Successful College Essay

My daughter Bokei applied to a UCB/HKU joint program earlier this year. This is her successful essay submitted to HKU. Bokei applied to multiple elite colleges this year and was admitted to a few top ones. Eventually, she decided to take advantage of the US State Department's language initiative program, NYSLI-Y, to go to Taiwan for one year to study Chinese Language and Culture. She will attend Amherst College in 2025, majoring in International Affairs. Among all her college application essays, she spent the most time on this one. Therefore, I made a video to showcase this essay to HKU.
✍️我女儿文章好，不是我自夸或夸她😅。这是她申请去UCB/HKU的作文。她被录取了，但她看到23条对香港的影响后，决定不去香港。这篇作文是她第一篇大学申请的作文，花了很多时间，我被感动了。所以拿出来分享：
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