Simon Armitage: 'Remains' Mr Bruff Analysis

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"probably armed, possibly not' this I think is repeated not only because of the cyclical structure of the soldier struggling to escape the trauma, but also to remind the audience of the uncertainty the soldier had, which led to this downfall. When it is repeated the second time, there is the realisation that he knew he wasn't sure if the looter was armed and is going through the emotions of 'what ifs?', but the only thing he was sure about was the aftermath of it all, he can recall the looter being hit a dozen times. It also heightens the fact that he'd be constantly questioning if the looter was 'probably armed, possibly not'.

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I also noticed that 'probably armed' and 'possibly not' are both composed of 4 syllables, suggesting there was an equal chance that the man was armed or unarmed. This is juxtaposed by the division of probability between 'probably' and 'possibly', implying that the military had conditioned the soldiers to assume the worst and shoot without certainty, highlighting the complete disregard for waste of human life

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Through the symbolism of western world being attacked through "raiding a bank" and the bank being a symbol for a capitalist society is Armitage's way of criticising the cause for war; unethical causes such as money is more important than human life.

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Valid point, but not really fitting for the theme of the poem

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did you get Tissues? xD

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flushing is also an army term used to describe forcing the enemy from their cover or base using grenades, smoke, etc. which relates to the line “dug in behind enemy lines”.

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The enjambment of 'Three of a kind all letting fly, and i swear I see every round as it rips through his life' could also be a link to the fact that even after the soldier has had his "break" or has left the army he can't forget that moment as the enjambment continues after the break

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There's also an emptiness at the core of the 'action'

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another idea for the word "remains" could be to stay , to remain : the memory and distress of the looter remains with him

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You could say in the poem that there is a volta or a shift in tone around "end of story, except not really". In the first half of the poem, whilst the soldier is having flashbacks of the whole event, he uses colloquial, casual language, and in stanza 2 attempts to share the blame for the looter's death by emphasising the presence of the other soldiers. This could be interpreted by us by him attempting to avoid blame, or possibly having to push his emotions away due to his position as a soldier in war. However, after the volta, the soldier is describing the after-effects of the event, clearly shown by the quote "end of story, except not really". Here the soldier is alone with his own guilt, and it continually plays on his mind disrupting normal actions like when he goes to "Sleep" or when he has a "Dream". His remorse and struggle are shown through the use of plosive consonants and sibilance, e.g. "left for dead in some distant, sun-stunned, sand-smothered land. In the volta there is a shift in blame, and in the final couplet that is highlighted by the juxtaposition of the first person singular "my" and the third person singular "his", emphasising the soldier's feeling of lone responsibility for what happened to the looter.

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I think the poem is similar with 'The Extract from the Prelude' since it talks about doing/seeing something and afterwards having non-stop nightamers about it.

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Yes it was really useful, I have an assesment tomorrow and it’s about comparing now i know more about remains

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It could also be commented on that at the end of the poem, Armitage juxtaposes the soldier and his victim. "His bloody life in my bloody hands." to convey the soldiers lingering connection to the killing which haunts him. "his" "my" It shows that the two are destined to carry out their remaining time linked in contrast with each other. The soldier forms a metaphorical image of his victim's, "life" even in death. Suggesting that the soldier cannot forget the horrors of war. Stuck in contrast with the conflict of his killing, it is inescapable.

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"his bloody life in my bloody hands" could possibly be an intertextual link to Macbeth perhaps linking the way Macbeth goes insane from guilt just like the speaker after the Volta especially, with his PTSD supported by the quote "the drink and the drugs won't flush him out". Macbeth also deteriorates more once he is alone after Lady Macbeth killed herself just like the speaker being alone and distanced from the war zone. Another contribution to this is the mention of "sleep" and "dream" which is a key theme in Macbeth relating to the death!

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making notes to come back l8: 6:30 repetition of soemone du else 7:28 shift in end of change ‘my’ 8:34 embankment broken man soldier came after dying

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The discarded nature of the body draws parallels to how the narrator is ignored and simply tossed back into the world

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could you say for ‘flush him out’ that the soldier is referring to flushing the version of himself that killed the looter out because he probably feels like a different person at home to how he did when he killed the looter? I would use it as a second perspective to also flushing out the looter from his mind.

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It's an interesting idea but the issue is that the 'him' in question is clearly established as the looter: 'and he bursts again through the doors of the bank. / Sleep, and he’s probably armed, and possibly not. / Dream, and he’s torn apart by a dozen rounds. / And the drink and the drugs won’t flush him out -

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11:41 : Language Starts

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Not sure if this is any good but I thought that the use of in media res automatically throws the reader off balance and straight into the action - thus shocking them. This mimics the mental state of the soldier with PTSD, his brain is consistently throwing him into violent recollections of his past.

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This is really pushing it but could the use of the phrase "three of a kind" imply a sense of objectification within the army. It almost suggests that they aren't individual people and instead just a mould of what the army has morphed them into being; in essence they're instruments used by authorities without regards for their mental stability

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I believe that remains means that his mind remains in iraq

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I have a PPE on Wednesday and I need to compare the language and structure of both Bayonet Charge and Remains, can someone help me?

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