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@williamcarney8119 3 күн бұрын
No scales or claws on her picture.
@addertooth1 3 күн бұрын
The usual journey story getting to the archive. As well as a wealth of the last information which was learned about the Hive, they also find a modest ship. That ship has a "mostly constructed" experimental weapon integrated into the ship, but some vital parts will need to be scavenged from partially destroyed ships. There will be a cat and mouse game of trying to scavenge those remaining parts which are scattered among the broken husks of old warships, and one science ship. Once all the parts are scavenged, there should a breathless rush to get it built, with the combined energies of the couple (discovered through personal contact they had), to activate it.
@xAzuras62x 3 күн бұрын
I like this one a lot, and perhaps for a future story you can write something about alien tribal woman meeting and falling in love with human female journalist?
@suitangi3248 4 күн бұрын
Great story.
@Futurexplorer 3 күн бұрын
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@garywalker5000 4 күн бұрын
hmmmmmm alien girl dying hiding behind a large rock running from multi syyndicates until humansees herl life signs girl has powers they find connections
@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc 4 күн бұрын
"Spicy scenes" phosphily's the only thing spicy in this story, and for the most part you can include them just don't get too descriptive, most hifi sifi writers on KZbin do without giving detail and it's enough for people to paint their own pictures. As far as writing a story in the comments is concerned I'm more interested in a part 2 for this story, when/if you record 1 respond to my comment and leave me a link please? I enjoy stories like this on KZbin, I'm the type of guy who listens to 1 before I roll out of bed and 1 before I fall asleep at night and 50% of the time I'm looking for more throughout the day so I'm a sucker for a good story, record a part 2 and you'll have gained a friend that'll keep coming back for more lol.👍
@skark7769 6 күн бұрын
what would have been a good story is absolutely destroyed by the sarcasm of the MC's bad attitude. Another story I could not finish! I need to like the characters and in this, I did not!!
@Futurexplorer 6 күн бұрын
Thank you for sharing your feedback! I truly appreciate you taking the time to let me know your thoughts. Your point about the MC’s sarcasm and attitude is noted, and I’ll definitely keep it in mind to create characters that are more likable and engaging in future stories. In the meantime, if you’re up for it, I’d love for you to check out another story I think you might enjoy-it has a different tone and dynamic: The Stray Bullet Adventure. Link - kzbin.info/www/bejne/qH3VcpR_fMiBoqM Let me know your thoughts on that one, too! I’m always looking to improve and tailor these tales for my audience, so thanks again for your input-it’s invaluable! 😊
@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc 4 күн бұрын
Don't be a hater it's a good story, the sarcasm's so human so natural, you know the characters are sweet on each other at the end lol.
@AlbertoRodriguez-ju6hc 4 күн бұрын
@@FuturexplorerI enjoyed it though I do agree it needs a lil polishing, the algorithms aren't as rigged as you think yes anything deeply descriptive will turn them on you so you gotta remember some things in moderation including the spicy scenes, my advice listen to other people's videos see how they add in a lil moderate romance adding in a cozy night between the characters without adding so much detail so is to avoid KZbin's negative wrath. I commented on a video of yours I listened to before, I'd love a part 2 of it, I'm thinking on writing a lil something myself, I use to write in highschool but I lost my muse after I graduated talk about a bad case of writers block, for 13 years I haven't been able to write and it kinda ticks me off. I was hoping to get something published but I don't see that happening. Now that I think of it KZbin seems like good exposure, fans enjoying stories like these seems like a good muse and the not in my creativity feels a lil loose, think I might try coming up with something myself some day but I still want that part 2 to you're last story I listened to, kinda liking that 1 a lil bit better but I'm no cridic. Every time I listen to hifi I can imagine it in my mind, I see beautiful planets and areas in space, imposing asteroid fields and plqnets with rainbowish rings, sterling colors on them and some of the main characters of each story, 90% of it seems like everyone is telling the same story without a part 2 but they tell it in such a way they can tweek it and make just enough different to include hidden meanings and morals, it's beautiful but at the same time it does get a lil stale especially without a part 2.
@stephenhudson8739 7 күн бұрын
When did they put their clothes back on the story never mentioned it
@Futurexplorer 7 күн бұрын
Haha, good catch, @stephenhudson8739! They were in such a rush to survive that I didn’t explicitly mention it. Let’s just say they threw on whatever they could find before sprinting to the engine room. Survival doesn’t leave much room for modesty, right? 😉 Thanks for pointing that out-I’ll keep those little details in mind for future stories!
@patcullen9304 8 күн бұрын
How can there be 2 different factions of loyalists
@Futurexplorer 7 күн бұрын
Great question! In the story, the term 'loyalist' refers to those loyal to the Lymbrae's current leadership under Crylathis. Mydrel’s faction, while considering themselves loyal to their vision of the Crythari's future, are technically rebels or dissenters trying to reshape their society. The terminology may seem conflicting because both sides believe they’re fighting for the greater good of their people, just from opposing perspectives. Hope that clears it up!
@xAzuras62x 10 күн бұрын
great story so far! When you come up with part3?
@robertwilliams450 11 күн бұрын
Let me guess....he wasnt home, she left it on his porch, porch pirates from bellbrook 9 stole it and he never got his imflateable party goat from amazon 😊
@Futurexplorer 11 күн бұрын
😂 Nailed it! But let me tell you, those porch pirates from Bellbrook 9 have NOTHING on Erysolis when she’s in pursuit of justice-and inflatable party goats! Stay tuned for the plot twist where Rycor teams up with her to recover the package and ends up uncovering an intergalactic goat-smuggling ring. 🎉🐐
@ScottBionicBlasters 12 күн бұрын
Also, she could be a federation operative. Why, when they had these guys, did they just let them go, really.?! Your story not making since anymore.
@Futurexplorer 11 күн бұрын
Thank you for catching that! You're right, letting the intruders go feels like a loose end, and it could have been handled more decisively. Maybe there’s a deeper reason-like someone higher up pulling strings or an operative’s hidden agenda. Hmm… now you’ve got me thinking! 🤔 What if she is a Federation operative, playing a long game, and letting them go was part of a larger strategy? Let me know if you'd like me to explore that angle in a follow-up! 🚀
@ScottBionicBlasters 12 күн бұрын
I've been listening closely to the story(and I may listen to this one again. It's that good so far. )All Though, it's 25:54 on the chronometer and she hunted him down, while still wearing his work jacket, to 'thank him' again. Where the hell is 'the kiss'. If she wasn't into him, she could've had the jacket delivered by drone or something. She came to find him herself. And he's already her at least mostly nude closely. She should've given him a hug and kissed him the cheeks, while stumbling trying to get some distance from the equipment.😎 Missed opportunity or a slightly different spin on the story or new slightly hotter version of the story. These 2 don't strike me as the that normally jump into a quick hot relationship, but this one started with a plasma fire or malfunction or whatever.
@Futurexplorer 11 күн бұрын
Ah, I love your take on that moment! You're absolutely right-her coming to him personally while still wearing his jacket says a lot about their chemistry. I purposely held back from adding ‘the kiss’ because I wanted to build their relationship slow and steady, but now that you mention it... a cheek kiss or a stumble-hug could’ve added a lot of emotional weight to that scene! 👀🔥 Maybe I should work on a “hotter spin” version or a sequel where their connection heats up in unexpected ways? What do you think? 😉
@Adam01Time 12 күн бұрын
Wtf is the wamp wamp in the background you sound like boom box on the black mf lives next door. Stop that crap thumbs down wamp wamp. This is racist Black neighbors care less about your private property. Trump Won for a reason. Wamp wamp. We are tired of the damn boom box.
@GimmieTheGaff 12 күн бұрын
A normal night in my local pub at closing time.
@ScottBionicBlasters 15 күн бұрын
I can say it's a definite plus that you use a slide with the story. Helps keep the listener plugged in to the story by feeding the imagination.
@Futurexplorer 11 күн бұрын
I'm glad you enjoy the visual aspect! It's all about immersing the reader in the world.
@Michael-cu8xk 16 күн бұрын
She is not a bounty hunter she is running from them title is wrong . Otherwise good story.👍🇺🇸
@williamclarke2245 17 күн бұрын
touch eh? touché
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
Touché indeed! Glad you caught that. Hope you enjoyed the story-there’s more to come!
@larrygoodyear6875 17 күн бұрын
Pretty good! Look forward to part 2.
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
Thanks for watching! Part 2 is already in the works-stay tuned for the next chapter, it's going to be exciting!
@Futurexplorer 15 күн бұрын
Part 2 - kzbin.info/www/bejne/boqpeqxuatt_o68
@xAzuras62x 17 күн бұрын
crazy but beautiful, enjoyed it very much!
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@leonwallace9449 21 күн бұрын
Good story. Fury seems to be acting very dumb, not willing to let his mind develop.
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@Daehawk 25 күн бұрын
Lovely story. Not forced and not thrown to each other. They slowly melded into one be simply working together with understanding and patience. I love that. ❤
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
I'm glad you liked it ❤️
@ScottBionicBlasters 29 күн бұрын
Okay..look...I've been intending to leave this comment about a particular piece of equipment that has been misapplied waaaay too many times in a lot of these Sci-Fi stories I listen to while I'm working at the bodyshop I just got home from. The place where I frequently use a plasma-cutter to cut all types of metal, y a 1/2"thick. It's a big one. Not the biggest, but quite powerful, none the less. No plasma cutter on market works anything like a ray-gun, or a light-sabor, or freak'n disrupter. It uses high pressure air 120psi(approx 837kph, or 8.274bars!)to remove the molten metal the nose of the cutter. A grounding cable is attatched to the work(the metal you're wanting to cut or trim.), while the tip of cutter strikes a welding arc on the surface of the metal. The instant the pool of molten metal is created by the cutter tip,(which has the hole in the center of it for the compressed air to travel through.) Approx 400's of a second after the arc is made, and pool of molten metal is formed, bam! Here comes the blast of air to clear a path, and the air stream cuts quite literally like a hot knife. It Can Not Fire An Arc!! That would necessarily change it's definition. I would definitely have to purchase one for my self.!😎 Just give him a blaster, or disrupter, or something cooler than plasma-cutter.
@ScottBionicBlasters Ай бұрын
Okay...so what about all the students and faculty that were ordered to secure in place in their quarters while awaiting rescue...? I thought there a lot of other people.
@williamclarke2245 Ай бұрын
I really hate that text to voice.
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Thanks for the feedback! I totally get what you mean. That voice and subtitles weren’t great, and I’ve actually switched to a new voice and subtitle style in the last 5-6 days. I hope you’ll like the updated version-it’s a lot smoother and more engaging. Let me know what you think!
@IrateFUPA Ай бұрын
Not the most exciting AI story
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
I appreciate your honesty. I’m always working to create more engaging and unique stories. If you have any suggestions or ideas, feel free to share them!
@ScottBionicBlasters Ай бұрын
I've got another idea...... A Hot Alien babe With translucent armor. It deploys out of her regular looking suit or clothes or ornamental hexagonal or octagonal things that appear to attach to her skin, but they move and fold as if being integrated into her skin.
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
That’s an awesome idea! Translucent, integrated armor sounds both futuristic and visually captivating. I might explore a concept like this in a future story. Thanks for sharing your creativity!
@ScottBionicBlasters Ай бұрын
She should be more attracted to him.
@dangibbons7297 Ай бұрын
So what part in the story that I must’ve missed where the two twins claim the human as their life partner, your title does not portray the story at all I called that catfish
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
I see where you’re coming from. I’ll work on making titles align more closely with the story content. Thanks for pointing that out!
@mjohlinir Ай бұрын
It has potential but this version is formulaic and dull
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Thanks for the feedback! I’ll focus on adding more twists and unique elements to keep the stories fresh and intriguing.
@davidcripe835 Ай бұрын
Wonderful story. If I wanted to see commercials every couple of minutes, I would just endure TV!
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Thanks for enjoying the story, David! I totally understand your frustration with the ads. It’s something that happens automatically, especially during festive seasons when ad placements are higher. I’ll review the ad settings and try to make the experience smoother. I really appreciate your support-your feedback means a lot!
@buzzpatch2294 Ай бұрын
good story
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Thanks for watching! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
@JamesMackay-s5c Ай бұрын
When’s the next chapter. With a child and everything. This can’t be all. Too good of a story line.
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! A continuation might be in the works-stay tuned for updates. Your enthusiasm means a lot!
@stevenr6797 27 күн бұрын
@Futurexplorer Yes another chapter please
@drcovell Ай бұрын
Why didn’t he collect use the advanced weapons of the “Hunters”?
@larrygoodyear6875 Ай бұрын
I liked it. If the bracelet is such a solemn bond, WHY would it end up in the hands of a merchant? Apparently, Tarvesians don't take their own traditions too seriously until someone puts the bracelet on. It's almost like they are setting a trap for the unwary.
@sephiroth661 Ай бұрын
Funny part is he was warned but didn’t take it seriously
@zachall101 18 күн бұрын
@@sephiroth661if you were told that something you were buying from a stall would bind you to an alien warrior woman would you believe it 😂😂 I know I wouldn’t
@louischannel7008 Ай бұрын
Where are these auctions held ,?????? Please I want to buy me one too. 😂😂
@zachall101 18 күн бұрын
😂 your not the only one 😜
@Futurexplorer 17 күн бұрын
😂 😂
@michaelking7231 Ай бұрын
Twin Moons again …..how much plagiarism can one take… everywhere the characters in these little stories go seen to get in tangled with a beautiful alien, a princes, a nymph, or dragons how much lack of originality can one put up with?
@oldnick4707 Ай бұрын
"Plagiarism".. 😂 Wait, how many genders do you recognize!? The chances of coming up with an alien female for a male human are pretty good, wouldn't you say? Lmao!
@michaelking7231 Ай бұрын
@ wanker you will always be a looser
@michaelking7231 Ай бұрын
Even the bracelets glow like they are alive and shifting colours…… I gave my kid a LED toy which does the same and I didn’t have to go into space to buy it WOW WOW WOW this story starts off as crap let’s hope the crap gets better
@gcanaday1 Ай бұрын
Nerp. Lol.
@michaelking7231 Ай бұрын
WTF is all this bull ? Everywhere in the universe the plants and the aliens are bioluminescent ?…….f…king bull crap get a grip wankers
@robertwillis4061 Ай бұрын
I get that the artwork is background only. But could it at least represent the story.
@brian-my7ym Ай бұрын
Unfortunately it seems like 90% of the stories like this are all just for clickbait.
@AntonyWhite-h5v Ай бұрын
Wonderful story 🎉
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Thank you! 🙂
@nomerc3608 Ай бұрын
Part two? 👍🏻🇺🇸❤️🔥
@shagwellington Ай бұрын
In your story, the alien heroine is olive green, but your pictures are of a blue woman. Kind of spoils the story. Good story. At one time in the far past, there was a race of blue people on earth. For example, Krishna was blue. They evolved to a higher planet and are gone. Before them there was a race of orange people, but they were so pride full that they can't come back to earth.
@stevearnold7825 Ай бұрын
😢 half a story
@Futurexplorer Ай бұрын
Part 2 - kzbin.info/www/bejne/kJ-2nYNsidV9eNE
@carlmest6966 2 ай бұрын
Sexy ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@williamcarney8119 2 ай бұрын
Nice story.
@Futurexplorer 2 ай бұрын
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@Madjuls 2 ай бұрын
A good story and I hope part 2 is soon.😀
@ThomasDuke-x1j 2 ай бұрын
Lol just what you want a glow in the dark girlfriend
@williamcarney8119 2 ай бұрын
Nice story.
@Futurexplorer 2 ай бұрын
Thank you 😊