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TRANSCRIPT: in this video I'm going to show you how to score 11 or 12 in your task one of the CELPIP writing I'm going to show this to you with a practical sample this is the question you can read it pause the video I will focus more on the answer now here it's basically just talking about giving suggestions or improvements to your cafeteria okay let's go to the answer first thing I want to show you guys why the structure is going to score full marks is because it has five paragraphs you have your production you have body one body 2 body three then you have your conclusion that's it okay five paragraphs it's exactly how it's supposed to be and the three bodies answer the three bullet points in the question one body two body three bodies one by one in sequence so you have no problem with the task response and you have no problem with the structure it is very coherent as well and you have enough details in each body paragraph which we will see you can also pause the video to read it each body paragraph has at least two points and that will satisfy every single examiner because they usually complain that you haven't explained it enough this explains it perfectly okay so full marks there let's talk about salutations dear sir that's all you need to do you don't need to say dear respected sir Madam or anything just Dear Sir or Madam you're sincerely and your your full name remember that it's very important to do the full name in the formal letters if it's informal you can do the first name actually not you can you should cuz you will lose marks if you make it too formal and you can put best regards again with the can you should put best regards in the informal emails uh your sincerity is more for formal writing so overall first impression looks very neat very clear the next thing is body want or sorry the intro paragraph one needs to have the purpose why you are writing and this per person mentioned said as a frequent visitor so they start with a complex sentence right away as we make the sentence into two parts part number one part number two okay so using complex sentences give you marks as well and you'll see all these wonderful elements within this email if you want to learn how to write like this this video is great but also check out our course in the description that includes samples on writing and speaking and includes a lot more detail a 1 hour