The Black Smile Case - Analog Horror

[@obsidian4844]

Couple notes: 1. I don't think that Aileen's mother should be so directly quoted. It kinda breaks the immersion by messing with the "police document" format in the intro. 2. The audio collage is fucking phenomenal, it made my skin crawl. You have a great audio treatment. 3. Some of the shots linger a bit too long which makes the video drag a little. Nothing too serious. If this is your first time doing analog horror, I think you're on the right path to something really good.

[@LenexTL]

I very much appreciate the feedback. This was my first time doing analog horror myself, so I’m thankful for the tips on how to improve and also am happy you liked the video.

[@obsidian4844]

@@LenexTL the audio collage is really really good. I like how the audio is mostly connotative so the audience has to use their own imagination, which creates something far more horrible than what's shown.

[@LenexTL]

@@obsidian4844 That was exactly what I was aiming for with that, and am glad that it seemed to be working! 😁