo8 жыл бұрын
Is this based off of the 7 deadly sins? It all adds up.
@ashleymcmillian14557 жыл бұрын
love the background piano music along with this great creepy pasta story
@kanacucumber6 жыл бұрын
I want an anime adaptation
@Yungghostin Жыл бұрын
The best narrator and creepypasta together makes the best creepypasta ever told 💯
@MrReganomics15 жыл бұрын
"There was a house. In New Orleans They called the rising sun And its been the ruin of many poor boys" Sounds like he found the house
@NoMeGusta25265 жыл бұрын
that was in sin city.
@anti-roxas8509 жыл бұрын
Kudos for this story!!!!!! BRAVO BRAVO!!!!
@sagejosh8 жыл бұрын
man if only this guy wasnt a hipster that thought he was going to get laid.
@r3b0rn_mike1179 жыл бұрын
And this is why I stick to the pubs. Especially O'Mailey's Irish Pub! Great narration of an interesting tale! Keep it up good sir!
@ImTabe9 жыл бұрын
What's the name of the song when he is being chased by the bartender?
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
It doesn't have a name yet. I wrote all the music for this story custom. I'll upload the different parts to my channel when I have the time.
@ImTabe9 жыл бұрын
codbarley Oh you made it? Capital work mate! Let me know when it's up!
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
+Im Tabe I will :)
@bearsbeetsbattlestargalactica69 жыл бұрын
+codbarley that's awesome! It sounds really good!
@CodeumOfficial9 жыл бұрын
+Im Tabe The video is up on my channel. I made a playlist for all the music in this video.
@noobsaibot1258 жыл бұрын
You and Dr. Creepen man, I just can't find any other narrators I can keep going back to.
@jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro85209 жыл бұрын
Welp... I just shit myself. 11/10
@bubbelsmarin40169 жыл бұрын
+Helo am donald pls suscrib it wasn't even that creepy
@jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro85209 жыл бұрын
No, but it was intense.
@angelbabyyy34209 жыл бұрын
+bubbels Marin well that's your opinion
@bubbelsmarin40169 жыл бұрын
yeah it is my opinion, you don't really have to state the obvious, i was just saying, dont be so worked up about it
@TropiRock109 жыл бұрын
Great narration of these stories. Keep it up. I subscribed today
@kazzmere25339 жыл бұрын
Yay, I'm not too late.
@ediot14268 жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorite creepypastas I've ever heard. Also you're an amazing voice actor
@ShedonistaShamanatrix9 жыл бұрын
In the description box you put "from the bowls of hell" and it's "bowels" AND I can't believe it, you said "guess-churred" instead of "jess-chured" for the word "gestured"... Do you do this on purpose to drive those with OCD mad? Lol I LOVE how you read though!
@joshgarcia44629 жыл бұрын
+Princess Celestia what if twilight sparkle ended up in the secret bar?
@athenasrevenge939 жыл бұрын
+Princess Celestia But Spike's not British.
@ShedonistaShamanatrix9 жыл бұрын
+Princess Celestia Yes, what Alicia said. He mispronounces words from time to time, he and one of my other favorite narrators, "Let's Read!", you should seriously check him out, I'd LOVE a collaboration between the two of them, as they are two Narrators who put a LOT into their work (I love them BOTH for how expressive they are, and how much they put into the sound effects and music, how the stories perfectly go with the music they choose etc.). Don't get me wrong, I LOVE Corpse Husband's voice and acting too and love Lazy Masquerade, URMAKER, Be Busta, and 99% of the narrators! It's simply that these two (him and "Let's Read!") are so stylized and really go the extra mile, as they say.
@joshgarcia44629 жыл бұрын
+Shedonista Shamanatrix I recently found let's read omg he's amazing...
@ShedonistaShamanatrix9 жыл бұрын
+Jason Garcia YES! He is THE BEST, IMO. I'd like to see him have a million followers.
@TheMadAtterson9 жыл бұрын
You've outdone yourself with this one. Bravo MCP.
@Dashawn4 жыл бұрын
27:25 music??
@prettyboi6505 жыл бұрын
Now here's a good story love it great work
@spoopy46318 жыл бұрын
I thought that when she said "you'll either be in heaven or hell" I thought that meant that like some people will see hell as their heaven cuz kinky people and shiz.
@Sacred_Carrot9 жыл бұрын
Amazing as always, and kudos to the author. Also, congrats Mr. Creepypasta!