The Human Woke to Find a Shy Alien Girl Curled Up Beside Him | HFY Sci-fi Story

[@skark7769]

what would have been a good story is absolutely destroyed by the sarcasm of the MC's bad attitude. Another story I could not finish! I need to like the characters and in this, I did not!!

[@Futurexplorer]

Thank you for sharing your feedback! I truly appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts. Your point about the MC’s sarcasm and attitude is noted, and I’ll definitely keep it in mind to create characters that are more likable and engaging in future stories. In the meantime, if you’re up for it, I’d love for you to check out another story I think you might enjoy-it has a different tone and dynamic: The Stray Bullet Adventure. Link - kzbin.info/www/bejne/qH3VcpR_fMiBoqM Let me know your thoughts on that one, too! I’m always looking to improve and tailor these tales for my audience, so thanks again for your input-it’s invaluable! 😊

[@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc]

Don't be a hater it's a good story, the sarcasm's so human so natural, you know the characters are sweet on each other at the end lol.

[@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc]

​@@FuturexplorerI enjoyed it though I do agree it needs a lil polishing, the algorithms aren't as rigged as you think yes anything deeply descriptive will turn them on you so you gotta remember some things in moderation including the spicy scenes, my advice listen to other people's videos see how they add in a lil moderate romance adding in a cozy night between the characters without adding so much detail so is to avoid KZbin's negative wrath. I commented on a video of yours I listened to before, I'd love a part 2 of it, I'm thinking on writing a lil something myself, I use to write in highschool but I lost my muse after I graduated talk about a bad case of writers block, for 13 years I haven't been able to write and it kinda ticks me off. I was hoping to get something published but I don't see that happening. Now that I think of it KZbin seems like good exposure, fans enjoying stories like these seems like a good muse and the not in my creativity feels a lil loose, think I might try coming up with something myself some day but I still want that part 2 to you're last story I listened to, kinda liking that 1 a lil bit better but I'm no cridic. Every time I listen to hifi I can imagine it in my mind, I see beautiful planets and areas in space, imposing asteroid fields and plqnets with rainbowish rings, sterling colors on them and some of the main characters of each story, 90% of it seems like everyone is telling the same story without a part 2 but they tell it in such a way they can tweek it and make just enough different to include hidden meanings and morals, it's beautiful but at the same time it does get a lil stale especially without a part 2.