We Were Sent to Find an Ancient Weapon Called Human ( Part 1 to 11) | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story

[@RobNobelo]

Apple banana orange... lol This is now my safe phrase.

[@goodcitizen64]

Great series but the AI has some issues that could be easily corrected with a human actually proof reading the stories before releasing!

[@avanap8096]

Seriously? I've blocked all others while not great. Not bad!

[@Scot_WestTexas]

Yup. I’m outta here

[@nightwind6515]

I think this quite bad actually. Why not just use human narrator which is leaps and bounds better? A rhetorical question...

[@avanap8096]

@@nightwind6515 statement!

[@kimwilliams722]

What is the matter with you people do you think that everybody is so sadly ingrained in perverse behavior that we enjoy such ignorant rotten profanity it's stupid and seriously annoying please stop it

[@ihspstanktribe]

Argoll and Tic-Toc's banter is freaking hilarious! 😂

[@kelvunmedina90]

Im just glad that this series is still alive and kicking. Had to go to Reddit just to make sure

[@michaelturner3922]

The only thing about ALL of these stories is NOBODY proof listens or edits just completely reliant on the AI to do all the work maybe lack of motivation beyond pumping out more "content" I mean the simplist thing or really the most obvious upgrade to put "you" above the rest would be proof read/listen and a simple edit.

[@TheDingo80]

Thank you! Glad someone else had the same observation I did.

[@XpaceTrue]

I agree. Channels like this automate or at least streamline their creation process so it happens quickly, cheaply and with little effort. It's all about the algorithm, views and ad revenue. At least this channels gives credit and links the story. Many channels don't even bother doing that much. Some creators even release content on multiple accounts in case they get too many strikes or otherwise shut down.

[@TimothyLipinski]

Great Video ! The "Humans" do not need an earth style planet to open a solar system ! What is needed is an Ort Cloud for water (H2O) and an asteroid belt for metals and other material ! The materials will be used to build Space Colonies ! Small bicycle wheel Colonies a mile in diameter with an inner tube that is four hundred feet in diameter will support a population of ten thousand "humans" ! Then larger colonies can be built of pairs of tin cans that are four miles in diameter and twenty miles long with three panels of glass alternating with three panels of land area ! The large Colonies will hold a population of millions of "Humans" ! tjl

[@josephgauthier7797]

great series. really went all out with the multiple characters awsome job even if the AI had issues still awsome series well done thank you👏🤙

[@noelhaugh1]

Frfff🎉🎉rrr😢

[@Kappa760]

Yeah i like it🎉

[@imperatorja]

Any resemblance to Master Chiff and Cortona is not intentional

[@adarkwind4712]

Lol

[@NM-tl6pe]

When you order Master Chief from Temu.

[@mistercomment1622]

This happens in a lot of SciFi stories

[@iamanidiot8624]

Was looking for this comment 😂

[@bigal2876]

I would love to have a screen saver with all these pictures, or lock screens.

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

They are pretty cool

[@cataclysmunknown7110]

Trying to figure out if his armor us more sleek, like Mjolnir armor, or more Ultalitarian, bulky, and oppressive like tacticus armor. Seems more like Mjolnir armor to me atm. Also Lizra is adorable. Argue and tic tac remind me of a barbarian quarreling with his wizard companion.

[@LiveFreeOrDieDH]

Based on the description, I think you should google "Halo Spartan" for what the armor would look like.

[@cataclysmunknown7110]

@@LiveFreeOrDieDH that's Mjolnir armor. That's what I was thinking

[@LiveFreeOrDieDH]

@@cataclysmunknown7110 Ah, right. My knowledge of Halo lore is somewhat rusty.

[@cataclysmunknown7110]

@@LiveFreeOrDieDH no, but thank you for confirming that. I appreciate it.

[@davio8605]

at last a story where the humans aren,t the greatest, most moral species in existance.... thankyou my friend

[@XpaceTrue]

There's nothing wrong with stories like that. It's all good. Variety makes life more interesting and everyone is entitled to their own tastes. But... this does *not* match with the definition of the HFY (Humans, Fuok Yeah!) genre. And that makes the title of this video pure clickbait. As long as video creators get away with using click-baity titles without complaint or consequence, the more often it happens... and the more *frustrating* it becomes for *everyone* to find the type of content viewers want.

[@armadillotoe]

I would like a story in which humans are the best and worst. Reality is too complicated it seems. I would also enjoy a story with an average human, not a genetically enhanced, ex-supersoldier

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

​@@armadillotoe How about a fast food worker? Goes all French fries scooper on someone

[@heraldbriones9740]

I can't imagine what elyrian specie's looks like in the visual looks human but what actually looks like

[@michaelpettersson4919]

I keep imagine cats.

[@hamzazeroug4851]

2:15:58 APPLE A BANANA ORANGE 😂😂

[@leralu198525]

"I remain here because I choose to, You remain alive because i choose, am I understood?" pure effing fire line

[@gwolfstahl]

Is his human partner - Masterchief?! 😮

[@brandonheckman6004]

This was awesome I really hope you continue it with a like whatever the next part would start at 12:00 and up

[@maryy1370]

The basic logic of Zate is incredibly faulty. I'm only at 1:10:00 and - even with real world bias - I can think of a completely different scenario. Zate says that "humans" originate from the same system, despite that seeming impossible? Scenario: Elyrians created the humans as weapons of war and treated them as complete fodder. Eventually, humans escaped their control and struck back (Skynet style). The Elyrians couldn't win against them and decided to flee the system to try to escape. No one likes admitting that they did abominable things, so the elyrians themselves deleted the information on humans, maybe to make themselves look innocent in the event. Afterall, most people are more sympathetic to refugees rather than war criminals. Later, *some* elyrians - knowingly or unknowingly - either gave the Core information on humans or maybe the Core found mentions of them in data files the elyrians had missed destroying? Maybe they were able to find some humans that had been left in cold storage and the Core used them sparingly as a covert ops team - but didn't know how to make more. That would explain why the Core, despite apparently having had *some* Humans to do missions, are not using them NOW even with there being a succession and cold war. That would explain why the Core wants so much resources and what their goal is: they're trying to recreate humans. The captain even SAID that the Core was trying to find a way to create an easy source of soldiers/war fodder. The elyrians could have done as much as they could to hide their actions and have deliberately made sure that no new generations knew about their species crimes. And after the Core found out about Humans, I can see them doing their best to destroy all other data about them in order to monopolize the knowledge and try to recreate them in secret. This also explains why some elyrians are recruited to the Inner Ring. Who else would you get to work on recreating humans other than the ones who had originally made them? This makes a heck of a lot more sense than thinking that Humans (a people created to be little more than living weapons and who have no distinct society or independence) somehow - what, destroyed the elysians, then got ahead of them and became the Core and established a whole hidden civilization BEFORE the elyrians got there? If humans had any kind of willing presence in the Core, there would be more of them. If there were more of them, then this Outer Frontier could never have broken off. Zate is an idiot. So much for them being smart or logical. Yes, that's not how the story goes (since I've now gotten further), but it's a good possible scenario.

[@ronniebentley5847]

Damn you not have a real life?

[@maryy1370]

@@ronniebentley5847 I weep at the state of school systems that have turned people off of comprehensive thinking.

[@lordomacron3719]

That’s the danger of pure logic. Faulty premises lead to false conclusions.

[@sandwiches-o3f]

​@@maryy1370When I was in school, I was too busy doing real work to write a thesis about a silly little story on youtube 😂😂😂

[@Fluffy2Buffy]

Yet here you are...​@@sandwiches-o3f

[@benmaxwell3808]

Ensigns do not out rank captains

[@kingbillycokebottle5484]

Maybe captain becomes a non commissioned rank, like tacking it above WO1.

[@michaelpettersson4919]

@@kingbillycokebottle5484 If you are referring to their treatment when they arrive to the new home world at 1.56h I have no trouble with THAT part. Referring to the commander of a ship as the Captain is normal to begin with. When it comes to relaying orders from higher up a Private can give orders to a General, believe me, I have done Guard duty. And of course, the line of command is important. You are not supposed to take orders from someone that just outrank you unless they are in your command chain. That is a Hollowood idea where you can enter a military facility simply by dressing up as a high-ranking officer. That part was drilled into us in training when I did my mandatory service in Sweden in the eighties.

[@kingbillycokebottle5484]

@@michaelpettersson4919 yeah that makes sense, but a captain of a ship, by virtue of responsibility, automatically out ranks and ensign. I had it in my head captain the rank not the title. Thank god I'm Australian/British and have the good ol title of skipper and rank of captain. Rank vs title was always a pain, like the company sergeant major isn't a sergeant major, he's the sergeant in-charge of a company. Hearing captain makes me think rank not title, as the title in proper english as the convicts intended is skipper.

[@michaelpettersson4919]

@@kingbillycokebottle5484 At this point they were OFF the ship as well.

[@davidturner4824]

Great story, very interesting. Wonder what happened to Humans like us and our civilization?

[@seventhson27]

IT REALLY IRRITATES ME when I get interewsted in these stories. Then just get left twisting in the wind.

[@Agg1E91]

"inWEgo crew!" That is certainly one way to pronounce it.

[@scinanisern9845]

So then, the only thing accomplished by going to that world was getting threatened, tracked, hacked and ripped apart to escape it? Complete waste of time. They send out all kinds of search teams to find human and then it turns out they know where lots of humans are and when this one arrives they harass him tag him and send him on his way??? Jeez. In the beginning... the end.

[@tonycapri2608]

Lizra seems like a small squirrel or something, but we still get pretty women pictures!!! Also why the lists of names - havent got the memo??

[@ernestmac13]

The mosern looking bridge he was on; is the Bay Bridge, which connects the cities of Oakland, Treasure Island, and Sam Francisco. The Bay Bridhe is actually two bridges connected by an island, via a tunnel that goes through the island. I was born and raised on the largest island inside the San Francisco Bay, called Alameda which used to be home to Alameda Naval Air Station, which is still being reincorporated. I hope to move back to Alameda; it's about 2 miles wide and 4 miles long, has some 80,000 residents, and is a great place to live.

[@charlespipes9288]

I bet it was the "brown coats"

[@adarkwind4712]

"He'll come willingly" . . . . Yeah . . . . . F*** that.

[@frankrichards8973]

Even at a court martial ensigns and commanders speak respectfully to captains.

[@ricosuave4465]

I love that Tic-Tac is voiced by the voice of Ben Shapiro! LOL

[@johntheherbalistg8756]

Aggressive Ben Shapiro 😂

[@sandrarruhl492]

What universe does an ensign out rank a captain? One where the ensign is so loyal to their orders they must be counter ordered by even higher BRASS. Remember, they were biologically modified.

[@atlasjunky7677]

Lol the beginning where he sort of just punches it and they act like it was a planned thing not a impulse thing lol

[@RJ-zi8hw]

Story is good so far but the AI keeps changing the voice of the human and it’s a bit confusing.

[@tamatirogerson6421]

Brilliant 😸👌 thank u so much 😸 more of this story plzzzzz!! 1 in 10 hfy stories are awesome, the rest are lazily written plotless crap

[@lunarwrase]

Did human just become James Earle Jones?

[@DEATH-THE-GOAT]

Yes, you did

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

​@@DEATH-THE-GOAT And Vader is in the house!

[@ventusvero4484]

The valley girl voice kills me 2:30, she sounds so annoyed.

[@etherealpast3984]

I love stories like this and it's frustrating that words, punctuation, and grammar are wrong. It takes you out of the immersion. I volunteer myself as a potential voice actor. Male, deep, and magnetic. Not unpleasant to listen to and better at reading than writing. Id love to read some stories like this to those who are willing to listen.

[@AliceGutierrez-x4u]

Taylor Kevin Lewis Cynthia Lopez Anthony

[@moanawalters945]

Came down

[@qRevengerr]

More parts coming up? I sa that the op had more chapters made and this storyline is amazing!

[@SeducingJackel]

I enjoyed this one, very good, would have been more immersive if it wasn't for the characters voices changing multiple times, a little continuity would go along way. I have more questions.. is there, will there be more? Thanks for the story!

[@halo12390]

Them aliens sound sus

[@kingbillycokebottle5484]

Did anyone notice chapter two? THE ALIENS BECAME SOUTHERN! YEEEEEEEEEE BOYYAHH! WE ARE SO BACK! SPACE CONFEDERACY FOREVER!

[@kingbillycokebottle5484]

I hates de space yankee, I hates de space union and I hates de space eagle! Tune of dixie Oh way out there in the outer stations lesser races all know their places. Sing along, and carry on March along, to space dixie For in the outer reaches Girls as sweet as peaches Come along and take us to the merry beaches Come along come along sing along t'space Dixie. Oh I was I was in Dixie In space! In space! Where we're the race that owns the place In space! In space! Space Dixie. Away away away out back space Dixie!!!

[@MillDonald-g3p]

Garcia Matthew Smith Brenda Brown Angela

[@01100101011100100111]

"A Short Sci-Fi Story" two hours and forty minutes long How long would a Medium Sci-Fi Story be, then?

[@StrangeUncle01]

Hundred or less hours. Some of the stuff r/HFY runs to hundreds of pages of 40,000 word long chapters.

[@lostinthought38]

There's a really good one I sat through a few months back, the new species or something and it was around 8 hours or so if I remember 😂 im waiting on the next chapter so probably another 8 hours to complete 😀

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

​@@lostinthought38 Sounds good. Can you give more info so I can find it?

[@scinanisern9845]

Apple a banana orange???

[@mistercomment1622]

Apple a Banana Orange? WTF?

[@kaymynkaliel4141]

I was wondering how you were able to generate multiple voices and have them in sync to create a conversation that almost sounds real. If you can please explain the process of doing this would really help me out.

[@WinterWeaver]

"Apple a Banana Orange"

[@slipperylordtouchme7921]

Yeah I saw that two. Wierd

[@keithfr1]

Did they steal gould,from stargate

[@armadillotoe]

And Darth from star wars.

[@HyperionStudios]

Don't forget Halo

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

​@@armadillotoe Yeah Darth metal box?

[@RobertAnderson-g2k]

If this is AI, I don't think we have much to worry about.

[@IceFiction404]

SOrry 😄Ai will get better haha

[@jorgebarrientos7726]

Its weird hearing teryl rothery as an AIs voice

[@NguyễnAnh-w9x]

❤

[@robertmccracken6930]

In what universe does an ensign out rank a Captain? Lost me right there not going any further. That ruined the whole thing

[@JesseBurtone]

Hernandez Jose Lewis Shirley Robinson Linda

[@akoni024]

Part 12?

[@cephalonrevan2546]

Apple a banana orange!

[@genergoebel]

Will there be more?

[@PrimalsTrucking]

Is the human a spartan? 😂

[@bobbywinicher9080]

Thats what i though also😂

[@DuyKhanh-rt4gn]

hay wa

[@ihspstanktribe]

Ok, im seriously hating Zate right now.

[@whitehazegruntz250]

21:20 they where not also unknowingly ejected sense the other set knowingly was. How u worded it means both sides didnt know and thats your slip up . As a viewer its my job to correct u sense u can get paid from adds u should be corrected

[@RobertStewart-i3m]

Okay what?

[@HoanNguyen-uc9zk]

OK . Thanks

[@bigtingz8440]

Where can I find the rest of the story ?

[@blakekratzer407]

The audio sounds like it was mixed by Tommy Wiseau

[@lhvikingp2436]

Part 12??

[@dragonshoarddesign3094]

Some of the a I voices you used were gsome of them are very robotic and don't know how to read

[@dutchboy9273]

😢. Lousy AI ruined the story

[@XnndjehdhkNxndjhds]

Gonzalez Carol Clark Elizabeth Clark Michael

[@NaimSonkan]

Davis Daniel Hernandez Daniel Martin Jessica

[@VictoriaCruz-f7r]

Lee Lisa Jones Cynthia Taylor Scott

[@SvhwCsnsj]

Brown Gary White Christopher Gonzalez Jennifer

[@dylanlarson278]

Why does the term apple banana orange keep popping up?

[@DarrellHolmes-q3u]

Davis Lisa Rodriguez Cynthia Clark Carol

[@Kong840]

God that A.I. is awful. Seemed interesting but couldn’t get past the sound. Just pay the couple hundred bucks to have someone read it.

[@kangdeplo5179]

Ok

[@RobertAnderson-g2k]

Good story, crappy AI. Does anyone proof before releasing?

[@IceFiction404]

Sorry

[@AnthonyCole-j7q]

Wilson Charles Martinez Carol Anderson Carol

[@BloomerPandora]

Johnson Lisa Garcia Angela Jones Donald

[@leyphon7566]

Honestly getting tired of the ai voices. Would rather a real person read it but without seeing that person's face constantly like in a lot of other stories on yt.

[@joelceda3500]

Try Starbound HFY, they read and voice-act the stories and the stories themselves are in my understanding human-written. Or at least human-posted. One of the better channels around.

[@Orbitaakter]

Hall Kimberly Jones Nancy Hernandez Sandra

[@JacksonBandons-b5l]

Martinez John Perez Matthew White Karen

[@richardlindley2821]

Story good. The flip flop of different voices playing the same character is horrible, absolutely ruined it.

[@richardlindley2821]

Also voices completely not matching a character too, ruined it. But still, good story.

[@armadillotoe]

I think it is a shame that soon AI will make intellectual study, imagination, and the self-discipline to learn obsolete.

[@archivis]

O(

[@mistbehaved185]

The ai story teller here is bad...

[@luxembourg7653]

Terrible Siri and LA brat voices 👎

[@pauls7956]

Voice acting sucks

[@sproket168]

Shit

[@charleslamontagne983]

This story is pathetic

[@kingmasterlord]

ai

[@williamderro9600]

Voice actors are terrible

[@bernieozzie7480]

AI

[@kingmasterlord]

what voice actors?

[@GamezGlitchZ]

They found MasterChief 😂

[@gustawmajewski9911]

This sounds horrible

[@DrGeoffreyReed]

...glacing...? AI sucks

[@HubbardKirk]

Martinez Barbara Davis Barbara Davis Carol

[@WardLance-q9q]

Davis Linda Garcia Frank Martinez Christopher

[@GregaryUpton-q3b]

Hall Cynthia Jones Ronald Anderson Elizabeth

[@MelissaPerez-d5g]

Walker Scott Anderson Ruth Jones Sharon

[@AdriannaGarlock-x5q]

Harris Mary Perez David Jones Christopher