She Was a 'Personal' Slave Before Becoming a Human's Wife | Sci-Fi | HFY Story

[@Sci-Fantasy]

Enjoy listening!

[@rayc.1396]

Very good, reminds me of someone I know. Thank yo!

[@487shawntower4]

Liked this a great deal, your stories seem a great deal better fleshed out in the YT genre!

[@Conn653]

The addition of the music was a nice touch. However, it was a bit too loud. The story was the key element, slightly overshadowed by the music. I've produced and directed a stage play about a radio show. I didn't let the music, a key part, try to be the star. It was a supporting roll in the play. 🙂 I recommend a 'proof-read' prior to recording so you can properly get the pauses in the right places, not running things together, as you often do.

[@kellywilkins8043]

This one had a good message…

[@keyper555]

Liked the story but hated the ending, I feel he did a great justice to the worlds and he should be regarded as a hero not a criminal, by the time he got out his daughter would be 25 yrs old and he missed her growing up and Aris had to raise her alone and lonely without him by her side, rewrite the ending please cause this one really was not good.

[@Morosoph_deLore]

Twin suns of Earth??

[@williamcarney8119]

Fantasy far in the future. Could be. A rouge star gets captured becoming a binary star system.

[@LiveFreeOrDieDH]

I guess Dave Bowman managed to ignite Jupiter. Just don't try going to Europa...

[@otravis676]

Not quite sure I'm a fan of the background music

[@MichaelSchisler-jx3uc]

Video at the begaining was great a few more video seens of video would have really been super, nice story, good work clean read thak you for your editing ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A. BABY

[@gamarjoba]

What can be said about super heroes who willingly submit to man's justice? If it was me, I don't know if I could do that.

[@TheRealThodin]

I liked the addition of the "battle music" and the Draconians "growling". When you get more subs and more $$$ you need to hire a speech to text editor (or just leave out the subtitles). The mistakes are too frequent and bad enough to be both distracting and comical. Nice work on avoiding AI shortcomings... no "dot dot dot" pronounced, etc. Speaking of AI. After the AI spits out the story you need to word search for a few overused AI words and pick different appropriate adjectives (palpable, acrid, jolt of electricity when they touched, etc.) This will give your channel the variety all the other lack. :D

[@pekkajarvinen69]

This is true, diverse phrases are way more comfortabe to listen/read. Most used phrases search is a good advice imo.

[@richardcox6935]

BUMMER! He should have received a shorter sentence.

[@KingJarreth]

I'm enjoying the stories, but you accidentally left in a correction response. Sounds like you used Gemini? Do a transcript search for the term "I apologize for the oversight"

[@VikingShipExplorer]

Sorry, but I couldn't listen to this one. To much background noise with the music and extra voices taking over the story. It was hard to focus on the main story line. Please re edit this one, but without all the background noise.

[@Jacal19]

Talk to much !

[@DariaJay]

[@nomerc3608]

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