"CASTL FALL" (Haunted Gaming)

[@TheGreatGoobins]

Hey there everyone, Selto854 here, or the creator of this pasta. Wow! I made Haunted Gaming! Somehow! In all honesty, I think this is probably the worst pasta I've ever made, and I'm surprised Muta liked it so much. It totally blew me away at the end when he had kind words to say about it. The beginning made me think, "Awesome, Muta's gonna tear it up like that sorry story deserves!" But... he didn't. So, if you're reading this, Mr. Mutahar, thank you very much for reading my story. Thank you doubly as much for making it a video! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! This totally made my day! I'm sorry it was so cringy! :) Also, everyone's comments are incredible, heh.

[@jon-su8ic]

It's a nice day outsiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii- wouldn't you agree?

[@gluup305]

+Selto854 It didn't make cringe, or roll my eyes out of their sockets so that on it's own makes it better than about 70% of other creepypastas lol. But I think the one really fatal flaw in this story was that it was too cautious in trying to stay grounded in reality, too much to the point that it felt nothing really happened at all. While it's good to restrain yourself from writing something completely ludicrous to where you completely break your audience's sense of disbelief, and maybe becoming a laughing stock while at it, if you don't take any risks at all your story could suffer a much worse fate in being boring. Hope my criticism helps a little, and good luck with your future stories!

[@luuiv9518]

+Selto854 if youre the actual writer, then props. you wrote a semi good pasta.

[@shademeadows2424]

;D its acually awesome, nothing supernatural (not on the face) ;) loved it

[@schmooferino6441]

Hey, um, do you have any protips on creepypasta making?

[@SomeOrdinaryGamers]

Share your spooky RPG creations here! www.reddit.com/r/SomeOrdinaryGmrs/comments/43h1d1/castl_fall_haunted_gaming/

[@glowstone6448]

+SomeOrdinaryGamers O to spoopy fer meh lol

[@Gigahilton]

I'm spooked solid!

[@viktorreznov4803]

I made a couple games. (using Click Team Fusion 2.5) They Are Complete Crap But I Had Fun Creating Them.

[@redlinrangerBrony]

+SomeOrdinaryGamers someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Lavender_Town_Beta_Tone_(Lavender_town_syndrome_Sequel)

[@redlinrangerBrony]

+SomeOrdinaryGamers do this story next someordinarygamers.wikia.com/wiki/Lavender_Town_Beta_Tone_(Lavender_town_syndrome_Sequel)

[@caliburnabsolute8517]

As an avid user of RPG Maker, I can tell you that there's one flaw with this story that's incredibly noticeable: The author said he had RPG Maker VX, but the character faces used are edits of those made with the character generator, which wasn't added until VX Ace. I suppose it isn't too important, but it certainly stuck out to me.

[@EBroxas72]

+Zero_Excalibur Ok so I was not the only one that noticed. *I say this while working on A game with rpg maker vx ace while listening to this story so maybe Thats what made it super obvious to me.* How ever I really like that a creepy pasta used the character generator to make some thing spooky. I find some of the things you can make with it super unnerving.

[@danfischer4713]

+Zero_Excalibur It stuck out to me, as well. . . as I have been using RPG maker since on the PlayStation XD

[@TheGreatGoobins]

+Zero_Excalibur Aw jeez, I must've overlooked that. Thanks for pointing it out to me! I originally considered using VX Ace, but then I wouldn't be able to work in the fact I made the game when I was super young. I didn't know that VX didn't have the character generator! :)

[@BabzaiWWP]

+Zero_Excalibur ace didn't exist around when "he was 10"

[@danfischer4713]

ƁⱥƄƶǟį That is what he was saying stuck out, he wasn't using Ace (and couldn't have been), yet Ace assets were used.

[@Fodimin]

*Hears RPG maker Well, it's time for some low quality shit right here.

[@thechozopandash]

Hey! There's some good shit made with rpg maker, like mother cognitive dissonance and off by mortis ghost! Dooooooooont just dismiss the software completely!

[@archfeymirth]

Eh, this wasn't actually bad. I can't see this becoming something famous.. but certainly nothing bad. It was grounded enough in reality that I can actually see this happening to someone.

[@danfischer4713]

+Fodimin “SirFodiminX” Layton Actually, RPG Maker isn't bad software or quality at all XP If you know how to use the engine, you can make some really amazing things. And pretty great games have come from it XP

[@teisukone342]

Quintessence: The Blighted Venom? To The Moon? Ib? Low quality....

[@shrimp7216]

When it said its a nice day outside look at the face... Spoopy

[@ryngak]

6:30 legit got spooped there, nice editing Muta!

[@lewbert7930]

E isn't dgy nough for this crpypasta.

[@mylifeisameme9643]

+Dank Frank Cory In the House is my favorite anime

[@CEORobbo]

+AYY LMAO you're 2 years behind pal

[@gortstar]

+AYY LMAO Hey, you should buy the "Jokes Stop Being Funny After The 1000000th Time Starter Pack" it will really help you be funny

[@mylifeisameme9643]

Gabe Newell Metal Gear? Psycho Mantis? k

[@Swixu]

+Dank Frank I want to kms after hearing this

[@TheGamerTerrain]

Jesus christ when he read that sign it scared the fuck out of me

[@Mendosa666]

+GamerTerrain Same, I was scared my computer was gonna crap out on me lol

[@warioland523]

6:31Mutahar.exe has stopped working XD.

[@mcburn_]

Castl Fall - Too Edgy for the letter E

[@Avi-oy7tp]

Best comment I've seen all day :D

[@LuckinGM]

So, it's dgy?

[@wiinis-official]

+LuckinGamer It's dfinitly dgy.

[@LuckinGM]

+RustyLasagna gud.

[@lillianwintz6285]

lol😂😁

[@TSBsteamAllNaturalHighs]

eh, MC's stamping the flash drive was a bit extreme of a reaction, and there is good buildup but no climax.

[@santinoangulo8652]

Dude love your vids ur the morgen freeman of the internet

[@viewbob4755]

I knew the "outsiiiiiiiiiii" was coming because of the comments, but I still jumped lmao

[@xttog4882]

Yo me too

[@zachengland2271]

Mutahar, can you give your thoughts on the anime known as "Cory in The House"? danks

[@riotchock4259]

Best anime ever

[@lewbert7930]

I see what you did there...

[@Loooooooooooooooooooooongcat]

+A Scam Involving Corndogs ikr gret anime

[@The_mario_fan]

My friend suggested the Liberian get a manga, Cory in the house. This really happened

[@suspensewriter2009]

+Moist Pussy Toy Story is a much better anime.

[@erilaz7449]

I AM COPYRIGHTING THE WORD "FALL". GIME UR SHEKELZ MUTA

[@thesilverblueman]

+Isaiah Johnson i'm copyrighting your name now give them to me

[@soreaphine9955]

I laughed! Fine bros sued me for doing so!

[@freddywilliams9837]

+world domination (iamnothere) I'm copyrighting copyrights. THOSE MONEYS MUST BE MINE NOW.

[@sssstick]

I am copyrighting names. seems like you all have to give me your money now.

[@thesilverblueman]

i copyright existing

[@spectre5307]

> Je n'avait que 9 ans > j'ai tant aimé Shrek, j'ai eu toutes les marchandises et les films > j'ai prier pour Shrek tous les soirs avant le coucher, pour le remercier de la vie, j'ai reçu > « Shrek est amour », je dis ; « Shrek est la vie » > mon père m'écoute et m'appelle un fagot > je sais qu'il était tout simplement jaloux de ma dévotion pour Shrek > je l'ai appelé un con > il m'envoie et l'envoie moi d'aller pour dormir > je pleure maintenant, une and mon visage fait mal > je pose dans son lit et c'est vraiment froid > tout à coup, une chaleur se dirige vers moi > c'est Shrek > je suis tellement heureuse qu'il chuchote dans mon oreille « This is my marécage. » > il m'attrape les mains de l'ogre puissant et me pose sur mes mains et mes genoux > je suis prêt > j'ai étendu mes joues-cul pour Shrek > il pénètre mon cul-trou > ça fait tellement mal, mais je le fais pour Shrek > je peux sentir mon bu eeks pour Shrek > il pénètre mon cul-trou > ça fait tellement mal, mais je le fais pour Shrek > je peux sentir mes fesses déchirement que mes yeux commence à l'eau > je pousse contre sa force > je veux s'il vous plaît Shrek > il rugit dans un puissant rugissement comme il remplit mes fesses avec son amour > mon père se promène dans > Shrek lui regarde droit dans les yeux et dit « C'est tous les ogre maintenant. » > Shrek sort par ma fenêtre > Shrek est Shrek de l'amour est la vie

[@danfischer4713]

+allispirithunter Shrek is Love, Shrek is life in French??

[@danfischer4713]

xMasterDizzy What would it be in French? (not Google translated)

[@spectre5307]

Because muta is Canadian and they speak French there, that's why

[@spectre5307]

I didn't use Google by the way since I couldn't paste there so I used another website with a limit of 300 characters per translate

[@Bobbers2509]

+allispirithunter That translator was fucking shit. Barely any of this makes sense.

[@justsomelurkerrr]

Don't you just love it when it's a nice day outsiiiiiiiiiiiiii-

[@justanotherguywithamoustac8893]

Whn you hit that "The Great Gatsby"

[@ReyFlamedramon]

>Actually buying RPG Maker That's the true horror.

[@DoomGuyPictures]

ITS A NICE DAY OUTSIIIIIIIIIIII

[@XxLew]

welcome to haunted gaming story time! how haunted are ya?

[@prowrestleraleks6870]

+Lewis Lawler How Haunted am I? I"m a game of Sonic the Hedgehog with jumpscares, dead family, and HYPER-REALISTIC BLOOD

[@XxLew]

Pro Wrestler Aleks that's super haunted, yo, but not as haunted as sanic!

[@TarkTheWild]

How haunted am I?! I'm so haunted-I scare the shit put of people,they don't even take screenshots of my hauntings!

[@genericweeb7300]

how haunted am i? im so hyperrellistit u can touch ma face w yo bear hands

[@genericweeb7300]

+Generic Timmy n if u touch me there be hyperrlistic blud evrywhar!!!!111

[@hypochromia4883]

wait if he got xp, then why does the main character have a face from the vx character generator. now that I think about it, the dungeon looked vx or vx ace

[@sarah20025]

6:27 (around that timestamp) My Tablet has a habit of crashing on me, so Mutahar Scared the CRAP out of me. Thanks Muta...

[@redeemer4733]

This creepy pasta was interesting and unique but it's NOT scary, it's just confusing in my point of view

[@homeschoolingboys4158]

can you try to record as much of the creepy pasta as you can plz

[@tinykong1898]

Muta doesn't write these stories you dip

[@nelsonnicholson6175]

Why is this video on the SomeOrdinaryArchives, as well as "A Figure in Gray"?

[@vantablack8468]

I feel like there's more to this creepypasta,like something hidden in the screenshots

[@1112-g4l]

*You aren't going to believe who's awesome.* *Just read the first two words :)*

[@syrupyrock2842]

IJUSTGOTROASTED

[@mattok101digitaltamer9]

@Dylan Zand Year 08 He meant "You aren't awesome"

[@viciousservant5151]

"I got an item called th--" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA but seriously, I made RPG maker games and I hope that I either never find them, or they aren't creepy.

[@RikRikRikRikRikRik]

10:32 He talks about a case but he said he had a laptop

[@Sunshine-tu6cm]

When the glitched "Outside" came in, I thought my computer was about to crash.

[@RenaRoseheart]

I listened to this over and over and I don't understand what's so creepy about this. Flashing lights gave you headaches...?

[@Cloud_Strife1997]

CASTL FALL i mean CASTEL FALL DANGIT! CSTEL FALL GOD DAMMIT

[@mattok101digitaltamer9]

Castle Fall

[@regularshowman3208]

The images are unsettling, but this story needed a lot more meat to it to really be creepy. The kid just plays a glitched to shit game he made a few years back, passes out half way through, wakes up, finishes the game, and then destroys the flash drive it was on. Not really all that interesting.

[@sn-vf1fr]

9/11 WAS AN INSIDE JOKE

[@rolkusupersonofasheppard8006]

Bush did 7/11, 7/11 was a part time job.

[@Pie_The_Man]

Wtf

[@BladeCrossEXE]

Isn't this the second RPG maker creepypasta? Wasn't the first one that Akarui Mirai one?

[@abtradingpost4322]

Could you do rambling videos of you just playing chrono trigger?

[@Unknownriddle]

I suggest reading "suggestions", a prequel to abandoned by disney

[@vizthex]

no wonder Muta narrated this, it has a VM

[@WhiskeyBrewer]

I thought my computer was gonna die when you did the glitchy voice as 7:50 or so lol

[@talkingrevolver9700]

I actually really enjoyed this one. My only complaint is that the actual spooky part felt really short compared to the build up. I thought that part was done really well though, because it had a more subtle creepiness to it, as opposed to nonstop, in-your-face screaming and gore. The screenshots definitely added to that, especially the last one with the shattered face sprite (that face really creeped me out for some reason). I also liked how the ending was rather ambiguous. Was there actually something paranormal going on with the game, or did the virus just royally fuck it up and did the flickering and droning noise cause some sort of reaction in his brain to make him pass out? Not the greatest story ever, but at least it had actual effort put into it.

[@ItchyBunnyYT]

Read the creepypasta called, "Quitting"

[@Dronkhrrrrng]

Glitchy RPG on my flash drive? BEAT THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF IT.

[@powderedwater67]

I tried making my own game once. I stretched a polygon... and gave up after that.

[@jarredisraelsen2584]

I'd like to get your take on a creepypasta I've heard a couple KZbin readers read. It isn't related to gaming, in particular, but to a cartoon show. I think the story's called The My Little Pony Theory or MLP Theory. My personal opinion of it is, by the end of the story, it's sweet and spiritual, and the exact opposite of creepy. I just thought it'd be interesting to get your opinion of it.

[@sarahichele]

Dude I love your videos.

[@nori1123]

So THAT'S where they got the E from Warlocke!

[@uuuh6441]

Wtf what was even the climax of this pasta?

[@Chaiguy01]

A RPG made by a ten year old that gets spookily corrupted by a virus from watching some pr0n? Dear god, this creepypasta reads like it was written by a fucking ten year old. It made me physically cringe several times.

[@gameholddb]

And he praised it. My God I feel cringe af.

[@emilywelsh3616]

+Chaiguy01 And there was like.. no story line? There were no big spooks or ending or anything. It was so cringey.. The way the texts get ~warped~ and "ITS A NICE DAY OUTSIIIIIIIIIIIIII" is the ,, cringiest thing to me

[@theextremeanimator4721]

Chaiguy01 Shut up, you guys! It's good without jumpscares.

[@tedtheodore5715]

Holy shit you people are actual redditors lmao, shits gotta reinvent the wheel otherwise its "cringe" xd

[@SkookyDoong]

Never been in the comment section so early on in a videos upload time.

[@austinross1100]

There is a version of crono trigger for DS with more weapons, areas and bosses

[@adirblazkowics7717]

Neat that apperently a virus attacking a game's files is now enough to make a game be considered a creepypasta.

[@DameDracaufeu]

Flashing lights giving you a headache is not creepy, it's mundane. -_-

[@shitfuckdmdmmf7595]

Reminds me of the game Error #53

[@calebphillips5650]

you read this perfect bro.

[@sodrikas9828]

I'm currently creating my own RPG maker game on rpg maker mv.I'm trying to think of some cool ideas i can add to the game.That's why i am here XD

[@DoomGuyPictures]

Make it glitchy

[@cannon9009]

i was actually making my own RPG in a trial version of RPG Maker but i got tired of it and gave up.

[@josemembreno3134]

Just because something's RPG Maker doesn't automatically mean it's a terrible game... Now, I won't lie, WAY more often than not, it does, but I don't think it's right to just jump to such conclusions immediately. The same can be said about Game Maker.

[@josemembreno3134]

Yeah! Just look at stuff like Ib, Yume Nikki... and let's not forget! Fucking *Undertale.*

[@zaya5360]

oh no, it took 3 seconds instead of lees then one, thats sooo strange and noticeable. xD

[@LadySaytenn]

From my experience, if you're not careful in messing with an RPG Maker game, it won't look "corrupt." It'll refuse to load or do anything, really. If a single character is off in the code or a filename is unreadable, a message will show up asking "WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO" and the game will close, unless it's just sound for some reason. There are other things in the screenshots that seem like they're photoshopped or whatever, but the porn virus didn't have to exist in this story, because it would've done nothing to RPG Maker files. inb4 someone tells me about their virus infected rpg maker game being spooky and shit

[@ShotgunLlama]

Wooah. I just downloaded rpg maker vx... and xp... and 2k3, 2k, 95. How spoopy!

[@Felipe45345]

ITS THE NUTSHACK ITS THE NUSTHACK

[@weabooheaboo1198]

Lukman Azabagic Is phil really from the stone

[@-kuro-]

I swear if you react to this I am going to sue you Yes.

[@danfischer4713]

My Decathlon meet prevented me from getting here early QnQ Umpteenth!

[@danjones7519]

The showers! Its a amazing creepy pasta

[@furyberserk]

And the cult of the Mutaharian grows....

[@srele344]

You should play imscared 2016.It just came out

[@mrsnapzzz807]

12 year old : Leafyishere. Fouseytube : that's disgusting.

[@dotcomgamingd5564]

wrong video

[@brixusxviii6955]

I'll like the video since Mutahar narrated it but this is ridiculous!Its like me making a game when i was young,then later on playing it and being scared of it for some reason,maybe I didn't program the scripts probably,have you ever thought of that?Like seriously though no matter how scary or bad it was,I mean damn you made a game,I'd treasure that shit Dawg,man that's a sad loss though,probably a fake story,WHAT IT IS GUYS?Its yo boy BHD Coming at you with another comment!

[@marcerior]

Muta you scared me with your edgy bug effect ! ヽ(｀Д´)ﾉ

[@trellia_art]

Damn you and your edgy effects! I thought my computer was crashing!

[@cobainsinatra2719]

nice video mutahar

[@DontchadaretouchIT]

Why does it only have 170 views, Muta? Why, Muta? WHY?

[@MrSlapjack2007]

Pastasnacks 75,000

[@st4rm4st3r]

I like the concept of the story, and I've seen what a virus or even deleting, then over-writing the disk sector can do to images, who's to say it can't do the same to .jpg equivalent of games? also, I'm not ragging on RPG maker, because it is a worth while tool, but to be honest, I would consider RPG maker a creative starting point, but that's another point entirely. the original point I'm trying to make is this story could actually happen, granted instead of the thumb-drive just magically working again, they could have somehow done digital reconstruction to the software inside, but what really killed it for me was the ending of the story. the ending just seemed tired and overused, the whole "omg I saw some spoopy pixels, I will never do anything again" kind of ending is almost counter intuitive, to put it simply: 2 spook 4 me, does NOT make a great ending!

[@ScottCastle]

I'm gonna sue you for not giving me credit (jk great video

[@ScottCastle]

+TheRandomFish 11 ;)

[@mrshapiro6757]

IT WAS A NICE DAY OUTSIIIIIIIIIIII

[@RougenTCG]

IGOTTHEHEARTOFDARKNESSIGOTTHEHEARTOFDARKNESSIGOTTHEHEARTOFDARKNESS!!!

[@vintagecommando7100]

Castl Fal, the sequel to the edgy shit, Castl Fall

[@nofail4u]

I think you mean Cast Fa, now with too much edge for the letter l.

[@danfischer4713]

+Quin Iguina The Prequel is Cst F, s it will be wy too edgy for the letter "a"

[@benson4u215]

I thought my fucking ps4 was blowing up at the beginning LOL

[@rioluinriomain7771]

im lazy and i use 2 Different versions of RPG Maker

[@waelxcm]

6:30 thank man... its 5:30am here... thnx...

[@YorkerYeti]

11:46 fucking VX Ace. Immersion-broken

[@GreatDayDnB]

The author later went on to create Kanye quest

[@xSaraxMxNeffx]

i feel gypped. like it was a good story all things considered, but there was literally no middle. Who just looses HOURS of their life and gives no shits?! Id want to know what the fuck happened. All in all, it felt like the hot sauce sandwiches i ate for lunch when i was poor. Tastes fine, but without the meat you're just going to be hungry again in the next ten minutes.

[@sahilhossain8204]

Lore of "CASTL FALL" (Haunted Gaming) momentum 100

[@gasousnebule7932]

when i learn to make RPGs i will recreate the game

[@kaatohigashikata4229]

+Kai Shockley if you do send it to me

[@gasousnebule7932]

+toy foxy “mangle” the pirate aaarrrr ok mangle it will be the uncorrupted versoin and a corrupted versoin to give you when i make it

[@kaatohigashikata4229]

Kai Shockley Yay!

[@ConsiderSustainability]

Read more of selto854's stuff!

[@gengarguy6399]

When I was listening to this the first time I was working on my game on RPG Maker VX Ace. Then I heard the Words RPG Maker then I 💩 my 👖.

[@commoneli]

heyyy!!! gaming pasta :-)

[@harlemzed3124]

mutaharian stories da best

[@turdburglar2274]

Cool being here early

[@glowstone6448]

+Turd Burglar hoopla hoopla hoopla

[@turdburglar2274]

Joey Novosel HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPLA

[@marcjoseph9448]

+Turd Burglar (clonk)

[@viktorreznov4803]

Spooky Story Before Bed.

[@tonyflamingo7482]

Excellent

[@SavvageCabbage]

Paint.exe creepypasta.

[@Hii248]

Hi

[@1a2d09]

Well. You know this is gonna be good story if it starts right off with "too edgy to even have an E" from Mutahar.... EDIT: Well. 4mins in and a virus from a porn site is the cause of this.. Well then.. :| EDIT#2: 12mins in... Well. This jumps around just as much as the SAO story... EDIT#3: Well Mutahar likes it for good reasons but meh it wasn't my type of story.

[@luuiv9518]

+TheTwistedRebellion "the SAO story" 1- rpg's will never be as good as they were before i watched that show 2- why isnt it longer it made me so moist 3-illuminapepe seyz 5/7 much plot very story line such holes

[@bladedheart1955]

Sure is a great day outsiiiiiii

[@glowstone6448]

RPG lel. I wanna RPG you. LELELELELELELELELELEL

[@blondepiratesarecool]

Stop

[@blondepiratesarecool]

***** Me.

[@glowstone6448]

blondepiratesarecool What da yur meen

[@SilverTemplar]

I failed to see anything creepy about this one. Not just in the sense that it wasn't spookz (it wasn't though) but that I just actually can not figure out what is creepy about it. The ending was also kinda hilarious. It was just a very simple story about some crappy buggy game that you'd expect a 10 year old to make. Then this dude kinda just passed out at his monitor (probably from boredom), woke up and stomped all over the flash drive? Like what? Hahaha.

[@lowpolyzoe]

IT IS A NICE DAY OUTSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII-

[@sentientviolin7802]

Boy, sure looks nice todaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa-

[@callum273b]

+puffle power Gee, it sure is boring around HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR-

[@LILKJ111]

Alright... 6:33 got me.

[@mattjoogaly4923]

great game

[@JackOfAllRAIDs]

Not bad.

[@Rakinjo2]

But.. What was the scary part? *When* was it supposed to get spooky? He booted up a game, the game was glitching, he passed out and woke up with an apparent hangover from doing god knows what. I mean, the actual story is somewhere in between him passing out and then waking up, which means we as the audience never actually got to know about any of the stuff that happened. I can't for the life of me see how this is spooky. :/ The only things that had me anything close to spooked was Muta's added "Outsiiiiiiiii"-effect. Didn't see that one coming. >.>

[@hexidecimark]

+Rakinjo2 I sighed and reached for the power button on my machine. Had the picture not been there I'd have reset.

[@chadraygun5268]

5 years late, but it’s supposed to be a “realistic” story so to speak. He had a seizure while playing the game because of the flashing lights and shit; I know this because everything he described feeling afterward is what I feel whenever I regain consciousness from a seizure

[@Rakinjo2]

@@chadraygun5268 Yeah bro, I'm gonna be honest; I have literally no idea what any of this is about. x)

[@BaeCat872]

I thought the sprites where supposed to be shitty ms paint drawings???