[SFM RWBY] Burning Rose: Abused and Neglected Male Reader X RWBY

[@spooketti7533]

i won't lose next time,, hold onto that abused and neglected male reader until then,,

[@cactusguy8762]

spooketti Always like DMC5

[@pinoiman223]

"And so it is written..."

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

I was thinking of Sephiroth in the FFVII remake

[@TheLinkHelios]

His name is burning rose

[@camomurf5182]

I... well... so many more questions than answers...

[@DuelaDent52]

“I was born with glass bones and paper skin. Every morning I break my legs, and every afternoon I break my arms. At night, I lie awake in agony until my heart attacks put me to sleep.” ~Y/N (probably)

[@mikedanielespeja6128]

If Y/N had the durability of V but the healing of Dante.

[@ChaoticFrenziedStar]

@@mikedanielespeja6128 And the Edge of DMC Devil May Cry Dante?

[@cillbipher2613]

ABUSED AND NEGLECTED MALE READER MAY CRY 5

[@TheWhiteDeath13]

@@cillbipher2613 I AM THE EDGINESS THAT IS APPROACHING! PROVOKING! BLACK CLOUDS IN ISOLATION!

[@cyz3566]

Ayo, Epithet Erased?

[@Oegyeindraws]

The only abused and neglected person here is the audience after being subjected to.... *that*

[@wouldyoulikesomewiessedtea8757]

🤫

[@Reaper-or8ht]

Yo @Oegyein, ever puked so hard that you’re guys come out of all eight holes......neither did I....but then I read the MULTI CHAPTER STORY AFTER GFOLLOWING THE LINK IN THE DESCRIPTION!!!!!!! Who ever wrote this has a lack of three things: 1. Seeing a Vagina 2. Actually watching RWBY 3. The right to intake fucking oxegyn as punishment for subjecting readers with brain cells to this bullshit!!!!!

[@eliasdelgadillo7353]

@@Reaper-or8ht wow....that was...harsh...but you are right..but you dont have to be harsh. P.S. I'm using my dads phone.

[@Reaper-or8ht]

@@eliasdelgadillo7353 I know, I know, but.......fuck I just hate these pretentious Emos trying to take their “pain and suffering” and forcing us read it over obviously better written material

[@sliverpool5768]

@@eliasdelgadillo7353 no no. He has a point.

[@ThePeet341]

Ah, yes. Because adoption works the same as adopting a puppy BECAUSE ANYTHING CAN BE BOUGHT OR SOLD WITH THE RIGHT AMOUNT OF OOOIIILLL

[@shadow04cool]

Shiektheimmortal Ah, a man of culture!

[@jetstreamattano4176]

Nah Did I just hear OIL THAT SHIT MINNNNNNNE

[@Prince_of_Despair]

@@jetstreamattano4176 god bless America

[@jetstreamattano4176]

@@Prince_of_Despair Sir The Bucket Is Your Drink

[@Prince_of_Despair]

@@jetstreamattano4176 D R I N K T H E Y E L L O W S N O W

[@chadchadson6380]

I don't know if anyone cares, but I usually read Y/N L/N as Yin Ling. Just makes it easier on me when reading, rather than saying CHAD CHADSON, FIFTEENTH IN THE BLOODLINE OF CHAD, HEIR TO THE CHADDINGTON THRONE AND CONQUEROR OF THE KAREN-SPAWN.

[@wonghenry8731]

Or simply John Doe

[@formalblade5981]

I’ve named my little west highlander terrier DANGO, DOGGUS THE THIRD, TERROR OF RODENTS, FEASTER OF MEAT, BANE OF CORGI’S, RIGHTFUL HEIR TO THE TERRIER FOUNDATION!!

[@veribeee]

praise be, chad.

[@AriesZero]

The Chad bloodline reminds me of the Joestar bloodline

[@erarivera6423]

I read it as Wayen Len *facepalm*

[@quehay45]

Wow, this fanfic predicted Cinder's backstory. Abused and neglected female reader.

[@worthyedge9307]

Wow that's basically what happened lol

[@romanemperor3160]

I'm dead lmao, oh wait I actually am dead

[@whateverwhatever4476]

Hahaha it’s true

[@Maniacalharp-747]

Holy shit you're right.

[@dreadrath]

Holy crap, I never made that connection, but its so true.

[@Kushrada]

That moment when you realize Abused and Neglected Male Reader was what the writers decided was the best backstory for Cinder.

[@lastpringle8904]

Well I mean at this point I'm rooting for Salem Woman has so many dubs in the bag I may as well switch teams

[@4wheal]

​@@lastpringle8904 Im hoping the gods come back take one look at the cast and just throw the planet into a black hole.

[@weedsmoke8776]

Family: Beats and starves child Child: Leaves Family: :o

[@thatonedudefromdiscord4348]

Poggers :0

[@TupocalypseShakur]

@@thatonedudefromdiscord4348 👀 0

[@lz9275]

👁👄👁

[@pikamewistaken]

More like 😥🤧

[@Numbers1516]

👁👄👁

[@leetlefool7173]

"...because I haven't eaten anything in 3 months," 3 months? Boi you dead.

[@logical6118]

My friend he has edge powers shush

[@iguanaboi3921]

@@logical6118 that's his semblance

[@Ribbons0121R121]

shut up its anime logic

[@Oscar-j6b]

It is possible. Really, really, really hard to survive but it is possible.

[@OrionDawn15]

At this point Abused and Neglected Reader is fuckin' Natsuki from DDLC.

[@TheStrongVirus]

I cringed so hard I broke my spine, from edge so sharp it severed my flesh, the pain of this story made me whine, yet, after the ending fell on the story, for the first time in ages I suddenly felt fresh.

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

Gotta fill your spine back up with Adamantium

[@vincentvasquez9879]

No this story needs jesus and some crack

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

@@vincentvasquez9879 Have you read the Bible?

[@vincentvasquez9879]

@@ChangedMyNameFinally69 yes why do you ask?

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

@@vincentvasquez9879 Jesus won't save this story, he'd probably make it worse

[@anordinarypedestrian5445]

"This abused and neglect will make me stronger!" - Abused and neglected male reader black

[@Bloodschosen2457]

Except less sex, I think. I haven't read it

[@Ribbons0121R121]

if only that logic worked

[@Floridamangaming729]

pretty sure its the opposite. Sounds like delusions to me.

[@OrionDawn15]

"Edge, Ruby! It sharpens in response to abuse and neglect! You can't hurt me!" -Abused And Neglected Male Reader probably

[@shikikankillzone4239]

@@OrionDawn15 *Channel your inner hatred, loathe the world as it has loathed you*

[@samuraiblack3496]

Abused and neglected male reader: i haven't eaten anything in 3 months. Me: BULLSHIT, YOU CAN'T EVEN GO A WEEK WITHOUT FOOD

[@khorneberzerker2184]

That's water, not food, I think

[@Prince_of_Despair]

@@khorneberzerker2184 water three days and 3 weeks for food

[@aliceindrains6834]

I can’t go without food for 3 min

[@redvelvet5374]

3 weeks to a month without food

[@Missing-Ace]

Abused and neglected male reader would have died of hunger 4 times and died of thirst 7 times

[@justsomeguywithoutamustach8816]

Abused and neglected male reader: *breathes Whole RWBY universe: -And I took that personally

[@lastpringle8904]

"Did I just catch you havin fun?!"

[@xaytaytortot2540]

@@lastpringle8904 lord have mercy my baby ❗❗

[@SpinozillaSaurian]

Azure just keeps getting more and more depressed in your videos

[@Tom-ds3ox]

Can't blame him, if he has to read such abominations for Miras amusement.

[@Arnuski]

well, if I was in the situation of Azure i probably killed myself long time ago

[@cobalt2672]

Abused and Neglected Male Reader is the hero we need to beat Salem

[@lastpringle8904]

She'll just end her own life after reading the first paragraph

[@gamejunky3040]

Of course! That’s what we need to fight Salem with. The worst fanfics we can muster up!

[@pannik_lucas]

@@lastpringle8904 Nothing could kill her, but this... May break her curse

[@disorderandregression9278]

@@pannik_lucas It may not kill her body, but it will certainly kill her spirit.

[@TheNapster153]

@@disorderandregression9278 Why attempt physical murder when you can mindbreak them for good, yes-yes?

[@alexanderrichard8842]

So it's my immortal but RWBY instead of Harry Potter... I live it

[@babarshah6479]

Well damn...never to see that "fanfic" be mentioned after a *long* time...ah the memories!

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

This is unironic though

[@Missing-Ace]

This is so much better

[@drifterduckygaming4646]

@@ChangedMyNameFinally69 wait.... the original was ironic? Like actually ironic? Or like Schrodinger's Irony?

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

@@drifterduckygaming4646 No this fanfic

[@lunarunity7122]

Hi, my name is Ebony Darkness Dementia Ravenway. I'm a third year at Beacon and I'm also a grim and I wear all black with-nah I can't do it, it hurts too much

[@carso1500]

The edge is soo hard it cuts for real

[@coranbaker6401]

@@carso1500 Such is the power of My Immortal

[@Mooke_Maykr]

ITS TO REAL

[@lordfriedrick7911]

I see that you know true pain... I share that pain too... Eboby is pain

[@miobro2901]

Oh God the fact I might just have seen something along that line

[@VanillaRoadie]

Ruby's entire lines of dialogue throughout this edgefic is just laughing, crying, and "big bwodder", and I find this fittingly hilarious for some reason XD

[@cheer2834]

Why are we still here? Just to suffer? Every night, I can feel my leg... And my arm... even my fingers... The body I've lost... the comrades I've lost... won't stop hurting... It's like they're all still there. You feel it, too, don't you? I'm gonna make them give back our past!

[@shawnosborne7102]

They played us like dam fiddle

[@stinger59605]

Kaz, I’m already a demon.

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

Yang? Is that you?

[@stinger59605]

LJK401 you will never know

[@ChangedMyNameFinally69]

@@stinger59605 Ruby, I'm already a Grimm

[@admiralcrow7182]

I need to see the entirety of Azure and Shizuka singing Bakamitai. ...no, I WANT IT

[@iguanaboi3921]

Shizuka is just frantically signing the whole time

[@e-brosanimations231]

@@iguanaboi3921 sadly she is only mouthing it :( she is a mute

[@QruisS]

>wattpad I dont have to read it to know how this is going to turn up but I will still do it in the name of science.

[@QruisS]

Update: Its complete trash. Like, I'm actually impressed by how bad it is, and I use to read trash on a daily basis!

[@oxygeninhaler4542]

@@QruisS Wattpad is the source of bad writing. Fanfiction.net can't even compare to the level of shit people have to wade through in wattpad.

[@eldritchbeer]

@@oxygeninhaler4542 damn and fanfiction.net has some decent shit, you know it's bad when thats you compare it too

[@Prince_of_Despair]

Used to read wattpad. Its like trying to find needle(decent story) in a haystack(shit)

[@Kiru_Kahl]

IKR I agree with everything you all have said.

[@GreyReBl]

Wattpad. Why must thou be the source of my pain?

[@socarcam6671]

So...the first thing that this guy does after escaping his abusive family is..go to a library? I feel like going to the police would be a more sensible thing to do. Also, I just love how he learned literally everything about his parents and how they gave him the family katana and fedora from some random library book.

[@iguanaboi3921]

"the path to hell is really really hot," - someone probably

[@TwoHalvesOfaWholeMango]

I’d give you a like but I gotta keep the cringe to nice levels

[@Vicefromkof]

I love how they have a super friendly explanation at the beginning to ease you into the story and when the story start: *Help*

[@Snickerway]

The “Formerly Y/N Rose” made me think the AANMR started out fuckin divorced from Ruby

[@thehonestwoobat5191]

You know, I'm always critical of my own writing but then I find stories like this that make me feel a lot better about what I write. 😂

[@David19950109]

I just spent 18 minutes of my life listening to this.....working my-self to death no longer sounds like a terrible fate at all.

[@wickederebus]

I first read that as 18 months instead of minutes

[@jipsygamer4760]

I tried to treat this like a 'try not to laugh chalange' and I almost won, right until 17:23. LET ME IIINNNNNNN!!!!

[@pikamewistaken]

I was hard down laughing the whole video from the edginess and how poorly written it was

[@OrionDawn15]

Rub-Rub was what killed me.

[@roastmctoast]

the sins of the father

[@jobsidian4219]

Nice pfp

[@Jc-lu8qc]

Is. That fucking sinclair from limbus company

[@shenshiya9474]

​@@Jc-lu8qc pjmoon spotted

[@mrshadowcristal]

14:23 not sure why I'm even nitpicking at this point but doesn't the door lock from the outside, the only person stopping Yang from entering is the author trying to force this scene.

[@chronologicaldisorder5606]

Author: *holding the door* DON'T RUIN MY SCEEEEENE

[@LSDOvideos]

@@chronologicaldisorder5606 fucking lmao

[@WTFisTingispingis]

Like Yang wouldn't just punch the door down, or jump in through the window.

[@sideways5153]

I WAS THINKING THE SAME THING! Lmao literally like a page prior they said that the door locked from the outside, and then they’re suddenly acting like Abused and Neglected Male Reader can somehow keep the door shut

[@LordofPainValak]

This hurts me on a spiritual level. I'm impressed.

[@lexthemystic3541]

I know, right?

[@Ordomalleus40k]

It’s only been a few minutes and there’s to much edge in this story oh god it’s to much edge ( blood gushing everywhere!!!!!!!!!)

[@leetlefool7173]

Oh sweet potatoes the edge got you! RUN FROM THE EDGE!

[@khorneberzerker2184]

Describes most stories on Wattpad like this

[@dracorneyveldin184]

That was kind of the point, it's a parody.. this is admittedly a bit uncomfortable.

[@The_Big_Whit]

Is this why you tried to nuke the planet Torres?

[@Ordomalleus40k]

@@The_Big_Whit yes……..yarharhar

[@XentusX]

I hate that I'm just now finding this video. This is a masterpiece of absolute shit that makes me laugh. TRULY BEAUTIFUL!

[@luisrobles2103]

Same

[@dmegamanful]

Same

[@thereddestofthefields2029]

No one: No one at all: Absolutely no one: Not a single soul: Mirabeau Studios: AbUseD aND nEglECteD MaLE rEaDEr Also Mirabeau: RUB-RUB

[@seenzonecrow1171]

Lmao stories like these that came from wattpad don't make sense bruh.

[@callmeken2327]

DevilMayCry 5 🤣🤣🤣

[@drifterduckygaming4646]

*R U B R U B*

[@Ribbons0121R121]

rubro

[@OrionDawn15]

*ROOB-ROOB*

[@extrnalsorce4974]

I’m pretty sure this was banned at the Geneva convention

[@Kai_Mercer]

It was

[@briancahill9594]

I'd have never guessed that RWBY was popular enough in Switzerland to warrant a convention!

[@CPUSublimeHeart]

@@briancahill9594 burn ( waiy shit this sounds like an insult) MEANT AS NICE ROAST DONT HURT ME ENGLISH GODS

[@briancahill9594]

@@CPUSublimeHeart No worries, but I do appreciate the clarification. Also, "moarliek _Bern_ amiriet ecksdee?"

[@JohnDoe-vd7qy]

And was ignored like the Geneva convention

[@BlankEmporium]

Ya know, their are only ever two Taiyang's in Rwby. Either Satan himself or an Angel in human form. No inbetween at all.

[@carso1500]

Rwby fandom you say

[@Vermillion37]

🤣 so true he’s usually the pettiest little shit you’ll ever meet but yea

[@wardenkarn1664]

There is a abused and neglected story where Tai is actually a really good person/dad by doing the best course of action that being leaving with the kid and living away from the abusive shit's and being a good dad

[@idkwtcm984]

@@wardenkarn1664 you can’t just say that and not give the sauce

[@WanderingRonin509]

Honestly it's kinda of sad that the fandom do this to tai in cannon he's a great dad who at first couldn't do much cuz his depression that set in after losing two of the most Important women in his life one leaving him and one being mia on mission he just shut down and that was shitty of him to shut down on his daughter's like that leaving yang to take a mother like role for a while but he never did anything bad to them and in the end he got his wake up call and started being a good father he was supposed to be like apparently the fandom thinks there's no in between with that for some reason

[@WolfXtream]

This... I do read a lot of this fanfics on wattpad, and finally someone did it. You reading like this made me laugh, tou should do more like this even if it's cringy

[@azurered4417]

The most edge origin i have hear in so long. Men that was so EDGE, i loved.

[@crimsonmask2648]

“Why oh why! Does this story bend our personalities more than Contortionists!”

[@RRVCrinale]

"Welcome to a world of abuse and neglect" doesn't have the same ring to it, gotta say.

[@Moramany]

Why did Yang sound like Shaggy omg

[@randomretard2445]

Incarnation

[@TheGreatKawaiiOne]

so this is what SFM looks like at its full potential, not bad, not bad at all

[@Ibrahimarm]

I enjoyed this reading so much lmao

[@IDSearcher]

Abused and neglected male reader is Fenriart Solace from Elsword. I write this because every time I rewatch this I feel compelled to look up where all that edge comes from and every time is a pain to find that out via image searches. Hopefully, this comment will give my future self peace.

[@locomastero]

“GO STEP ON A LEGO!!!!!” I feel that.

[@SkilletTom]

My epitaph, my manifesto, and my suicide note in an essential value deal

[@TheNxtGmer]

DAME DA NE~~ DAME YO DAME NA NO YO~~ ANTA GA~~ SUKI DE SUKISUGITE~ *Zooms out to see picture of T-POSE Ruby Rose model with gremlin*

[@gabrielrosendo9553]

Bakamitai itensifies

[@aceknown3230]

Can't see at the end credits

[@TheSUN_official]

Wtf this is a year ago

[@CrossBones327]

You're about a year to early with that joke mate.

[@gamejunky3040]

I knew it, time travelers !

[@t0ri178]

Yang legit sounds like shaggy

[@JuggerBlitz]

This entire fic in a nutshell: Ow The Edge

[@coast2coast-295]

Abused And Neglected Male Reader is easily RWBY's best character.

[@WanderingRonin509]

Ah yes I remember him abused and neglected male reader wasn't he in *every other male reader fanfic*

[@gamesthatshouldbeframed3760]

@@WanderingRonin509 No that's shy/depressed/villain and or enemy faction of said reality. But then there is just normal Male reader ( we don't talk about him )

[@WanderingRonin509]

@@gamesthatshouldbeframed3760 we don't talk about reader fanfiction period

[@gamesthatshouldbeframed3760]

@@WanderingRonin509 but what about abused and neglected male reader

[@WanderingRonin509]

@@gamesthatshouldbeframed3760 shhhhhh

[@Zachattack1cub]

I had several brain aneurysms after trying to read and understand this guy's story. I'm now recovering in a hospital, and wondering how a person could have so little brain cells and still be allowed to write and post something of this quality.

[@DM-mi4je]

Just because they can't scrounge up enough IQ to breathe doesn't when they can't use wattpad.

[@Neiroe]

wdym bro this is peak

[@ravishing_cadet4625]

Me: Hello darkness my old freind Darkness: STOP TALKING TO ME I DONT KNOW YOU

[@tiffanykay6060]

Tai should go “Aaaauuuuuugh” every time he finishes talking, like from his death video.

[@sukhoisu-24fencer3]

(Slams through wall) DID SOMEONE SAY DIE FOR THE EMPEROR?!

[@erichunsaker4969]

*gasmask noises*

[@edmondroberts8494]

For the glory of the IMPERIUM!!!!!!

[@gamejunky3040]

Commissar: wait no... I mean live for the emperor!! LIVE!!!

[@wardenkarn1664]

We are the imperial guard! It is time we acting like it!

[@amexicangorilla2901]

I think the reason why the Abused and Neglected tag is so popular is because it's easy to emotionally connect to the reader. So, essentially, it's just a lazy way to make conflict and make the reader feel bad for the main character.

[@amexicangorilla2901]

If they wanted to make it interesting, they could've had Summer be dead and the rest of them basically taking out their grief on the main character.

[@xanvoir7693]

@@amexicangorilla2901 I think a plotline that could be interesting is like -First son/daughter of Summer act as her partner in missions as a huntsman because they are old enough, Yang and Ruby are kids at this time -Summer dies because of Salem, Y/N (lets just call them Y/N) is traumatized because of what they saw and witnessed -Family learns it, and blames them for letting Summer die, Y/N doesn’t tell them what killed Summer because they are scarred mentally -Family grows to hate Y/N because of Summer’s death.

[@quote1273]

See, the funny thing is, I've read alot of Abused/Neglected reader books involving RWBY. They are all hilariously bad, because it's the same process every single God damn time. The Reader leaves the family (literally 90% of the time it's the rose family even though its completely against their nature and who they are), the reader becomes "Powerful" and "OP", the reader meets Ozfuck in every single scenario which is the first episode of the series, half the time the reader is forced to go and the other half he just accepts it, the reader meets his abusive family due to them lying to Ozshit, Reader beats the fuck out of them (but it's mostly Tai), filler happens, and then the reader accepts the family's apologies because "Harem Reasons" and "I need to progress the plot so fuck it". It's all the same process, if your lucky, the author might actually do it right and demonstrate the actual effects of abuse, but like everyone here has said, they are mostly a diamond in the rough.

[@psychocrysis2]

Is it just RWBY or is Abused and Neglected Male Reader a common character on wattpad in general?

[@demanic6159]

@@psychocrysis2 its in most fanfics surrounding different shows/games, like High School DxD, Naruto, and creepypastas.

[@kovidarthehedgehog4066]

@@demanic6159 Don’t forget one: OP!Badass!Monster!Vengeful!Male Reader x EVERY girls in MHA,Highschool DXD,Naruto and etc./Multiverse harem Dang,he just wanted many male protaginists to suffer.

[@xanvoir7693]

The "Harem Reasons" scare me, like that’s literally incest

[@hannesnilsson3897]

This has so much edge it could be used as a murder weapon

[@Anotherdiego7484]

I can only think two things about this, one: this was the must stupidiest thing you have read, and you're dying of laugh. Two: you love it and it breaks your heart that ending, that makes you cry like you have never done it.

[@thefunnynamehere266]

The third option is the pain of seeing something gruesome and wanting to vomit and can’t

[@adamtaurus5380]

Dude, that's edgier than me.

[@yorhano9typesaka9s52]

"He is the Edgelord. His world is so bleak. He is the Edgelord. He will never conform. He is the Edgelord. Edgelord!" "I'm edgy as fuck!"

[@dankbudew4830]

And he gets his own harem, too. Fuck, at this rate, he’s Kirito

[@sauceboi5965]

@@dankbudew4830 edgy kirito

[@fiendish9474]

@@sauceboi5965 so SAO abridged kirito

[@anidiot1012]

@@fiendish9474 no. It is the abridged abridged kirito

[@mclekfkeiwdisidido6858]

Plot twist: They were never cruel to Neglected and abused male reader he just exaggerated what happens to him

[@Bagelsmoker1945]

i like to imagine that n.a.m reader is a psychopath who’s everybody is afraid of him. Like for example: Blaire was sarcastic when she asked the children who they think should get adopted, the reason the kids choose n.a.m.r Because they were actually afraid his going to kill them someday.

[@mostlyjovial]

I'm sorry. But how did this wind up in my recommendations? The edge on this story is physically carving into time space. At least the voice over makes this incredibly entertaining.

[@mikedanielespeja6128]

The edge was Judgement Cut End levels of sharp.

[@pinoiman223]

Not even a minute in and my ears just started bleeding... i think its cause im wearing headphones...

[@Sax_Banana]

this reeks of "my immortal"

[@TheAvgCrusader]

I'm sorry... *What?*

[@Tom-ds3ox]

How should I put it...fanfiction "writers" love to give characters overly tragic backstory which they have instead of real personality. Cause who gives a shit about personality when you have edge?

[@pizzavictory113]

Tom 101 trust me my guy it suddenly became a trend To make these reader inserts I should know I’m a wattpad writer....That’s pretty lazy

[@joeda900]

@@pizzavictory113 As a Wattpad writer too *I understand your feelings*

[@vincenttumblin5621]

@@pizzavictory113 @Joeda 900 sweet, I'm a wattpad writer myself, I wasn't expecting to come across other wattpad writers on youtube

[@dorianbarnes9013]

I don’t even knowXD

[@wannabememelord4607]

"little raven that visits me" *shows a fucking plane* art, or at least superior art to the shit he's reading us

[@IggyBitz]

RWBY Wattpad in a nutshell An op gary Stue with edgy past who would somehow end up with a harem

[@landonkam6727]

Most sane rwby fanfic, trust me, I've been addicted to this shit for years.

[@romanemperor3160]

I'm happy that I have never reincarnated in to a edgy person.

[@alphalightning00frost67]

Above you is adam lmao

[@Enjoyer_of_many_things]

Abused and neglected male reader looks like a Ganshin impact villain

[@Wingedking2002]

Miabreau studios : favorite burning rose story. Me : not really it was actually quite pathetic. * playing banjo theme*

[@CryoDaVA]

UCN reference lmao

[@RisingCrossroadsStudios]

I clicked on this video to have a good adaptation of a fanfiction but when I saw what the fan fictions name is I immediately slept myself thinking it was just a hallucination

[@Miriromi13]

"Open this door right now!" Girl, the door is locked from your side, he couldn't open the door.

[@lord_planc]

I'm dying when the whole video plays, I've never felt this much pain in my life Thanks

[@walterbarr3978]

"OPEN THE DOOR RIGHT NOW OR I'LL BREAK IT DOWN!" Didn't... Didn't you lock it? From the outside? How tf is he supposed to get it open lol

[@SlayHER-21]

This sounds like a Chaotic Neutral Rogue's backstory.

[@call_me_cayde9614]

I remember reading this as my first introduction to fanfiction 3 years ago and this did not age like fine wine

[@jaysonevans9107]

I shed tears -of laughter

[@aisudracov3314]

Thank God for the bits of humor you added. I couldn't handle all this edge otherwise.

[@rhysfangsrud7365]

So I’ve never seen the show so I don’t know how inconsistent this is to it but a friend recommended this to me because it was amazing, and I’m just going to say this. I’m crying right now this $hit is priceless. I’m laughing so hard my sides hurt.

[@dankbudew4830]

Oh DEAR GOD, JUST BLAST THAT LINKIN PARK SONG ALREADY!!!!!!!! 🤦🏻‍♀️😫😩

[@dorianbarnes9013]

Judith Rios *CRAWLING IN MY SKIN*

[@gamejunky3040]

I prefer five finger death punch but that works too.

[@k0mm4nd4nt]

​@@dorianbarnes9013 THESE WOUNDS THEY WILL NOT HEAL

[@gregorygrice5795]

This story was heartbreaking and I can't believe you didn't take it seriously! By the way, who names their kid Abused and Neglected Male Reader?

[@gamejunky3040]

People who don’t even bother with a name generator.

[@WanderingRonin509]

I mean yeah if you're going to go that far with a backstory and character you might as well name them

[@gregorygrice5795]

@@harleyengland3914 and how is that?

[@adamunown]

I can't tell if this is sarcasm or not.

[@inquisitorsteve1429]

@@gamejunky3040 I name him Octavius Lesly Jennifer

[@TheKazuma410P]

15:57 "...crawling on my back" Megalovania jokes never get old.

[@AwkwardHypernerd413]

Thanks for adding persona music into this, makes this whole thing 10x better than it actually is.

[@KuletXCore]

Can we guys get an F in the chat for Y/N? -- 🦀🦀🦀Y/N IS GONE!🦀🦀🦀

[@Grithicaustere]

How did they soundproof a room with a basic latch window why did they put him in a room with a basic latch window

[@azurestarseliph5926]

I've had Azure's face at the end nearly the whole day when I read this

[@yourverybestfriend1263]

Your Yang voice sounds like Shaggy. I love it.

[@KuletXCore]

Okay. This is Epic! Thank you for this comedy, Mira. EDIT: Use me as a "Release Part 2" button!

[@thefrozenwarrior2159]

My Immortal: Oh, you're approaching me?

[@hippoguyman8333]

I’m surprised I didn’t see a chapter dedicated to abused and neglected characters whole description, and their harem.

[@Jackson-ub1uv]

I love how the picture used for Summer is of her just radiating pureness.

[@itscutaru]

You know, with the amount of 'Neglected/Abused' rwby stories i've read myself so far, i thought i had immunity to this stuff...but it proved to be SO much worse out loud.

[@swarmofhungrydeathclaws]

I love how I just found your channel and am immediately getting reminded of this. Jesus Wattpad was really somethin

[@narvaisthequiet7988]

I like how yang ask him to open the door but its lock on her side so she can open it.

[@SuperBoyboys]

In listening to this, I think I started developing cuts on the inside of my ear from how absolutely edgy the writing is. Excellent reading, 10/10.

[@ShadowBlade972]

I came into this expecting to rag on the some prime cut cringe; only for you guys to do it for me. This was honestly an incredible ride thanks to you.

[@DragonNyah]

"Ok, I'll just watch this until it gets too cringe" I said this 5 seconds ago. I'm leaving now.

[@fritz_schlorm]

this is 18 minutes that i will never get back

[@lordfriedrick7911]

The Edge is powerful on this one...

[@Bagelsmoker1945]

If you think this is edgy then you haven’t read RWBY dark

[@myojoryu9127]

I’m gonna be honest here your voice is beautiful 👍